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Linda Strandquist
y6u9 wow interesting start. had me wondering what next for the young girl. imagine having to messenger the information she will.
09/05/2023 00:53Janaki Kollepalli
y6u9...hmmm... interesting with a very different storyline ... never heard of a crier
09/05/2023 00:53
Megan Phillips
y6u9 the introduction for this book seemed promising but unfortunately I couldn't really get into this story.
09/05/2023 00:51Monique Swanepoel
y6u9 adding this book to my list to read. sounds like a good read. next on the list
09/05/2023 00:44zira
y6u9 i love this. im smily while reading the intro. i found it sweet and so much "kilig" and "gusto"..
09/05/2023 00:43Vicki usher
y6u9# wow what a interesting storyline, so different to all the other books I have seen. Very intriguing never heard of a crier definitely got to read this
09/05/2023 00:38Maria Cecilia Reyes-Meliton
y6u9 I cannot get my head around this story. It holds absolutely no appeal to me at all.
09/05/2023 00:34Gemma Butler
y6u9 This book sounds like it could be interesting. I’ve added it to my library to read later.
09/05/2023 00:27Athena Jones
Y6u9 it could be an interesting book but I can't follow it it's hard to understand what's going on
09/05/2023 00:20
Reader-350476
y6u9 It’s really a good book and it’s amazing that they have a happy family and that’s all matter.
09/05/2023 00:16Selli Dang
y6u9 the summary sounded interesting soni gave this book a go and it was definitely worth while, it was interesting, well written and good character
09/05/2023 00:16Reader-731248
y6u9 Just from the introduction I am hooked. I just added this book to my library and I am very excited to read more.
09/05/2023 00:13
Amal Samir
Y6u9, the book seems interesting. It is new for the crier type. Definitely different from the werewolves, vampires and witches.
09/05/2023 00:10Nadia Ogle
Y6u9 interesting, can't wait to see if she will choose to go the right direction instead of giving in to the darkness which the dead want.
09/05/2023 00:06Ashley
y6u9 I'm interested in reading this story. I've never heard of a crier before. Definitely different from most shifter stories.
09/05/2023 00:04y6u9 The description of this story is interesting. I love all the descriptions in the first few chapters I've read so far, it seems to be very well written and different.
09/04/2023 23:52Roxy Galindo
y6u9 saving this one for later. different from what I’ve been reading and it sounds interesting
09/04/2023 23:51
Joele G
y6u9 a twist of turn in this shifter book; a Crier that’s a first for me to read; I’m intrigue in this book adding it now
09/04/2023 23:46Me Myself
y6u9 so far this looks like an interesting book. I hope it is complete so we don't have to wait for updates.
09/04/2023 23:40Heather Minks
y6u9 that sounds interesting. Based on what I’ve read so far, I’m excited to see where this turns out. I love when people create books to incorporate different ideas.
09/04/2023 23:27Emily
y6u9 seems like a very different kind of story line and that is awesome. I’m always happy to see books stray from the normal stuff
09/04/2023 23:14y6u9 #y6u9 this is my first time hearing the term Crier. I'm intrigued with the story now. interesting introduction and the comments are good
09/04/2023 22:54thank you, will you be making a book 2? it’s great material, love reading this book
09/04/2023 10:06I enjoyed this. I'm glad they worked things out and now have a happy family and many years of memories to make. thanks for sharing your amazing story with us!
09/04/2023 09:54that lying b@#@h. she needs to be beat again
09/04/2023 08:53
Racheal Bale
Hi readers. I'm sorry I took forever to update. The situation was beyond my control and I sincerely apologize. But I'm happy to tell you all the updates will start rolling in! Thank you.
09/04/2023 08:50Reader-143849
3 chapters in the last 2 months…I hope the author is okay.
09/04/2023 08:47amazing read. I am so glad I found this book. looking forward to seeing what happens next
09/04/2023 08:45
Faai-iezah Baradien Adams
hi author when is the next update....
09/04/2023 08:42Kimberly Carragher
Hi Author. 👋 Can't we ait to see where this story ends up. keep up the great work
09/04/2023 08:39Terri
when will our next updates be?
09/04/2023 08:34Terri
I've completed all 74 chapters I there a new book or other chapters??
09/04/2023 08:28Terri
story is great, need to proof check
09/04/2023 08:28Sunrise
oh nooo please don't make rose die :-(
09/04/2023 08:28Reader-458723
please. he’d have to be crazy to think shana was strong enough to do that.
09/04/2023 08:28
Reader-357899
this is a nice little read! just wondering what the update schedule is?
09/04/2023 08:26
Bella Jersey 2
right away bamb she’s going through something bad
09/04/2023 08:25
Emma Vallance
no not rose I hope asher doesn't think Shana did it
09/04/2023 08:23OMG. not Rose! can't wait for tomorrow's update
09/04/2023 08:21Fireheart.
I'm loving this book! Its amazing!
09/04/2023 08:20Bella Jersey 2
periods are bad enough she add crier stuff to it. sweetie you are my hero
09/04/2023 08:17Reader-458723
Elise?!???
09/04/2023 08:17Bella Jersey 2
Eva was vengeful if her?
09/04/2023 08:15Bella Jersey 2
very interesting 1st chapter
09/04/2023 08:14Reader-458723
i love this book
09/04/2023 08:14Sunrise
loving this story :) can't wait for the update.
09/04/2023 08:14Racheal Bale
Dear readers, I'll like to apologize about the name changes and some other errors. I've done a major editing starting from the first chapter. Thank you for reading.
09/04/2023 08:13is this the end? is there a sequel?
09/04/2023 08:13
reader2121
I tried giving this book a chance but the errors and the names being changed were just too much. some of the dialogue especially towards the middle felt out of character or unrealistic (and not to mention too many grammatical errors). I wish someone had told me this before I started reading. I was invested at first, but it’s too slow. The plot development needs a little more work.
09/04/2023 08:12Kat Lassiter
I’m loving this story! can’t wait to see what Asher and Cole do to that bastard!!!
09/04/2023 08:12Emma Vallance
hi author when Is the next update x
09/04/2023 07:55omg. please don't leave me in suspense. I love this story. waiting for next update
09/04/2023 07:46Oluwasegun Omoniyi
Wow! Definitely a must-read!
09/04/2023 07:46Fireheart.
Just started this book! So excited! it's great!
09/04/2023 07:46CuntasaurusRex..
can I suggest reading through your chapters before posting? you've called Shana by Adeles name multiple times, called her "he" at least 3 dozen times.. I'm not even far in the book yet. with some spell check and a word here or there changed out to make less repetition, this could be a really good story.
09/04/2023 07:46
Dainty swot
absolutely worth the time
09/04/2023 07:44
