The Alpha’s Desire Comments

Lori Overby

I wish I had read this first. It is October and book isn't finished still 😩😩😩

Lori Overby

Where are these people getting submarines?

o9p5 The blurb makes it look interesting. I find it hard to start books that aren't finished. I may give it a shot afterwards.

Reader-731248

o9p5 interesting story

o9p5 it seems like and interesting story but it's not yet complete. I will consider reading it once it's complete

KayCee Kai Malanos

o9p5 i totally agree with yhe first chapter title.. bad things really do happen to good people and i wonder why..

Merle Langevoord

o9p5 interesting story so far. want to keep reading it

o9p5 #o9p5 I'm going to wait for the book to be completed before I start reading so I can binge read. the storyline is interesting. good introduction

Jody Purple

o9p5 I like the storyline, but it does need some editing, some parts could use more detail and could connect better emotionally but I like the story

Joele G

o9p5 off to a good start; I really want to know how things turn out for her

Vicki usher

o9p5# I can tell this story will have me on the edge on my seat, so better sit back and enjoy the ride.

Laura Vickers

it reads like a child wrote it and it’s stupid

Rachel Anne Patterson

it can’t finish here I’m desperate to know the next part

Vilma Carpin Buhawe

the phrase used to inform her about her parents being dead is odd... ""i will likely to inform you that your parents dead bodies"

CiCiSwitch89

are you continuing the story?

agnes

great storyline!!!!

Author

good story, kept me on edge. writer please update

Margaret Sliva

Xavron may end up loosing Ophelia IF he isn't careful.

Mad reader

Good story, when are you updating next?

beautypete

so far, it’s interesting