Mr Billionaire, Cherish Me Comments
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who in the heck is David? what happened in between her being drunk in her bedroom and then her giving elias fellatio, cuz the last we heard from him he was watching her friends get her in the car at the club. this last story was very disappointing compared to the first two. the basic storyline of it seems good but the small details such as grammatical errors and whole sections of the story missing makes me not want to finish it
04/14/2024 05:51Denise Torres
I didn't realize this book was about multiple people but at first it was OK until the story with Logan and Zoe just stopped with no completion. The worst part started with the story of Elias and Aria. The writing took a nosedive with so many grammatical errors that weren't present in the other stories. It makes me wonder if there is someone else writing now.They need to go back and do some serious editing to fix all the mistakes.Quite disappointing.
04/11/2024 03:24
