Seducing the Mafia Don Komentar
Visitor
great book
11/19/2025 00:04Visitor
nice
11/05/2025 09:23Siew Gaik Tan
I am getting confused with the English too. Too much description that makes everything upside down.
11/03/2025 11:15Visitor
nice story
11/02/2025 07:00Visitor
I got to chapter 79 and gave up. it started off fine, though the main character is completely unlikable, but I pressed on. somewhere between chapters 30 and 40 (if I remember correctly) the writing completely changed and the quality plummeted. it went from fine to it sounding like it was written by someone who speaks English as a second language. which is fine, but editing, at least a little, matters. there was just a mistake where one of the characters says something and after the quotation…
09/22/2025 10:51Visitor
this is a really good story. I'm excited to read it again.
06/18/2025 05:44
