Unbreakable Mga Komento

nicole leonard

please dont leave this as a cliff hanger I need to know how it ends

Annabel Deibler

Will there be a final book to close out the series?

Anya Hill

I'm sorry but all three books are essentially the same story but this one has longer chapters.

Anya Hill

I feel like this is a repeat of untouchable but shorter because I read all of untouchable and unhinged and it all seems the same .

Visitor

Continuing ask I want to know how it ends. Finding this hard to read with all the errors. Also finding some of rather forced, and not well thought out.

Merle Langevoord

w6g8 just started reading the first few chapters. I'm really looking forward how the story continue

Julia

w6g8 i think the recommendations are random at best, why are they recommending a story that won't be updated?

Me Myself

w6g8 I am liking the book so far, it is well written and I have added it to my library

Sumriti Singh

w6g8 i will first read first two then i will definitely read this one as it peaked my interest and who am I to say no to a good book

Selli Dang

w6g8 another recommendation and as I started to read the start and I was instantly hooked on the story. I can't wait to finish work so I can continue with this

Jeniffer Barnes Hurt

#w6g8# "Unbreakable", I'm adding this one to my library. I'll have to read the other 2 first, but can't wait to get to it.

Reader-350476

w6g8 it’s really a good story to read and I’m looking forward to finish this book.

w6g8 seems like I missed a lot of backstory I will have to read the other books before I try this one, otherwise it won't make any sense.

Rafael

#w6g8# I like the introduction. it seems a interesting story and it is intriguing. but I think I will read the first book of the series .

w6g8 #w6g8 the story seems interesting and addictive. good introduction. I will look at the first 2 books first before I start reading.

Megan Phillips

w6g8 the introduction to this story looks promising, I might need to look at the other books before I start this one.

Reader-482443

where can I find her

Alyssa

just when I was starting to like Neron. smh

Sarah

I’m seriously heartbroken that you won’t finish the books here. I’m sry that they’re disrespecting you too. I have joined patreon.

Nina072

thank you for the update, two chaps were more than we were hoping for. these were great, enjoy the rest of break.

Sherisa Weston

ohh geez I would be able to use Patreon. I am so disappointed but respect your decision. Maybe in the future you could try another reading site and notify us

Nysha Obannon

omg no more chapters I can’t handle this

Reader-670952

when will there be an update?

Reader-670952

I know you’re busy but when will there be another update ?

when will there be an update...?

Sassy

I love the slow burn between them. I predict it’s going to be freaking awesome when they finally give in. I’m speaking for myself when I say that’ll be the most read chapter in this book

Reader-670952

I’m on pins and needles when is the next update ?

Reader-323329

what is maras back story again I read the other book a while ago I remember she bonded with Ariel after Odessa but not much else

Reader-670952

No pressure because I know you’re busy but when will there be other updates

Mrs.Hyde

I'm asking myself the same question why she wouldn't let her heal her.

Nina072

well that's one way to redeem yourself and I dont think I need to repeat myself on how I feel about Vag- I mean Val. 🙄 urgh neron shoulve clocked him!!!!! I never wanted to go into a book so badly and do it myself.

Marii Solaria

Dear Readers, updates are SUSPENDED until further notice.

Analiza

Oh my tears were falling.... hope Raina will be okay...

Analiza

omg. i do they are okay....

Sherisa Weston

Author was Asir and the Selene's first avatar mates?

Wow… okay ….. you sure you were having a writer block because girlllllllllllll Im still at the end of my seat 😳😳😳😳😳😳👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾

Analiza

amazing.... hope jomathan will banished for good....

Lynora Crawford

I just read 47, and had to fight to not laugh out loud, and wake my husband! This chapter was phenomenal!

Sonia McLeod

omg I am dying more please 😁😁🇬🇧

Marii Solaria

1/29/2022 Hello my readers! Quick update. Due to exams next week for both my Pharmacology and Intergrated Health Care classes (both on the same day 😵), updates will be pushed until next weekend. Writing is the last thing on my mind right now 😅

Reader-670952

Is chapter 46 the last update ?

Jael Brown

I am so ready for Jonathan to just die. When will his evil reign of terror end. Why does the curse effect Neron and not Oynx and does the curse effect Neron's visions as well.l?

waiting patiently for new updates… will it be soon? I sure hope so amazing book

Meaghan Prue

so marii did Angelo come back to life too

Meaghan Prue

Happy new year everyone let's toast to another miserable and painful death for the asshole and the skank and kiya and neron be together forever

Sonia McLeod

omg I want Jonathan to die for good this time with all the knowledge and power they have why can't they get rid of him I can't believe he took over neron body how cruel is he I hope they find the map and the answers they need😘😘🇬🇧

Meaghan Prue

I know this is kiya and nerons story but I do miss Jackie she was such a fun character. I am so glad that kiya and neron are making good progress its amazing how they began as enemies in a way more like neron made her an enemy and has grown as a man and sees that his father was the jerk. Keep up the good writing Marii

Meaghan Prue

omg please want more of this 😍

Great chapter! I just love me some Onyx 🥰

Merry Christmas Ms. Marii. Again, thanks for creating such wonderful stories. 💕❤️🎉

Hope you are doing well Marii. just loved the update. How Neron and Kiya just forgot about Asim in the room 😆. Nuria little tease with her mate 😂

Jael Brown

Damn Jonathan is just so evil, I feel like Nuria and wish he had stayed dead. I can't believe he slapped her that asshole. His mind is warped if he thinks his family wants anything to with him. I hope the avatars send him back to hell where he belongs.

Hello Ms. Author, Approximately, how many more chapters does this book would have? 😁 I am not sure if you have mentioned it before.

Jael Brown

Merry Christmas Marii to you and your family and thank for the update. How did you know I asked Santa for one 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Reader-670952

When will there be an update beyond chapter 40

Asim is a VERY smart man 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Another great chapter!

Karla Carlos

wait Neron is in a cave... could it be the map that his grandpa gave him the way out of the cave?

Nina072

Johnathan's second death will be even sweeter than the first time around.

Nina072

so i let 4 chapters stack up so heres my reaction..... the first two: ohhhhhh girl get it! bust that nut! discover that kink! about time you felt that good good. yeeeeeeeeaaaaaahhhhhhhh I dont think I've ever been so happy to see a character experience that. it's so different when you feel safe with the person you're with. that was sweet. the last two: what in the actual frack marii?! how could you stab me in the heart like this!?! Odessa? now that was a massive twist! now.....wait a minute.....what's going on with phoebs??? am I smelling a lost sibling or a magical ego death? *gasp* hecate is usually symbolized as 3 people......we talking triplets? but someone would have to be the Crone. holy hell!!! I mean I know kiya is alive because then the book would end but holy frack! what a wrench you threw in here. we're back in action yall!

Meryam Ahsan

I honestly hope that Neron doesn’t leave the pack lands, and they use the witchcraft phoebe has and asims help to figure out how to stop apophis …

Sonia McLeod

Beautiful how they are getting to know each other and not just jumping into sex I love them both I hope they can find the book and get the answers they need to Defeat his father😘😘🇬🇧

Analiza

oh sweet selene please help nerion and kiya

Mrs.Hyde

Damn I love Violetta. Smart thinking.

must say marii, great update and cliffhanger again! can't wait for the next one 😊

Jael Brown

Damn Kiya and Neron, for them not to have actually done the deed this was very hot

Jael Brown

Why does it feel like it's not the end. I mean Jonathan and his lackeys are wounded and injured but I have a funny feeling we will be seeing them again.

I absolutely love the way this was written, and even more, I love the way Neron loved away her insecurities.

Lynora Crawford

It took them long enough to get to this point (that is NOT a criticism in ANY way!), but good grief that was incredibly well-written!!! I'm glad Kiya finally realized she was worth it!

Analiza

i am hoping they remember about the map and they will finish jonathan for good

Analiza

it is like osiris done to kiya, but LOVE will prevail...

Sonia McLeod

dam brilliant 😘😘🇬🇧

Kecina_Janice

So so good! Can’t wait to see what they do to the fam bam when they have them all together

Meaghan Prue

I do believe onyx had it wrong not the reincarnation of gnat no more like a pig and a snake and I'm sure the wolf wouldn't mind taking the pigs head and placing it on a pike where it belongs

Nina072

oh thank god, I was worried about liberty.

Jael Brown

Best update ever, Oynx had me in here rolling. I was laughing so hard 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

I'm loving the fun, sexy, light hearted moments in this book. Honestly Unhinged was a little too dark and heavy for me (still awesome) I love seeing Neron and Kiya find their way back to each other. I feel like they have both worked so hard to heal and deserve this moment.

Meryam Ahsan

there you go people - Phoebe’s evil lookalike is called rhea

Oh my, I want more. Now we just need to get Kira and Neron on the same page. I just have this feeling that if they mark each other, they will draw more strength from each other. Glad to see their relationship developing.

Jael Brown

Damn Marii you did it again these cliffhangers, though. Well Odessa is still crazy delusional, Jonathan needs to let it go, and who the hell is evil Phoebe. It seems like Apophis has brought back someone to torment each of our favorite characters, so I wonder who will be resurrected to torment the other avatars that destroyed Osiris. As always great update Marii.

Humairah Mahomedy Rangila

can someone reshare violetta’s back story with me again. I read the other two books but can’t recalls

Jael Brown

Loved this soft core porn and I love how they are taking their time. Jonathan really is an ass I hope they kill him soon. Quick question is the thunder cunt still stuck in the wall. Neron really did throw her ass into hell or dangerously close to it.

Nina072

"go back in your FORKING kennel!!!!" 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 I'm internally scream laughing, cackling like witch. Bahahahahahahaha!!!!!!

Lynora Crawford

Wow...I was looking forward to not having his vitriol in this installment, but now the intrigue has me enthralled once more. It also seems kind if poetic, that they have to go against him until the end. I'm really looking forward to seeing how they deal with it all! 🤩

Analiza

In supermoon pt 2 Selene had warned Neron that he knows the link. my guess that time was Jonathan Prince oh my God it is a chaos. I cant wait of another update...😂😁

I wish you could update everyday Marii. I'm so in the story. The trills, the hotness. 😜

Nina072

holy heck..........that was extra spicy. thank god for masks in public, marii this update deserves at least two extra chili peppers. soooooo NSFW!!! great update tho

Mez

WHY IS EVERYONE GETTING BLOWN UP? This brings a whole new meaning to ‘an explosive entrance’ 😂

kathydor

I have love all three books so far, but I would like to see more more love and less war.

Nina072

ohhhh lovely update. artemis is thirsteh!!!!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 she is parched!

Nina072

uh.......like.......so.......dude. like holy shirt balls.

Lynora Crawford

Kiya's turned into a strategist...I like it!

Analiza

kiya and neron's love story just blossoming but they will face dangers.. who is this woman???

Meaghan Prue

marii will you be taking a break this weekend from updating

Sherisa Weston

This was such an empowering beautiful sexual scene. I am so glad Kiya was able to recover and experience new things. The way Neron helped her was wonderful. Such lovely writing my dear author, Mari

Bonib2

I love how straight forward Artemis is 🤣🤣. Oh and Aunt Essie is funny❤❤❤

Kecina_Janice

I’m loving the communication but the mirror scene with his positive affirmations…whew I might’ve shed a tear because it was simply beautiful 😍

Lynora Crawford

NO! Poor Neron... he's suffered so much. 🥺

Meaghan Prue

oh man uhm yeah no words right now just got nothing

Meaghan Prue

u know though where is artemis I mean we hear from onyx but where's our wolf girl starting to miss her