V for Virgin! Comments

  • Visitor

    😍😍😍

    05/19/2025 02:11

  • Tracey Sweetness-Fabalous Campbell

    dear writer, I really like this book and would love if you release the rest of it,I just don't want to believe that this is the end please continue this book

    05/18/2025 11:52

  • Visitor

    it us not an end it just hanging chapters , really aFter all that twist , toooo frustrating

    05/05/2025 22:38

  • Liesl Haas

    blue balls for men, frosty flaps for women.

    05/03/2025 00:22

  • Amanda

    the story was good until the ending... it was the most disappointing ending forsure. there isn't even a second book so it's left with so many unanswered questions.

    04/27/2025 15:15

  • Shanika Denea

    this book can't be complete, we need more! there's so much more that needs to be expanded on. This was so good it can't be over the way it's currently written 😫.

    04/26/2025 12:40

  • Visitor

    Great read. Loved the direction, I was really impressed with the play and story line. I would have loved to have seen more with Cassie and Seth their dynamic was so saucy and fun to read and I felt like there was so many other opportunities to expand on. I would love to see a sequel to this. (and between writers, who cares if some people don't like how it was written I followed it just fine. everyone takes time to find the grove that works for them and not every book is for everyone)

    04/26/2025 00:49

  • Visitor

    Great read, except was really hoping the insemination plot would die out. Great potential for sequal on life between Seth and cass .... and maybe Gabe.... after Ethan leaves for London. But Cass being a pregnant surrogate is a bit wierd on that plot.

    04/22/2025 20:11

  • KALIA WONG

    I really enjoyed this story and think it could benefit from a sequel. It was both funny and steamy. Yes, it is somewhat confusing and could use one last edit, but overall, it's good.

    04/22/2025 12:56

  • Shzaqte

    Some of this is confusing as hell, the drafts are a little different but aren't all right after the unedited so if you skip 1 you're likely to miss something good/important (found out the hard way). Story is interesting and has great potential but please work with an editor or experienced writer and figure out which drafts to get rid of because reading & paying 3 times for slightly different chapter versions is ridiculous

    04/10/2025 02:45

  • K H

    I like the story and the plot seems interesting but it's so very confusing to read with all the 'drafts' it honestly gave me a headache. I wish the author would pick one and stick to it instead of the chapters bouncing all over the place.

    09/05/2023 05:34

  • Love1419

    I don’t understand the different drafts. it’s making it so hard to read. Personally I like the first draft or second draft. see I’m confused now. the draft that doesn’t have all the extra details.

    09/04/2023 11:33

  • Book with Luv

    Hey can you help me please? I really need to know how can I be a signed writer. I hope you will help me

    09/04/2023 07:18

  • Cait Fore

    It's a good read and well written. However it's so difficult to follow with the chapters mixed up. Maybe keeping them all in order with the second drafts after the completion of the story?

    09/04/2023 07:12

  • Kalista Sanders

    I'm liking this story but it's hard to follow because of the way you formatted the "edits" maybe taking it down and only putting up your most recent edit in chronological order without all the other edit versions included would make this reading experience more enjoyable and a lot smoother for your followers

    09/04/2023 07:08

  • Fiona Wright

    huh. interesting

    09/04/2023 07:00

  • Wendy Syri

    Okay, so she wants to loose her virginity, but she’s giving blow jobs instead?? You want to have sex with your gay best friend, but you don’t even know how to go after what you want. she’s basically like a blow up doll just waiting for something to happen. She doesn’t even know how to grow or feel a man up...any virgin could do that. Ethan becomes a complete virgin who doesn’t know what to do either. Seth is the main attraction. The puppet master, pulling both of their strings. Without him, this story would be soo boring.

    09/04/2023 06:59

  • Wendy Syri

    this would be better if the chps weren’t all over the place and repeating more than once in all the edited chps.

    09/04/2023 06:59

  • Emily Brooks

    I'm ready 👀👀

    09/04/2023 06:58

  • HoneyToast Bunny

    is Artifical insemination 2/2 the last chapter ever?

    09/04/2023 06:58

  • Malond Ray

    I'm so ready to read more

    09/04/2023 06:57

  • Esther*

    so sexyyyyyy! wonderful description! totally got me there I wish I’m this girl ! 🥰🤪

    09/04/2023 06:56

  • HoneyToast Bunny

    This book is so jumbled it’s hard to read😭 I don’t know which chapters I’m supposed to read and in what order 😩😒

    09/04/2023 06:55

  • Kaitlyn Buckley

    is this book good

    09/04/2023 06:55