The Bastard Princess Comments
Abackpack 01
She can kill people. Why is she not killng thea? She let them mark her and abuse her. That is BS
11/06/2021 12:47Jennifer Larimer
oh I absolutely loved these books. I wish there was another one just because I dont want there story to end! great writing
05/03/2021 00:34Philippa Rosemary
Will there be a story on Celeste and the Lycan King?
02/17/2021 19:23LoneRaven
Chapter 8 "it brakes my heart..." is actually spelt "it breaks my heart..." brake is what you use to slow down a vehicle. Break is for when you split an item or split a couple up. "...darkness that I bought with me..." is actually spelt "...darkness that I brought with me..." bought is for an item you buy. Brought is something you bring with you. "...guards asking for identity in distance" this needs a the between in and distance so it says "...guards asking for identity in the distance" "More slaves walked in meanwhile with huge golden plates..." structurally this should be "Meanwhile, more slaves walked in with huge golden plates..." "I had to peak from people's shoulders..." do you mean to look over? If so it would be "I had to peek over people's shoulders, who were standing in front of me" For when Cleopatra comes into the room you say stall in and I'm not 100% sure what you mean but it would either be "...white linen, walks regally into the room" or "...white linen, stalks regally into the room" Stalk is something a predator would do before they pounce on their prey. I know you asked for help with spelling etc and hope this is OK. Seriously though, your writing skills are nearly impeccable.
07/03/2020 15:18LoneRaven
Hey, when she kills Vibia you wrote sent when it should be send. "I'm here to send you..." instead of "I'm here to sent you..." Sent - is for an action of the past/previously done eg 'I sent the letter to mum earlier today' Send - is for an action of the future/not yet done eg 'I'm going to send mum a letter tomorrow' or 'Could you send this for me?'. You can also use send in a question like this 'Did you send the letter for me?' this is where a future action was questioned alternatively you can say 'Have you sent the letter?' it all depends on what else is said. I know English can be a bit confusing but for a second language you have a very good grip on it. I love this book, you're a great writer and I'd love to see this as an actual book. I prefer a main female character like this as compared to other books on this app the lead females are very bitchy/childish etc. You've got a new fan, also you're using some of my favourite God's and Goddess'. I'm looking forward to seeing what else you've done. Do you have any social media?
07/03/2020 11:18
FantasyWORLD
Really love this book!
06/20/2020 03:57
giselle caraballo
chapter 42 is up twice
05/28/2020 14:32giselle caraballo
i ended up going to the pantreon website. i just needed more chapters of this book 😍
05/26/2020 21:49giselle caraballo
my new favorite book!
05/17/2020 00:12Tyaira Schofield
I love this book!!!!
05/05/2020 07:23
