MAFIA KING'S UNBRIDLED LOVE Comments
empress
The grammatical errors make it difficult to stay interested in the story. I stopped at chapter 29.
04/07/2022 01:55shannon colgate
I love how you write in two different styles so you really understand the characters
10/15/2021 23:41Jasmin Prunkl
A wonderful story... You had me laughing, sighing, sreaming in pain, madness, annoyance or pleasure and crying... I was scared after he left the hospital that they really seperate for good, I was crying sioo much... but the end is beautiful!!! THANK YOU!!! ❤️❤️❤️
09/09/2021 21:41Jasmin Prunkl
Wow, Lucifer had this planned, right? Those 6 men catching her trying to rape her, just to frighten her so that she'll be coming back to him. And he coming by car after her to coincidencially safe her... she's really naïve if she believes that... so far a good story though...
09/01/2021 20:01Cheryl Browning
so far so good. but a few things, mafioso is a person in the mafia and boss is what Lucifer would be called, as well as a mafioso vs a mafia since mafia means organization having controlling influence... also, Martinez or Ramirez??? I could swear it was Lucifer Martinez but it just showed Ramirez. otherwise it’s good.
08/11/2021 00:01Sheer Li
😊😊
05/25/2021 11:20Margaret reed
good book
03/03/2021 04:14Christine Jarema Taylor
well....DEFFINATELY got my attention started reading today and im on chapter 17... this is gonna be an allnighter for me. Thank You... please keep it coming...
02/03/2021 23:48
Stella Moon
great story!!
01/17/2021 04:30Emt4u
read the book. great story
12/07/2020 03:03
Tiffany Gartrell
Great book!! I really enjoyed the story
12/05/2020 23:33
Analys Vazquez
I love 🥰 this book
11/14/2020 01:27Reader-153573
update for gods sake!!
11/11/2020 19:56
Vicki Arlt
I was really into this book but not thrilled that it had not been updated for long time...
11/04/2020 15:58Analys Vazquez
update please
11/04/2020 06:02
Farrah
the anticipation is killin me!!!
11/01/2020 00:27Reader-153573
updates please
10/29/2020 00:07
Reader-beep-boop-bop
reading the introduction 😂😂😂😂
09/28/2020 00:37
Randi Wojcik
pleaseee update!!!! i need to know happens!!!!
09/27/2020 23:36Siainiu Fidow
The store is currently not working, I really wanna finish this great story😍. congratulations Ms. Jathryn
09/21/2020 05:15Tanna Rodeman
I love the story, but more updates would be nice.
09/19/2020 07:45
Loretta Colavito
how often do you update?
09/18/2020 03:08Victoria Nichols
OMG!!! Just read the new updated chapter and I want to know what happens right now!! i feel that Devin has come to take her back!! It's about to get so good!!!!!
09/16/2020 02:05Keila Siciliano
pleaseeeee updateeee
09/15/2020 20:41Suzie Dornhoffer
THIS BOOK HAS ME ADDICTED!!! i have read this book at least 3 times waiting for more chapter updates!!! you have a great ability & creativity to writing!!! I'M IN LOVE WITH THIS BOOK & CAN'T WAIT TO SEE MORE NEW CHAPTERS!!!
09/15/2020 06:14
Cj J
love this book, I've got up to chapter 14 and can't read any more as you have to pay for coins. Doing books like this just makes it so expensive for your readers. which is such a shame as I would love to continue reading it. it's cheaper to buy a book from a book store then it is reading them on here.
09/12/2020 21:13Victoria Nichols
do you write chapter by chapter or is the story already written and one chapter is uploaded at a time?? I can't wait to read more and see if Devin kidnaps her and Lusifer has to get her back!!!
09/09/2020 17:49Michelle Johnston
update update please 🥺🥺 love it! need to know what’s going on with Lucifer and camelia.
09/08/2020 15:34Randi Wojcik
absolutely love this book!!!!!😍
09/08/2020 02:26Victoria Nichols
is there going to be more chapters soon? I seriously have not been able to put this book down!
09/02/2020 19:59Tanna Rodeman
Is this the end of the story??bIf not....I would love some updates. Its been z good story do far.
08/28/2020 17:34Sandie Rizzo-Link
omg I can’t wait for the updates. I read this whole story in one day. please update soon. I am on pins and needles. awesome writing ✍️
08/21/2020 03:03Sandie Rizzo-Link
omg I can’t wait for the updates. I read this whole story in one day. please update soon. I am on pins and needles. awesome writing ✍️
08/21/2020 03:03Sandie Rizzo-Link
omg I can’t wait for the updates. I read this whole story in one day. please update soon. I am on pins and needles. awesome writing ✍️
08/21/2020 03:03Sandie Rizzo-Link
omg I can’t wait for the updates. I read this whole story in one day. please update soon. I am on pins and needles. awesome writing ✍️
08/21/2020 03:03Sandie Rizzo-Link
omg I can’t wait for the updates. I read this whole story in one day. please update soon. I am on pins and needles. awesome writing ✍️
08/21/2020 03:03Sandie Rizzo-Link
omg I can’t wait for the updates. I read this whole story in one day. please update soon. I am on pins and needles. awesome writing ✍️
08/21/2020 03:03Sandie Rizzo-Link
I am totally getting into this story. 🥰😍
08/20/2020 20:51Amanda Caruana
This is such a good book!!
08/19/2020 07:23Tanna Rodeman
How often does this story update? It has been a good read so far.
08/15/2020 15:03Barbara Tryon
great chapter.....nice that her hero arrived right on time
08/13/2020 23:39Analys Vazquez
update please 🙏
08/11/2020 06:13AriLisa Smith
i love this story. I'm all for the tough love and rough sex books. thanks!
08/10/2020 21:52Sofia Lathourakis-Liristis
great story!!!! hope you update soon!!
07/23/2020 01:05Maria Chavez
I am glad you are feeling better and able to write. I have been enjoying the new updates!!! I feel addicted to this book!
07/13/2020 19:39
Au'Star_lie
I love His crazy Possessiveness keep going this story is 👏 👏
07/09/2020 09:09
Tanisha Khanijou
please make this book coin free or upload it on wattpad
07/07/2020 16:35
venomania 23
I hope you get better soon, great chap xx
06/12/2020 19:34
Theodora Miller
please update soon 🙏❤️
06/12/2020 12:09Theodora Miller
great story. i love it. waiting for the update
06/09/2020 08:36venomania 23
love this book, cant wait to read more
06/03/2020 20:23
Lucy. M.N
love love love this book. can't wait for the next update. It's truly great
05/26/2020 08:01
rose
I can't wait to read more of this. hope you update soon.
05/23/2020 03:43Anastasia Swan
please update
05/18/2020 20:22rose
This story is amazing. plz update more chapter
05/04/2020 12:28
Jane Above Story
so dark so hot! can't wait for the next chap. hope the writer could update more
04/28/2020 02:31
