The Nymph & The Chef Comments
Mermaid MomX2
geez my heart breaks for her. thanks for the update Jenny!
06/01/2020 04:10Summer Stockham
So the best friend is Daisy the cop is Eric. That last line broke my heart ππ Though I donβt think heβs going to give up on her that easily. Heβs going to help her with the lawsuit.
06/01/2020 02:16Toni Aver
oh that is so heartbreaking. most cases of domestic abuse a people in position of power of some sort. men can be victim to. π€
06/01/2020 01:15abobdasgirl69
omg
06/01/2020 00:51Taina Iosefo
wow thatβs a twist... I was wondering why she left her husband and if he was still alive or not. canβt wait for the next chapter.
05/31/2020 23:14Cindy A
omg that's sad they like each other and they can't be together.. I hope things turn around for them it seems leo will be happy of they are together. .. can't wait for the next update
05/31/2020 22:38Cristin Ronqvist
Woww π³π loved it SO so mutch and just cant wait for more Jenny, you are beond amazing ππππ
05/31/2020 21:41NINJA
Awwwwwww please David don't give up your new inspiration
05/31/2020 20:44Edina Owens
omg omg omg!!!!!!!
05/30/2020 06:46Auras Laura
well doneπ
05/29/2020 10:12Holite Monroe
this chapter is soo cute!! love it!! canβt wait for the next update! π₯°π₯°π₯°
05/29/2020 03:03estacey003(π)
these short stories are so light hearted.. make me forget the cruel world just a bit.π
05/29/2020 02:31genkenry
its so cute... I luv them both already.. ππ
05/29/2020 01:38Summer Stockham
OMG I love it!! I canβt wait to see Alyssaβs reaction. I think David is fully hooked. Thank you for the chapter
05/28/2020 22:19alvs7
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05/28/2020 21:52Cristin Ronqvist
Thank u so so mutch for this amazing chapter Jenny ππ€© loved it and cant wait for more π₯°πΉπ
05/28/2020 21:44Cindy A
that was a great chapter.. david really likes Alyssa that's cute and what will she think of the photoshoot hope she likes it..β€β€β€
05/28/2020 21:05abobdasgirl69
awesome loving this update xπ₯°
05/28/2020 20:32Ida GrΓΆnberg
omg I love it, I love when guys are unexpectedly cute and nice with kids π₯°
05/28/2020 20:28Erica Sauza
the chapter contradicts itself also. first it says he didn't get along with the kids from the orphanage, then he said he did get along well with the other kids later on after he puts leo to bed.
05/28/2020 20:15Erica Sauza
as someone with a 9 year old....I don't think most people talk to a 9 year old like this, I'm just saying. I still love the story
05/28/2020 20:03anna sota
aunt Daisy!!!
05/27/2020 20:06Diana Monroy Rivera
omg they mention Daisy AND Eric!! hahahaha I love the story!!!
05/26/2020 01:47Holite Monroe
Auntie Daisy!!! π€ I had no idea that would link as some point. I might have forgotten that detail πππ I cant wait for the next update!
05/26/2020 00:54terri4388
omg ainβt daisy!!!!! love this chapter canβt wait for the next
05/25/2020 22:39Albane Lesouple
Auntie daisy?! ππ Great! Haha i like this chapter! Well his is skills! π
05/25/2020 21:28Cristin Ronqvist
Omg i dident even see The conection Whit your other stories wow this is beonde amazing Jenny ππβ€οΈ
05/25/2020 21:05Cristin Ronqvist
Omg its amazing Jenny so in love Whit this one ππ₯° pretty pleeeeeees do this storie a bit if not alot longer then The other mini storie you hade ππ its so so good π₯°ππππΉ
05/25/2020 21:03Aqua the Unicorn
Tante Daisy?!!!! I canβt wait to find out how theyβre related!!
05/25/2020 20:57Mousumi Khalil
I guess all these short stories characters are related somehow
05/25/2020 20:48Jovana Pavlovic
Aunt Daisy!!!!
05/25/2020 20:44Auras Laura
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05/25/2020 20:26Yanik 82
David to the rescue
05/25/2020 20:24Taina Iosefo
always gotta leave us in suck suspense... hahaha canβt wait for the next chapters!!
05/22/2020 23:29Diana Monroy Rivera
aaaahhhhjjhh!!!!! *screams AND jumps all over the room* jajajaja the last line!!! OH MY GOD! MY HEART!!!! ππππππβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈππππππππ
05/22/2020 20:54Bhav Patel
can you download the chapter, if so how?
05/21/2020 20:53Taina Iosefo
When is the next chapter coming out?? I wanna know what happens next...
05/20/2020 18:14Abby Lawrence
Annddd Iβm hooked! How do you do this with only one chapter?! π
05/19/2020 03:19Rose Shar
loved it
05/19/2020 03:06Cassandra Conic
Enjoyed the first chapter. Looking forward to reading more.
05/18/2020 20:35Edi
followed from Dreame
05/18/2020 19:43Rhiannon Mann
So excited, first chapter has me hooked already π
05/18/2020 19:29Rosy Ramz
so excited to read this short story π
05/18/2020 19:28Alli Tima
Am ready jenny
05/18/2020 19:22