The Hidden Princess (The Saville Series Book 1) Comments

  • IncrediblyLovely

    true! you can never ever forget your first love (mine was...NVM)😂anyway, love this chapter!💓

    08/27/2020 00:50

  • IncrediblyLovely

    Hi! this is the girl who you dmed in wattpad, I'm liking the 1st chapter so far and I will read it furthermore but anyway, hope you continue writing! <3

    08/27/2020 00:44

  • Jennifer Bruland

    This was an awesome book!

    08/27/2020 00:03

  • skye wheatley

    love the book 👍🏽

    08/26/2020 21:20

  • Hibiscusnub Nightstand

    The story isn’t that bad but I can’t really pay for coins to continue but that’s ok this book is really good.

    08/26/2020 20:14

  • Ayushi Agarwal

    In love with this book😍

    08/26/2020 18:30

  • Alexis Kim Sithebe

    this is such an interesting chapter

    08/26/2020 17:00

  • Thanchanok Tunhun

    The story is interesting although I won't be able to read the rest of the lock chapters because I don't have any coins and I'm sadly short on money to add any...

    08/26/2020 15:18

  • Daniela Di Pasquale

    omg this was a journey to read. it was great. can't wait to read the next one.

    08/26/2020 14:43

  • Brandey Case

    grr why is it so hard to get coins without buying them? and to top it off the chapters cost to much for the little amount of few coins you get.

    08/23/2020 04:04

  • BAD BOY

    hi everyone if you want to read something different and extraordinary story content then you must read EVIL INEVITABLE and mark my words you won't regret.

    08/23/2020 03:07

  • BAD BOY

    hi guys if u really want to read something different and awesome then you must Read EVIL INEVITABLE

    08/23/2020 02:08

  • Caroline Applin

    I thoroughly enjoyed your book and cannot wait to start the next. Thank you

    08/22/2020 13:18

  • Buh Bruh

    Uh

    08/21/2020 19:42

  • Kari Bailey

    The characters are well thought out and I’m liking where the plot is going. A few writing errors but it doesn’t take away from the story. I got to chapter 7 but it won’t let me purchase any coins, I figured it’s just this app. I’m loving the story though.

    08/21/2020 06:07

  • x_Aphrodisiac_x

    Wow that was an amazing first chapter .😱❤

    08/20/2020 17:44

  • x_Aphrodisiac_x

    Wow that was an amazing first chapter .😱❤

    08/20/2020 17:44

  • Jana Entres

    Great book

    08/19/2020 07:48

  • Mikayla Roberson

    Wait, Aiden’s mom’s name, Arabella, is my middle name 😱

    08/18/2020 05:42

  • Taz Probert

    is this book on wattpad if so what is is called please

    08/17/2020 19:42

  • Reader-547147

    I have to say author, this has been one of the best written books I’ve read on any of these platforms. The length of the chapters, the story line, the character development, everything was amazing. Absolutely a 5-star read. There were a handful of editing errors, but nothing significany. Amazing job!!!!

    08/17/2020 18:45

  • viveca-seraphina

    love your writing style

    08/17/2020 14:19

  • viveca-seraphina

    I can tell that this is one heck of a story. wish I could read it completely. Great job. This is just the beginning of sweet success.

    08/17/2020 14:15

  • viveca-seraphina

    Mason is ... can’t exactly pinpoint it... but he is sibling material

    08/17/2020 13:57

  • Reader-906714

    Great story. It would have been so much better if the editing was better. there were many grammatical errors, and sentences that didn’t make sense. It was quite distracting and detracted from the cohesiveness of the story.

    08/16/2020 23:02

  • Skaia

    Hi, I already found it, thanks for the recommendation. Skaia0708 Wattpad 😉

    08/15/2020 21:17

  • Kiki Morena

    I'm loving the story, but the early sex just kinda ruined it for me a bit. She's a white wolf so far seems as if she's meant to be so much more... IDK... I feel contradicted right now.

    08/15/2020 17:52

  • Kati Mitchell

    why cant I ever finish a book? I can't pay for the last 4 or 5 chapters and make it a good decision!!! so frustrating!!!

    08/15/2020 13:15

  • Winnie Singh

    wow

    08/15/2020 09:36

  • Winnie Singh

    omgosh i love this story so far can't lie got me hooked i can't wait to read more..... PS try to put this story on Wattpad reading some of them comments they trying to read your beautiful story but failing ☺️

    08/15/2020 09:23

  • Nandini Paul

    The story is excellent. . I seriously loved it.. it should be added in wattpad to ..totally worth for.😁😁

    08/15/2020 08:08

  • Seeking to improve

    Excellent story

    08/14/2020 21:31

  • Paige Erin

    the absolutely attrocious grammar makes this a difficult read.

    08/14/2020 18:28

  • Shania Dharan

    Enjoying it😊

    08/14/2020 07:40

  • Shania Dharan

    Enjoyed it☺

    08/14/2020 07:40

  • Tari Russell

    so far I love it

    08/14/2020 05:53

  • Tracy Underwood

    can u get any of these in book form

    08/13/2020 22:12

  • Ruth Kylie Momberume

    I love this book but i dont have any means if i could just buy the whole series but i dont have a way to buy it cause i don't have a card yet

    08/13/2020 21:28

  • Taylor D'Ambrosio

    hello your advertising “read the full story of the hidden princess for free” on Facebook I have a screenshot however at chapter 7 it requires coins to continue reading therefore false advertising. very frustrating. it was just getting good

    08/13/2020 20:27

  • Shawna Jackson

    Damn I don't have enough coins to go on to chapter 9 :((

    08/13/2020 19:34

  • Shanaya Moon

    very interesting book. I started reading it and I feel the idea and concept of this book is very good. nice work.

    08/13/2020 19:25

  • ashley zera-Lynch

    Hey ThatWriter Kari can you send me an email, I want to verify something with you.

    08/13/2020 18:31

  • Reader-147078

    why don’t the females lead with the males like Emma is the princess soon to be queen and the most powerful so why aren’t they letting her help

    08/13/2020 15:29

  • Barbara Lubin

    That question is for the writer why must I pay over 15:00 for an ebook what's so special about your book. I love books I have over 4000 books in my library not one of them costs so much and they from well-known authors who are a best seller. I just don't understand.No book should cost more than lunch.

    08/13/2020 15:10

  • Ashley White

    omg I'm crying:(

    08/13/2020 07:49

  • Merel Jhane

    It was a good story. I love it but I don't have money to unlock the chapters.

    08/13/2020 03:28

  • yurgirl_india

    I love this story ❤️

    08/12/2020 18:11

  • A'shanti Miller

    I really enjoyed what I read it was very interesting I got all the way up the chapter 8 and it wouldn’t let me continue. which is crazy because I was really getting into that book but overall from what I read it was very good just wish I could have read more . Thanks for posting it 👍

    08/12/2020 16:46

  • MidnightAbyse

    Anystories brought me up here, your story's amazing and it's interesting. Hope you guys publish this on Wattpad! I'll definitely read this right away XD

    08/12/2020 15:26

  • ダ イン

    thanks to your friend i discover this story..

    08/12/2020 13:52

  • Patryce Stillettos Critz

    this book was amazing and I cannot wait to read the other 2. I couldn’t put it down and every twist and turn had me losing my mind. so many more stories could be made off of this. what happened to Mason and Ariana? did the twins ever find love? so many more books that could be made.

    08/11/2020 22:04

  • Reader-920690

    I had the coins to unlock chapter 7 and it skipped 7 but gave me 8.. this is a really good book and I want to finish it.. guess I just have to look for the author on my Amazon prime. hopefully I can finish the book

    08/11/2020 19:23

  • Amanda Teal

    I bought coins to read this book and I went back to read it again and suddenly I have to pay for it AGAIN?!?

    08/11/2020 02:30

  • Ali Crocker

    wow I love this book. thank you so much.

    08/09/2020 19:01

  • FALILI HAITI BABY

    this should be a movie

    08/08/2020 22:07

  • Bethan

    Oh I absolutely adored this! I couldn't stop until I'd read it all!! ❤️ Filled me with so much emotion highs and lows. Thank you for a great read 😄

    08/07/2020 22:30

  • Savahna Lisi

    but what is up with Jonah and noah? everything wrapped up for the most part but then.

    08/07/2020 16:50

  • _SirenaRosa

    I wish a certain vampire and her wolffish mate would become prince and princess over their kingdom. they we be allies to the Crown 0.0

    08/06/2020 23:53

  • Chanelle Tahir

    absolutely loving this story! love the twists

    08/06/2020 16:50

  • Reader-903057

    seriously this is so hard to even understand quite often. clearly zero proof reading on this. it’s so bad I’m about to stop reading as I can’t make sense of what a character is even trying to say sometimes.

    08/06/2020 15:24

  • pink rose

    hey i love ur book how about youyou read my book you just may enjoy it

    08/06/2020 08:30

  • Rebecca Vandruff

    book are design to be read this point stuff suck let us read the the entire thing will pay for total

    08/05/2020 16:58

  • Annette Purscelley

    I loved this book, can’t wait to start the next one 🤩

    08/04/2020 18:43

  • Lilly Emerson

    like your book but not worth having to pay after 6 chapters just not worth it, if it was free I'm sure youd have more readers willing to read and maybe pay for the second book. just not worth the money

    08/04/2020 18:24

  • _SirenaRosa

    I think it’s lame how Mason and Aiden were wanting Aiden to be with her.... he’s not her true mate. There’s nothing anyone could do

    08/04/2020 16:44

  • Kiddos Phone

    I love this story. do you have to pay to keep reading or does it eventually release next chapters?

    08/03/2020 22:14

  • Gin B

    great book can't wait to read more

    08/03/2020 19:31

  • _SirenaRosa

    I picture the goddess to always have golden fleckes that reflect the colors of the earth and hair the color of soil and skin a golden tan brown— the color of the setting sun. never pictured her blonde, which is odd to me. But the Moon goddess always seems like Mother Nature herself. but then depending on how the author portrays the Moon Goddess, I think of actual mythology with white hair, white eyes and beautiful paint in diagonal lines from eyebrow over eyes and down to her jaw line but still a golden brown tan. OR shimmery black hair that shines deep dark blue and white eyes or black eyes that shine the same color, with pale skin

    08/03/2020 18:18

  • _SirenaRosa

    just figured out that maybe..... Aiden is the Luna Guard for her. that’s why he wants to protect her so often and their wolfs enjoy each other’s company

    08/03/2020 16:36

  • Sara Gaspar

    this is definitely the best one of these types of books I have read so far. however I refuse to spend that much money to unlock the rest of this book. the other apps like this I have been using allow you to earn daily coins so I can keep reading for free. if it was $5 to unlock the whole book I may have gone for it but no way I’m paying $23. if you ever decide to sell your books another way I would be very interested.

    08/02/2020 12:30

  • Reader-389944

    what do they mean by wolf-less cause I’m pretty sure she has a wolf someone please explain

    08/01/2020 22:45

  • Kimberly Rhoades

    this sounds like it could be a really good story. I’m not about to pay a small fortune to get to read it online once then lose it when I have to uninstall the app. you should seriously consider puting up somewhere eles. there are plenty of places that you can sale your book at where you get payed for it and they get to have a pdf, ePub, ebook copy of it they can put on there device. I’d much rather pay a one time fee and get to have the book then to keep paying a fee to read chapter by chapter. someone said they figured it would cost about 22.99 that’s to much for a book especially in this format. idk how much you get paid from it but there sites you can put it for sale and pick how much you want for the book and even hold sales if you want. and you get all the money. I forgot the name but you can have hard backs Nd paper back copy’s made then you get payed ur price and the company adds the cost of printing the book to the customer. say you want 5$ for ur book but it costs 10$ to print a hard back and 5$ to print a paper back then the ebook is 5 the paper back is 10 and the hard back is 15 for the customer and u get 5$ for each of the books. my ex used them.

    07/31/2020 16:55

  • Umi-da

    There is a sentence in chapter 9 where the word flew is located and it should be fly.

    07/31/2020 00:08

  • heyitstaylor__

    ❤️

    07/29/2020 02:49

  • Akayla Doxey

    got to chapter 6 and i went to purchase the chapter and now it keeps telling me that its having trouble loading it was getting so good ugh

    07/28/2020 09:18

  • Jackie Lopez

    loved the series definitely recommend it

    07/28/2020 04:19

  • Joshua LP Burkett

    I just want to let you know that out of all the books like this that i have read on these kinds of apps... it has been the absolute best and i have ready added books 2-4 to my library because damnit i wanna know what happens next

    07/28/2020 02:47

  • Jasmin Brown

    it's good so far

    07/27/2020 20:51

  • Hephziy Anyim

    Dear writer Kari, pls on behalf of your readers, is there a possibility that u could move your stories to chapters. i have to say, u are an amazing writing however with the restrictions of AnyStories, it's impossible for your readers follow along. Chapters is a better platform bc regardless of one's membership, you can read stoties/ Tablets to the end. You also get exposed to a wilder audience on chapters. So pls can u think about it. thanks you for understanding

    07/25/2020 13:29

  • Maranda D

    I really enjoyed the first book. Have you had anyone offer to proofread or help with editing? The story was great (a few holes that could be addressed) but there were times where the mistakes in grammar, spelling, punctuation, and sentence structure took me out of the moment and stopped the flow of reading. It isn't my intention to negatively criticize your work, but to instead encourage you to continue bettering it. Because you are a very talented and gifted story teller!

    07/25/2020 08:57

  • lulubee1975

    This is an intriguing story, I’d love to continue reading, but I must say this is not a great platform. Supporting authors is absolutely a thing that should be done, I will spend money on books I like all day. The problem here is quality for your money. The stories I’ve read so far are in desperate need of editing, but end up costing upwards of $20 for a full book. Literotica is free, Kindle has tons of free and under $5 options. So why would I spend money here, what’s the motivation? To get me to spend this kind of money it would need to be beautifully written and well edited. Instead it’s a great story, with tons of potential, from a new writer which needs some serious editing and refining. It is no dig at your talent to say it’s not worth it given the options. I’m hoping you are making money hand over fist, but if you’re not please look in to other ways of getting your story out. This app is predatory from the reader side, In hoping they aren’t also predatory to inexperienced authors.

    07/24/2020 14:14

  • Merisa Schaeffer

    without paying for coins

    07/23/2020 23:40

  • Merisa Schaeffer

    how do you get coins

    07/23/2020 23:40

  • Tanée Boyd

    noooooo stunted at the good part 😭

    07/23/2020 05:55

  • Michael Brown

    do you have this as a book you can buy ? to reread?

    07/23/2020 00:12

  • Tanée Boyd

    #ThickasThieves*

    07/22/2020 23:50

  • Tanée Boyd

    ooo coined #ThickasTheives

    07/22/2020 23:50

  • Rebecca Crutcher

    thank you so much for your wonderful and delightful story and I loved it so very much and can't wait to read the other three books to this series. please keep up with the fantastic and fabulous Cliff hanging and exciting stories

    07/22/2020 05:01

  • Ashley TL Mims

    I fell in love with this series completely. This book was the first werewolf book I have ever read and none of the other werewolf books ive read since seem to compare. I read all 4 books in a week and a half. I wish they were in print. I would love to add them to my book collection.

    07/22/2020 00:38

  • Reader-323931

    does it take forever to unlock a chapter??.....I don’t see anywhere of a count down or anything until the next chapter unlocks......

    07/21/2020 06:42

  • Esther Hoffman Dunn

    really good story.... am looking forward reading the next two books

    07/21/2020 00:45

  • Angie Martinez

    love so far

    07/20/2020 14:15

  • Princess Clara

    really loved this story, great characters. only thing left unanswered is what happened to Heather ? did she die or survive? will you be writing follow ups ?

    07/20/2020 06:20

  • Kayla B

    AMAZING STORY! Seen an advert for this story on facebook. clicked the link, downloaded this app, and havent been able to put this book down since! Great work author! Looking forward to reading the other 2 in the series!

    07/20/2020 04:34

  • Mona Abugosh

    Love it

    07/19/2020 16:12

  • Eryn Marie

    gpod chapter

    07/19/2020 06:36

  • Ritz cutiepatotie

    masooon

    07/18/2020 14:05

  • KSParent

    did I misread something from the start? I thought Malcolm was Landens brother, not uncle. Making him Emma’s uncle? great read so far. I’m obsessed!

    07/17/2020 20:58

  • Chi.yow

    I'm a new to reading in this app, and I don't know how this work?and where to get coins or stuff. Does this usually happens? I can't read now

    07/16/2020 22:10

  • Sylvia Rome

    Chapter 40 is not unlocking for me. Can someone please Help!

    07/16/2020 12:56
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