A Bride for a Merger Comments

Teena Marie Locsin - Javellana

allison’s character is not also nice… she she has an atyitude as well and its not just christipher. i ahree tho this story needs to be proofread and edited before any postings

Me Myself

t5y8 the opening chapter seems like it could make for an interesting book. I will add it to my library for later

Maria Cecilia Reyes-Meliton

t5y8 This story is refreshingly different from the usual werewolf stories. It really is quite interesting if you can forgive the poor English used. This story will definitely be greatly improved by serious editing. It really is only a case of applying the amendments already made by readers in the comments section of each paragraph.

Amal Samir

T5y8, the storyline was great. I loved it, and loved how Christopher changed for Alison and how she gave him another chance

Janaki Kollepalli

t5y8... the story is really great... the start is very intriguing and different approach... I am hooked to the book

Sammy

t5y8 I really hope that this story can be proofread, then it would be perfectly amazing. Good plot but too many errors with execution.

John Robinson

t5y8 I like that this story isn't too long so isn't too drawn out. It's a contemporary story and I am liking it so far. Yes it could probably do with editing but not that bad doesn't spoil the story for me, good work author.

Angela Baker

personally I think Allison is the stereotypical daddy’s little rich girl who thinks the other guy (Christopher) is always in the wrong. All relationships require both sides to communicate and work at it. ok storyline just needs a little revamping where both sides want to try. so far I only see Chris wanting to take actions to see if the marriage can work. Allison too busy throwing tamtrums about his past mistakes even though she is unwilling to try. I will continue to read and hope it gets better. author appears to be young maybe has beenbtheough heat break and is writing from that perspective. we have all been there

Reader-677126

Good book.

Margaret Figlar Magyar

what's the title of the book when Cassilia, Cassandra and the War Gods daughter is taken as a bride for the White King

Essie Morgan

this story could’ve been better

,I don't like Allison

enjoyed the story

Sonia McLeod

thank you I enjoyed your book 😘😘🇬🇧

ReRe Boo

I'm sorry, but Allison is extremely childish and has some growing up to do...

Jaquetta Gonzalez

Needs to be edited, but it was an okay story. I was just very annoyed with Allison the entire time.

Reader-352296 Sonia3

Thank you I absolutely loved your story Christopher was a bad boy to begin with but he changed so happy Alison gave him a chance wish the story was longer

I really hate the *rolling eyes* thingy girls do in some of these books, as if you are going to a strong character if you do this. it's just childish.

Juanita Smith

The story line was great. The editing process really needs work though. It took me longer to read this book because of misspelled words, three sometimes four words with no spacing, and misplaced words, ( to instead of or ) and words in the wrong order. All in all worth the read.

Amanda Abbott

I wish there was more to this story

Deborah Francis

how do I get chapters 15-

J.S. Teal Ribbon

Needs some edit work.

Amanda Abbott

How many chapters foes this story contain?

Vicki Corder Rivers

Okay, Christopher is 26, but I haven't seen Alison's age anywhere.

Rebecca Crutcher

thank you so much for this wonderful book i so loved it and i hope to read some more of your books when you write some . keep up with the fantastic and fabulous writing

Reader-828776

update???

momododo

Allison sure loves deflection. All she does is deflect.🤦🏽‍♀️🤦🏽‍♀️🤦🏽‍♀️🤦🏽‍♀️🤦🏽‍♀️🤦🏽‍♀️

Jeneva.Jordan

update?

Michelle Dawn Brookfield

here it says "watchmaker" I believe the word should be "matchmaker"

JamieHichew

💗💗

Mukta Parwani

When will you update?? ☹️ It's been so long