A Bride for a Merger Comments
TDCM
allisonβs character is not also niceβ¦ she she has an atyitude as well and its not just christipher. i ahree tho this story needs to be proofread and edited before any postings
06/18/2023 00:34Sammy
t5y8 I really hope that this story can be proofread, then it would be perfectly amazing. Good plot but too many errors with execution.
04/14/2023 22:19Maria Cecilia Reyes-Meliton
t5y8 This story is refreshingly different from the usual werewolf stories. It really is quite interesting if you can forgive the poor English used. This story will definitely be greatly improved by serious editing. It really is only a case of applying the amendments already made by readers in the comments section of each paragraph.
04/14/2023 19:18Me Myself
t5y8 the opening chapter seems like it could make for an interesting book. I will add it to my library for later
04/14/2023 12:12Marilyn Livingston
t5y8 this is very well written. I hope the dads, who are supposed to be good friends, are setting this up because they know their kids will love each other instead of greed
04/14/2023 09:32John Robinson
t5y8 I like that this story isn't too long so isn't too drawn out. It's a contemporary story and I am liking it so far. Yes it could probably do with editing but not that bad doesn't spoil the story for me, good work author.
04/14/2023 07:44Janaki Kollepalli
t5y8... the story is really great... the start is very intriguing and different approach... I am hooked to the book
04/14/2023 05:59Amal Samir
T5y8, the storyline was great. I loved it, and loved how Christopher changed for Alison and how she gave him another chance
04/14/2023 02:16Angela Baker
personally I think Allison is the stereotypical daddyβs little rich girl who thinks the other guy (Christopher) is always in the wrong. All relationships require both sides to communicate and work at it. ok storyline just needs a little revamping where both sides want to try. so far I only see Chris wanting to take actions to see if the marriage can work. Allison too busy throwing tamtrums about his past mistakes even though she is unwilling to try. I will continue to read and hope it gets better. author appears to be young maybe has beenbtheough heat break and is writing from that perspective. we have all been there
09/27/2022 00:09Dely
Good book.
07/28/2022 00:11Margaret Figlar Magyar
what's the title of the book when Cassilia, Cassandra and the War Gods daughter is taken as a bride for the White King
01/16/2022 18:49Essie Morgan
this story couldβve been better
12/30/2021 19:10Belinda Deweemay
,I don't like Allison
09/26/2021 08:50Sonia McLeod
thank you I enjoyed your book πππ¬π§
09/19/2021 15:50BluezCluez
enjoyed the story
09/05/2021 05:23Carly Jordan Cohen
uhg allison is such a bitch
07/15/2021 20:02ReRe Boo
I'm sorry, but Allison is extremely childish and has some growing up to do...
05/30/2021 11:35Dara Jijo
I really hate the *rolling eyes* thingy girls do in some of these books, as if you are going to a strong character if you do this. it's just childish.
05/26/2021 00:33Jaquetta Gonzalez
Needs to be edited, but it was an okay story. I was just very annoyed with Allison the entire time.
05/18/2021 18:13J.S. Teal Ribbon
Needs some edit work.
03/14/2021 21:40Juanita Smith
The story line was great. The editing process really needs work though. It took me longer to read this book because of misspelled words, three sometimes four words with no spacing, and misplaced words, ( to instead of or ) and words in the wrong order. All in all worth the read.
03/11/2021 09:36Reader-352296 Sonia3
Thank you I absolutely loved your story Christopher was a bad boy to begin with but he changed so happy Alison gave him a chance wish the story was longer
03/08/2021 06:19Amanda Abbott
I wish there was more to this story
01/09/2021 16:06Amanda Abbott
How many chapters foes this story contain?
01/09/2021 12:00jewels1
I so hate her friends. whether kim instigated it or not bringing her into his room alone was wrong on so many levels she has shitty friends that are trying to keep them together knowing what he did to her. I would dump them for sure
01/01/2021 18:09khuhinur Hussain
how do I get more coins free
12/11/2020 10:38Deborah Francis
how do I get chapters 15-
11/25/2020 17:35Vicki Corder Rivers
Okay, Christopher is 26, but I haven't seen Alison's age anywhere.
10/19/2020 03:23Nii Ayi Okine
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08/23/2020 08:47Nii Ayi Okine
i came hw ere using the link https://anystories.page.link/wtdR
08/23/2020 08:44Reader-828776
update???
08/18/2020 16:37momododo
Allison sure loves deflection. All she does is deflect.π€¦π½ββοΈπ€¦π½ββοΈπ€¦π½ββοΈπ€¦π½ββοΈπ€¦π½ββοΈπ€¦π½ββοΈ
08/12/2020 02:42Rebecca Crutcher
thank you so much for this wonderful book i so loved it and i hope to read some more of your books when you write some . keep up with the fantastic and fabulous writing
08/08/2020 04:42Michelle Dawn Brookfield
here it says "watchmaker" I believe the word should be "matchmaker"
07/15/2020 01:14Jennifer Parson
There's a lot of repetition. I can't believe I paid for chapters where the entire story was the same except for one paragraph at the end that described the reaction of a different character. The story also ended before we got to see the couple fully reconcile. After reading this I feel kinda disappointed. :-/
07/15/2020 00:27SweetNY2022
I think this sucks I'm having to pay for every chapter. Just charge 1 price for the book and that's it. Why drag it out per chapter its ridiculous. Looks like she's going to be pushed into going back to him anyway instead of her friends sticking up for her.
07/13/2020 08:42Jeneva.Jordan
update?
07/12/2020 23:16JamieHichew
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07/03/2020 01:27Mukta Parwani
When will you update?? βΉοΈ It's been so long
06/04/2020 07:21Madhumayee Mohanty
when will u update this story
05/30/2020 05:11