A Bride for a Merger Comments

  • TDCM

    allison’s character is not also nice… she she has an atyitude as well and its not just christipher. i ahree tho this story needs to be proofread and edited before any postings

    06/18/2023 00:34
  • Sammy

    t5y8 I really hope that this story can be proofread, then it would be perfectly amazing. Good plot but too many errors with execution.

    04/14/2023 22:19
  • Maria Cecilia Reyes-Meliton

    t5y8 This story is refreshingly different from the usual werewolf stories. It really is quite interesting if you can forgive the poor English used. This story will definitely be greatly improved by serious editing. It really is only a case of applying the amendments already made by readers in the comments section of each paragraph.

    04/14/2023 19:18
  • Me Myself

    t5y8 the opening chapter seems like it could make for an interesting book. I will add it to my library for later

    04/14/2023 12:12
  • Marilyn Livingston

    t5y8 this is very well written. I hope the dads, who are supposed to be good friends, are setting this up because they know their kids will love each other instead of greed

    04/14/2023 09:32
  • John Robinson

    t5y8 I like that this story isn't too long so isn't too drawn out. It's a contemporary story and I am liking it so far. Yes it could probably do with editing but not that bad doesn't spoil the story for me, good work author.

    04/14/2023 07:44
  • Janaki Kollepalli

    t5y8... the story is really great... the start is very intriguing and different approach... I am hooked to the book

    04/14/2023 05:59
  • Amal Samir

    T5y8, the storyline was great. I loved it, and loved how Christopher changed for Alison and how she gave him another chance

    04/14/2023 02:16
  • Angela Baker

    personally I think Allison is the stereotypical daddy’s little rich girl who thinks the other guy (Christopher) is always in the wrong. All relationships require both sides to communicate and work at it. ok storyline just needs a little revamping where both sides want to try. so far I only see Chris wanting to take actions to see if the marriage can work. Allison too busy throwing tamtrums about his past mistakes even though she is unwilling to try. I will continue to read and hope it gets better. author appears to be young maybe has beenbtheough heat break and is writing from that perspective. we have all been there

    09/27/2022 00:09
  • Dely

    Good book.

    07/28/2022 00:11
  • Margaret Figlar Magyar

    what's the title of the book when Cassilia, Cassandra and the War Gods daughter is taken as a bride for the White King

    01/16/2022 18:49
  • Essie Morgan

    this story could’ve been better

    12/30/2021 19:10
  • Belinda Deweemay

    ,I don't like Allison

    09/26/2021 08:50
  • Sonia McLeod

    thank you I enjoyed your book πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ‡¬πŸ‡§

    09/19/2021 15:50
  • BluezCluez

    enjoyed the story

    09/05/2021 05:23
  • Carly Jordan Cohen

    uhg allison is such a bitch

    07/15/2021 20:02
  • ReRe Boo

    I'm sorry, but Allison is extremely childish and has some growing up to do...

    05/30/2021 11:35
  • Dara Jijo

    I really hate the *rolling eyes* thingy girls do in some of these books, as if you are going to a strong character if you do this. it's just childish.

    05/26/2021 00:33
  • Jaquetta Gonzalez

    Needs to be edited, but it was an okay story. I was just very annoyed with Allison the entire time.

    05/18/2021 18:13
  • J.S. Teal Ribbon

    Needs some edit work.

    03/14/2021 21:40
  • Juanita Smith

    The story line was great. The editing process really needs work though. It took me longer to read this book because of misspelled words, three sometimes four words with no spacing, and misplaced words, ( to instead of or ) and words in the wrong order. All in all worth the read.

    03/11/2021 09:36
  • Reader-352296 Sonia3

    Thank you I absolutely loved your story Christopher was a bad boy to begin with but he changed so happy Alison gave him a chance wish the story was longer

    03/08/2021 06:19
  • Amanda Abbott

    I wish there was more to this story

    01/09/2021 16:06
  • Amanda Abbott

    How many chapters foes this story contain?

    01/09/2021 12:00
  • jewels1

    I so hate her friends. whether kim instigated it or not bringing her into his room alone was wrong on so many levels she has shitty friends that are trying to keep them together knowing what he did to her. I would dump them for sure

    01/01/2021 18:09
  • khuhinur Hussain

    how do I get more coins free

    12/11/2020 10:38
  • Deborah Francis

    how do I get chapters 15-

    11/25/2020 17:35
  • Vicki Corder Rivers

    Okay, Christopher is 26, but I haven't seen Alison's age anywhere.

    10/19/2020 03:23
  • Nii Ayi Okine

    http://anystories.page.link/wtdR

    08/23/2020 08:47
  • Nii Ayi Okine

    i came hw ere using the link https://anystories.page.link/wtdR

    08/23/2020 08:44
  • Reader-828776

    update???

    08/18/2020 16:37
  • momododo

    Allison sure loves deflection. All she does is deflect.πŸ€¦πŸ½β€β™€οΈπŸ€¦πŸ½β€β™€οΈπŸ€¦πŸ½β€β™€οΈπŸ€¦πŸ½β€β™€οΈπŸ€¦πŸ½β€β™€οΈπŸ€¦πŸ½β€β™€οΈ

    08/12/2020 02:42
  • Rebecca Crutcher

    thank you so much for this wonderful book i so loved it and i hope to read some more of your books when you write some . keep up with the fantastic and fabulous writing

    08/08/2020 04:42
  • Michelle Dawn Brookfield

    here it says "watchmaker" I believe the word should be "matchmaker"

    07/15/2020 01:14
  • Jennifer Parson

    There's a lot of repetition. I can't believe I paid for chapters where the entire story was the same except for one paragraph at the end that described the reaction of a different character. The story also ended before we got to see the couple fully reconcile. After reading this I feel kinda disappointed. :-/

    07/15/2020 00:27
  • SweetNY2022

    I think this sucks I'm having to pay for every chapter. Just charge 1 price for the book and that's it. Why drag it out per chapter its ridiculous. Looks like she's going to be pushed into going back to him anyway instead of her friends sticking up for her.

    07/13/2020 08:42
  • Jeneva.Jordan

    update?

    07/12/2020 23:16
  • JamieHichew

    πŸ’—πŸ’—

    07/03/2020 01:27
  • Mukta Parwani

    When will you update?? ☹️ It's been so long

    06/04/2020 07:21
  • Madhumayee Mohanty

    when will u update this story

    05/30/2020 05:11