Daughters of the Moon Comments
Rafael
#w6g8# I like the introduction so I will start it and see how is going to be. I hope I like the story and maybe the reviews don't do it justice. will see after I read it
04/11/2023 22:12Gemma Butler
w6g8 The book’s introduction makes it sound like it could be a good read, but going by the reviews I’m now on the fence
04/11/2023 18:40KayCee Kai Malanos
w6g8 based on the comments it has a lot of grammatical errors and poorly written though the book has a nice story plot..
04/11/2023 18:17
Jan T
w6g8 #w6g8 interesting introduction. I'm curious as to how the story will develop and how Calder and Selene come together.
04/11/2023 12:46Lindsay Ameel
w6g8 great introduction. cannot wait tot read more
04/11/2023 12:46Roxy Galindo
w6g8 One of the best books I have read. The bond and love between them is refreshing and the story is compelling
04/11/2023 10:54Selli Dang
w6g8 this book needs a follow up sequel it is too good to only be the one book. thoroughly enjoyed it and I would recommend everyone try it
04/11/2023 10:12Vicki usher
w6g8# this book seems so different to others I have read. After reading the introduction am so curious I have added it to my library.
04/11/2023 09:06Fiona Hsu
w6g8 loves the look
04/11/2023 07:29zira
w6g8 this novel is exceptional. its too different from the other books i read..cant wait fot the sequel
04/11/2023 06:10Jade Freeman
w6g8 - read the first chapter and it starts great, added to my list for reading down the line
04/11/2023 05:59Merle Langevoord
w6g8 just started reading the first few chapters. I'm really looking forward how the story continue
04/11/2023 05:49
Reader-350476
w6g8 yes what a good start reading this intimate and sexy story,feeling in love already😊
04/11/2023 04:24Caitlin Sullivan
w6g8 interesting start..... I'm interested to see how it progresses and hope this alpha isn't awful
04/11/2023 02:22Reader-414551
I canceled my subscription all of the books in this section are poorly edited. It’s a scam.
06/10/2022 06:40Anna Clark
I got to the third chapter before I had to stop reading. The lack of grammar is one of the worst I've seen, especially for an "edited" book. Such a shame too since it seems to have a good story line.
05/28/2022 01:58Kendra Powers
I’m not even through the second chapter and the grammar is too much. Maybe I should say too little.. No punctuation, periods, commas, run-ons, “were” and not “we’re”. Seriously, Author? It seems like it might be a good story, however I’m about to give up.
03/31/2022 00:04Morse Code
This book has a good story line. Before reading it I read comments about the grammar but saw that she commented and had edited the book. There are so many grammar issues. Some of the sentences do not make sense. Please revise your book. It's an excellent storyline. The grammar makes it off putting in several chapters. However I will continue to read.
03/23/2022 21:26Desiree Lintzenich
I couldn’t even read past the 2nd chapter the editing issues really turned me off
03/14/2022 13:10Loganelyja Robitaille
this needs serious editing.. :(
02/09/2022 00:20Camille Ann Steiger
I got the “Unlimited” membership only to be limited to not many books and all of the available books seem to be very poorly edited. This book seems to be one of the worse edited books available.
01/19/2022 03:29AZ Trouble
Dear Author: This seems to be a very good story; however, there are far too many run-on sentences which is in need of “.” or in some cases an “…” to break up sections. This would allow the sentence and/or paragraph to run smoothly as you are reading…thus allowing those sentences to flow better and make more sense as you are reading.
11/06/2021 03:22Reader-443193
I wish there was better editing. There are a lot of sentences with wrong grammar or words in general. Some sentences are missing more than one or two words. So I am having to reread the sentences a few times to figure out what it was meant to say. That kinda gets frustrating after awhile.
09/18/2021 03:26Asahi Azumane
It seems like a good story so far, but the grammar is killing me! I don't think I'll continue reading it. I don't want to break my own english. I hope it gets edited so it can actualy be read.
09/04/2021 10:50
Bella Jersey 2
it sounds like you don’t have a choice
05/02/2021 23:04Bella Jersey 2
battle time
04/23/2021 08:50Bella Jersey 2
I can’t wait to find out what they are
04/20/2021 02:46Bella Jersey 2
Calder is not making a good impression on Arti
04/19/2021 01:57Bella Jersey 2
I’m happy the sister are fixed. then we had fun messing with Arti’s mate. he was sweet by giving the sisters their space. I see how Cal sees mate as weaknesses. being in love is hard and falling in love is harder
04/13/2021 23:04Bella Jersey 2
I can’t wait to find out this secret. why was Selene concerned when Cyn went golden eyes?
04/13/2021 10:14Bella Jersey 2
green eyes: oh that kinda disappointment can kill. I thought this was her last night of freedom before the rules go in effect
04/12/2021 03:12Bella Jersey 2
unrest: oh he was so gross he made me want to throw up. I’m glad she forgave all
04/11/2021 22:51Bella Jersey 2
siblings: I’m not so sure this was really to protect Selene. what ever this secret Arti might lose her position and mate
04/08/2021 04:00Bella Jersey 2
the silver moon pack: I mate ridiculous with the mom and even his wolf. It doesn’t sound like Caldor sitting say NO MATE
04/08/2021 03:45Bella Jersey 2
the pack house: what secret is Arti keep from everybody and why?
04/05/2021 19:17Bella Jersey 2
the pack house: neat to see the sister interact with each other. Arti and Ryan were so cute together.
04/05/2021 19:16Bella Jersey 2
critique it is very had for me to tells the between Selene and Seleste because the names are so alike
04/05/2021 19:01Bella Jersey 2
Pearl moon: I’m ready to give this book a shot. let’s see where this adventure takes us
04/05/2021 01:31Bella Jersey 2
Pearl moon: I’m like the sister bond they have here. then how one meet the goddess took her pain away so she can take or comfort others in pain. nice like that a lot
04/05/2021 01:30Bella Jersey 2
Pearl moon: when she says she wants her parents proud of her. even she’s not real sweetie they all ready are.
04/05/2021 01:28
Nikki-1701
the story seems good but the lack of punctuation and extra words make for a difficult read. I hope it gets edited
03/30/2021 19:14Reader-036379
I love it so far, but I’m confused because of grammar issues. It is like I have to make up words that are not there. I love the story though.
03/10/2021 21:39Amanda M Alicea Albizu
I have a question... When this story will be update... I just started reading it and I will like to know... so I can understand it better... the truth is that I liked it so far...
02/09/2021 04:37MReinanda
Loved your story so much I've read it all in one go😅
01/12/2021 04:04MReinanda
Pockets in a dress are indeed one of the best things that can happen to you. I really like your book, but if I may say so, your grammar is a bit off. I'm not a native speaker, but it feels off to me. Don't take this the wrong way, just wanted to give you some feedback. Absolutely the storyline and the characters so far!
01/11/2021 23:37Nadua Ellison
mind is blown
01/04/2021 09:49
Kendra Summers
Thank you to everyone who had read this so far and to those of you who are new welcome! I just wanted to pop a comment in here to let you know this story is currently under revision for spelling errors mistakes and a few updates ! please bear with me while I make these changes and thank you for your continued support 🥰
11/23/2020 19:10
Moonlight Lolmare
I like the story so far but Rogue would make more sense than Rouge
11/22/2020 08:04Leia Natalino
I love this book but I cant read any farther because I need coins could you move it to another app called inkitt because this book is my favorite and I'm sad that I can't continue reading because of the coins
10/15/2020 16:31Matilda Foreman
nice but could of been cooler little more detail but good
10/04/2020 04:09Reader-342347
great story! 🤩 but maybe you should check the spelling?! 👍
09/22/2020 00:44
Kaitlyn
I am so excited for the next book!!!
08/23/2020 01:03
Kelly Kegley
I looked for the sequel. It’s not coming up. the title is in there but the book isn’t. :(
08/19/2020 11:45Line Lyngsø
wow this was amazing. I found the book but mistake and when I decided to start I could not stop. I finished it in one day. uh but the cliffhanger I really want to know what is going to happen next. So I am very pleased reading the comments about the sequel. Oh my god I am so exsided for that!! well done making such a masterpiece
08/12/2020 21:02
Jenny Fox 🦊
(Part #2) Did not expect a POV switch! I think I like Arte a lot though! Have you tried putting the mindlinking in italics? might make the read smoother! ;)
08/10/2020 09:57Jenny Fox 🦊
(chap #1) Nice start, I like a sisterly bond! A bit too descriptive instead of showy, I'd just suggest shorter sentences! ^-^ Overall a nice start, we get fine into your character's head!
08/10/2020 09:53AD529
I hope she was controlling her excitement and not her excrement
08/03/2020 17:25Kelly Kegley
ok I’m confused. you said a few day’s ago that there were only two more chapters left and they would be posted today. I just read them and there is absolutely no way you would end the book this way. Say it’s not so. plus it says it’s still ongoing. so please tell me you did not end the book this way.... and if you did, I know you have to be writing a sequel. right?!
07/29/2020 00:07Bailee McBride
is there going to be a sequel? you can’t leave us hanging like that!
07/28/2020 23:18Samantha Arthur
Really enjoyed reading this story! Hoping there is more to come for their story? How can I keep updated? X
07/28/2020 22:42Kelly Kegley
if tomorrow’s post is the last two, I’m hoping that it’s a really good finale. if it’s not, I’m going to be beyond bummed.
07/28/2020 00:44Katie Wright
I dont know what happened it took back all the chapters I unlocked
07/26/2020 20:05Jenn Lambert-Kite
I have really enjoyed this story and cant wait to see what happens. I think you have done an amazing job.
07/24/2020 19:30Denariah Bailey
I'm honestly like this book but somebody give me a code so we can both get 40 coins😭
07/21/2020 06:20Kelly Kegley
OMG! I’m going nuts. Anticipation is making me crazy. When is the next update?
07/19/2020 23:29Darlene Auman
I'm enjoying the story. but there are so many spelling errors, it stops me for a second. Are your books proof read?
07/19/2020 20:37Violet Potter
absolutely love this story can’t wait for more
07/18/2020 11:17
Bree Potts
absolutely love this book and the updates I’m addicted
07/18/2020 02:14
Ryan Bell
this is a great story, truly enjoying it ! I hate that the girls have to loose their gifts but peace comes at a price
07/17/2020 22:03
Shayla Arhin
this was a good book. I found this by mistake and got hooked
07/17/2020 17:32Samantha Arthur
Loving this book can't wait for the update!
07/17/2020 12:45Tara Hogenbirk
totally love this book. How often do you update???
07/15/2020 16:58Julie Giulivo
very good read
07/13/2020 21:33
Habiba Garba
Love this story... Gosh..looking forward to updates..
07/13/2020 20:08Kendra Summers
Wow ! welcome to all the new readers ! I’m totally overwhelmed with how many new follows my first story has had so a massive thank you , Be sure to leave any comments and check out for new updates daily ! :)
07/07/2020 14:05Pamela Daniels
your book is really good
07/01/2020 09:44
linaskylarx
I love this I read all the chapters in one day. 💕💕
06/10/2020 02:53FantasyWORLD
Love this! hoping for updates!
06/05/2020 22:37
