The Chosen King Comments
JoJo Rodrigues
Hi Bertina, I enjoyed the story so much, the end felt a bit rushed though... With such a great story line I felt some thing were missing, Adam and Eve's first time, talon ending, Ethan and Avery encountered... They could have been more developed to bring a little more depth to the characters and the story. And the book is called the chosen king and in the end Adam is not even on the Alpha spot? It was a bit disappointing because the storyline is so. Different and good but feels incomplete and rushed. I hope you review when you think about editing. Don't get me wrong I really enjoyed the book and I think you did a great job, a lot of work on the plotting! I would definitely read next book with Ruby's story!
09/04/2023 07:34
Angel
Completely in love with this book! Will we see more of the White Moon pack in the future? ♡♡♡
09/04/2023 07:24
Keithlanae Fuqua
im ready to see this book completed!!
09/04/2023 07:08mamawolf89
love it so much
09/04/2023 07:06Linda Conley
Love this book! Please update more!
09/04/2023 07:05Janet Lary
love this book
09/04/2023 07:00KayKovo
love thisssss!!!!! its so good! I cant wait for more updates
09/04/2023 07:00
Imogen171
question: if Adam is the first chosen one born in 150 years, how was his father also a male chosen one? and for that matter, wasn’t his grandfather a chosen one as well?
09/04/2023 06:57
Bertina Delta
Exiting already, want to know more! :)
09/04/2023 06:57
