Alpha at the Door Comments

  • PAMELA BUNKLEY

    Is this storyline ongoing? I haven't seen an update or are the updates only applied to the revised book upload?

    05/07/2021 18:01

  • olliesea_bengals

    what the difference between the original and edited versions?

    05/07/2021 05:01

  • Allison Underdonk Peterman

    Would leo really try to harm Jack

    05/06/2021 18:31

  • Karessa Kaleka Dozier

    I caught up in about 2 days. I need more😩

    05/06/2021 17:09

  • RainHero21

    🐺Chapter 80 is finally up 💙💙💙

    05/01/2021 22:14

  • Allison Underdonk Peterman

    okay Karina what is going on in your head so we all know. I think V needs to get to Leo and talk to him. Leo feels alone after V, Jack,Cora all ditched. maybe V can talk sense into him. I'm sure Mateo loved hearing her defend him. I knew he would be close by.

    04/26/2021 12:12

  • RainHero21

    Hi everyone, Chapter 79 is up, sorry if it's long, but hey. Leo's in town 😏

    04/25/2021 19:23

  • Karessa Kaleka Dozier

    ok I’m confused about each book

    04/23/2021 20:33

  • Samantha Dogan

    that's alpha blue balls

    04/21/2021 03:13

  • Michelle Stephens

    I miss Troy and Ares. when will we get kore of them and when they getting married. 🤗

    04/19/2021 00:44

  • Allison Underdonk Peterman

    I love how Mateo and her are. I bet she will be 18 soon. if she is his mate they won't keep her away from him will they? they helped Ares. granted he is their alpha but still!

    04/18/2021 21:22

  • Deborah Margalef

    when is the update im confused. this is a brilliant book to read thank you rainhero

    04/13/2021 17:12

  • BookDragon

    Oooooo 🥰😏!! Love this chapter but yeah I agree that we need more!! 😁 I wonder if Karina is Mateo’s mate? Best of all Ares proposes to Veera!!!! Sigh 😌😍!!

    04/10/2021 22:39

  • Lynda Henry

    damn this one chapter a week! I need more!!!

    04/03/2021 07:23

  • RainHero21

    Hi everyone new chapter 76 is up ❤❤❤

    04/02/2021 21:22

  • jeanty _m

    something is with the book I cannot see the page. is any one else having trouble with it?

    03/28/2021 20:25

  • Allison Underdonk Peterman

    that was a hot chapter. I love ares and troy

    03/28/2021 16:26

  • Michelle Stephens

    i cant read the chapters its says there is an error

    03/28/2021 02:44

  • Cindy Campbell

    Hello, I noticed there are 2 different versions of your Alpha at the Door story here on this app (one started in 6/2020 & the other 3/2021). Which do you recommend reading/purchasing?

    03/27/2021 23:19

  • Ashlee L. Green

    please have someone proofread. I'm trying to follow the story, but it's extremely hard

    03/26/2021 23:49

  • R.L. Marcelain

    When are the next updates?

    03/26/2021 20:56

  • Nichole83pa

    It’s about to get good!! Give us some 🌶 Troy chapters!! Love this book!!

    03/26/2021 15:27

  • Claudine Gaffar

    hi there, am new to this app, can anyone please advise how it works? after the free chapters do we have to wait 24hrs/weekly updates? ir do u hv to buy coins? or is there a way one can earn coins like you do on different apps? please advise Ta

    03/23/2021 11:17

  • Melissa Ashley Miranda

    can’t wait for the next update just read the last one

    03/22/2021 12:39

  • BookDragon

    Oooo, Mateo is sweet on Karina!!!! 😯😏 Could she possibly be his mate?

    03/21/2021 02:52

  • RainHero21

    Hi everyone, I just created a new account on twitter, Rainhero21. Please follow me I have like 0 followers 😭😭😭

    03/20/2021 18:35

  • Reader-460300

    I bought the chapters so far but they are all locked again. what can be done to fix this?

    03/18/2021 15:27

  • Reader-686825

    hey when is the next update :)

    03/18/2021 03:46

  • sassyk35

    I need some more Troy action ❤️❤️❤️

    03/15/2021 14:00

  • Allison Underdonk Peterman

    Mateo is a new one we dont hear from. Cora finally gave in. im sure Kian is on cloud 9 right now. love your updates always.

    03/15/2021 13:17

  • Miss Lynne

    lol I love Troy and his comments haha. Please ignore the mean comments. This story is great, yes there are some grammatical errors but all of that can be fixed with editing. I can still understand what is going on with the story. Can't wait for the next update!

    03/07/2021 18:21

  • Toni Vann

    Wowow I glad I am glad everybody get to read the book I'm stuck on chapter 7 because it won't let me going farther it's locked

    03/07/2021 00:28

  • Michelle Kretz

    I love Troys commentaries ❤️😭

    03/06/2021 07:12

  • Cassondra Carder

    I dont trust Jack

    03/05/2021 19:40

  • Angela Rose

    i would give this book 2 out of 5 stars. I like the idea of the story, it's enticing but was executed so poorly. it's very difficult to read because of the grammar and spelling. I feel like I am mentally fixing every other sentence and word while reading. What really takes away from the experience is the bad slang and that the main character is a complete idiot.

    03/01/2021 19:42

  • Vicki Jackson

    I like it so far but spelling is bad.

    03/01/2021 10:03

  • Victoria Brinson

    she aggravates me with all her denial and crap...

    03/01/2021 00:31

  • divarita blitz

    I have given up on a few books because of slow updating. However I really like this book and still hanging on. it would be nice to get at least 2 or even 3 chapter a week. I know writers have lived outside of this so I understand and am not being pushy. Just stating my interest in wanting more 🙂

    02/28/2021 16:39

  • Gabrielle Taylor

    So far the story is good but the grammar and punctuation are making it really difficult to read. a lot of it doesn’t make sense.

    02/26/2021 05:15

  • Miriam Montague

    I love the story so far but it doesn’t seem like any one has proof read it. there are a number of misspelled words and sentences.

    02/25/2021 03:47

  • Renae

    when is the next update?

    02/24/2021 06:38

  • Allison Underdonk Peterman

    chapter 69, alot happened in this one. I wonder if Leo gets turned will his hatred be magnified, I hope they can get Karina safe completely. is she Leo's mate once she is she an adult? there seems to be a pull. Yes Ares Bite her

    02/20/2021 15:12

  • Mrs.Coffee Lover

    alright, this is 365 DNI vibes and feels!

    02/20/2021 08:30

  • Jennifer Bennett

    why am I having to re-buy the chapters I already paid for? I restarted because it had been a while and now I am having to “purchase” the already bought chapters again.

    02/20/2021 03:18

  • Minh Nguyet Pham-Johnson

    it's frustrating to pay for chapters when the content is not proofed for errors.

    02/17/2021 07:28

  • A M Archibald

    Chapter 3: This one was a little better. The flipping between point of view of each character was a bit frustrating. Try to keep things in one point of view. If you want to switch put whose point of view, it is to ease any confusion.

    02/17/2021 01:45

  • A M Archibald

    Chapter 2: It's a little all over the place, the punctuation isn't great. The time-lapse should have been indicated, or you should have kept everything together and have the timelapse as a new chapter. Irritating little things when ,it comes to the punctuation it can ruin the flow. It can be enough I have a lot of people stop reading once they have to pay for the chapters. No one wants to pay for poor work.

    02/17/2021 01:01

  • Jerilyn Noble

    I would like to see this on a different platform that I can get free coins on. I paid for coins and never got them

    02/16/2021 22:04

  • A M Archibald

    Chapter 1: Needs work some editing and proof reading needs to happen as switches from 1st person to 3rd person to scriptwriting. some bits are repeated also.

    02/16/2021 21:28

  • Dominique Lavallee

    😭

    02/14/2021 15:34

  • Niki Love

    Ares/Troy and Veera GOT BUSY!!!! FINALLY!!!!

    02/14/2021 03:08

  • Allison Underdonk Peterman

    GO VEERA!!!!!! Cora is so confused like Veera was in the beginning but now she is also a were. Im glad Leo is still in the right part of his mind to help this girl that is pathetic! does it seem like he has a soft spot for her though?

    02/13/2021 22:54

  • Christy G

    Ya! Finally!

    02/13/2021 20:15

  • Maureen Agnew

    when will the next update be?

    02/13/2021 02:12

  • ash

    omg can veera and aries have sex already! please no more delays!

    02/07/2021 03:32

  • Reader-571703

    I love Troy and Aries back and forth argue and the songs are the best

    02/07/2021 02:32

  • amy.

    I was rooting for Kian & Cara but he SO cheated with the love game knowing her wolf would push her towards him!

    02/06/2021 16:13

  • MaryRosa

    I think veera has to be the most annoying character in the entire world...

    02/06/2021 00:09

  • Andrea Hall

    I'm loving this book..how long until the next update..

    02/05/2021 11:40

  • Mrs EL

    😍 loving the book so far, really grabs you! (ps. it’s ‘he’s’ as in ‘he is’ not ‘his’ as in it belongs to him...) 🤍

    02/05/2021 08:36

  • Minnie Mouse

    I love all the song references 🤣🤣

    02/04/2021 05:39

  • Allison Underdonk Peterman

    chapter 66 was hilarious. I didnt know that happened to Cora. thought it was just a mark. Veera poor thing cannot catch a break. great update

    01/30/2021 20:50

  • Asia Cwill

    Will this be available for purchase once its completed, I can't wait to buy the whole book instead of these coins.

    01/30/2021 04:44

  • Reader-676749

    love Troy❤️ would like to find out about Cory and Kian hope she survives. Leo? not sure yet. Jack? could not be happier, I think he fells much love now. He had a very rough start in life. We want to belong. When is the next update? Sitting on pins and needles ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

    01/26/2021 15:29

  • Jusbeing_ dada

    Yo I love Troy 😍😍😍😍

    01/24/2021 06:13

  • Christy G

    I love you Troy!🥰🥰🥰🥰

    01/24/2021 00:03

  • Vickie Vess

    OMG, I love Troy🥰

    01/23/2021 23:40

  • Shyland Moore

    dude total beauty and the beast vibes

    01/20/2021 10:14

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 1: auntie is not gonna be happy about this

    01/20/2021 07:50

  • Ryanrossfan

    Where is the consent? This is classic and supports the rapist's argument "oh but she wanted it anyway; she was giving me the 'fuck me' eyes." Absolutely vile, and a slap in the face to the millions of male and female rape victims. The author should be ashamed! I am not paying and supporting this damaging and toxic abuse and promotion of rape culture!

    01/20/2021 05:23

  • Ryanrossfan

    some fucking gentleman!he kidnapped her and has constant rape fantasies about her! why are authors continuously supporting rape fantasies? I am sick if reading these garbage novels about damaging and toxic relationships.

    01/20/2021 05:19

  • Delandra Yang

    I'M DEAD I CANT STAND TROY 😂😂😂🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

    01/20/2021 03:49

  • rocknrollqueen91

    I'm sorry, but you can absolutely do stuff while you're on your period and only a complete jerk wouldn't take care of his woman when she's on her period and she needs him

    01/17/2021 08:53

  • Farrah

    I LOVE this book❤❤❤

    01/16/2021 22:07

  • sassyk35

    Veera - just let Troy bite you a little bit ❤️❤️❤️

    01/16/2021 21:21

  • Rainz World

    is this book done?

    01/16/2021 11:29

  • Lynda Henry

    I think the chapter was too short. I'm Cliffhanging

    01/11/2021 03:07

  • Allison Underdonk Peterman

    I loved that entire chapter!!!! I love learning about these two

    01/09/2021 22:14

  • Niki Love

    this last update took so long, I almost feel like starting the book over....ugh, the waiting is painful 😫

    01/06/2021 13:37

  • Nadua Ellison

    Jack shouldn't have did that to Cora. If you are in love with something don't wait so long to tell her Jack. Stupid soldier pills she don't want you you idiot

    01/05/2021 01:42

  • divarita blitz

    I like this book so far and have been trying not to drop it. But the updates are too slow and too far and in between. I'm a little torn on keeping or letting it go. This really is a joy to read but... idk I do know many writers do other things like work and or school but I still get more chapters from them. I'm not bashing writer at all just wanting more. Sorry just giving honest feedback.

    01/01/2021 15:58

  • Jennifer Ballard

    Am I the only one who imagine Troy sounding like the koolaid man when he said "Oh yeah"?

    12/30/2020 22:26

  • Lynda Henry

    can we please get more than one chapter update a week. by the time I read the new chapter I forget what happened in previous chapters.

    12/30/2020 16:10

  • kg oh oh lhclh

    Okay maybe I am going crazy, but this is exactly like 365 days except they are supernatural. Someone please verify that it is like 365 days!!

    12/30/2020 04:22

  • sassyk35

    I need more Troy rapping! He needs to put his Wolfy moves on Veera!

    12/27/2020 23:30

  • Lindsay Hoyt

    Love this book!! When do you normally release the next chapters is every couple of days or once a week? I check everyday for new chapters so excited find what happens next!!

    12/27/2020 21:06

  • redbone 1840

    hello merry Christmas 🎁🎄 I love the story but I hate the way they put down Vera a lot and how Ares don’t believe in her and when r they going to have sex dang. I’m starting to question it like the cousin lol 😂

    12/27/2020 16:21

  • Aichata Konate

    I love how the writer comments on as many comments as possible😁🥰 PS I love this book😍

    12/27/2020 13:12

  • irenemauga

    great story whens the next one out🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

    12/23/2020 19:37

  • Allison Underdonk Peterman

    I love these characters and how everything is going. Will be neat if Jack lives through the transformation. I absolutely love Ares and Troy. Veera got lucky with them. How is Cora?

    12/21/2020 13:39

  • Suzanne Scott

    if I could have a wolf like troy, I'd definitely want to a werewolf lol, I love all the characters in this book but troy is definitely my favourite

    12/20/2020 08:32

  • kittyXO

    I am so in love with your characters and this story. thank you so much!! I couldn’t put it down!! only problem is I need more lol!! I can’t believe she still hasn’t lost her V card lol love it!! keep writing beautiful lady you have my support!! ❤️

    12/18/2020 00:53

  • Litch

    Why don’t you get someone else to correct your gramma for you? It woukd make the book so much better!

    12/17/2020 07:02

  • Abbey Joy

    Ok stiles Stylinski!😅

    12/15/2020 20:53

  • Abbey Joy

    ok if angels and Were's came from heaven and hell why are you bringing greek mythology into this

    12/15/2020 17:07

  • Jessica Cleveland

    so many grammatical mistakes i don't think I can finish. The wrong use of he and she in a sentence when talking about someone and it's He's not His

    12/14/2020 18:23

  • Jessica Cleveland

    also can you use the "he" and "she" appropriately when talking about people. I don't think I can finish this with all the grammatical mistakes.

    12/14/2020 18:22

  • Jessica Cleveland

    his shows possession of something

    12/14/2020 18:18

  • Jessica Cleveland

    also it's "he is" or the conjuction "He's" not "his"

    12/14/2020 18:18

  • Jessica Cleveland

    the book switches a lot between 3rd and 1st person. might be easier to read if it was in one or the other

    12/14/2020 05:34
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