Against His Will Comments
Claire Morrison
sorry not for me. I know it's a build up but so far it could be condensed into one or 2 chapters taken me 2 days to get to chapter 10. I am bored now bad grammar. however well done writer for trying this has promise but you need to get a good editor to help you. possibly first language is not English?
02/05/2023 08:39Flavia Correa
I don't really like writing bad reviews, but this book needs some serious editing. The idea had potential, but it turned out boring, dragging, slow and even cringey sometimes. The characters don't flow, they feel very unrealistic. Maybe it was your first book, but I'm sure you can improve the next ones! This one is a no.
05/27/2022 18:34Bev Kauika
Very slow, repetitive, boring. The female character is weak and immature. The cousin is just a bully. The aunt and uncle aren't realistic either. It needs serious editing. Can't believe I read 5 chapters before deciding to quit reading this. 😴🤨😒👎👎👎
05/23/2022 13:06Eli-May Martin
sorry not very good writing at all I can not read this
01/11/2022 09:46Ofa Leka
I have to leave this book before competing it. it dragged on. It also needs A LOT of editing.
11/15/2021 01:45Julie Jirovsky
I loved this story. I was disappointed when I had to wait for so long for the uploads. But, it ended up being well worth it.
06/15/2021 23:58Brianne Hofer
even after supposed editing, it could use alot more. otherwise, it is a good read.
05/05/2021 20:41Amanda Harris
it has been months when will this be finished
03/31/2021 11:31Amanda Harris
so we aren’t going to finish this?
03/25/2021 09:29Amanda Harris
so are you not going to update it’s been a long time!
03/03/2021 16:47Amanda Harris
when are you going to update
02/23/2021 17:08Amanda Harris
can I get an update please
02/20/2021 12:19Cathy Dee
when will be getting a new update? is it anytime soon?
01/18/2021 01:31Trista Jauregui
the full book is on wattapp
01/14/2021 02:22Leanne Chambers
cant wait for the next chapter
12/30/2020 07:21Connie Ammon
Love the story! looking forward to updates!!
12/27/2020 18:27Amanda Harris
when are you updating
12/22/2020 12:10Leanne Chambers
still waiting on update. I have really enjoyed reading the chapters and want to see what happens next...
12/04/2020 08:50XOXO ASVAB
Waiting on update.
11/19/2020 13:38Leanne Chambers
is there any news in the next update please?
11/12/2020 13:50Helen Joy Smith
when will the next update be
11/03/2020 23:31Janet Steenburg
what the hell takes so long to update these books. u sure as hell take my money way quicker
10/09/2020 01:26Janet Steenburg
what the hell take these sights so long to post a chapter . i was reading 5 different books at one time . i am done with this sight as far as reading unfinished books. and soon 2 b all of it. because i am forgetting who the hell the characters even are
10/03/2020 11:16XOXO ASVAB
Waiting for updates
10/01/2020 18:28Amanda Harris
YES!!!!! I want more please don’t let me wait so long this time!
09/21/2020 01:40Nataly Torres
chapter 29 is missing
09/20/2020 21:25janetfrag
where is chapter 29?
09/20/2020 20:48Allison Underdonk Peterman
loved the updated chapters. Will you be updating more frequently? and is it on any other app?
09/20/2020 17:49Sandie Rizzo-Link
is there anymore updates? just wondering.
09/15/2020 02:46Julie Jirovsky
Just wondering when this is going to be updated as it's been a long time.
09/13/2020 14:03Rebecca Wright
When is your next update as its been ages thanks 😊
09/12/2020 14:56XOXO ASVAB
updates please
09/11/2020 22:11PramG
I like the story plot. Gad me glued to the story. Can’t wait for the next update!
09/11/2020 04:15Sugar Bean
I was just wondering if there would be anymore updates????
09/10/2020 17:51Sugar Bean
where are the new chapters
09/06/2020 17:37Sandie Rizzo-Link
wow 😳 interesting story. now I am hooked. can’t wait for the next chapters.
09/03/2020 19:04Allison Underdonk Peterman
I love this story. I am looking forward to upcoming chapters. I have a feeling this will be one of my favorites!
09/03/2020 08:02Amanda Harris
omg I’m theses new chapters are fire smiling
09/03/2020 02:55XOXO ASVAB
Good book, can't wait for updates
09/03/2020 00:33Helen Joy Smith
over how long it takes for coins
09/02/2020 14:27Amanda Caruana
this is good... I'm so hooked I can't wait for more
08/31/2020 06:38Amanda Harris
when will the next chapters come out I’m waiting!!!!!
08/30/2020 13:30Amanda Harris
I need more
08/28/2020 16:24Vampire
👍👍👍
08/27/2020 05:44XOXO ASVAB
Thank you for the update. Been waiting for a while.
08/22/2020 16:53Motswana
Nice read
08/13/2020 09:18Motswana
Hi, chap 17 is repeating
08/13/2020 09:18Maud Jane
hi I’m interested in your story and was just wondering how often you update please
07/27/2020 00:36