Her Returned Mate (The Gathering Shadows Series, Book I) Comments

Valery Jiménez

i love your story

Shavanna Brooks

by far the best book out there and I’m so happy to be able to read this!! thank you so much for sending this my way and inviting me on your journey!! I can’t wait to see what comes alone

american-storyteller

Where are they coming from?🤔

SmokeyTheCat27

This book is so amazing, love it, would definitely buy it if you finish and publish it

Dani Udelhofen

I think the mysterious stranger is her father. I think that when her parents were attacked that he survived an lost his memory, Wilson sent him away to torture Rayner. That's what I think... only time will tell!

I love it! how wild would it be if the drifter person was her father! as for purple eyed beauty, witch- who already knows that she’s Parker’s mate 😃😂❤️... cant wait for the reveal of who they are, though!

Hazel Jan Villaflor

i like the flow of your story. keep up the good work!

i_acc_dont_know

Damn. The story is amazing and well written. EEK! keep up the good work! Its *chefs kiss*💯❤️ i fricking love it!! 😻✨

Diana

I loved it! I want to read more!

MAIDA MARIN

I loved what an incredible story, thank you very much 🥰🥰🥰

Nilokali Sumi344

thank you so much CHRYCIANIJUN12. really enjoying this story and extremely excited to read more.

Rochelle Anne Bautista

Wow I'm super loving it.. this chapter got me a roller coaster feels...

Victoria Shin

Wow, the story is very interesting... I really like how the writer can tell the storyline

Chasity Brant

hey I like your story so far I added it to my library!

dewi murniati

i like the story' so much...i like the dark fantasy romance story', I hope you can to be successful 👍🥰

lara frias

i love it

Maggie013

This story is fantastic, I love it

SunfrostyWrites

Thank you for sending this to me! It is wonderful! (Personally, I'd be delighted to see an aromantic character here, and hear about the ball from thier view)

vinci

this story is so amazing!!

Lyka April Casanova

Thanks btw for the recommendation. I like the plot. I guess I'll leave some suggestions as I read the stories. Hope this flourish onwards. 😊😊😊

pyourlove

there's mature scene but actually i can't read bcs too underage for me so i just read the one and will skip for ++ sadly :'(

Macy Lynn

💙💙💙

sophia sophia

first of all, thank you editor for inviting me to read this awesome book and even though I haven't gotten to the end of the book, I trust that it won't disappoint me...keep up the creative writing

Baan aljabry22

When I read some excerpts about the story, I felt that its idea was repeated a lot, but when I read it further, I realized that it was indeed a distinct and wonderful story in the way it was told.

Sharon Rockson

only 3 chapters and I'm already addicted I've fallen in love with this book😘😍🥰

Ainhoa Gonzalez Gonzalez

Great story. I love werewolf stories 🤗

Lj Azhie Paris

Nice story

Sabrina Kiehl

amazing storie

Elique 2216

I love it😍 it's a nicest story that I read❤️

Savanna R

Beautifully written chapter; a great introduction!♥️ I can't wait to read more!😄

CassidynErik Sheffield

It's a great book. keep up the great work. this is a series I can see myself reading again and again

bent alahly

It is really Interesting and exciting 👏

JuJu Benbella

Such a wonderful story 💕 I reallly like it even i only read one chap ,

Karen Rojas

i love this book

Rocha Méndez Zaira Erendira

I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT. I love Rayne's personality, her decisions, her emotions. I love everything of she. I came from wp and I NEED to finish this book

Gillian Kiely

Great start to the story.

Rheinu Froste

Awesome story. Great concept

Sizzy Melen

This is so good! Only 2 chapters and I'm already sucked in!!

Blu

I was asked my opinion on it, and it's pretty good. Love how the descriptions of the characters really do showcase how Rayne sees them from her point of view. It seems like a lot of thought and work went into this! Hope everyone enjoys it!

Areeba Tarar

i hate Gia so much 🤢

Xena 00

It isn't very easy reading on a foreign language but the story seems very interesting, I like it so much. Good work and thanks for writing me😍❤

LaDavepetasprite

ok soooo...imma leave my opinion: 1-) i dont see much creativity and chaos here soo its kind od boring 2-) the way the p.o.v's are made is pretty cool to be honest 3-) let's be serious the people want interesting character's not a boring story type "ohh im a evil gurl and imma be soooo bad ohhh daddy werewolf pleasee punish meee" thats dumb and no offense if you want to progress in my opinion add a villain a change the werewolf type like...give it superpowers break the time and just travel over it , add something that make your story different 4-) more than that you dont need nothing just fix that and it will be perfect UwU

Haleigh Gravgaard

I’ve read just the first chapter but it was great! would read more

Sara Perrino

The story is super interesting and very intriguing! also, the writter is the best person you could meet!!! this story got me interested since chapter one and I am going to keep on reading!!! I highly recomend this book

Kandee Ogle

I've read alot of shifter stories, but never one from this perspective. I've enjoyed it and can't wait to read more of Jade & Sebastian's story.

Xena 00

The story is very interesting; I like it so much😍😍

n_Rose127

at last I get to read another chaps from you, the first time I read this story it was so good I started to love this story

Cas Holly

I really like the plot and the way you write and am really glad you invited me to read it

Kitana Mk

love this history 👌🏻✨

fkeysan aguilar

Wow awesome

Mariyahh16 Salahid

heyyy!! thank you for recommending your story :>

Emilia Castro

I just love it!

Junetah Nesious

interesting story..

Caty1317

😻😻😻

Roxy Zitterkopf

I love it

Yiyin Meri

That's a beginning fascinating story. superb

ELI

I haven't read the rest of the chapter yet but this story caught my attention. It's also my first time reading a book that's all abt vampire and werewolf and i can say the story is interesting and worth to read.

Junetah Nesious

sorry for late read..its amazing story..i like

Moody Bbg

love the story!! good work! ❤️❤️

Frost Heart's

their cool..I wanna re-read them💖😍😇😁

loves 2 read003

lovely story

Shirayuki Aishi

Amazing work!! I Love it!!! Well done❤👍

syarifah nurreen

Thanks editor for inviting me to read this story! This story is absolutely amazing, even though I can't read it till the end. Please keep up the good work!

Alexandra Beauprez

the story is fantastic. despite the fact that I am French, I can understand the story easily. I can't wait to continue reading

Esmeralda Rubio

Thanks to the editor for inviting me to read their work! I can only read until the chapter 4 but I think it’s SO GOOD, being a kind of story that I won’t read IT CAUGHT ME, it’s interesting that you don’t know what’s coming next, maybe you’re waiting for something to happen but BAAM! you’re wrong. I wish I can finish it!! 💗💗💗

hosh & josh

wilson rape her???? when she was 13???

hawra shayerwala

Thank you for this amazing story...its amazing Keep up with the good work !! 😊👍

cesswhutt

Looking forward for more beautiful storiesss <33

Mae Ramos

Thank you for inviting me!! I just finished reading the first chapter, and I already love it! Can't wait to read how the story goes!

Sepideh Karimi

at first when I started to reading this novel i think oh god this is a repeated story , but when i reading chapter by chapter changed my mind , i like the way the story is going , and i hate sebastian , I felt the sadness word from any chapte, i am waiting....... 👍👍👍👍

MysteriousDragon Wolf

im honestly a very picky reader and this book is first of all, extremely interesting and also it is very intriguing to me. I enjoyed this book and every part of it. I will most definitely recommend it to more friends.

Crystalblue126

I usually don't go for these type of plot lines, and even though I only read a few chapters, I like this story.

Annalisa Kronsbein

it's just amazing <3

Chibi-chan_29

I must say... I like this 🤗

Ana Karina Soto

Hello I love this story, when you showed me some chapters and I read them your story I thought your story is very cool.

Rojas

Reading it again because I'm loving it. I'm so happy the editor asked me to review this amazing story.

aryllo phyla

I really like the story😍

Mich Livie Love

im in love with this book

Beylen Gallardo

❤️❤️❤️❤️

OnceANarnian

The editor reached out to me and sent me a sample chapter. I'm not a fan of Vampire/Werewolf Stories. But I like how the story started and how it got me curious as to what will happen next. Looking forward to finish the whole story.

gail arnaiz

love it ❤

Rachel Castro

omg this novel is fascinating i love this omega and alpha theme❤❤❤❤❤

NtaliegstD

This work is really good. Author, you're doing great!

Norma Esther Felix Brea

I am more than happy of how things came out. I did not want by any chance that Rayne would be with none other than Parker, so your decision to make it that way just gives me happiness.

horiye mint

I want more

Britney A Sterling

I think that stranger is her father !!!!!!

Reyke Oprinalia

when you give me the link from wp, I immediately love this book even though I just read 3 chapter

Sarah Urea

❤❤

cvtiemhaxlyπ•

yaaaaaaay ohmy ohmy excited na me to read this. ♥♥♥

Noor Rm

Good work I like thank for share it with me

Dnoo Duhoki

♥️💜

Melody-Chan :3

this history is really cool :D

Xena 00

I love Rayne and I'm very happy Sabbie has understood he was wrong. I hope they give each other a new chance!!!

Akinola Adejoke

I came here after the author introduce this story to me and I can tell that I'm going to enjoy this story a lot. This story from the beginning spikes my interest and now I can't wait to continue reading the remaining chapters. Keep up the good work dear

nayumi lau

Keep writing because it's amazing

Lyka Rose Losare

thanks for recommending it☺☺ I'm really interesred now

seikosi

actually kinda hate love triangle story but this one is amazingly intertaining hahahah makes me want to read continuously love itt

Akemi Saori Oshiro

I love rayne personality I want read more introduce is perfect

G.CH.P.C.

i LOVE it

Inesha Veillard

This was so good!! I love how Rayne did not stay with a man that does not see her self worth!