Her Returned Mate (The Gathering Shadows Series, Book I) Comments
Grazel Boncales
It's awesome I love it 😍
09/04/2023 07:18JslOfYours
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09/04/2023 07:18Nurul Nismawati Sudewo
hiii. . . i'm here. it's amazing story. i like so much. . thank you for inviting me here. i'll be back again after my work finish
09/04/2023 07:18I'm a Bandito
I loove this story!! It's amazing!
09/04/2023 07:18nur hidayah
amazing story..
09/04/2023 07:18Miumey Yuki
wow, good job! you're son talented with writing
09/04/2023 07:18Melanie Mcpeek
Love the story so far! I can’t wait to really dive into this crazy cool world!💕
09/04/2023 07:18Николета Д.
such a nice story! am very grateful to the author for sharing it with me. it is exactly the kind of story I like with long lost relatives, long lost love, fighting for love, a lot of characters a lot of stuff going on at the same time, by far the most interesting I've read in a quite a while! thanks again!
09/04/2023 07:18Verencia Euginia
AMAZING !!! 🔥🔥
09/04/2023 07:18Stan BTS because they are AMAZING
I think it's great so far! can't wait for the next chapters
09/04/2023 07:18lemon
Omg I really love this story! Its so amazing, thanks for recommend me
09/04/2023 07:18Ava sonita
I really like this very well written :)
09/04/2023 07:18Yudimesy2002
I love this story ❤️
09/04/2023 07:18Dyee Diana
love the book 💗
09/04/2023 07:18ie ie
AAAAAA CAME FROM WP I AM GONNA FINISH IT
09/04/2023 07:18Maria Shaikh
I m WP reader actually, someone recomend me this story.... i just love it♥️ i m glad my time of reading this story is worth it the plot line , the sequence is just really nice.
09/04/2023 07:18Sarah Rouxlee
amazing story.am in love with the story ever since someone recommended it to me
09/04/2023 07:18Nikobom
This is amazing book, the story interesting.
09/04/2023 07:18Abigail Zerraras
this story is really good!
09/04/2023 07:18DvA_SaNiTaRa _
It's awesome!
09/04/2023 07:18Judie Omega
the introduction of the story is interesting and intriguing.
09/04/2023 07:18Ma. Desiree Dianne Acosta
Its very interesting! I love it💖
09/04/2023 07:18jaileny chanci
i love 😍💓
09/04/2023 07:18anlaS0
There are mistakes such as punctuation and other more but overall it is a good plot. Keep up the good work^^
09/04/2023 07:18Dr , Zero
I enjoy this story ❤
09/04/2023 07:18Rabbie
Very good story, thank you ♥ ️
09/04/2023 07:18narrator
Its awesome
09/04/2023 07:18nisa ramdhani
it's so interesting!!! you did well ❤❤❤❤ .
09/04/2023 07:18Killernuel 1308
This story is amazing I can not stop reading this such an amazing history
09/04/2023 07:18Lovesick2142
Hello!!! I just wanted to say that you’re an amazing writer! I’m glad you contacted me and allowed me to read this fantastic story! I hope you continue to write!
09/04/2023 07:18j3551g1rl98
Hey, I am from WP. I actually love this story. I am more of a reader than a writer and I have to say this story is now one of my favorites. I hope to see more and hopefully see it on WP too. Keep writing, because this is phenomenal. ❤❤
09/04/2023 07:18Larissa Pinto
No why Alec 💔
09/04/2023 07:18Jearlie Basergo
you have a goodwork. I hope to read more of your work. ❤❤
09/04/2023 07:18Katii Noromor
it’s amazing spectacular
09/04/2023 07:18snezana trtica
i like it!
09/04/2023 07:18jassy green
i loved how the plot of the story was made. keep it up
09/04/2023 07:18Killer smile
I loved it
09/04/2023 07:18shada fedriga
first chapter so good🔝
09/04/2023 07:18Phantom_Lullaby
I love, love, LOVE the direction this chapter took. I’m so happy it didn’t take the usual story route, I’m actually really excited for the next upcoming chapters. I’m wondering what her California home will look like :)!
09/04/2023 07:18Di W
Hi, I came here because the author told me on WP. I really like how the writer wrote the narrative that was happening, so detailed.
09/04/2023 07:18Alicia Portillo
mucho inglés
09/04/2023 07:18Yololo Lolo
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09/04/2023 07:18ZT NIME
wahh that story is amazing
09/04/2023 07:18Its jelyn
Thankyouuu editor to asked me to review the story it's niceeeeeeee and amazing 💖
09/04/2023 07:18_Fammelia✨
Thank you for inviting me to read this awesome book. I really enjoy reading it and I really love this story! Keep fighting!
09/04/2023 07:18Reader-531638
This story is awesome! I has good details and. after storyline too!
09/04/2023 07:18Valarie Thompson
so far so good. creative thus far
09/04/2023 07:18Mary Ann Samonte Jumao-as
❤️❤️❤️
09/04/2023 07:18Angel Mae Teves Sastre
very nice storyy!
09/04/2023 07:18IT'S Shinu-Devil
I just read the first chapter and already gave that suspension and anxiety of what may happen later
09/04/2023 07:18Aracely Arango
i love this uwu♡
09/04/2023 07:18An:.:.:.
I couldn't stop reading, it's great, thanks for recommending this story to me
09/04/2023 07:18AAna-Maria Dumitru
Very cool💜
09/04/2023 07:18Sugeiry
I was hooked in the beginning, but towards the middle you sorta lost me. I just feel as though to many things are going on. That It kinda just makes you lose track of the main focus of the story. I also felt as though situations in the story could have been used better, including the characters. But of course that's just my opinion. Other than that I don't think I can read this story anymore. I just sorta lost interest in it completely, sorry but keep writing. You're doing well.
09/04/2023 07:18liarliau
I came from WP and I need to say i really like the story, i’m going to read more of this book. I love the way you use the words, you’re very talented!!
09/04/2023 07:18Blue Knight
Me too! I LOVE THIS! ❤️❤️
09/04/2023 07:18Nanamie Haruie
I started reading the first chapter and if I title by chance it is one of those stories that catch me where there is from an alpha and omega added that I see that open vamiros yaiii is really beautiful and the story has something that since you start you already want to reach the end and know what else will happen⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐💫
09/04/2023 07:18Sarah Black
I loved the story the plot is on point and I looked forward to reading more of it. It is an awesome story thanks for the privilege to read a great story
09/04/2023 07:18tyu- fghu
Beautiful..
09/04/2023 07:18Recs_gaddi
You did a great job! i love it!
09/04/2023 07:18Micah Ella
I love it a round of applause, what a nice plot, congratulations Ms. North Rose!
09/04/2023 07:18Reader-908839
am I the only one crying ??
09/04/2023 07:18Alexandra Papadie
I really like this story...Keep writing🥰🥰
09/04/2023 07:18Sarah Kopecky
This is an interesting and compelling story so far. Not really my thing but still a good story
09/04/2023 07:18Nataly
I like this story.
09/04/2023 07:18jnafnts
❤️❤️❤️
09/04/2023 07:18Judith_Sanchez_17
omg! i love the story! it's so interesting. thank you, misterious editor, for invite me to read this wonderful story.
09/04/2023 07:18Foodie
This is by far one of the best stories I’ve read so far. I needed a good book for these stressful times. Thank you so much for feeding my brain😊
09/04/2023 07:18Ms.Maerens May
I love this omg💕
09/04/2023 07:18Kuroi_ ino
Nice
09/04/2023 07:18Celina
Cant wait to read it out! Got a snip of it and it’s very addictive.
09/04/2023 07:18joanna van kirk
I love it so much 100/100
09/04/2023 07:18bintang biru
this is enjoyable!! keep going ^^9
09/04/2023 07:18Erika Luna
I Love the story,Thanks to the editor that asked me to review the story.
09/04/2023 07:18Gracely Faz
Love the plot, amazing story.
09/04/2023 07:18Leigh Isles Young
I’ve enjoyed the story so far. thank you
09/04/2023 07:18MsTasha09
First thank you for your invite to read this story.. I just finished chapter 1 and all I have to say is that I really really love your writing style. The way you describe is easy to imagine and makes it esay to follow... Keep going with your work.. I read the other chapters when I have a little more time...
09/04/2023 07:18Fiona
this book is amazingg!! I am so glad the editor reached out to me and asked me to review it. I’m addicted to it already, the writing is amazing and I’m loving the plot so far
09/04/2023 07:18rikaannazila 21
Thank you to the editor who invited me to read this story. So far I still only read 3 chapters and I think this story started to get interesting in chapter 3, although actually in the first part I was a bit bored because the words were quite verbose for me. But it looks like this story is quite interesting to read, even though I seem to have guessed how the storyline will be. But I don't know whether my guess is correct or not.
09/04/2023 07:18the indigenous ry bread
this is amazing!!
09/04/2023 07:18Júlia Cavalcante Chaves
I am liking it :)
09/04/2023 07:18LittleWisteria
Love this ❣️ excelent job
09/04/2023 07:18Vivi Sakali
they contacted me and only one paragraph was enough to make me read the fabulous book
09/04/2023 07:18loved the chapter, I have a feeling that the mystery person is her dad.
09/04/2023 07:18Tiphani Daniels
This is really great. I love how it is so far and I can’t wait for more
09/04/2023 07:18Cleiarra Zynophus Iya Noctichore
I wish when he returned to get back his mate, Parker will not be broken... :<
09/04/2023 07:18LoneAuthoress I
amazing!!
09/04/2023 07:18Kristine Karyll Cambaya Quilapio
this story is sooooo interesting.. awesome👍
09/04/2023 07:18Suga Lover
Great detail in the chapters it's like I'm there, I'm in love with da fantasy
09/04/2023 07:18Po Pom
Your story is really good
09/04/2023 07:18Special Agent Bam
I usually don't like English stories but this one is really amazing and I'll finish reading it. Good work and thanks for writing me ❤️🤗
09/04/2023 07:18Cindy Permatasari
💖💖💖
09/04/2023 07:18Thurgashini Selvasingam
love it !!!
09/04/2023 07:18Lovesick2142
I’m gonna cry I just got to the part where Alec dies💔😭
09/04/2023 07:18Larisa Maria Serdean
I just finished to read the second chapter *-* this book have exactly what I wanted from a book🥰🥰🥰 i saw that some chapters are locked:<<<
09/04/2023 07:18Jordan
review at the request of the editor; I’d like to start off and say that this book from what I’ve read in the first three chapters could be seen as very predictable. you’re given the basic outline of how the book will generally unfold in the first couple paragraphs as well as a lot of background information on the main character a little too early. the general delivery of this book in form of its descriptive language is very good, but also quite common in the way that the author will describe everything about a character in one paragraph whereas it could be divided into multiple. one of the two major issues I have with this book (from what I’ve read) is the sexualisation of seventeen year olds. technically speaking all of the characters that have been presented - from what information has been provided surrounding thier age - are minors, this is illegal where I come from (I don’t know about you) and should be visited/edited promptly (including the sex scene under the stairs). the last issue I present with this book is the lack of body/figure diversity. so far all the women have been described as “curvy” with “tight fitted clothing, nothing left for the imagination” (again, heavy hinting on minor sexualisation). same with the men, all described as tall and muscular. are there any thin women/men? any plus sized characters? the use of body diversity in stories can be very helpful with real world body positivity in readers and can also attract a larger audience.
09/04/2023 07:18Yvette Jara Peña
I loved your story!♡
09/04/2023 07:18Daniela Ruiz Cabilin
Thank you for inviting me 😊 to read your story,this is amazing and I love it I must say , hopefully I'll read your other stories.💜
09/04/2023 07:18tifa💜fleur✿
The narration is beautiful and even the narration method is wonderful
09/04/2023 07:18Gruffinfuck
i really like it.
09/04/2023 07:18