Her Returned Mate (The Gathering Shadows Series, Book I) Comments

  • Grazel Boncales

    It's awesome I love it 😍

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • JslOfYours

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    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Nurul Nismawati Sudewo

    hiii. . . i'm here. it's amazing story. i like so much. . thank you for inviting me here. i'll be back again after my work finish

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • I'm a Bandito

    I loove this story!! It's amazing!

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • nur hidayah

    amazing story..

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Miumey Yuki

    wow, good job! you're son talented with writing

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Melanie Mcpeek

    Love the story so far! I can’t wait to really dive into this crazy cool world!💕

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Николета Д.

    such a nice story! am very grateful to the author for sharing it with me. it is exactly the kind of story I like with long lost relatives, long lost love, fighting for love, a lot of characters a lot of stuff going on at the same time, by far the most interesting I've read in a quite a while! thanks again!

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Verencia Euginia

    AMAZING !!! 🔥🔥

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Stan BTS because they are AMAZING

    I think it's great so far! can't wait for the next chapters

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • lemon

    Omg I really love this story! Its so amazing, thanks for recommend me

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Ava sonita

    I really like this very well written :)

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Yudimesy2002

    I love this story ❤️

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Dyee Diana

    love the book 💗

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • ie ie

    AAAAAA CAME FROM WP I AM GONNA FINISH IT

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Maria Shaikh

    I m WP reader actually, someone recomend me this story.... i just love it♥️ i m glad my time of reading this story is worth it the plot line , the sequence is just really nice.

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Sarah Rouxlee

    amazing story.am in love with the story ever since someone recommended it to me

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Nikobom

    This is amazing book, the story interesting.

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Abigail Zerraras

    this story is really good!

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • DvA_SaNiTaRa _

    It's awesome!

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Judie Omega

    the introduction of the story is interesting and intriguing.

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Ma. Desiree Dianne Acosta

    Its very interesting! I love it💖

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • jaileny chanci

    i love 😍💓

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • anlaS0

    There are mistakes such as punctuation and other more but overall it is a good plot. Keep up the good work^^

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Dr , Zero

    I enjoy this story ❤

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Rabbie

    Very good story, thank you ♥ ️

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • narrator

    Its awesome

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • nisa ramdhani

    it's so interesting!!! you did well ❤❤❤❤ .

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Killernuel 1308

    This story is amazing I can not stop reading this such an amazing history

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Lovesick2142

    Hello!!! I just wanted to say that you’re an amazing writer! I’m glad you contacted me and allowed me to read this fantastic story! I hope you continue to write!

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • j3551g1rl98

    Hey, I am from WP. I actually love this story. I am more of a reader than a writer and I have to say this story is now one of my favorites. I hope to see more and hopefully see it on WP too. Keep writing, because this is phenomenal. ❤❤

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Larissa Pinto

    No why Alec 💔

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Jearlie Basergo

    you have a goodwork. I hope to read more of your work. ❤❤

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Katii Noromor

    it’s amazing spectacular

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • snezana trtica

    i like it!

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • jassy green

    i loved how the plot of the story was made. keep it up

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Killer smile

    I loved it

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • shada fedriga

    first chapter so good🔝

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Phantom_Lullaby

    I love, love, LOVE the direction this chapter took. I’m so happy it didn’t take the usual story route, I’m actually really excited for the next upcoming chapters. I’m wondering what her California home will look like :)!

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Di W

    Hi, I came here because the author told me on WP. I really like how the writer wrote the narrative that was happening, so detailed.

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Alicia Portillo

    mucho inglés

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Yololo Lolo

    ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • ZT NIME

    wahh that story is amazing

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Its jelyn

    Thankyouuu editor to asked me to review the story it's niceeeeeeee and amazing 💖

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • _Fammelia✨

    Thank you for inviting me to read this awesome book. I really enjoy reading it and I really love this story! Keep fighting!

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Reader-531638

    This story is awesome! I has good details and. after storyline too!

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Valarie Thompson

    so far so good. creative thus far

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Mary Ann Samonte Jumao-as

    ❤️❤️❤️

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Angel Mae Teves Sastre

    very nice storyy!

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • IT'S Shinu-Devil

    I just read the first chapter and already gave that suspension and anxiety of what may happen later

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Aracely Arango

    i love this uwu♡

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • An:.:.:.

    I couldn't stop reading, it's great, thanks for recommending this story to me

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • AAna-Maria Dumitru

    Very cool💜

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Sugeiry

    I was hooked in the beginning, but towards the middle you sorta lost me. I just feel as though to many things are going on. That It kinda just makes you lose track of the main focus of the story. I also felt as though situations in the story could have been used better, including the characters. But of course that's just my opinion. Other than that I don't think I can read this story anymore. I just sorta lost interest in it completely, sorry but keep writing. You're doing well.

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • liarliau

    I came from WP and I need to say i really like the story, i’m going to read more of this book. I love the way you use the words, you’re very talented!!

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Blue Knight

    Me too! I LOVE THIS! ❤️❤️

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Nanamie Haruie

    I started reading the first chapter and if I title by chance it is one of those stories that catch me where there is from an alpha and omega added that I see that open vamiros yaiii is really beautiful and the story has something that since you start you already want to reach the end and know what else will happen⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐💫

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Sarah Black

    I loved the story the plot is on point and I looked forward to reading more of it. It is an awesome story thanks for the privilege to read a great story

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • tyu- fghu

    Beautiful..

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Recs_gaddi

    You did a great job! i love it!

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Micah Ella

    I love it a round of applause, what a nice plot, congratulations Ms. North Rose!

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Reader-908839

    am I the only one crying ??

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Alexandra Papadie

    I really like this story...Keep writing🥰🥰

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Sarah Kopecky

    This is an interesting and compelling story so far. Not really my thing but still a good story

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Nataly

    I like this story.

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • jnafnts

    ❤️❤️❤️

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Judith_Sanchez_17

    omg! i love the story! it's so interesting. thank you, misterious editor, for invite me to read this wonderful story.

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Foodie

    This is by far one of the best stories I’ve read so far. I needed a good book for these stressful times. Thank you so much for feeding my brain😊

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Ms.Maerens May

    I love this omg💕

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Kuroi_ ino

    Nice

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Celina

    Cant wait to read it out! Got a snip of it and it’s very addictive.

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • joanna van kirk

    I love it so much 100/100

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • bintang biru

    this is enjoyable!! keep going ^^9

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Erika Luna

    I Love the story,Thanks to the editor that asked me to review the story.

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Gracely Faz

    Love the plot, amazing story.

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Leigh Isles Young

    I’ve enjoyed the story so far. thank you

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • MsTasha09

    First thank you for your invite to read this story.. I just finished chapter 1 and all I have to say is that I really really love your writing style. The way you describe is easy to imagine and makes it esay to follow... Keep going with your work.. I read the other chapters when I have a little more time...

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Fiona

    this book is amazingg!! I am so glad the editor reached out to me and asked me to review it. I’m addicted to it already, the writing is amazing and I’m loving the plot so far

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • rikaannazila 21

    Thank you to the editor who invited me to read this story. So far I still only read 3 chapters and I think this story started to get interesting in chapter 3, although actually in the first part I was a bit bored because the words were quite verbose for me. But it looks like this story is quite interesting to read, even though I seem to have guessed how the storyline will be. But I don't know whether my guess is correct or not.

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • the indigenous ry bread

    this is amazing!!

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Júlia Cavalcante Chaves

    I am liking it :)

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • LittleWisteria

    Love this ❣️ excelent job

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Vivi Sakali

    they contacted me and only one paragraph was enough to make me read the fabulous book

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • loved the chapter, I have a feeling that the mystery person is her dad.

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Tiphani Daniels

    This is really great. I love how it is so far and I can’t wait for more

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Cleiarra Zynophus Iya Noctichore

    I wish when he returned to get back his mate, Parker will not be broken... :<

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • LoneAuthoress I

    amazing!!

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Kristine Karyll Cambaya Quilapio

    this story is sooooo interesting.. awesome👍

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Suga Lover

    Great detail in the chapters it's like I'm there, I'm in love with da fantasy

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Po Pom

    Your story is really good

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Special Agent Bam

    I usually don't like English stories but this one is really amazing and I'll finish reading it. Good work and thanks for writing me ❤️🤗

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Cindy Permatasari

    💖💖💖

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Thurgashini Selvasingam

    love it !!!

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Lovesick2142

    I’m gonna cry I just got to the part where Alec dies💔😭

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Larisa Maria Serdean

    I just finished to read the second chapter *-* this book have exactly what I wanted from a book🥰🥰🥰 i saw that some chapters are locked:<<<

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Jordan

    review at the request of the editor; I’d like to start off and say that this book from what I’ve read in the first three chapters could be seen as very predictable. you’re given the basic outline of how the book will generally unfold in the first couple paragraphs as well as a lot of background information on the main character a little too early. the general delivery of this book in form of its descriptive language is very good, but also quite common in the way that the author will describe everything about a character in one paragraph whereas it could be divided into multiple. one of the two major issues I have with this book (from what I’ve read) is the sexualisation of seventeen year olds. technically speaking all of the characters that have been presented - from what information has been provided surrounding thier age - are minors, this is illegal where I come from (I don’t know about you) and should be visited/edited promptly (including the sex scene under the stairs). the last issue I present with this book is the lack of body/figure diversity. so far all the women have been described as “curvy” with “tight fitted clothing, nothing left for the imagination” (again, heavy hinting on minor sexualisation). same with the men, all described as tall and muscular. are there any thin women/men? any plus sized characters? the use of body diversity in stories can be very helpful with real world body positivity in readers and can also attract a larger audience.

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Yvette Jara Peña

    I loved your story!♡

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Daniela Ruiz Cabilin

    Thank you for inviting me 😊 to read your story,this is amazing and I love it I must say , hopefully I'll read your other stories.💜

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • tifa💜fleur✿

    The narration is beautiful and even the narration method is wonderful

    09/04/2023 07:18
  • Gruffinfuck

    i really like it.

    09/04/2023 07:18