Her Returned Mate (The Gathering Shadows Series, Book I) Comments
Nina Astra
It is a really interesting story. Full of suspense and plot twists with the right dash of emotions. Wonderful!!!
09/04/2023 07:14Andrea Bonilla
I love the story and the plot is amazing. love the way you use your imagery in your story makes everything more real and come to life.
09/04/2023 07:14Elizabeth Stephanie Lamb
I love parker and rayne! she was obviously destined to be his mate all along. he cant have another mate somewhere.
09/04/2023 07:14Shaira Mae T. Dimalotang
I really wanna know what happen to the characters and that makes me to read more about them or what will happen till the end.
09/04/2023 07:14saraymo
I very like this story❤️
09/04/2023 07:14
lorena delgado
es una historia demasiado buena 😌🤝
09/04/2023 07:14
Ιωάννα Τζελέπη
You are an amazing and great author! well done for your job!
09/04/2023 07:14
Bree
interesting story..
09/04/2023 07:14Aaditi Kambli
amazing good work
09/04/2023 07:14薄荷
The plot of this novel is great, and it's my type. I hope the author will continue to work hard to write novels. (I hope my opinion can help you)
09/04/2023 07:14Shaira Mae T. Dimalotang
I am going to read this..😍
09/04/2023 07:14Melani Harun
nice☺
09/04/2023 07:14Alexia Carmouche-Joseph
very very good, I'm loving it!!
09/04/2023 07:14
avaisthebest
I’m already loving it 😊
09/04/2023 07:14
Unknown_Reader
I loved the few chapters that I read it’s a great book so far it didn’t disappoint at all
09/04/2023 07:14Melani Harun
so cool
09/04/2023 07:14
Evelyn Mexia
This is amazing. At first I thought it would be a typical story that we can all write because so many stories are about it, but no, happily I was wrong. First chapter read and you already got me, I'll keep reading. X
09/04/2023 07:14Morning Fin
the story was interesting untill it got to be bland and disinteresting in sebations part and was over all just not a fan. I can see the apeal but the begining wasnt enough to really pull me into the story and world you tried to create.
09/04/2023 07:14Katie O'Brien
the title shouldn’t be “he returned mate” it should be “the second chance mate” honestly useless to bring Sebastian in it at all then if she’s not destined to be with him.
09/04/2023 07:14
Rumbidzai Chokunonga
Hey there, this story really good and I'm loving it. Can't wait to read more
09/04/2023 07:14
Angel Francisco
Hi! Someone e-mailed me last time to read this story. Her Returned Mate is a good story although only 4 of the chapters I read. So far I am enjoying this although Werewolves aren't my favorite genre. This story is eye-catching, and when you start reading this you cannot stop it. :)
09/04/2023 07:14Mary Ellenbecker
I'm going to point out the one thing that's bugging me so far... when he was "interviewing" the bartender he said "be here at 9 it opens at 10" then at the very end when he laid down with Rayne it says it doesn't open til 11
09/04/2023 07:14Kamila Azzahra
Your editor asked me to read your story. Even though I only read a few of available chapters, but I'm not disappointed to do it. I already falling in love with the plot. I don't know if my review will help you, cause I'm not that picky to choose what I read. But once again, I really enjoyed this story and I hope I can read more. I'm super excited to read the next chapter. You did a great job. ps. sorry for my broken English, since I'm not a native
09/04/2023 07:14Jordan Annette Morris
the storyline is good but you repeat a lot of what’s already said about 3 or more times. still reading though! waiting to see where it goes.
09/04/2023 07:14Silly Sam 26
This. Was. AWESOME!! You can almost FEEL the emotion from the characters! Great job, and keep up the great work!! :>
09/04/2023 07:14체선민
wow, I am very impressed with the quality of this story, it really captivated me.
09/04/2023 07:14
Natzzm
The editor asked me to read this. And indeed this doesn't disappoint, the story is exciting and amazing. This story is completely my type. Keep spirit!
09/04/2023 07:14
CrazyTATERchick
So this site isn't like others, that more of the story opens in 24 hours of waiting. You have to buy the next chapters.
09/04/2023 07:14Andrea Sevilla
keep it up! I know I will enjoy this story🤗
09/04/2023 07:14Srayeta Bhowmik
its amazing!! addicting!❤️😍
09/04/2023 07:14
Ash Merlin
Why did Alec have to die?! 😭 He was such a good guy
09/04/2023 07:14
Mariah Young
Loving the story and looking forward to continue reading it x
09/04/2023 07:14Tarro
After reading a few chapters I think the book is really good. The writing style is pleasant and does not get boring, encouraging further continuation. I'm not a fan of books about the typical boy-girl paring but this story is completely different. I'm waiting for the continuation.
09/04/2023 07:14Frank Thomas
I like the way this story is going no one want a mate hahah
09/04/2023 07:14Aiya Worthington
my best guess is her father didn't actually die and that's who helped her after the flashback
09/04/2023 07:14Paige Taylor
I’ve only just started reading this but it’s really good so far loving the story. x
09/04/2023 07:14
jmcollaco@hotmail.com
You did a great job with this book, I loved it..I will definitely be following on for the ride! 😍
09/04/2023 07:14
sara gualtieri
Incredible I love the Anthropomorphism, I am quite invested in this book. It's characters suite this story so well. Great beginning thank you for recommending.
09/04/2023 07:14Hinakochi
Hello I thought I was going to have a more fundamental role Alec, I didn't think I would die so fast
09/04/2023 07:14
mo_onimo_oni
I'm not really into romance and werewolves novels but, this one is interesting, and it's good.
09/04/2023 07:14rizki widya
This story is really good. The idea is uncommon and i think next chapter will be better. Good job!
09/04/2023 07:14Yasmin Rawlins
I am enjoying this story, I can not wait for the next chapters.
09/04/2023 07:14
JetBlackT
Such a dark and intriguing read!! Love the fact that they have a whole other wolf personality, it's very uncommon for this type of fiction. Also the love triangle is somewhat different, as it isn't between the main character and two other people. Can't wait to see what happens next!!!
09/04/2023 07:14Criztal Kukku
Sebastian is pathetic....girl I support you.
09/04/2023 07:14
Xyra Jensen
how do I unlock the other chapters?
09/04/2023 07:14
kimmmyy
this is story is school,btw I'm from Philippines
09/04/2023 07:14
Jeanie Honey
I love the book and cannot wait for you to expand on the series. you have did a good job and have added good character ranges and development. thank you for a wonderful book and prospect of a wonderful series to come.
09/04/2023 07:14Jeybe Reyes
it's really good story
09/04/2023 07:14
Asrys Art
Very interesting, with clear storyline and intriguing characters. Keeps your attention and curiosity on the action and what will happen next, being surprised by next word and the mix of situations. I suggest less repetitive information on characters or their backstories. Keep up the great work!
09/04/2023 07:14
Iris Gold
I love it so far!! Good job!
09/04/2023 07:14Malak Yassir
Thanks for the effort in writing the story, I liked it very much❤
09/04/2023 07:14Gezie's Day
I was asked to review this story. I really enjoyed it! I love the story soo much now❤️.
09/04/2023 07:14ZuluZephyr
Great first chapter, I look forwards to reading the rest of the story. Very well written, immersive and captivating. Wonderful job so far.
09/04/2023 07:14
Grace Goff
it's a good book but the site to advance and read chapters is very difficult to use
09/04/2023 07:14
keeshagguks
i love this book, its so beautiful❤️
09/04/2023 07:14
Hannah Schuman
I thought Rayne's mother was named Mia? then suddenly changes to Maya?
09/04/2023 07:14sucharita biswas
After a long time reading a story with romance and werewolves. Really enjoying it.
09/04/2023 07:14
the mawc loves
a very wonderful story..
09/04/2023 07:14shsl crispy boi
it's pretty good story so far
09/04/2023 07:14
Ashley Hartman
is there anyway I can find this book somewhere else?
09/04/2023 07:14
Ellie Lousie
I have only read a few chapters so far but a very good book.
09/04/2023 07:14Alex Miller
It's a good history, I like
09/04/2023 07:14Agnes Laurent
i got summoned here and this story is interesting!
09/04/2023 07:14
monica reyes
AMAZING 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
09/04/2023 07:14
Ana Durán
I am really fascinated with his successful work I wish him the best writer of this work
09/04/2023 07:14
ed Giri
I love this story but I want her to find new love not that jerk Sebastian
09/04/2023 07:14Grace Goff
this is a very difficult site to use to get to the next chapter. I have been trying for 30 minutes to advance and can't very upsetting.
09/04/2023 07:14Yolanda Marcelina Torus
I thing it's a good story and I want see in the movie soon
09/04/2023 07:14Charmaine Bautista
woah
09/04/2023 07:14Kim Emilia
I love it.❤💜
09/04/2023 07:14
Alythrae
I loved the story, but what happened to Ruby, Rayne's wolf? I believe she likes Parker, but is she satisfied now that they are mates? was really curious about her take on it. 🙂
09/04/2023 07:13
Renalyn Nicopior
This story is so good. First time to read the paranormal story but I appreciate now.
09/04/2023 07:13Creppy die Afton
cool
09/04/2023 07:13Sarah Peck
i cant read book 2 afte sebbie and rayne not getting togeather
09/04/2023 07:13Rene Du Preez
this story is GOOD.
09/04/2023 07:13Angelica Rodriguez
I really like this story!
09/04/2023 07:13Sarah Peck
does sebastian ever end up with rayne
09/04/2023 07:13
robotat
Hey guys... Can someone please tell me how to delete my account?
09/04/2023 07:13Creppy die Afton
woo
09/04/2023 07:13Maria Medina
wow , from what I see from the comments this story seems awesome and so interesting!! :)
09/04/2023 07:13Sarah Peck
are you kidding i want sebbie to end up with rain
09/04/2023 07:13Lauren Reid
I loved the beginning of the story but hated the ending. I was hoping this would be a redemption story where he worked his ass off to show that he had changed and it not be that people would keep telling him he can’t change and will never deserve her. Unless the plot changes, I definitely am not investing anymore in this series which is a shame because all the characters are so well written and developed.
09/04/2023 07:13Patrice Berry-Avery
I think the stranger that found her is her father. Him singing to her and calming her, and her seeming familiar to him. Yup. I think it's her father!
09/04/2023 07:13Athanasia
I love your story, I Really enjoyed
09/04/2023 07:13Mar-blinz Edet
Amazing book, I love! thanks for recommending..
09/04/2023 07:13Rovena Clark
✨( ˘ ³˘)♥✨
09/04/2023 07:13
Kimberly Plumlee
i love this, i usually don't like straight love stories too much but when i find the right one i really love it. i love this plot and just everything about it, its written so good and i can really visualize what is written. can't wait to read the rest of this.
09/04/2023 07:13Edith Proenza
I liked the story but had hopes for her n sebaston.. I know probably very selfish but I liked the couple
09/04/2023 07:13Rebecca Farmer
Wow!!!!!! What an amazing story, I could not put it down!!!! I am happy with how it ended!!!!! Can't wait for the next story!!!!
09/04/2023 07:13
Keiana Sanders
I can’t wait until her wolf comes back
09/04/2023 07:13Dáwn _ÿt
𝚝𝚑𝚒𝚜 𝚜𝚝𝚘𝚛𝚢 𝚒𝚜 𝚘𝚗𝚎 𝚘𝚏 𝚊 𝚔𝚒𝚗𝚍, 𝚝𝚑𝚒𝚜 𝚒𝚜 𝚘𝚗𝚎 𝚘𝚏 𝚖𝚢 𝚏𝚊𝚟𝚘𝚛𝚒𝚝𝚎 𝚜𝚝𝚘𝚛𝚢 𝚗𝚘𝚠 ❤️❤️❤️ 𝚔𝚎𝚎𝚙 𝚒𝚝 𝚞𝚙!
09/04/2023 07:13
BeautyWolf
good book, but this last chapter about rayne and her father... there’s not a lot of detail. if toy meet your astranged-believed to be dead father, more than just acceptance of amnesia would be going on. anger, betrayal, sadness - plus shock and awe and a lot of confusion. it needs to be more detailed. lastly, some of the grammar and spellings need looking at - the sentences don’t flow. but the story is a really good one, great concept and has potential for possibility of being published. Good luck :)
09/04/2023 07:13Neeha Shaikh
You are doing great!!!👍
09/04/2023 07:13SuperWeeabo Anime Girl
You have a lot of creative potential! Your writing is incredible. From one writer to another, this book is 10/10 in my books. 👍. Great job.
09/04/2023 07:13
Comes And Goes
"let's go get that bacon" reminded me of the Beggin Strips commercial.
09/04/2023 07:13
Ioana Petrea
I really really am in love with this book. I simply love the plot ♥️♥️
09/04/2023 07:13Abomination demon-feather
omfg i love this so far!!!
09/04/2023 07:13Lisa Boone
so far a delightful story can't wait to read more I would like to get more chapters then just a few though
09/04/2023 07:13
TheWriting_AstroNerd
this is so good!
09/04/2023 07:13
Lini
I really like this book!
09/04/2023 07:13
