Her Returned Mate (The Gathering Shadows Series, Book I) Comments

  • Sunny

    So in awakenings Parker’s brother is called Connor but before his name was Owen?

    09/24/2020 16:45

  • MIXED STAR INK

    i honestly really like this plot lets just hope things play out the way they want to or will it get complicated

    09/24/2020 16:36

  • CJMVWordWizard

    This book has a lot of hanging issues. I guess in preparation for the sequel book. But after reading it, it left me with more questions than contentment in the end. I was leaning on Rayne with Sebastion in the end. True that he was mean to her 5 years ago, but it was because of several scenarios in the book that lead the reader to believe that he will actually fight for Rayne and show her that he is changed man. THAT was the progress of the book. So imagine my surprise when it actually did not happen. It left me with more questions now, and to think that the book has a lot of loopholes. This particular event not happening caused the gap in the flow of the story. And maybe the title is not compatible with the story. Although the book did have a good start. It’s just that the progression of the story is not smooth, it has a lot of gaps. And I spent so much to finish this.

    09/24/2020 16:22

  • Pradaline

    Cool chapter

    09/24/2020 15:21

  • Beth Love285

    Hi, I was sent this story on Wattpad by one of your Editors, asking for feedback on the story. I told them I didn't want to read it, as this isn't something I'm really interested in. Your editor proceeded to send me the story anyway, which turned me off on the story more. Please tell your editor to not send the story, when someone says they don't want to read it. That can affect peoples opinion on your story, and give you negative reviews.

    09/24/2020 15:11

  • coffequeen

    I’m glad she’s with Parker. that sebastion didn’t deserve her. purely selfish.

    09/24/2020 14:36

  • Agrima Girish

    A warewolf book with lots drama? YES please!

    09/24/2020 13:53

  • Elizalalala15

    hii author! Just wanna tell you that I love you and your stories❤❤❤❤

    09/24/2020 13:24

  • Iona Giesinger

    love the book ! has a good plot line and flows pretty good 👍 its a very stereotypical werewolf story but everyone like a classic

    09/24/2020 12:34

  • Ka Hanna Rose Senior

    It's a mind blowing story ,my felling came up and down, I get anger coz of act of Sebastian mistress also him in the first chap and I like the story flow and I hope I have more coins that I can read more😆😆😆

    09/24/2020 12:27

  • Athanasia

    So Cruel he slap her

    09/24/2020 12:19

  • Narry lyn

    Heyy..im here..heheh

    09/24/2020 12:12

  • bread

    the best! the story is just so wonderful love is Everything

    09/24/2020 11:51

  • Nubia Gem

    nice

    09/24/2020 11:22

  • geraldine buduan

    do i have to pay coins in order to read a beautiful story? so sad not to be able to share a good one. thank you anyway

    09/24/2020 11:06

  • Reader-819500

    do u ever proof read? very difficult to swallow when it feels like a 5 yr old is writing.

    09/24/2020 10:46

  • Katie O'Brien

    one of the alphas in the last chapter, I believe his name is alpha seth, you described him that had a scar going from his eye down to his chin and the guy that snuck into Raynes house had a scar like that. the one who can't remember where he remembers her from. so I'm confused lol.

    09/24/2020 10:32

  • Reader-819500

    I’m totally & completely distressed that the writer can’t tell the difference between the words diner & dinner!!!!!! they went to the dinner for bacon........ really?....Not only did she do it once; but repeatedly! Can’t wait to see what other atrocities I will find!

    09/24/2020 10:06

  • els

    need a grip of the story

    09/24/2020 09:28

  • Umuhoza Hortance

    this isn't love ,I guess it is just that he has know Gia from the earlier age but she sounds like trouble.I am so excited for the next chapter s

    09/24/2020 09:20

  • wowza

    oh also how can you call this the return mate if he only returns for like a chapter?

    09/24/2020 08:23

  • wowza

    disappointed. In the end didn't she do the same thing Sebastian did? Say no to her mate for someone she loved? He just made it easy for her to walk away 5 years ago. Yes HE chose to be with her because what's her face cheated but his wolf wanted her the entire time. I find Sebastian more interesting then Rayn and Parker. They don't seem to have anything but sex and helping people, but no actual chemistry and substance, built on codependence. It sounds like she doesn't know how to be without Parker. Like truly be on her own/independent if this was 5 years after the party and they say their friendship is 5 years old. He's seriously the best friend. I was half expecting his mate to end up being a man. I think the chapters full of random flashbacks were stupid and a waste of our money. Also, if we have to pay outrageous prices to read these, the least you can do is make the chapters a reasonable length and proofread.

    09/24/2020 08:20

  • Worried Sick

    I’ll admit, I didn’t read the whole thing. I read a chapter and skimmed through a few more. I can say that I don’t hate this story! it flows very nicely and is very descriptive while not being boring and cluttered. it wasnt hard for me to imagine the story and characters in my head. like I said it flowed very nicely which is something that I think people forget about when writing a story. I didn’t have to stop and look back and re-read a paragraph over and over again for my brain to understand what was going on. the story itself is a bit cliché but does have its own uniqueness. I love how it switches POVs! the characters personality really shines through and it can leave suspense. overall, great flow, great word choice and detailing, and great consistency! it wasn’t a bore to read and I actually might come back to fully read it in the future :). (speaking of flow, please excuse my choppy comment, I am super tired and my brain isn’t working)

    09/24/2020 08:01

  • Kona F.

    Amazing!

    09/24/2020 07:18

  • Angel Candice

    another douche on the list

    09/24/2020 05:27

  • Arlyn Paulino

    Nice Story!! i love it continue writing🥺💖

    09/24/2020 05:23

  • Christmas_evie

    Wow! This is very inspiring and very well detailed, I am truly honored to help you out ^^ and um, thank you for the coins qwq ❤️ 💕

    09/24/2020 05:02

  • Mariah DiTillio

    I have read some similar books and enjoyed them

    09/24/2020 04:56

  • Athanasia

    Many people really hate Gia, Why they are envy

    09/24/2020 04:43

  • LEMO-ONADE

    stop spamming other people on Wattpad, no one cares, thank you. ♥️♥️♥️

    09/24/2020 04:18

  • Athanasia

    I really enjoy your story, i love it

    09/24/2020 04:13

  • Athanasia

    I love your story, I Really enjoyed

    09/24/2020 04:12

  • Leslie Dalton

    STOP!! Dont read!! Waste of time and money!!! The title is misleading. The author is all over the place. You can tell how the store is everywhere that it's a money thing. Don't waste your coins. I'm going back to Amazon or anywhere so I can read books by real authors that are free or cost what a book should cost. The cost to read these no name authors and these soap opera story is crazy!! To this author you could really make something of yourself if you wouldn't mislead and stay on one story at a time and stop writing for more coins and write with your heart.. Please Don't Waste Your Coins!!!

    09/24/2020 03:56

  • Reader-767905

    I had to have a bottle of wine to swallow Parker and Rayne becoming mates. I’m kinda leaning towards not wanting to finish the book. Both Parker and Rayne was okay with hurting Parker’s future mate as if Rayne wasn’t hurt hearing Seb say that he didn’t want her 5 years ago!! I really hope something happens and Rayne and Seb becomes mates again!

    09/24/2020 03:42

  • Bibi is my love

    nice story

    09/24/2020 03:29

  • Vicki Jackson

    I like what I am reading

    09/24/2020 03:14

  • Patrice Berry-Avery

    I'm so upset!

    09/24/2020 02:19

  • Patrice Berry-Avery

    I don't want to read anymore😔

    09/24/2020 01:57

  • May Heleen

    Until this chapter, I feel so curious. But sadly, I can't read for the whole chapters. I noticed that not everything can be free. But I also can't add my opinion for this complete story. This was an impressive and splendid story. Nicely done!. A charming characters and fascinating plot!.

    09/24/2020 00:15

  • Sylaven

    finally, a story that makes sense. i always hate stories when a mate rejected the pair, regreted it, and in the end they end up together, like so cliche, predictable and boring. come on girls, romance is all good and stuff but why picked up trash that trashed you up? rayne wants freedom, sebas only wants gia, he has it come for him, and rayne is happy with her life, its unrealistic to pair them up just bc the bond sht as if rayne feelings didnt matter. rayne can b with whoever she wants, and i want to read a book,just once, where they didnt end up with their pair, altho knowing this book has the continuation,big chance they gonna end up tgt. also strong woman doesnt need to rely on a man, rayne has been doing good on her own, with or without parker. so even if oneday parker find his mate and choose his mate, yes rayne will b heartbroken but she will move on, like she always does, and her future doesnt need to always be tangled with sebas.

    09/23/2020 23:46

  • Alejandra

    wow, I was delighted

    09/23/2020 23:35

  • Alejandra

    wow, I'm fascinated

    09/23/2020 23:35

  • Maria Isaweeb

    this is awesome

    09/23/2020 23:25

  • hajimei

    nice story and the plot is good. Need to put some hurdle before our mc can be together otherwise this story will end quickly in boring way.so keep up the good work and write according your to your heart.Fighting!

    09/23/2020 23:07

  • hajimei

    Nice story you got there. The female lead is cool and seem headstrong perfect for our male lead that seem like a jerk at first but eventually I know he will change to spice up the story you add another lady by the male lead side...will be great if we can get another second male lead that gently and understanding that maybe he'll be the female lead friend at first and hide his love..well anyway it's all up to you the writer. Hope you can continue to write this interesting work.

    09/23/2020 22:51

  • Isa García

    I love this story it meets all my tastes when choosing a story and determining if it is good or not

    09/23/2020 22:43

  • İlayda Tuncer

    huuu huuu very beautiful !!

    09/23/2020 22:06

  • Reader-996597

    Really all over the place, I understand the writer is trying to set up multiple characters and storylines for other books but it’s not working. The focus is too broad and some of the flashbacks are really unnecessary and filling space as they don’t always add to the backstory as the main points have been explained before they occur.

    09/23/2020 22:00

  • Tina John

    I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!!! the writing is amazing and the story is beautiful. such a page turner! cant wait to know what happens next!

    09/23/2020 21:26

  • Micah Christensenjxjdjfhfh

    book was good but I kinda lost interest at the end

    09/23/2020 20:32

  • wangji 94

    the synopsis is very interesting, it catches you the first time

    09/23/2020 20:26

  • Barbara Willey

    free reading my ass

    09/23/2020 20:25

  • Catherine Greene

    As a reader I am disappointed that there wasn't much interaction between Rayne & Bash. There was no build up & then they were done so quickly. You are the writer so you do you. I know I couldn't write a story so I can't be upset. They are your characters.

    09/23/2020 18:50

  • Licom Via

    hello, I don't know if you remember me, some time ago you recommended your book to me on wattpad. I'm really loving the book, all the drama and passion in writing, really touched me. But unfortunately my English is terrible 😂, and I'm always having to translate the pages of your book, other than that, the experience is being incredible. Thank you very much for providing me with the contact with this work of art.

    09/23/2020 17:19

  • Reader-418474

    I Love the story !! continue like this ! 😉

    09/23/2020 17:05

  • yulianna gonzalez

    I come from Wattpad 😂😂 I liked the story and I came to this app that the author told me and that I love it!!❤️

    09/23/2020 16:44

  • Tais Tcheis

    i like the story, it’s well written with minor errors. i like the fact that we know the thoughts of others characters. but i won’t go on because i found out that rayna doesn’t end up with sebastien and i think that this plataform ir too expensive for me. I’m from Brazil and dollar here is 5 To 1 dollar and To read the entire book it would be like buying one of Júlia Quinn. not that it doesn’t deserve, because i believe authors should be well paid but is too much for me for a book that i won’t like the ending.

    09/23/2020 15:08

  • Pitu Petru

    I just love your story it’s amazing ,, I can’t wait to read more when you update the story

    09/23/2020 14:46

  • Ajon 76

    I’m about to stop reading this book at this point it’s some B.S. How could Parker become her mate, He should’ve at least had another mate as well to start with. He never had a mate before her? I’m about ready to throw the whole book in the garbage.

    09/23/2020 14:32

  • Anna Play’s

    wowwwww

    09/23/2020 14:21

  • Qween Evil

    I like the story is quite interesting, but I am a little troubled because I have to use a lenguage converter application because I am not good at speaking English and I run out and coins heheheh seeu next and spirit

    09/23/2020 14:16

  • Qween Evil

    I like

    09/23/2020 14:05

  • Elin

    I just read the chapter 'The past Collides with the present' and I just realized that I really have no idea how Rayne pronounces her name. She said she got her name from her mother because she loved the rain. So I thought Rayne was pronounced like Rain, but before that I thought Rayne was pronounced like Ryan but with a different spelling only. Which is it? My mind is about to explode😅 By the way, it's so exciting, I started reading just a few days ago! And if I should be completely honest, I am team Sebastion all the way even though I love Parker too!

    09/23/2020 13:56

  • Swgkimvyu _

    hello! this is such an amazing story, even without realizing it i keep reading it and also your story line is pretty good.I'm very happy to read your story :) -@swgkimvyu

    09/23/2020 13:01

  • Reader-419995

    will there be another chapter on this story ?

    09/23/2020 12:28

  • Patrice Langit

    Damn, reading this chapter makes my blood boil. Hope that Sebastian will be the one who got rejected by his mate. Damn this man and his b*tch, it makes me want to crush them.

    09/23/2020 11:42

  • Adrian Kerkhoff

    Bro this is one of the best online books I've read so far! I just wanna keep reading and reading from only the first few paragraphs.😀

    09/23/2020 10:20

  • savina black

    this story is awesome ( ꈍᴗꈍ)

    09/23/2020 10:09

  • Reader-738761

    I absolutely love this story so far!

    09/23/2020 08:47

  • Trie Indah

    great story ... thank you to your editor who send me link for this story .. i love it ..

    09/23/2020 08:44

  • rabiatul adawiyah

    I enjoyed it..I wish you could write more story like this

    09/23/2020 07:49

  • One Piece

    Actually, this story is good. I know the Author have her own idea to make this story, how the characters leads have their owns choices. But I do have my opinions. I like this story but i don't like how the title and the story doesn't matched at all. Sorry, I'm Sebastian's team. I don't like how Rayne can deny her destiny partner. Don't judge me, it's just I feel it unfair for Sebastian. Everyone can make their mistakes, it's not like just Sebastian is wrong in the first place. Rayne is wrong too. She doesn't want a mate but didn't give him a chance to ammend for his mistakes. I just didn't how the story goes but overall, this story is very amazing with the author's own thoughts to make this story. 😊😇 By the way, someone share this link story to me and asked me to give this story a review. Here is my review. Sorry for my bad grammar. Wish u all the best for you next story. 😍😍

    09/23/2020 07:29

  • One Piece

    Actually, this story is good. I know the Author have her own idea to make this story, how the characters leads have their owns choices. But I do have my opinions. I like this story but i don't like how the title and the story doesn't matched at all. Sorry, I'm Sebastian's team. I don't like how Rayne can deny her destiny partner. Don't judge me, it's just I feel it unfair for Sebastian. Everyone can make their mistakes, it's not like just Sebastian is wrong in the first place. Rayne is wrong too. She doesn't want a mate but didn't give him a chance to ammend his mistakes. I just didn't like how the story goes, but overall this story is amazing with the author's own thought to make this story 😊😇 By the way, someone sent this link story to me and ask me to review this story. This is my review, sorry for grammar error. I'm not that good with english. Wish U the best for your next book 😍😍

    09/23/2020 07:10

  • marina simeonoglou

    not bad but why is it taking so long ,all of a sudden, to finish????? please provide with rest of story.....

    09/23/2020 06:51

  • Jas McKenzie

    I do not regret reading this, I love that Parker and Rayne got together I shipped them from the get go, Sebastian made some big mistakes and they both didn't want or ready for a mate back then and finding her own happiness I'm glad for, Now Sebastian can move on and come to peace with his past

    09/23/2020 05:57

  • Amelia loves Bunnies

    Hi! it's me! the one your talking to in Wattpad. I'm here to share my thoughts. the guy is so messed up damn. And I kinda hate the main character. I mean your idea of her is nice and all that but.... I feel like she's too soft and shameless. I mean her character is nice but she loved the other guy that was not her mate that has a mate. it's kinda messed up. But I mean this is a love triangle so I will accept that. This story is nice!

    09/23/2020 05:13

  • Melissa Williamson

    I just started reading it. so far I'm loving the story. I can tell Gia is going to be a big problem.

    09/23/2020 04:55

  • Reader-190579

    Liked the first couple of chapters, but there a good number of typos. I would highly suggest getting a proofreader or editor because I know how difficult it is to proof your own work. If you already have one might want to get a new one. They either aren’t really reading it or just don’t know what they’re really doing. Not trying to be rude. I genuinely am just trying to help.

    09/23/2020 04:47

  • Mary Ellenbecker

    I'm going to point out the one thing that's bugging me so far... when he was "interviewing" the bartender he said "be here at 9 it opens at 10" then at the very end when he laid down with Rayne it says it doesn't open til 11

    09/23/2020 03:54

  • Jung Hoseok

    Writer I got a message on wattpad from Jonna-Radke saying this was their book and I should read it so please verify if this was you

    09/23/2020 03:53

  • Makeda Ennis

    This had been great so far ! few typos and grammatical errors!

    09/23/2020 03:20

  • Aiya Worthington

    my best guess is her father didn't actually die and that's who helped her after the flashback

    09/23/2020 03:14

  • rizki widya

    This story is really good. The idea is uncommon and i think next chapter will be better. Good job!

    09/23/2020 03:09

  • Emily Hickton

    yeah just a heads up there people on Wattpad claiming to be your editor and sending the first chapter to get people to come and read the book. also I've noticed quite a few spelling errors in the past couple of chapters. just something your editor might want to look over real quick. pretty good so far though, I'm kind of like paranormal things for a while but like stories that center over finding a mate and stuff hasn't really been my thing, but because of the person that sent me the first chapter, it kind of got me invested.

    09/23/2020 02:41

  • Ajon 76

    when is Parker going to meet his mate?

    09/23/2020 01:54

  • Débora da Guia

    I thought Rayne's mother was Mia, not Maya. Not the first error of the kind I've seen. Apart from that the story is pretty solid! 🤩

    09/23/2020 01:40

  • Kenneth Hawley

    Excellent job and I can't wait for the to continue

    09/23/2020 01:30

  • Horowai Makatea

    I actually like this story. Better than some others I've read on other apps.

    09/23/2020 01:15

  • Melissa

    Hiiiya! Sorry for bothering you. I'm an editor, me and the writer are working on an amazing story. 92.9% of readers voted it as #1 Paranormal Story. We still hope to learn the most picky readers' opinions. I can see that you have a fantastic taste in books. So, well, I'm now super excited but anxious to know what will you think about it. May I send you some sample chaps? this is what I was sent people are claiming your story

    09/23/2020 01:05

  • Maineine Beniamina

    there is no way of getting credits to contonue reading so what next

    09/23/2020 00:42

  • Antique Collection

    the story nice and amazing but the coin to pay...not bad too

    09/23/2020 00:41

  • Catherine Greene

    I dont want her & Parker together since he can still find his Mate & hurt her.

    09/23/2020 00:39

  • Claire Saez

    Hello am just wondering if you're TericaFranklin0821? She/He is also claiming to be your editor...

    09/22/2020 23:53

  • Purple Guy

    I don’t like Gia either, she sounds like a whore who wants the authority and Sebastian is a fucking idiot for not believing his friends.

    09/22/2020 23:49

  • kasutok64

    Me encanta

    09/22/2020 23:17

  • Catherine Congiusti

    I was asked to edit chapters of this book by summerjollimorejul29 is that the original writer?

    09/22/2020 23:17

  • QuietTexas Pet

    @northrose - enjoyed reading and I wish you the best of luck on this adventure. I look forward to finding you on other platforms. I do not blame you for the price. I spent $15 for coins and I’m almost done without completing your book. For a book that has not been edited that’s a heavier price to pay compared to other writers I’ve been following for years. I’m following you on IG and look forward to more just not on this platform-

    09/22/2020 23:08

  • Valk Yrie

    i like it❤️

    09/22/2020 23:08

  • Lu Hernandez

    Hi

    09/22/2020 22:27

  • sofialessa

    I wish I could continue reading this book, but I did not install this app just to pay for every chapter. I hope to see your works on another website that is free to more readers, but this isn’t worth my money.

    09/22/2020 22:09
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