The Untamed Siblings Comments

Maxine Goin-Kelley

I really like the series, but there are a couple things in the book that are making me step away from it for a little bit. First it is extremely redundant. I can't tell you how many times "evil smirk" has been in here but it has to be in the hundreds. Also all of the sex scenes are described in the same way, same words, it get old. How many times can a bad ass family get kidnapped? In this book, too many times to count and its the same everything they're kidnapped. It's getting old.

Maxine Goin-Kelley

I am trying so hard to figure out how this is going to work. if Byron and Azalea are supposed to be the keepers of the Underworld and her twin is supposed to be her Guardian, but all three of the boys are mated to the same woman; who is going to be King and queen?

Linda Lowery

keep up the good work

Annelta Toussaint

I enjoyed the series 👍😊

I love it keep up the amazing work

Joele G

d5s8 I do believe this is a great read but I need to read the 1st book to understand the storyline but I’m intrigue tho.

d5s8 I like it so far but I think I decently have to read the other book for some clarification before I read this one

d5s8 #d5s8 interesting introduction and great plot. I think I'll read Fighting Spirit 1st to gain some further understanding. this story will be an intriguing read

Barb Austin

d5s8 IT jumped right in seems like a good read but will have to agree with the other readers really need to read Fighting Spirit first

Rafael

#d5s8# ok I am little confused. with only the introduction I think I need more information. but I am intriguing. maybe I need to read the first book first. for now I will add it in my library

Emily

d5s8 Read fighting spirit and stumbled upon this again. seems like a good start to the book will have to try it out for sure

Jade Ridler

#d5s8# a strong start to the book with great characters. i love reading these types of books excited to read the rest of the story.

Irma Beck

d5s8 absolutely loved this book. it's filled will such passion and love. love how protective the brothers are and how open their parents are. thr book definitely started off with a bang.

Reader-109555

wow amazing

Reader-109555

yes

A.Gre

mei and lexi are Azeleas children, is that a typo?

E.Dark

make sure to find me on FB at EDark Readers

Mary Lethco

This book just keeps repeating. People get kid napped, people get saved, kidnapper gets away, repeat.

Reader-668406

not again this was in the last book and they are like sisters

I have a question in the last book didn't the goddess tell me that the babygirl she lost was reborn in the pups she had or did I misunderstand it???

ok read fighting spirit series, this and the watchman for as far it's out and i love your creativity. even though a lot of things have been used before you give your own twist and combine different things in a surprising way. i loved reading so far can't wait what the trouble three will be like. and the rest of the watchman of course.

so the brother's share a bed a shower and women 🙄

Stacey Burrows

brutus not goki

Cyanne Robar

I live in Alaska! ✌

So So

I’m on Book 3, Chapter 8 atm. I remember reading in a previous chapter when it was Lea’s 18th birthday dinner and it was mentioned that Mei was heavily pregnant and Lea was glad to have a baby sibling around the same time she hopes to also have one (after her 18th bday of course). From then on there is no mention of Mei still being pregnant or have had the baby. There is a little mention of Milly being heavily pregnant though a few chapters before this current one so I’m not sure what’s happening with Mei’s and Milly’s pregnancies…?

jubileeXO

is there going to be a book about “The Trouble Three and onyx” or is they’re story included in this book.?

I love staying at the Bourbon Orleans!! Especially when you have to stagger back somewhere to sleep after a long night of debauchery! 😈

Rachel Moye

I'm lovin diving into a different story in this same universe you've created! ty 😊

Wendy Virginia

isn’t Amelia “Lea”? so you may have mixed up Ceila and Amelias names. that’s what confused me.

just double checking.. the book is over correct... I only ask bc when I get to the end it tells me updated instead of the end.. dont want to start the troubled 3 till ik for sure

Rachel Moye

I'm a bit confused. Astoria stated she knew Tanner took her virginity when he raped her. shouldn't the veil be broken? why are her and Byron still waiting til midnight?

1NOnlyPhenix

I honestly expected them to find out something happened to the clock and it was not actually midnight

Victoria Krechting

Damn another epic book ,on to the trouble three. Thanks for sharing your amazing talent with us.

Reader-014654

I wish this could be in t.v episodes seasons would be amazing to see it all visually 😻😻😻

Kari Shockley

Is this bk the 2nd to Fighting Spirit? Confused, there are 2 other books that say they are the 2nd & 3rd book in that series.

Hollihawk23

Hahaha!! I forgot that A'kai and the twins dabbed on Stetson for their big night. I knew I loved them for some reason 🥰

Wendy Virginia

I’m confused on chapter 12-13 on the second part. was Lea taken or not?! CONFUSED

Great so far but the Bourbon Orleans is actually in the French Quarter just in case you haven't actually been to New Orleans.

I am completely loving this series and characters! I just had to let you know that you have also created a new Adam Jensen fan!!! listened to "Hunter" once and I was a goner!! 🥰

I'm on the edge of my seat! I'm glad sebastian got to end her! Now on to the two men😤

Minithe Libra

is onyx and the trouble three going to have their time?

Kelly Kegley

OMG! About time for what? time for Lea to bring Mei back, time for Lea to kill those bastards and end the WAR, time for the twins to be born? time for what? aaaaahhhhhh

Rusti Fagg

what isnthe name of the Dragon Onyx story

Cindy Williams

Oh my goodness! These last chapters were amazing. I hope Onyx finds some survivors.

Kelly Kegley

please don’t let Mei die 😭

Heather

I am slowly going crazy...one....two....three....four...fix....six....kill Aeros......LOL don't mind this addict waiting for her fix LOL 😂😂

joyce Cross

Wonderful!!! I am vested in their story lines. Thank you!

Heather

OMG YAY!!! BABIES!!!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ so excited for them!!

Cindy Williams

I'm glad everyone was safe. Yay for babies!❤

Heather

loving this!! thanks for the updates!!

Heather

omg!!! leading into the next book?!?! God I love this entire blended family/pack......so excited the story will continue....I hope ....LOL

alroke

How often is this updated? I may have accidentally binged the whole thing now idk what I'm going to do?!

Kelly Kegley

well it would appear Byrons nightmare just came true!

Cindy Williams

Thanks for the updates.

Kelly Kegley

I want the “Trouble Three” to meet Onxy

Heather

this was sooooo amazing!!!! not a shock since all of your books have been! cannot wait for the new story to start!!! ❤️❤️❤️🙌🏻🙌🏻🙌🏻

Heather

omg!!! this is getting crazy and onyx is a BAD ASS!!! ......soooo I'll just be over here refreshing a million times today ....lmao 😂😂😂

Kellymarie Arthurton

I've read all 3 books, they are brilliant, I couldnt stop reading. I cant wait to see what happens with onyx and the three dragons.

E.Dark

Just noticed but Trouble Three is not showing under my name you will have to look book by title for now..

E.Dark

Got the first taste of "Trouble Three" posted... Dec 1st

these series are so good!! I can’t wait for the next book!!!!

Rachèl van Veldhuijsen

Does the "to be continued..." mean you'll continue this story in another book? Or will more chapters be added tot this book?

Hold on.....so if Samantha and Ace were bumping uglies, who does the crew have in the "Barn"? Was this a before she got caught conversation?

Trisha Wilder

Cutting her vagina out?!?!?! Sweet Jesus!!! 😱😱😱

E.Dark

final chapters will be loaded either tonight or tomorrow.. going to take a week vacation before "Trouble Three" premieres

Heather

omg that cliff hanger is gonna kill me!!! time for what?!?!?

Heather

the never ending cliff hangers 😂😂.......so glad Seb was the one to end her. hoping Mei survives and the twin aśśholes get killed.....painfully.....lol

Alexandra Luther

I don't want to wait... Out of all the apps and stories I've been reading on this series has been my favorite. I honestly wish I hard copies of these books for my collection. When exactly can we expect the Trouble Three to premiere?? I don't want to miss it! 💚💚💚

Cindy Williams

When I was reading yesterday I thought maybe they would send Samantha's head to Aeros. I know that's bad.

Cindy Williams

Maybe she means it's time to show that she's a demi-god.

SOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOODDDD!!!! Can't wait to continue to the next story!👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽

Heather

hahahahaha 80 years old and virgins....those boys got burned by their own grandpa LMFAO 😂😂😂😂 can't wait for them to meet Onyx!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Kelly Kegley

or....is this book still being updated? if so, I am way cool with that. 😂

Cindy Williams

I think Byron and Kolt are my favorite characters.

Heather

This was just the best.....family bonding.....gotta love it 😈

Angel Pousada

ohhhh! ty for the update! I love the build up to war.

Heather

noooooooooo Leah!!!!! Byron better be ready for this!

Kelly Kegley

I think Aeros and Ace are not going to like what happens. they think they are planning a surprise when it’s going to be them who gets surprised. 😈

Kelly Kegley

cliffhanger.... aaaahhhh. no the girls can’t lose the pups! if three already died, which is so not right, then the girls shouldn’t lose their pups. :(

Heather

omg I've read all of these books in two days and they are AMAZING!

Kelly Kegley

OMG! It’s kinda a cliffhanger but at the same time it’s also the perfect ending to this book. If that makes any sense at all. now bring on the next book. can’t wait for Onxy and the Trouble Three to have their romance/adventures.

Kelly Kegley

love the arrival of the babies. now onxy time

E.Dark

look for EDark Readers on FB private group for my readers

Minithe Libra

you really know how to leave us wanting more.

Sonam Yangdon

What is the mystery.

Reader-371843

love your stories and can’t wait to read the update (no pressure but hurry up 😂😉). LOVE IT especially ghe over the top-subject making everyone uncomfortable!!!

Kelly Kegley

OMG! I am on the edge of my seat with anticipation.... can’t wait for the next update!

Gina Homer

when is the next update ?

Kelly Kegley

Samantha needs her head handed to her on a silver platter along with the rest of the hunters!

Kelly Kegley

I need an update soon. like now soooooon. LOL

Cindy Williams

Lea is a demi-God. That's so cool!

Heather

power outages for the night in my area 😩 hoping for some updates to hold me over 🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼😂😂😂

A94

Read all 3 books within 2 weeks! I couldn’t put my tablet down! Now a book about the kids all grown up and finding their mates! I know I’ll have this book done in a few days! Excellent work!

Cindy Williams

I can't wait for the next book!

Sarah

please put up a new chapter

E.Dark

sorry about errors... computer was glitches hardcore tonight will get it corrected

Heather

LET'S GET READY TO RUUUMMMBBBBBLLLLEEEE. Shyts about to go down in Vegas! 😏

Cindy Williams

Another series I'm reading where I wish it could go on forever.

Keri-Lyn Demarest

I have read the entire fighting spirit line and music and my mate. I love your stories keep them coming!!!

Malyssa Christyne

I've only so far reached the end of chapter 8 about to start chapter 9 & im a little confused with all the names trying to keep up with who is who. but it has my attention & is good so far. I just wish the story was written with a more suttle way about explaining the many different names of their characters and who they are. cause by now in most stories to know the main characters. I could remember 1 or 2 names and can't tell you anything more then they are brother and sister and a son and daughter. im willing to continue anyways. im not trying to be negative to tear down the author at all cause I do like the story so far. im just bluntly honest and I personally appreciate honest opinions of their experiences reading the story. I'm excited to continue reading I will comment and review if that's an option when im finished with the story! thank for giving us new paranormal romance cause they are my addiction!!