Fated to Fall (Series collection) Comments

  • dee brack

    I’m team Dark Angel. I think they may need each other to balance! By far one of the best books I’ve read thank you!

    01/15/2021 15:27

  • Nelly Perez-Yip

    I'm so happy I was able to continue reading this book.. Love Book 2🥰.. Can't wait for more chapters👍

    01/11/2021 17:46

  • Kiri Bexley

    I read this in 3 days its been along time I have read and read something this good curious will it be named the same or something different

    01/10/2021 21:43

  • Unlikely Optimist 🖤

    Don’t worry readers! I haven’t forgotten about you ❤️ I usually work on whatever my mind wants to, plus I took a few days off for the new year! I spent some time on my other stories but I’m back tonight with at LEAST a double update before midnight EST ❤️ Love you all ❤️❤️❤️

    01/07/2021 17:25

  • Lisa Marie

    I'm leaning towards team Darl, especially after this chapter

    01/04/2021 22:06

  • Karina Marthinsen

    this is just awesome, read it in 3days and cant wait for an update, i do think that, age Will be awesome if she become one person, i think she could be the one to rulle Them All, and i do Hope she beat cally and persphones asses at some point

    01/02/2021 15:38

  • Lanie Knight

    I love both sides of her each has their own strength I can’t wait to see what happens further in to the new book I have this feeling that at some point both halves are going to come together and make one hell of a person you are doing an awesome job keep up the great work and I can’t wait to see what happens next

    01/02/2021 06:26

  • Reader-837796

    I’m super enjoying this book! I agree with Crystal, they are 2 sides of the same coin who can exist as 1, I think Angel will take on Dark’s strength and resilience at some point (at least in my mind they do)

    01/01/2021 23:30

  • Crystal Scharf

    omg love both i have a idea for you maybe you can find a way to have both angel and dark exist outside of the other like dark could be her own person and then angel could be her own person and dark can be with tali and angel can have hades

    01/01/2021 20:41

  • Joanna H

    I like them both but they need to.. meld? Not sure that's the right word but at the very least they have to share. They'll be stronger together. I'm loving this book so far. 😍

    01/01/2021 17:44

  • Reader-760622

    I love them both. I just hope they find a way to coexist

    01/01/2021 07:43

  • Beauty & Brews

    I prefer neither angel nor dark seperately. they are incomplete. they need to merge together keeping the strongest bits of each.

    12/31/2020 19:34

  • Mara_ rad

    yaaaaahhsss i cant wait its so good!!!!

    12/30/2020 09:55

  • Sidni S

    yesss!!! thank you!!!

    12/26/2020 06:37

  • Minnie Mouse

    Yes!! Part 2 off to a great start 😃❤️

    12/25/2020 08:08

  • Lanie Knight

    OMG I’m so happy for part 2 and the first 3 chapters are so good I can’t wait to see what happens next 😄👏👏👏👏

    12/25/2020 05:46

  • Lisa Marie

    part two is off to a great start!!!

    12/25/2020 03:21

  • Joanna H

    Yes! What an awesome start to part 2. Can't wait for more... Seriously how quickly can you write? 😁 Brilliant story!

    12/24/2020 23:04

  • Beauty & Brews

    OMG part two started epically!!

    12/24/2020 21:16

  • Tiara Kharizzma

    This was sooooo good.. That cliffhanger 😩😩😩 I can’t wait for part2

    12/21/2020 18:48

  • Minnie Mouse

    Omg so good!!! literally read this in a day 😍😍😍

    12/21/2020 07:23

  • Unlikely Optimist 🖤

    Hey 👋🏽 to all my favorite people!! So sorry, I just noticed a major copy/paste error at the beginning of Bonus Chapter- Ares I! I just wanted to give an excerpt of the reference chapter as a refresher. Hopefully it didn’t ruin the flow too much! Should be fixed tonight ❤️❤️❤️

    12/09/2020 20:44

  • Beauty & Brews

    ooohhh! I love these bonus chapters. would love to see a spin-off book about ares and alicia.

    12/09/2020 06:26

  • Unlikely Optimist 🖤

    Hey lovely readers! I wanted to add a few bonus chapters of Ares and Alicia since I don’t plan on doing a spin off or anything! Shouldn’t be more than a few chapters while you wait for part 2! I hope you enjoy ❤️❤️

    12/05/2020 05:45

  • Serenity VandeWeerd

    absolutely love this book!! when do you think part 2 is going come out?? I can't wait to read what happens next!! I am so hooked!

    12/03/2020 23:23

  • Unlikely Optimist 🖤

    Hey to all my lovely readers! If you’re looking for something new to read until Christmas Eve, Check out my new story LUNA IN THE LIMELIGHT! xoxoxoxo

    12/02/2020 21:00

  • PG25

    Wow great ending to part 1, what a cliffhanger, I’m so hooked!! Really hope there is a happy ending for Angel. Wishing for all the success with this book for the author 💛

    11/28/2020 23:38

  • Tonia Hoy

    HURRY!!! please omg... completely in love 😍

    11/26/2020 09:42

  • Crystal Scharf

    omg can't wait for book 2 this book has been captivating from start to finish

    11/25/2020 12:46

  • Jane Stuart

    Some books on these apps are hit or miss. This has definitely been a hit! Cannot wait for the 2nd book on Christmas Eve!

    11/23/2020 07:14

  • Sidni S

    this was amazing 👏🏾 i was shook when it ended even though I knew it was coming 😭

    11/23/2020 04:40

  • Alison Eardley

    omg can’t wait for book 2!! x

    11/22/2020 02:14

  • Brieanah Wilson

    can’t wait for part two

    11/21/2020 22:28

  • Joanna H

    Ooh, so so good! When is part 2 coming? Can't wait!

    11/21/2020 21:22

  • TheUnlikelyO

    Last two chapter of part 1 go up tomorrow night! Hope you’re all as excited as I am!

    11/20/2020 02:27

  • Martin Charles Mussa

    🤘

    11/16/2020 08:09

  • Kati Mitchell

    can't get any more past the bath tub!! aarrrhgg

    11/11/2020 15:06

  • TheUnlikelyO

    You all are so amazing! If you want to interact with me about this story or see what i might be working on, follow me on Instagram @the_unlikelyoptimist

    11/10/2020 21:32

  • Jess

    part 2 definitely ❤❤❤

    11/10/2020 20:21

  • Jane Stuart

    Love that she's with Hades. Please let them stay together and her not go back to Tali.

    11/09/2020 06:38

  • danielle kisor

    part 2 for sure. this story is amazing

    11/08/2020 23:53

  • Beauty & Brews

    another vote for Part 2

    11/08/2020 22:00

  • Sidni S

    part 2!

    11/08/2020 20:41

  • Minna Hansson

    I would LOVE a part 2! This story is absolutely amazing and I love everything about it. You’re a very talented writer. Thank you for a great book!

    11/08/2020 07:59

  • Crystal Scharf

    part 2 for sure

    11/08/2020 07:09

  • Lanie Knight

    part 2 has to be Angle’s story can’t end with this book maybe one more book of Angle then start on another Character from this book that would be the best

    11/08/2020 06:18

  • Ashlee Swafford

    part 2 for sure. love your writing and this story. so excited to keep reading your work in the future!

    11/08/2020 05:35

  • Alythrae

    For this app, I'd go with a part 2. I'm so excited!

    11/08/2020 04:09

  • Shay Holmes

    Definitely continue with part 2 for this app.. I would hate to not be able to find it!

    11/08/2020 03:46

  • Crystal Perkins

    On this app I say continue with a part 2. It seems to be the best way to go with the way this app is formatted. If this were anywhere else I'd say create a new book.

    11/08/2020 03:12

  • amymarieamg@hotmail.com

    love, love, love this book! I wait for chapters every day. lol

    11/06/2020 00:41

  • Mara_ rad

    goshhhh if this would have a paperback my bookshelf would be full keep the amazing work up!❤❤

    11/05/2020 22:41

  • TheUnlikelyO

    Hey guys new chapters are up! Sorry there was a system delay!

    11/05/2020 22:01

  • Lanie Knight

    I can't lie I'm so in love with this story line I'm on the edge of my seat everytime I have to wait for the next chapter I can't wait to see what happens next you are an alsome arthur your writing keeps me coming back every day just to see if there is a new chapter please keep up the great work and keep the chapters coming

    11/03/2020 02:56

  • Ariel Kwa

    your story is very well-written. foreshadowing is introduced at timely intervals and the character depth can definitely be seen as the story progresses. it’s such an agonising journey as we follow the main character discover new sensations and gian knowledge. it’s always keeping me on edge and just when i am ready to read the next chapter... bam! it has yet to been updated! i sincerely hope that this book will be finished soon but i know that writing takes time. i am so happy and grateful that you decided to write this story and allow us readers to explore this new world. it’s been such a joy reading this book so far and i can’t wait to see where this story ends. also, i’m hoping that you’re enjoying the writing process and that you’re safe and well! (: with love, your dearest reader

    11/02/2020 16:34

  • Amanda Jade

    this book is legit amazing!! I was apprehensive at first but shit I'm hooked. I check the app everyday for updates. Like this is one of my new obsessions.

    10/25/2020 14:56

  • Organized Chaos

    Had to get me some coins! I was that hooked. book good AF OKAY lolo!!

    10/23/2020 03:21

  • Alythrae

    Binge read this and can't wait for further updates!

    10/22/2020 20:39

  • Gecikah

    I am loving this book and binged on it in one sitting...please update soon 🙏

    10/20/2020 23:38

  • Stina

    ok, I'm kinda broke, but I still refilled my wallet so I could read the updates on this book. I looooove it!! 😘

    10/19/2020 02:01

  • Sidni S

    loving this boooook 🤤

    10/18/2020 14:24

  • Amanda Jade

    I need the updates!! I'm totally hooked on this book. And im hoping its angel and hades at the end.

    10/18/2020 03:46

  • Carla Miró

    ok this is way much better than what I expected! I need updates!!

    10/17/2020 12:36

  • Crystal Perkins

    You are an amazing writer and I absolutely love this book so far!

    10/16/2020 21:57

  • Ashley Ward

    read all this in a day! can't wait for more. love it so far!!!

    10/16/2020 07:20

  • Reader-783592

    Lmfaoooo I got a notification and I read it. I knew this book was gonna be good, but not this good.

    10/15/2020 23:48

  • Casey Wells

    ok I like need updates lol

    10/15/2020 21:39

  • Chicken N A Biscuit

    I started reading last night, and I’m already through all the chapters! I need more! please! it is great so far!

    10/15/2020 21:28

  • PG25

    Just binged all the chapters today 😍 loving it so far, how often does this get updated?

    10/15/2020 17:46

  • TheUnlikelyO

    Thanks everybody!!

    10/15/2020 13:39

  • Catherine Lewis

    I really love the story line. Interesting and make the reader keep flipping through the device. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

    10/15/2020 10:33

  • Luna Moon

    Um....... Tantalus isn't a god, he was punished by the gods for murdering his son and trying to feed him to them...........

    10/15/2020 08:53

  • Reader-081407

    this is great. can’t wait for the next chapters !

    10/15/2020 04:24

  • Victoria Krechting

    binge reader here 🙋‍♀️🙋‍♀️🙋‍♀️ this book sounds good so i'm all over it 🤣🤣

    10/15/2020 03:36

  • Lani

    this sounds really good!

    10/15/2020 03:33
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