Between the Four Alphas Comments

  • Emma Hewitt

    I was hoping she wud survive. well upset about this twist. poor girl I was hoping he wud kill everyone and look after her 😢 Seth doesnt need all the men she could share lmfao x

    02/19/2021 19:15

  • Jennifer Ballard

    Based on what Luciano says about how much time the king has left on the throne, and how he wants to change the tradition. And the fact that his men were willing to restrain him (he clearly wasn’t the Alpha yet), I’m pretty sure this is an old memory.

    02/19/2021 18:56

  • Reader-371843

    what a strange twist?! why is this happening? and I thought Seth would be his mate... I do not get the Thalia story line

    02/19/2021 18:03

  • sifusbabe

    wha' da actual...???? Poor Luciano

    02/19/2021 17:30

  • FantasyWORLD

    Holy Fuck. 👀👀 Is it bad I’m totally fine with her dying because I want all four to love Seth? haha

    02/19/2021 14:25

  • Allison Underdonk Peterman

    Holy Cow!!!! want expecting that to be Talias story. did he punish his own men? kill them? how awful

    02/19/2021 13:26

  • Megan Urban

    ok I'm lost was the whole Talks thing a flashback or present? It says he was still in the games so whats going on? He just up and fell for some human girl and gave no thought to Seth? I thought his wolf said in the beginning that Seth was his mate???

    02/19/2021 11:10

  • Anamaria Papuc

    That was kinda cruel 😳😞. Really? Kill your own kid?

    02/19/2021 08:30

  • Kirsten Burmeister

    oh wow..that came unexpected 😯

    02/19/2021 08:16

  • Jennifer Ballard

    well that escalated quickly....

    02/19/2021 03:50

  • Keva Gadomski

    my heart. omg Luciano. I’ll be your one and only.

    02/19/2021 03:18

  • HeatherM1

    My heart... it breaks for him💔 It helps me understand things about Luciano better

    02/19/2021 03:05

  • Iris Lara

    Wow WOW! that broke my heart😞

    02/19/2021 02:50

  • Eugena Elizabeth Euler

    definitely explains his anger and protective possession of Seth now.

    02/19/2021 02:37

  • Daisylion

    idk how I feel about having these Luciano memory throw backs NOW with like no context as to what’s going on in the present lucianos mind like maybe two throw backs and then one to bring us to where everyone’s at and what they’re doing👀

    02/19/2021 01:48

  • Kelly Rohrer

    nooooooooooooooo Luciano 😞❤️

    02/19/2021 01:41

  • Tiana Sam

    love the story!! literally spent all day reading it🙃

    02/19/2021 01:25

  • Brandi

    awe that’s why he paid off her dad. he really needs to share this story with Seth

    02/19/2021 00:57

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 2: HUGE mistake I mean HUGE you always remember or find out what catch is. I find some of that stuff that hides your sent continue

    02/18/2021 08:20

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 1: cold but oh well. better gets some books and porn junior or it’s gonna be blue balls for live

    02/18/2021 07:55

  • LMvdB

    really can’t wait for the update 🙃🙀

    02/17/2021 20:44

  • Monika Stanisławiak

    I'm trembling to read more and more... 3some - awesome! But 5? Hell yes! Please update ASAP

    02/15/2021 17:45

  • mvdb

    nope, not jealous 😏😅

    02/15/2021 08:17

  • Allison Underdonk Peterman

    WHAT A TEASEEEEEEE

    02/15/2021 04:49

  • Ashley Mclagan Bonds

    omg that was so hot!!!! hope her fantasy comes true

    02/15/2021 03:06

  • Lindsay Hoyt

    dang!! 😉

    02/15/2021 02:14

  • Kelly Rohrer

    go girlllllllll ♥️

    02/15/2021 00:50

  • Deb Warren

    Omg I and dying waiting for the update. This is a nail biter. lol. 😀😀😀

    02/14/2021 22:38

  • Lacey June Naggs

    Pease update! I'm needing my fix! 😆

    02/14/2021 07:39

  • Lyndsay

    Please update

    02/13/2021 21:59

  • Reader-310586

    talia better be part of the past

    02/12/2021 04:16

  • Sammie Heemi

    oh right adding another female into the mix so that Seth knows its game on ugggh bugger off talia

    02/10/2021 20:21

  • Taina Iosefo

    confused of what that chapter was about... Talia is a human but what does she have to do with Luciano??

    02/10/2021 03:28

  • THE WAZ FAM

    I think this is a memory...

    02/10/2021 02:00

  • Lidiane Barros

    seth and Luciano needs to end together after having their fun haha

    02/09/2021 18:56

  • LilyKacchan

    This is my first time here on AnyStories and also my first read, i came here right after reading a fanfic from Wattpad so lets wait and see which one i liked better🙉

    02/09/2021 15:33

  • Tabitha Groves

    Th name Talia is soo familiar but I can't place it...That's not the name of her Puma, is it?

    02/09/2021 15:00

  • Kelly Rohrer

    ya know what? I hope Luciano does fall for this new lady. he does actually deserve happiness too. the more I think about it - I’m leaning towards Dom and Ryder for Seth. They are understanding of her and seem to love her too. I think it’s a win win. And ehhh to Vlad lol

    02/09/2021 13:09

  • Brandy Hunter

    please tell me his not going to be with her

    02/09/2021 08:14

  • Lacey June Naggs

    I hope he doesn't fall for Talia! I want him to get to Seth! And this girl is a distraction from that! Please don't let Luciano get with her

    02/09/2021 06:42

  • Karina Marthinsen

    looking forward to see were Talia fits in, or is this a background story that tells why Luciano became like that

    02/09/2021 03:11

  • Rachelle Phillips

    Maybe Luciano uses the human girl to find Seth... he better not fall for the human

    02/09/2021 01:12

  • Rachelle Phillips

    Luciano better not forget about the goddess Seth for a silly human!

    02/09/2021 01:11

  • Eugena Elizabeth Euler

    I'm confused what is the point to bring another girl into the picture? It is a sad addition to the already confused Seth, are you trying to take Lucian out of the equation?

    02/08/2021 22:49

  • Reader-394262

    I tried to read the first 4 chapters but the grammar is terrible. I found it really hard to keep up with the story, was looking forward to a saucy 4-way too!

    02/08/2021 20:11

  • Allison Underdonk Peterman

    why is Talia in the picture ugh. its not going to be a whole new girl in competition with Seth is it?

    02/08/2021 19:21

  • Tiffany Nelson

    please bring in updates. I'm dying here..... I need to know where this story ends before I start another. .

    02/08/2021 04:19

  • Edie Gyorki

    the lack of updates is unbelievably frustrating.

    02/07/2021 22:16

  • Ellie Vasileva

    all the chapters I have read and paid for are locked!WHY?

    02/04/2021 05:05

  • Lacey June Naggs

    I can't wait to see how Luciano and Vlad will react when they finally find her!

    02/04/2021 04:20

  • L. Lillian

    i think its awesome Seth was able to open up to them/Ryder like that. im so glad these 4 are proving to be not what seth stereotypically thought of alphas. cant wait to see how the 5 of them work together

    02/03/2021 12:44

  • Allison Underdonk Peterman

    Wow this last update kind of confused me. its strange because They mentioned sharing, Luciano even calmed down knowing Vlad had sex with her. I am personally team Luciano. I hope the find their true mate. Ryder said she didn't have to choose then put her in his room and locked it. A) he wants to distract her and Dom is in the room B) Ryder said she doesnt have to choose because he plans to mark her? I hate that her father took the photos. I hope he saved them somewhere atleast.

    02/03/2021 04:22

  • Ellie Vasileva

    To me, Seth's inability to face her problems comes from the way she grew up - no support system to build her strength, keeping her head down to survive until she can run away, and trying to grab every opportunity of joy life gives her, as she knows from her mother's untimely death that life can be unpredictable and cut short at any given moment. I personally hope she takes her rightful place as Alpha and the guys learn to see her as an equal, not someone who exists for their pleasure. I guess we will see...

    02/02/2021 20:09

  • olliesea_bengals

    It’s been awhile since an update. I wonder how it’s all going to end.

    02/02/2021 08:23

  • Lina Josh Arlo Walls

    excitedly waiting for the next chapter

    02/02/2021 05:29

  • Marquita H

    Seth seems very impulsive and immature. What’s wrong with talking to him and learning more instead of always running. He can’t save you always and she has a lot of people after her.

    02/01/2021 06:37

  • Kelly Rohrer

    excitedly awaiting more chapters 🥰

    01/31/2021 13:39

  • Brandy Hunter

    #TeamLuciano WHEN is next chapter out? JW

    01/31/2021 09:58

  • Ione Ashe

    Good so far

    01/29/2021 15:21

  • Christina Wann

    Musician here. An octave is pitch, not volume. The way this makes it sound is if his voice was getting higher in pitch (a bit feminine sounding, if you will). Love the story, thought I would let you know that little fact.

    01/29/2021 09:33

  • Hopef4l Romantic

    Love this story. I seem to be 100% #TeamLuciano. Vlad is cool. He’s the only one who will move mountains to get to her, especially since he’s already said he thinks he loves her. I’m hoping they wind up together. I guess we have to get the next update(s) first to see what happens next lol 😍😆

    01/28/2021 03:30

  • Edie Gyorki

    😬😬😬

    01/28/2021 00:48

  • Ashley Danger

    how soon can we expect an update? can’t wait 😁

    01/27/2021 21:22

  • Tiara Kharizzma

    Patiently waiting for all 4 guys to meet

    01/27/2021 16:29

  • HeatherM1

    Proud of Seth for deciding what SHE wants. Cannot wait for the next update!

    01/27/2021 02:12

  • Taina Iosefo

    Oh that’s funny... those two don’t care but Luciano and Vlad seem to care. lol can’t wait for the next update.

    01/26/2021 11:37

  • Christa Margarite Aurandt

    Omg. I wish I didn’t have to wait for an update. Lol I love their response 😂😂

    01/26/2021 02:58

  • Nicole Grace

    But poor Luciano though. I mean he’s a crazy possessive dude but he’s the only one that seems like he genuinely cares.

    01/26/2021 02:32

  • Jasmin Smith

    lmao "as if we care" 😂😂😂😂

    01/25/2021 23:29

  • Candace Forbes

    I love their response!!! wonder what’s gonna happen!!!

    01/25/2021 13:57

  • Allison Underdonk Peterman

    I am totally still rooting for Luciano. I love the other ones but Luciano sticks out the most and most exciting for her and us to read about. I do hope Vlad tells him about the lion that showed up. I am also curious why the two men said as if we care? thats confusing as ever. I wonder if Vlad will be hurt when he finds out about Dominic

    01/25/2021 13:12

  • DarlingMel

    I’m pretty sure everyone is rooting for Luciano

    01/23/2021 13:52

  • Tiffany Michelle

    ok. I'm obsessed over this book binged it in a day. when is next update? I need more. lol

    01/22/2021 02:08

  • Sammy Jameson

    All my chapters are locked 🔒 Anyone else? I paid for it so I’m confused 🤷‍♀️

    01/21/2021 09:29

  • SINNOCENT

    "Forbidden Mates" by Jessica Hall uses the same cover photo- heads up.

    01/21/2021 05:54

  • Taina Iosefo

    I love how Seth enjoys her time with each guy. But I have noticed and I may be wrong but when she’s with Luciano she never really thinks of the other Alphas like she does when she’s with the others. Like it’s only Seth and Luciano and her mind is only on that. Unlike when she’s with the other Alphas she thinks of each of them. I don’t know just thinking her best choice would be Luciano if she would just hear him out with his reasonings of what/why he did what he did.

    01/20/2021 14:20

  • Jennifer Ballard

    I feel like she could be happy with any of them, but maybe Luciano is the one that needs her?

    01/20/2021 12:33

  • Kim Cook Paige

    Thank You, for the update. It made my morning ! 🥰

    01/20/2021 09:55

  • Sydney Daniels

    did the name of the book change? i got a new phone and had trouble finding the book at first

    01/18/2021 22:59

  • Taina Iosefo

    OMG .... was so excited to have all these updates!! Still wanting Luciano to find Seth and win her back. The others are good to her and she feels some kind of connection with each of them but still rooting for Luciano and Seth!! hehehe

    01/18/2021 18:59

  • HeatherM1

    Felt spoiled with all the updates!! Thank you 🙏🏻 I love this story. I’m still pulling for her to end up with Luciano. I can’t wait to see where this story goes.

    01/18/2021 16:22

  • Kelly Rohrer

    welll whooops Dominic 🤣🤣

    01/18/2021 12:44

  • Sammy Jameson

    OMG! 3 chapters?! I’m running around my house super excited. My kids think I’m crazy 😝

    01/18/2021 12:34

  • Kim Cook Paige

    EEEeeeekkkkkkk ! (squealing) Thank You, for these updates. 😘

    01/18/2021 09:44

  • Alaire

    I bet Dominic has some crazy ex😂😂 can't wait lol

    01/18/2021 08:57

  • Sammy Jameson

    I’m stalking this book. Anyone else check every few hours for new chapters? 😆

    01/18/2021 00:06

  • Kelly Rohrer

    chapterrrrrrrrrssssssssssss please 😊💜

    01/17/2021 11:06

  • Lina Josh Arlo Walls

    loving this book🥰

    01/16/2021 22:00

  • cdunlap629@yahoo.com

    When is the next update to this juicy story??!!

    01/16/2021 00:07

  • Edie Gyorki

    is there an update schedule to this story?

    01/15/2021 16:20

  • ShyShy

    We’re finally getting to the juicy parts!!! I can’t wait to read what happens next 😌

    01/13/2021 22:32

  • Squid Silvi

    lol they keep miss spelling Henry’s name I feel bad for henry

    01/13/2021 20:06

  • Taina Iosefo

    OMG.... Seth I hope really does get to have some time to think. But I also hope she’ll be able to give Luciano a chance to explain everything. I can’t believe Seth’s biological father is gonna die and by the hands of Luciano. I hope he doesn’t just because he may disqualified in the competition and lose the chance to be King. Something he’s wanted. Still rooting for Seth and Luciano.

    01/13/2021 14:35

  • Kelly Rohrer

    ok so I have been a little torn - I REALLY hope beyond hope that Seth ends up with Luciano💜 I mean he is rough around the edges BUT she seems to have a TRUE care, concern and dare I say love for her 🥰 I hope he rods the world of her useless idiot bio-dad. Luciano would offer her true freedom if he does.

    01/13/2021 11:38

  • Sammy Jameson

    👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼 Love this ❤️❤️

    01/13/2021 08:07

  • olliesea_bengals

    Daaammmnnnn! Seth’s dad is about to get his comeuppance!!!

    01/13/2021 07:20

  • Allison Underdonk Peterman

    those two are definitely up to something. they left something out when talking to Seth. A threesome maybe? share rooms? I can't wait to find out. curious what Luciano will say or do right now. will he find out who she's with?

    01/13/2021 05:59

  • Edie Gyorki

    Please complete! I've binge read the whole thing on the weekend, and now I am going through withdrawal.

    01/12/2021 15:57

  • SINNOCENT

    Hope everything is well... we haven't heard from you as much recently. Even if it's not to update, you have a lot of folks here for ya.

    01/12/2021 07:57

  • Taina Iosefo

    I really wish Seth would here Luciano out about what he did. Why again did he call her dad?? It’s such a shame that he could’ve had he rid he didn’t do that.

    01/11/2021 02:52
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