Hate War Comments

mybella

the story is interesting enough I would keep reading if it wasn't for the author stretching the story by repeating the end of each chapter in the next one.

does anything new ever happen?

what happened to chapter 13? I feel like I'm missing alot of info from them at the kickboxing gym to he back in her hotel room saying and that's how it ended the one moth stay. what am I missing?

I really like the story, but it’s extremely Repetitive. I want to see how the two main characters end up.. 40 chapters in and it’s still the same thing.. They have the same arguments about the same things, she doesn’t want him to touch her, he won’t let her go... Great story and I love the personalities of the characters, but their story doesn’t progress.