The Alpha’s Vengeance Comments

  • Topaz

    t5y8 Good story but not a smooth flow eg the relationship between Lily and the Alpha it feels rushed

    04/16/2023 18:05

  • Oni Blah

    t5y8 I’m hooked on this book. I’m interested in what’s going on with her and the alpha

    04/14/2023 21:58

  • Caitlin Sullivan

    t5y8..... interesting start to the book. I hope he becomes a good mate and she comes into her own

    04/14/2023 21:39

  • Bianca Bratu

    t5y8 I will surely add this story to my library since I like it very much and it sounds like it could be interesting

    04/14/2023 15:18

  • Maria Cecilia Reyes-Meliton

    t5y8 This story started out well but seemed to lose its original steam and started to drag on later.

    04/14/2023 14:29

  • Me Myself

    t5y8 this book has a really good opening chapter, it has good writing and a good pace. I am adding it to my library.

    04/14/2023 11:56

  • Gemma Butler

    t5y8 This book sounds like it could be interesting. I’ve added it to my library to read later.

    04/14/2023 11:06

  • kimberley

    t5y8 this story is really intriguing, I couldn’t put it down, really can’t wait to see how this story ends

    04/14/2023 06:12

  • Debra Sykes

    t5y8 liking it so far hopefully will stay that way saved to library for later date

    04/14/2023 05:16

  • Jasmine Hurley

    t5y8 The first chapter starts strong and grabbed my attention immediately. I will be adding this to my library!

    04/14/2023 03:46

  • Ashley

    t5y8 I'm currently reading this story and I really like it and can't wait to see how it ends.

    04/14/2023 03:22

  • T Malloy

    t5y8 not sure about this one but I won't knock it till I try it so we will see

    04/14/2023 02:08

  • Michelle Fairbanks-goodsky

    is the book finished?

    09/18/2022 22:30

  • Aliki

    Lily the supposed heroine is stupid. A book not for me, but storyline was interesting enough to make me want to finish the story. Frustrating that they are being chased by dangerous criminals but once again still have time for a quickie. 🤦‍♀️. In fact those sex scenes were sqeezed in on every scene.

    08/07/2022 15:07

  • Reader-148264

    that was a great book I really enjoyed your story💜

    09/20/2021 02:44

  • Stacy Butler

    do they not mark each other? what about mind linking or talking with there wolves? this is a really good story and a way different kind of werewolf story but there are many things left unanswered and i was wondering if thefe is more to the story?

    09/18/2021 03:17

  • Bedazzled

    over throw the alpha Derek 😱😱😱 yep I’d do the same too. I think he’s too soft as a leader wanting to live in peace but there’s a bigger problem and he wants nothing of that 🙄 Marcus is right for Lily

    09/16/2021 21:37

  • Bedazzled

    yah I found your book😍😍😍😍 so good

    09/16/2021 03:28

  • Kathy Williams

    keep up the great work, this book is on 🔥🔥🔥 I can't wait to read the next chapter

    05/18/2021 23:57

  • Inu Ookami

    hmm I dunno why but I don't enjoy the fact Lily have developed some sort of feeling with Marcuz. I still ship her with Derek and I feel like she didn't give him a chance at all :/ but that is just my opinion but I enjoy the book so far tho :)

    03/17/2021 20:54

  • Jessica Nicole

    A very special thank you to everyone who has read or is currently reading my book! It has been a wonderful journey and I appreciate each and every one of you 🥰 I can’t wait for you all to read my next book!

    02/05/2021 20:47

  • Jessica Nicole

    Hello Readers! I apologize for the delay in updates recently, I have been ill and just now recovering. I will be updating more going forward, thank you so much for your understanding and patience! And thank you for reading😊

    01/07/2021 17:44

  • BookDragon

    I really like this book but wish the updates were a bit longer and bit more content.

    01/07/2021 16:08

  • authura johnson

    enjoying this

    12/30/2020 02:20

  • Allana Walker

    okay... cassie has been too quiet for my liking... suspiciously quiet. I mean, I know she said she was leaving to get her head together or whatever. but, what if she was working with Lily's brother 😳

    12/11/2020 16:41

  • J C

    wow, what Derek did was unforgivable to me. Locking up someone he 'loves' for protection?! Nope that doesn't fly with me no matter what. I'm done with him. That being said, I love this story. Great job.

    11/24/2020 13:48

  • Sheila Fields Adkins

    Wow! I really need more now lol!

    11/24/2020 08:14

  • Corina Hanrahan

    https://anystories.page.link/Ny8P

    11/19/2020 23:42

  • Lidiane Barros

    they have to mark each other before she goes...

    11/16/2020 07:25

  • J C

    I was kinda hoping she'd pick both men after what Adele said, but I continue to love this book. Great job.

    11/15/2020 05:19

  • Sheila Fields Adkins

    I want so badly to keep reading this book! I am thankful for 2 chapters a night but when it’s going this good I don’t want to stop🥰❤️

    11/14/2020 11:08

  • Jessica Nicole

    Hey everyone! Keep reading, there are some exciting new chapters coming up!🥰

    11/13/2020 05:22

  • Sheila Fields Adkins

    I got sick to my stomach last night with the end of this chapter! I hope Lily flips out on both of them! I do hope to see Lily and Derek make it through this!

    11/13/2020 05:16

  • Lidiane Barros

    i dont know why ppl angry with Derek he has been so patient with Lily she never makes a decision about their relationship... he chose her from the moment they met. he kissed Cassie when he was DRUNK and heartbroken when Lily left. on the other hand Lily has been showing feelings for some guy she just met sober, fully aware of it while she bas a mate waiting for her. she doesn’t deserve Derek. she needs to make her mind and chase him.

    11/12/2020 12:06

  • Lidiane Barros

    this is horrible! he will go to cassie and Marcus will take advantage to “comfort “ ... if something physical happens between Derek and Cassie and Lily and Marcus I don’t think I wanna keep reading... he was harsh but rightful they are mates Lily should not be so confused... attraction is different than love I understand him she should go after him NOW. I dont like the way the story is going anymore ☹️ might just gice up on this one.

    11/12/2020 12:03

  • Jasmin Smith

    wow that's so messed up, my heart hurts for Lily, and Derek is just a hypocritic douche

    11/12/2020 08:20

  • J C

    I liked Lily and Derek, but now, I'm just done with him.

    11/12/2020 08:15

  • Allana Walker

    please don't make Cassie and Derek be together, he's playing right into Cassington hands and proving her words to Lily right. Still don't trust her. I hope something happens, like lily almost getting killed or something, to make Derek realise that he messed up, he messed up bad and she loves him. she should have told him that before she left. sorry, rambling, I'm just invested in the book and annoyed at Derek as if Lily was my best friend haha

    11/12/2020 06:43

  • Bernd Steffi Pfänder

    derek and cassie.... no no no this will ruin the book for me. 😭😭😭

    11/12/2020 05:33

  • Lidiane Barros

    yess ! ouhn Lily needs to say she loves him back ... oh I loved they spent night together I want more moments of then together. Marcus must be Cassie’s mate!

    11/08/2020 12:38

  • Lidiane Barros

    also it would be cool if Marcus ended uo being Cassie’s mate ? 😃🙌🏻❤️

    11/07/2020 09:17

  • Lidiane Barros

    im so happy they are back together 😊 but not even a little hug he deserves to come and rescue her then he needs to watch her crying holding onto Marcus 😢 I hope she doesn’t kiss Marcus again or di anything else ... even if she spends some time confused about her feelings dont act on them pls 🙏🏻☹️ Derek has been the best mate leaving his pack for her.

    11/07/2020 09:16

  • Lidiane Barros

    Derek has been so loving and patient with her from beginning while she fought the mate bond so I am upset that she even think about Marcus like it was choice poor Derek I don’t want to keep reading if this is gonna become a whole drama on their love story 😢

    11/06/2020 07:40

  • Sheila Fields Adkins

    Really loving this book so far! How many chapters will it have in total? I don’t want it to end!! ❤️

    11/05/2020 22:41

  • Allana Walker

    no. no. no. Don't do it Derek 😢😤

    11/01/2020 05:05

  • Rebecca Campbell

    I love the story line

    10/30/2020 19:55

  • DANIELLE DAVIS

    I look forward to the updates everyday. is this the end until the sequel?

    10/28/2020 13:52

  • Mandy Perlich

    how often do you update? I binge read this entire book in under 2 hours

    10/27/2020 04:35

  • Kathy Williams

    I have also found that there are chapters skipped in between and others that are unlocked....how can the story flow if there are chapters skipped? please check it out

    10/24/2020 13:31

  • Kathy Williams

    this story is so good....I wanna keep reading but I am still having the same problem with trying to get the coins to read more chapters....please check the app. I need to keep reading...🥺😭

    10/24/2020 13:21

  • Allana Walker

    I have a feeling Cassie will find out about what she told Mary, then tell Derrick hoping to drive a wedge between them. I hope he doesn't do anything stupid with Cassie though, I hate stories like that. the girl makes one wrong move and the man jumps into bed with the first she wolf for "revenge". hoping thats not the case, cause I love Derrick 😍. But, its not my book, author can do what they want lol. Great story so far 👍 xx

    10/24/2020 05:20

  • Luciana Tannous

    When is the next chapter coming out!! Absolutely love this book ❤️

    10/22/2020 23:49

  • Jessica Nicole

    Hey Everyone! Author here, just wanted to let you know if you’re having issues with buying coins, screenshot it and send it to the help center. Some people have been having problems and that’s what the app said to do so they can find out how to fix it! Thank you so much for reading!

    10/21/2020 12:54

  • Luna Wolf

    I sad I can't get coins

    10/20/2020 20:59

  • Kathy Williams

    i trying to gain more coins but when I click it keeps telling me...something went wrong...🙄

    10/20/2020 13:54

  • Kathy Williams

    this book has me on the edge of my seat it's so wonderfully written. I can't wait to read more....

    10/20/2020 13:44

  • Splash_ o_milk

    Im new to the app and I don't know if I have to purchase coins or not get to the next chapter. Can anyone help?😅

    10/20/2020 11:42

  • Lin

    how long does it take for the author to update?

    10/18/2020 21:18

  • Simone Malan

    It was so obviously Raphael

    10/18/2020 05:43

  • gem lover2

    I love this chapter 😍 I love the physical attraction struggling between the two of them. It's so well described.

    10/18/2020 01:38

  • life by the stream

    Hi😇

    10/18/2020 01:10
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