One is not enough Comments
Rafael
#f8d1# ooooo. I like the introduction. I like the fact that the males get mated season. maybe is the first time that I read this. usually is the females. I will add it in my library but I am going to read it when it's finished. I don't like to wait.
03/31/2023 23:37Stacey Stratton
f8d1 this sounds like an interesting story! Iโll probably wait till itโs completed to read it though. hopefully itโs finished soon!
03/31/2023 23:16Vicki usher
f8d1# haven't started this book yet has been in my library for a little time as the reviews said it was incomplete and wanted to wait till it was finished.
03/31/2023 23:04lunabug
to those of you reading this story I hope you will read this comment the story hasn't been updated and over a year there are rumors that the writer who wrote this has passed away or is not going to complete it so it is an incomplete story and has been for over a year.
12/04/2022 19:37Barbara Jo Anderson
the Story is incomplete and havenโt been updated. hate feeling like I waisted my money.
08/10/2022 20:55Regina Moore
you no I keep hearing about punishment for khan what about forgiveness we are what we remember
08/10/2022 02:52Mamabird
I'm just worried about the author and few Ive read had past one. i hope that's not the case.
07/21/2022 10:20Lynn Hepburn
last update appears to be 4/2021. I'm just not willing to start yet another abandoned story.
07/04/2022 15:02Samantha Crisman
oh my gosh. reading this on my last day working while also pregnant and I kinda wanna cry for Indie.
07/01/2022 06:22Barbara Jo Anderson
will there be more to the story?
05/27/2022 03:35Amber
is this book completed or ongoing because it seems to not have been updated in awhile
04/07/2022 18:17Steph Oakley
This is a good book. Wondering when this will be updated or completed. Please let me/us know.
03/30/2022 13:16Barbra Gilley
02/28/2022 20:16S M
is the story somewhere else
02/22/2022 06:50Victoria Murray
Have you abandoned this story?
01/29/2022 04:50Loud Mouth Beauty
So Khal died because he wasn't going to accept her kinda pretentious!
01/20/2022 14:29Sonia Hood
This is a good start to this story.
01/12/2022 19:48Jackie Fadell Jackson
I'm about to start, is it as good as it seems it's going to be?
01/01/2022 13:43Keira Taylor
when will the next chapter be out???????????????
12/22/2021 22:24AZ Trouble
12-10-21: Finished Chapter 68. The story was wonderfully written and I loved the ending. Great job author.
12/11/2021 05:16Anita Mara
Hi, is the story complete?
12/05/2021 00:44Jenitta Haris-d
Is Ryan the actual alpha of this pack they haven't said for sure so I could see indie havis the indie having the alpha of both packs coming for her wanting her
11/21/2021 00:54Jenitta Haris-d
i I'm not sure which alpha is taking talking which person is thinking or talking I have a feeling that both the alphabet and the alphabet and the alphabet are both I'm a new pack I'll both hurt mates but it's confusing reading to get to that part so that part someone can change it say it whatever it is please get to the point and make it not so worthy worthy what's the word sometimes do not make a difference or meaning the same thing as what you are which leads me to believe that you are not from it's not from here the US which is not bad as your translation of the story is is not coming out the way that you would like for uswod really lomwbetter POV*S as. I am also speaking into my phone so it may not sound as correct as it needs to be the way the sentences flow but I am loving your story so far but I had to give my criticisms on what I think and how things are wording and how things are going
11/20/2021 10:08Jenitta Haris-d
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11/20/2021 09:52B Beau L
was Indy's Dad sold to the witch in the cave by Khals Dad?! ๐คฏ
11/17/2021 21:31Deniese M.
Hi was really enjoying the story still waiting on update .
11/16/2021 13:48AZ Trouble
11-01-21: Just finished reading Ch 68. The storyline has been good so far, but there are still some unanswered questions. Some commenters have mentioned that it hasnโt been updated in awhile. I hope that isnโt the case.
11/02/2021 06:27April Borchers
What does her wolf look like other than blue eyes I have no clue
10/30/2021 20:00Quinisee
is this book abandoned?
10/23/2021 11:22Laryssa Martins
Hi! Is this story still ongoing or has it been abandoned? Just asking before I start reading :)
10/13/2021 20:38Stephanie Foster
is there anymore chapters coming?
10/04/2021 17:58Elizabeth Lanzi
Enjoying so far.
10/02/2021 04:37Deniese M.
Lovely stories so far can't wait to continue reading
10/01/2021 22:29Krystal Kitchen
I love this story. yes she deserves love with a mate just like every other wolf out there!
10/01/2021 18:02Rie Harley
thus story is way better then I thought
10/01/2021 01:22Kayla Bertram
love it so far
09/30/2021 18:56Trinity Froehlich
love it
09/30/2021 11:48Angela Rolfe
update please also referring back to the 1st ultrasound they're talking with the doctor and the doctor said "opportunity" to miscarry shouldn't that be "possibly"
09/21/2021 12:46Angela Rolfe
update please also referring back to the 1st ultrasound they're talking with the doctor and the doctor said "opportunity" to miscarry shouldn't that be "possibly"
09/21/2021 12:46Angela Rolfe
update please also referring back to the 1st ultrasound they're talking with the doctor and the doctor said "opportunity" to miscarry shouldn't that be "possibly"
09/21/2021 12:46Angela Rolfe
update please also referring back to the 1st ultrasound they're talking with the doctor and the doctor said "opportunity" to miscarry shouldn't that be "possibly"
09/21/2021 12:46Jenny Best Camacho
LOVE IT !!!
09/18/2021 05:30Stacey Manning
I wonder if the writer was in dispute with the platform and if it is available elsewhere. Iโve seen this happen a couple of times now.
09/13/2021 17:58E R
I've gone through the comments and the last I see from the Author is 4-5-2021. Are more updates coming or is the story done? it still says ongoing....?
09/10/2021 11:49sotporcha
itโs been a while, can we get an update please
09/09/2021 17:14Stngray3
It feel like the story has been abandoned which sucks because itโs been good so far. I really want to know what happens nextโฆ. Itโs been months, please start updating againโฆ.
09/09/2021 15:07Victoria Murray
How often do they update?
09/01/2021 01:49Jessica Lei' Young
This is a good one, thank you for it ๐
08/30/2021 06:23Binge Reader
Author - can you please let us know if you will continue this book. I understand things happen sometimes to stop the writing process, but can you at least let us know your intentions?
08/25/2021 16:53Jody Carroll
like how it's going so far but I thought the other woman was actually her. birth mom
08/19/2021 08:42Remy Bergez
I up to 41! Personally I'm surprised the Brothers are feeling jealous this is different from other twin mate stories I've read. Why is Indy still giving Khal a 2nd thought, sure the mate bond but Now that she is a Royal and powerful he will accept her but when she was an Omega he called her horrible names ? How Can she just forgive & forget?? Indy needs to figure it out! Story is very interesting tho so I will keep reading!!!
08/14/2021 12:41Nicole Bennett
is this book complete or will there be updates?
08/12/2021 00:19Manuela Mรผllauer
Is there an update coming or is it finished? Unfinished and no end in sight?
08/11/2021 17:19Vicki Trewella
any updates soon? please???
08/08/2021 06:58Tanya R Smith
I donโt know if chapter 68 is the final but if it is you left a lot of things hanging and unanswered I hope you will be writing another bio to address them or make new chapters
08/06/2021 14:49Laraib Yousaf
bruh my eldest daughter was born in 2015 and her birthday is on 2nd of june lmao ๐
08/05/2021 02:02erin c
When was this last updated and when will it be again?
08/05/2021 01:38Vicki Trewella
Have really enjoyed the story so far ๐ฅฐ Thanks
08/04/2021 06:32Lisa Casalez
I really like this book so far.
08/02/2021 17:48CherryBlossom
Please complete the book, before i read, the updates take too long.
08/02/2021 07:00Binge Reader
is this book done? There hasnโt been an update in a long time.
07/27/2021 22:15Binge Reader
patiently waiting for an update!
07/17/2021 04:34Shanalyn Hartzell
damn 5"8 tall girl
07/14/2021 02:26Vali
the part where Ryan says I love big buttsโฆ.I started singing โI like big butts and I can not lie.โ song.
07/11/2021 17:32Dani Udelhofen
I hope all is well and you're able to update soon. Loving this book!
07/04/2021 06:01Robinanne
love it!
06/27/2021 21:58Sunrise
i was hoping so much that raki would win and ask hunter to lead by his side :(. he's already been through so much and sure didn't deserve another shot to his ego and self :-(
06/26/2021 14:28Reader-371843
loving it!!! hope she makes her ex Alpha squirm!!!
06/25/2021 17:46Cyra Wolfire
lolz good alpha khal needed an attitude adjustment but can Indy reject him without consequences abs just keep the hot brothers? who accepted her right from the start!
06/25/2021 11:11Cyra Wolfire
omg yaaasss I saw that coming but please please tell me that scott is her mate too and she gets hot twins and her previous alpha mate can suck it!
06/25/2021 10:28Cyra Wolfire
ooohhh this is getting good!! and her former alpha is such a dickwad!
06/25/2021 10:07Debra Conklin
yes they need each other, now she can be happy
06/25/2021 09:20Siobhan R
I was so into it that I wanted to hold my spot. I took a screenshot for that purpose only. itโs my first book on this site. itโs awesome so far!
06/25/2021 05:05Melissa Conaway
was that the end? or will there be more to this book? ๐ค
06/21/2021 19:39Rebeca Castro
nooooooo why did you tellll himmmmm that was big mistake
06/09/2021 03:37Melissa Conaway
please say theirs more to come! I love this book!
06/06/2021 17:12Stephanie Schneider
I'm enjoying the story so far, and can't wait to read more.
06/06/2021 05:33Dani Udelhofen
This story is going well. It hurts to know she had to go through such termoil and lost the babies. I hope she is able to recover and have more children. I feel for Raki but I know he'll be happy cuz of his mate. Please update soon. xoxo keep up the great work
06/06/2021 00:41elle
Ginang dont stand for lady,,,Ginang is for married and older lady,,,since indy is not married it's should be Binibini
06/05/2021 16:24Jen Adams
any idea about the next update?
05/15/2021 10:58Donna Moncus
please update. I love this story
05/02/2021 04:46Donna Moncus
so glad you are back to updates. I hope everything is going ok for you
04/18/2021 17:22Bella Jersey 2
then alpha a$$hole will want her
04/17/2021 07:42Stacey Manning
I cried when Indy lost the pups. I still cry for the ones I lost. and itโs been 14 years since the last one. I was blessed with my second child after the last miscarriage and we did not try for another.
04/07/2021 18:49Bertina Delta
Hi dear readers - I want you to know I was not able to update the past week, due to personal issues. I'm so sorry! But I'm still recovering and clearing up the mess this week, so I'm asking for a bit more patient! I'm not sure when I'll update this week... I'm planning to update at least one (bigger) chapter, but I can't tell when.I hope you understand... Stay safe, stay strong! xx^B.
04/05/2021 08:48Bella Jersey 2
twelve: secrets always find a way of coming home
03/28/2021 01:26Bella Jersey 2
eleven: I like the has principals and has the money to keep them
03/27/2021 23:38Bella Jersey 2
eleven: I die Indy her pain is so immense. she just what any other person deserves
03/27/2021 23:36Alena O Barry
So sorry that Indy lost her pups. It took me almost a year to recover from my miscarriage.
03/18/2021 23:13Reader-571703
please donโt make her lose one they are important
03/14/2021 15:17sotporcha
I love the story but this chapter was way to short and it was a little boring
03/13/2021 08:46Joan Carter
Awesome story Wonder if thereโs going to be a sequel xx
03/11/2021 13:52Joan Carter
Loving this book โค๏ธโค๏ธ
03/10/2021 22:21Bella Jersey 2
chapter 10: Iโm glad Fiona is moving on with the mating process
03/05/2021 04:10Bella Jersey 2
chapter 9: and the hits just keep one coming
03/04/2021 03:29Bella Jersey 2
chapter 8: what new problems are coming our way?
03/04/2021 02:00Bella Jersey 2
chapter 8: you do feel bad for Indy. you can Fiona to be happy but SO scared of being alone
03/04/2021 01:59Bella Jersey 2
chapter 8: itโs not ra.pe it this weird world autocorrect. it doesnโt sound like every woman likes it
03/04/2021 01:54Bella Jersey 2
chapter 7: yay Fi found her mate. itโs not some mating season garbage. mating season some woman are ra.ped. Fi is a survivor of mating season
03/03/2021 21:30Bella Jersey 2
six for real: is him and his wolf thinking because itโs mating season think he has sexual rights to them?
03/03/2021 18:06