Eternal Kingdom Comments

  • Me Myself

    x2c4 great start to this book. realizing that it is part of a trilogy means I will read the other books first

    04/30/2023 00:27

  • Sammy

    x2c4 I read a few chapters and decided to give this story a try but I first want to finish the 1st two books in the series. Added to my library and glad that this book is completed.

    04/28/2023 23:14

  • Karooke

    x2c4 mmh das Buch ist eher nichts für mich.. Nichts spannendes im Intro.. Man kann ja nicht alles toll finden

    04/28/2023 21:14

  • Jan T

    x2c4 #x2c4 I'll read book 1 and 2 first. it's always nice when stories are in a series. great comments too so I'm looking forward to reading all 3 books

    04/28/2023 18:22

  • Debra Sykes

    x2c4 I now have all 3 books saved in my library hoping they are as good as the comments and intro is

    04/28/2023 06:06

  • Ashley

    x2c4 I will have to read the first two before starting this one. It seems like the kind of story I would like.

    04/28/2023 04:59

  • Jenna Mc Augustine

    X2c4 added the entire series to my library. Based on the little i read I think its going to be a good read.

    04/28/2023 03:47

  • Claire

    x2c4 some grammar mistakes but overall it sounds interesting to read and I am going to check on the first book to this one next

    04/28/2023 00:55

  • Michelle Campbell

    also a story with James and his sister!

    09/18/2022 12:50

  • Sidney Stacy

    what happened to Luna after being kidnapped?

    04/30/2022 02:10

  • Migdalia Garcia

    Loved the book but not planning to finish it after reading about Bastion's death...in addition to her infidelity which is where I left off. she didn't even consider the pain that he would go through.

    01/16/2022 22:10

  • Rebecca Farmer

    loved this series can't wait for more!!!!!! good job

    07/22/2021 21:27

  • miasiacheyenne

    I’m so sad over Bas, I loved him. he went through so much for her and never wavered. he needed the happy ending but this ending is just as amazing

    05/07/2021 04:16

  • Sharon Franklin Mayo

    I liked this series but why tf couldn't Rory die! Bas had lost so much and stayed by her side. Bas needs to have his happy ending!!!

    05/04/2021 20:19

  • Victoria Brinson

    love it! glad it had a good ending! I will miss Bas though! ❤️

    04/16/2021 14:44

  • Victoria Brinson

    she pisses me off. You are now engaged and risk his life for someone who betrayed you. totally understand that she once loved him but really... smh. good story! but she needs to get herself together!

    04/16/2021 14:12

  • bloodshot1004

    This series is awesome, you use the right touch of detail and emotion. Couldn't stop reading it until... Bas' death. That one hit hard, he was always so selfless and deserved so much more than what he was dealt. (I know, not everything is fair and always happy😉) I understand you're working on more stories but I'd shamelessly beg for mini Bastion chapters.

    02/14/2021 20:25

  • Nicole Grace

    I love this! The entire series was amazing. But I have a question (could be considered a spoiler so stop reading if you don’t want one) when did Aria become immortal? Was it just implied from the power exchange or did I miss something reading too fast?

    02/14/2021 00:09

  • Yahaida Perez-Lemon

    I was SO HAPPY when she ended up with Lysander!!! Yaaaaaaaaaasssss!!!! I would LOVE another book about the kids!!!! or just another book talks about all the cliffhangers. Like what happened to Luna after she escaped? And WHO is the Moon God?! And how did Aria become immortal?! Also WHAT was Cory? Because he obviously wasn't just a wolf (or vampire?). They kept saying how his eyes looked like Luna's but how is that possible?! I remembered Aria saying she had her suspicions but she wasn't going to voice them.

    02/07/2021 04:03

  • JamieHichew

    Loved this series!!!! definitely shed lots of tears when Bas died, but was very happy with the ending 💗

    01/21/2021 04:49

  • Kaylyn

    this series is beyond my favorite! I cant wait to read more books involving these characters!

    12/27/2020 21:28

  • crystal lambrakis

    what are the names of the first two books? so I can read in order please :)

    12/23/2020 21:21

  • Deb Warren

    This series was amazing. loved it!!! Cried when Bas died and when she saw him again. Needed tissues. can’t wait for the next series.

    12/19/2020 22:22

  • Legend of Gru

    I absolutely enjoyed reading this series. So many plot twists and drama! My heart broke when Bas died and I liked how the relationship between Lysander and Aria was developed from the beginning of the first book, her initial attraction towards him and all. I do wonder what happened to Luna, there wasn’t much fleshed out on her and I was expecting her to play a larger role in this final book, but it’s cool. Even though your books aren’t primarily action centred, I did expect a bit more build up and tension especially with the ‘big bosses’ or main antagonists in each book instead of a one or two chapter fight scene. Having them fleshed out a bit more. Other than that, I’m quite happy with how the book ended along with its unpredictable nature and lovable characters 🙂

    12/11/2020 12:16

  • Loni Johnson

    I cant wait to read more of your books. I greatly enjoy reading your stories! you mix a little bit of everything with just the right amount of details. I'm excited for the next few stories to come.

    12/05/2020 18:27

  • hkcamp31

    I have read every book you have on here and cant wait for the next. I read somewhere that you have another coming soon. Do you know when we should expect it to come out?

    12/02/2020 19:48

  • Whitney Coffee

    I am already sad that this is the last installment of this series. I love it and am super nervous to see how it ends!

    11/22/2020 20:45

  • Holly Mcginnis

    So this is by far the best series I have read in a very long time. You are a super talented writer. I cried like a baby during this last book. You got me straight in the feels. I am still crying now.... maybe because it is over. You can't help but fall hopelessly in love with all the men in this book. I just cant say enough about this series. thank you for taking us on this journey and I cant wait to read more of your work!

    11/13/2020 23:09

  • Krissy

    so I've only just started but wtf Rory... I liked him and now he's turning all selfish and evil 😭 whhyyyyyy

    11/13/2020 11:23

  • Abibrewster

    Okay, first of all.... THE BEST SERIES ON HERE BY FAR! Talk about tear-filled chapters 😭 When she saw Bas, James & her dad the string that held my tears together just snapped. The small yet major conversation they had was perfect! Secondly, I love that they allowed Rory to be in his sons life. Will James find out on his own? Most likely. Will it cause drama in the future? Most likely. But I love it! Thirdly, their pregnancy was a surprise!! I love the fact that Lysander did not know until she did. However, he said that ‘this was the first time he didn’t know’ does that mean he’s got more kids out there???? 😱 Lastly, I’m bummed that the series has ended!! I’ll be keeping up with the other books you put out. You are an amazing writer and have such a creative mind! 💜 I will definitely miss talking to you. I enjoyed the back and forth! 😂

    11/12/2020 09:44

  • Trish Krips

    Wonderful story❤️ I’m so happy she got to see the three. I was so team Rory but I’m actually happy for her and Lysander and love the ending😊

    11/12/2020 08:04

  • amy.

    Well done👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻 I am SO happy she got to see her 3 men! It's something I never thought of but I seriously helps me feel better about how they were taken from her! You are so awesome (said it a million times😂)!! I can't even put in to words how amazing your writing skills are❤ You put all the feels into these 3 stories & I loved them.

    11/12/2020 02:28

  • Heather

    such an amazing book! I have now read all of your stories and loved each one! can't wait to see what's next! well done! 🙌🏻🙌🏻🙌🏻❤️❤️❤️

    11/11/2020 23:41

  • Heather

    i was not emotionally prepared for book 3 😭😭😭😭😭 so many changes. hate Rory. ugly cried big time for Bas.....he deserved so much better, Ly is still awesome as always and Ari I'm still raising an eyebrow at.....but Bas.....omg.........

    11/11/2020 14:00

  • Alley-cat

    We really are in the homestretch! For the sake of continuity, I will be releasing the ending to the book all at once, which will be 6-8 chapters, in two days or so. So take a breath, and think happy thoughts in the meantime. :)

    11/10/2020 18:23

  • Ashley Mclagan Bonds

    loving the new book so far..... i can't believe rory and I cried so hard for bas but still loving every chapter cant wait for new updates

    11/09/2020 21:26

  • erin genovese

    I have officially read all of your books on this app lol. and damn I love Lysander! haha

    11/09/2020 05:58

  • Alley-cat

    For anyone interested in following my stories, participating in contests, or talking theories, I created a Twitter account under "Alley-Cat". Make sure to follow me!

    11/09/2020 00:28

  • Alley-cat

    For anyone interested in following my stories, participating in contests, or talking theories, I created a Twitter account under "Alley-Cat". Make sure to follow me!

    11/09/2020 00:21

  • Alley-cat

    For those who were wondering what kind of lover Lysander was... Things may get a bit kinky in the next couple chapters. (Naturally had to take a little break before things got too heavy with the war.) You have been warned. :)

    11/08/2020 23:43

  • natalie grumet

    I can't wait to read the next chapter, but at the same time I don't want the story to end. Great writing!

    11/08/2020 03:34

  • Tara Hogenbirk

    why Bas!?! Rory would have had it coming and deserved it but not Bas 😭😭

    11/07/2020 15:41

  • Angela Little

    I cant believe Bas is dead 🥺 I hope she kills Rory herself 🤬! Can't wait to see what happens between her and Lysander

    11/07/2020 12:41

  • Fran

    Nooo... nooo 😭 that can’t be right?? *frantically rereads* 😭😭😭

    11/07/2020 10:15

  • J C

    😯😟🥺😭 I...I'm speechless...I don't know what to say. It was so good...but...WHY?!

    11/07/2020 03:56

  • Ashley Bowen

    NEED MORE CHAPTERS. What happened? OMG. Your stories are wonderful so addicting. cant wait till more updates...

    11/06/2020 22:37

  • Janel Davis

    I knew Rory didn't have the kids. how long does he think he can get away with Aria not noticing they're missing

    11/06/2020 20:07

  • Bonnie Lancaster

    Wow, you really are an amazing writer. I've read all your stories now and am addicted to your creativity and writing style. Thank you for sharing your talents with us and please please PLEASE keep writing stories. I am in love with reading them.

    11/06/2020 07:51

  • Alley-cat

    Hello readers! Just updating you all on today's posting. I am out of the house all day for health related issues so it wont be until really late tonight or early tomorrow that I post our next chapters. Thank you a bunch!

    11/05/2020 17:49

  • Fran

    Wait! but if she lost all her memory of Bas, then how does she not think it’s strange that her daughter is a wolf???

    11/05/2020 08:56

  • Angela Little

    Ughhhh....where is Bastion and Lysander this cant be happening!!!! Rory can't win this way!!! And poor Bastion losing his babies 😢

    11/04/2020 20:00

  • Samantha Arthur

    Absolutely addicted! Constantly checking for updates!

    11/04/2020 14:17

  • amy.

    is anyone else having problems with all your paid chapters being locked again? & yes I'm logged into my same account

    11/04/2020 07:55

  • Angela Little

    This story has me addicted... can't wait for more...

    11/04/2020 01:18

  • erin genovese

    I hate characters like this. What a stupid thing to do. Instead of just telling the truth which would come out anyway you run away? So damn stupid

    11/03/2020 21:47

  • Ashlee Swafford

    going to have a heart attack before this book is done. obsessively checking for updates... this is just too good. absolutely in love with this story and your writing. can’t wait to know how it ends but don’t want it to be over!

    11/03/2020 21:11

  • Tara Hogenbirk

    so who caught them... Rory or Bastion 🤔.... im not a super fan of Aria anymore she's doing Bastion dirty and that's not cool. I feel bad for Rory, he let his insecurities and fears get thr best of him. and as much as I want to like Lysander I cant he supposed to be their God and this is how he behaves? hes def looking out for thr best interest of his people while he's getting sucked off from Aria👌

    11/03/2020 14:09

  • amy.

    You are seriously the best! Love the passion you obviously have for writting ❤ 😊

    11/03/2020 05:34

  • J C

    I want them all to be happy together as 4 mates, i love each character, but Rory needs to get his head out of his ass. 😭You're killing me smalls (I hope you know that reference).

    11/02/2020 04:35

  • J C

    Can't they all just be happy together. 😭 You're killing me, smalls. (I hope you get that reference).

    11/02/2020 04:12

  • erin genovese

    I hope Aria rejects the bond with Rory. and I have loved Lysander since the first book!

    11/01/2020 19:15

  • amy.

    WOW!!! I love how long the chapter are!! But those 2 just had my heart jumping in the chest!! That last one was the most emotional from all 3 books😭😫

    10/31/2020 06:40

  • Reader-627212

    I’m in love with Lysander :)

    10/29/2020 23:29

  • Angela Little

    Roy is self destructing... I thought the image was of her and Lysander when she took out the Sire am I wrong??

    10/29/2020 20:35

  • J C

    Ok, again, I love this story it's so well written and the plot is interesting and engaging. I ship EVERYONE! But is Rory doing some kinda self sacrificing/sabotaging thing cause of the oracles vision.

    10/29/2020 18:55

  • Janel Davis

    I'm stressed, lol. those last four chapters left me all kinds of anxious. what is rory doing?!?! great job I'm definitely invested!

    10/28/2020 21:25

  • Abibrewster

    Rory is on the road to his own destruction. He is carrying a big weight that is rapidly eating away at him. Also, the fact that it stopped on her meeting with Lysander and him being my favorite has me on edge! 😂 I need more!!!

    10/28/2020 17:36

  • amy.

    Love it already! I'm so stuck between reading them each day when you update & waiting till I can read more at once! Its just such a good story! Hard not to read.. always wanting more😁

    10/28/2020 16:30
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