The Muse Comments

  • Kaylyn Swanson

    f5g9 That introduction has me hooked right from the get go, can't wait to see where their love story goes from here.

    04/22/2023 02:31

  • Bizzybee🐝🌸

    f5g9 I love these kinds of books it’s like a forbidden treasure and I only read mature books so I’m definitely adding this one to the library

    04/22/2023 02:10

  • Jenna Mc Augustine

    f5g9 the introduction sold it. I have a few friends like Danny and Isabella they mean well

    04/22/2023 00:58

  • Martial Flor

    f5g9 okay, let's make it clear: the first few chapters are really good, and the synopsis alone is enough to sell this book. this story is sooo promising

    04/21/2023 23:36

  • Gemma Butler

    f5g9 This book sounds right up my street. Added straight to my library and I can’t wait to start reading it.

    04/21/2023 23:15

  • Linda Strandquist

    f5g9 yep that would be me in that situation. loved that she shook his hand. he will be good to her, soooo good.

    04/21/2023 23:04

  • Maria Guimaraes

    f5g9 I liked the introduction of the story, simple but enough, I started reading and I think I'm going to like the story

    04/21/2023 19:48

  • Marcia Sheard Whittaker

    f5g9 I usually don't read stories like this but I like this book so far. Definitely willing to give it a chance.

    04/21/2023 13:05

  • Amal Samir

    F5g9, I liked the way the intro introduce the story. I read few chapters and liked them

    04/21/2023 12:23

  • John Robinson

    f5g9 I like contemporary stories so am drawn to this. Having read the first few chapters it's easy to read and interested to find out what happens.

    04/21/2023 08:33

  • Jody Purple

    f5g9 great start to the story... and now the ring..... intrigue, suspense, easy and sexy reading

    04/21/2023 06:51

  • Marvin Vanderkust

    f5g9 oh boy , what It seems innocent girl , good character is drawn to bad boy, smut character

    04/21/2023 02:47

  • Dannii Kathleen

    i take it there is an issue with the second book, since there is only 2 chapters available and it looks like people have been waiting since last year for more of the story. a little disappointed as The muse was so good!

    04/27/2022 10:24

  • 13ang

    great story this writer is so underrated unfortunately they just disappeared and never finished the second book the artist it hurt

    03/27/2022 05:26

  • HauntedLife

    updates ???

    02/22/2022 20:36

  • Laura

    I'll start the story and add it to my library and wait until the author continues to update. Get well soon, hope everything is/will be ok πŸ€—

    01/09/2022 17:56

  • Rucinde-ann Edson

    A Long Island Iced Tea isn't fruity or blue.

    01/09/2022 07:48

  • Nicole Johnson

    i want to add this story to my library but from the comments its not finished and probably wont be.πŸ˜”πŸ˜”

    01/09/2022 06:36

  • Megsh826

    hey y’all, in case you track your reading… I just added this book to GoodReads. πŸ™‚ I wanted credit for it in my reading challenge, lol.

    12/31/2021 20:11

  • Kara Kirschner

    when was the last update?

    12/22/2021 18:12

  • Jenny Best Camacho

    excellent book

    12/12/2021 04:13

  • Felicia Seay

    wow. so good. can't wait for more.

    12/11/2021 14:29

  • Fareedah

    when is the next update?

    12/11/2021 09:40

  • Alley-cat

    I appreciate all of your patience during this time for me :) I do want to let you know that plan on releasing a chapter this week!

    10/25/2021 15:42

  • Melanie Graham Harris

    This really sucks that Alley-cat wrote this awesome story and didn’t even finish it. We are all left hanging!!

    08/14/2021 23:11

  • Lucy Xiong

    nice reading. need more please😭😭

    08/10/2021 07:16

  • Ginger Mikulskis

    I need moreeee this story is amazing! I binged it so fast!!!

    08/09/2021 01:45

  • Marla Weiss

    Alley-cat :) Loved the Muse & the 1st chapter of the Artist! Very sorry to hear tht you had to take a different job. Hoping & praying that it all works out fantastic for you and tht you will be able to write again soon! your books have been Whats kept me going in my current troubled times

    05/08/2021 15:25

  • Marla Weiss

    loved it and the little bit of the sequel tge Artist! looking forward to more soon!!!!

    05/08/2021 15:18

  • dianisz

    any update soon?

    05/05/2021 02:35

  • dianisz

    hahah!!!! good luck Joel!!!

    05/04/2021 23:42

  • Kamilah The One

    the name of the book is what got my attention

    03/31/2021 02:02

  • Jessica Miller

    i am so sorry u hv gone through that. i sm glad u got out. here's to u being all u can bπŸ˜˜πŸ’• rock on

    03/30/2021 02:42

  • JamieHichew

    Good luck with everything!! u made the right choice πŸ’—πŸ’—

    03/30/2021 01:28

  • Madison Alexa Gomez Medina

    many hopes and prayers in your journey towards healing πŸ™

    03/29/2021 22:41

  • Stella Moon

    the last update I was confused...

    03/29/2021 02:34

  • Stefany Johnson

    Good for you!! I watched my mother go through the same on top of physical abuse my entire life. I was 28 years old when my mom was finally able to get away and be herself. I am glad to see you are happy and working on you! keep it up ❀️

    03/29/2021 01:33

  • Nichole83pa

    oh wow!! I’m so sorry you had to deal with all that but I’m so happy you found someone that treats you like you deserve to be treated! Congratulations on everything and thank you for continuing to update!! I love your books!

    03/29/2021 01:18

  • Liz Mendez

    hey dear author β™₯ I'm gonna read every book you have written because this book is as wonderfully written as the others so thank you for your hard work! Be safe and healthy πŸ™πŸ½

    03/28/2021 03:44

  • Cristapris Amoah

    please hasn’t it been uploaded anywhere else? I can’t afford it. there’s nothing wrong with you charging but please πŸ™πŸ»

    03/26/2021 02:52

  • Carol Palmer

    updates????

    03/24/2021 02:44

  • Sam bear

    I'm Fucking like!

    03/23/2021 16:16

  • Michelle7979

    Is the author still updating? I know having a full time job and writing can be tough.

    03/15/2021 10:04

  • Lindsey Gellner

    will there be updates soon? love this book!

    03/07/2021 05:50

  • Lyndsey Jackson

    finished the muse in one day! absolutely loved it, started the artist and my heart is hurting for updates!! your writing is fantastic, I get a lot of 50 shades influence but I like that you switch between Joel and jens perspectives it really helps you connect to both characters, have you ever considered publishing?

    03/03/2021 10:57

  • Wycked Morgenstern

    Great first chapter. Just wanted to make sure I understood. Jen was drinking the long island iced tea, but I thought I read the description as blue, fruity and sweet. If that's the case, the long island iced tea looks like iced tea - it's brown and has citrus, sweeteners, and alcohol. Some tend to be pretty strong. ;-)

    02/25/2021 16:41

  • Deadass

    I love the book but I cannot afford it, have you uploaded it anywhere else

    02/24/2021 03:51

  • Emily von Pfahl

    I loved this! looking forward to updates

    02/22/2021 18:28

  • Stella Moon

    do you have a set day that you think you will be posting updates ?

    02/18/2021 01:58

  • Peaches & Flo

    hey alley-cat, when and how often can we expect updates. i love this story and cannot wait to read more

    02/11/2021 07:13

  • Abibrewster

    I loved the update!! Isaac is quickly becoming my fave! 😍

    02/10/2021 16:27

  • Nichole83pa

    Yay!! I was so pumped to see updates for this book!! Don’t feel bad for charging! Your work is fantastic and you deserve to be paid for your hard work! You keep churning out the chapters and I will gladly hand over my money!! πŸ˜‚β€οΈ

    02/08/2021 01:09

  • Alley-cat

    Hey guys! Just an update for you guys. There were some tough decisions I've had to make in regards to this book and its sequel. Originally it was going to be left free to read. But as some of you might know, I had a pretty big family emergency lately that has made that impossible for me. In other words, I need the funding. Another change is that I was planning on uploading the sequel all at once. However, I have changed my mind on that as well, since I was delayed for too long as is, I'd rather give you guys the content sooner. This means I will be uploading on a chapter to chapter basis. I will be doing this regularly. I hope you all understand and still choose to follow Joel and Jen on this adventure! ❀❀

    02/06/2021 22:25

  • JamieHichew

    Could not put this down!!! I loved it!!!! I need the next book! lol

    01/22/2021 22:28

  • Maud Jane

    love this stories, I live in a different country do roughly what month is book 2 due please?

    01/19/2021 20:02

  • terri4388

    Amazing book! could not put it down. so anxious for the sequel

    01/07/2021 02:52

  • Vanja Ε egmanoviΔ‡

    I'm glad that both Joel and Jen are showing real character growth. I just finnished the book in a day because it's well written and interesting. They both had their dumb moments but that is what makes the book more belivable because people do dumb things all the time. I don't like the cliffhanger at the end, but am happy knowing there will be a sequel. I would like to know more about Isaac as well in the next book. He seems like a genuine and caring guy, maybe a bit intiminating at first, and deffinetly kinky af, but, nevertheless, nice. I hope Jen and Joel get to be happy in the end with a few more kids. They both deserve it. 😁

    01/04/2021 22:11

  • Alley-cat

    Fun fact while you wait for a sequel! I once wrote a chapter between 28 and 29 that consisted of Jen going back to June's dorm in grief that ended with them having sex. It was cut for obvious reasons. πŸ€·β€β™€οΈ

    01/03/2021 03:50

  • Z Alice

    That Cliffhanger at the ens of 43 ia evil 😈 I need the next part ASAP! They can't catch a break. really hope it wasn't June who posted that shit! 😠

    12/31/2020 16:54

  • Z Alice

    just finished Ch 11 and she is very frustrating to be honest. Only because she brought up his "fan club" at a random moment which was really more cringy but the main reason is he said it'll be their secret and she immediately went into full shut down mode when he called her his friend yeah it's shitty and he annoyed me saying that but this is new and they haven't really discussed what this is yet so her reaction was little much to me for some reason but understandable. just annoyed she's going to rhe frat party. I guess it just seems slightly immature 🀷 Live her though and know she just needs time and they need to make things clearer between them

    12/30/2020 23:59

  • Reader-986715

    when does the next part come out!! it can’t end like this!!

    12/29/2020 23:10

  • meworks

    what a cliffhanger!

    12/24/2020 22:57

  • Legend of Gru

    I am looking forward to the sequel, really enjoyed reading this πŸ˜ƒ But you should be preparing lawyers for this, cliffhangers like these are illegal πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    12/23/2020 06:24

  • Legend of Gru

    Just out of curiousity, do you happen to like names that start with J? Jennifer, Joel, June Janet πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ If the baby is a boy, perhaps Jordan and if it’s a girl Jaylene??? πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    12/23/2020 06:19

  • Legend of Gru

    With the way Jen is right now (didn’t want people looking and thinking πŸ’­ oh my gosh, spoilers πŸ™†πŸΎβ€β™€οΈ), I believe Callie did things deliberately for her own selfish reasons and without taking Joel into consideration.

    12/23/2020 04:49

  • Adria Desautels

    wow... what an amazing book! I can’t wait for the sequel!! I have read all of your other books, but this by far is my favorite! keep the great stories coming!!

    12/23/2020 01:16

  • Legend of Gru

    Danny’s research on soulmates and romance is as good as my research πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    12/22/2020 22:12

  • hkcamp31

    This is so good. I love the inner strength that Jenn finds when the occasion calls for it. They have so much passion and speaking from experiance it is hard to keep inside certain boundaries. I hate what Joel did but I live his character and hope he will be ok. Issac though, I hope we hear more from him. I didnt think I would like him in the start but now he is one of my favorites. Thank you for all the updates. Your update timing keep me coming back. I cant wait to find out what happens next and see what else you come up with in the future.

    12/09/2020 02:00

  • Abibrewster

    πŸ–€πŸ–€πŸ–€πŸ–€

    12/07/2020 05:00

  • Alley-cat

    lol! for which part? her crazy friends or her run in with Joel??

    12/04/2020 00:26

  • amy.

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    12/03/2020 16:56
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