Promised to the Alphas Comments

  • Suzi de beer

    UPDATES!!!! I'm sorry for the long wait! Updates will be coming to day!

    03/28/2022 06:45

  • Jazmine Pratt

    when will the next update be?

    03/26/2022 02:35

  • olliesea_bengals

    when’s the next update???

    03/24/2022 02:07

  • Kelly LeAnn Parham

    When will there be an update?

    03/23/2022 00:43

  • Donna Grogan

    Great book hoping for a second book

    03/19/2022 02:40

  • Alyssa Roa

    what is the name of book 2???

    03/18/2022 14:46

  • Steph Oakley

    I really like this book. Please let me know when this book will be updated again.

    03/17/2022 17:28

  • Kelly LeAnn Parham

    Vanya is having a hard time with how Obsidian right now and meeting that other woman and him saying what he said..... definitely didn't help him at all!!!😔😔😔

    02/27/2022 20:46

  • Jazmine Pratt

    when will the next update be?

    02/27/2022 16:14

  • Patricia DeMorrow

    I really like this story but I dislike that its posted as complete when its really ongoing and there are weeks between updates. Please, Its hard to follow a book, even as good as this one when you never know if its finished or not, and when week/months go between releases. Please let us know if its truely done, complete, finished! I am putting this on a back burner till then and will reread when complete.

    02/25/2022 23:00

  • Cara

    when is the update

    02/22/2022 14:59

  • Reader-837668

    Iris is her sister and not her cousin.

    02/15/2022 20:08

  • Reader-837668

    I understand she’s upset by the things she can’t control, but I’m tired of her lashing out at the wrong people.

    02/14/2022 03:09

  • Rach Byrne

    hey so I'm a little confused, first of all in pervious chapters Obsidian was OK with Vanya touching him and secondly wouldn't they be cubs and not pups?

    02/13/2022 01:15

  • Freida Mask

    why not tell her that they love her

    02/12/2022 22:08

  • Freida Mask

    it keeps you coming for more

    02/12/2022 21:33

  • Kelly LeAnn Parham

    Patiently waiting for an update!! Hope all is well!!! Love your book!!

    02/12/2022 21:04

  • Reader-319903

    when do we get to read the rest?

    02/11/2022 04:18

  • Marie Yvette Apostol

    hi! completely hooked on the story here... when's the next update? why does it say complete when its still being updated?

    02/09/2022 17:33

  • Suzi de beer

    UPDATE ON UPDATES Hey amazing readers! I know that you're eagerly waiting on updates. I'm working on them! it's just taking longer than usual. This month, no this year hasn't been a good start. I'm struggling and going through some thing's that's affecring my writing. itshard to focus but I'm trying my best to get the chapters out. If I can't do daily updating, I'll be doing double updates whenever I can (as long as we don't get loadsheding (our power goes off)) Please be patient. I'm trying my hardest to get the chapters out as soon as they're done. Thank you all for reading, your support and constant comments that makes me smile everyday.

    02/07/2022 17:42

  • Bonnie Murray

    when is the next update?

    02/06/2022 22:27

  • louise hayward

    Your book had me hooked and I was addicted to it.. The way it ended, please tell me your doing another book? What did Vanya remember? You are a great writer and you grab the readers attention 100%

    02/06/2022 08:00

  • Reader-319903

    is there a continuation to this story?

    02/05/2022 22:28

  • LeeAnn Hogan

    it's a little confusing with the pride members. they're all well assimilated into the human world, but yet when taking things from their point of view they almost stumble over human things like Halloween, women's underwear and descriptive phrases used.

    02/05/2022 02:25

  • Judith Bianco

    nice read love the story line

    02/02/2022 14:36

  • Katie Gunter

    All three of these guys have a thing for her already. I'm wondering if they are going to share her?

    01/31/2022 08:42

  • Estrella _

    Hooked.

    01/31/2022 01:47

  • Wendy Eileen Tawhai

    isn't it sweet

    01/30/2022 06:16

  • reading star

    please tell me this is how it ends

    01/30/2022 02:28

  • Baba Ana

    how stories go in order?

    01/29/2022 13:16

  • Cole Elizabeth

    I think Dervim is at least

    01/29/2022 01:45

  • Jennifer Young

    lovin the book and can wait for an update take care of yourself first

    01/28/2022 19:26

  • Bethanie Marie Skinner

    loving the story so far can't wait for an update

    01/28/2022 14:48

  • N Hen-swis

    it says end please say there is another book coming it can't end like that.

    01/26/2022 19:30

  • Suzi de beer

    AUTHOR'S NOTE: Hey guys! I know you're dying for updates. I'm having some personal problems that's making it hard to focus on writing. I'm taking this weekend off but I'll be back on Monday with updates! Please accept my apology for the delays in updates. I know how much you hate to wait for books to be updated

    01/21/2022 11:18

  • Jazmine Pratt

    whens the next update I cant wait!

    01/20/2022 22:22

  • Karamea G

    Does anyone know where “Teaching Their Omega” (also by Suzi) disappeared to?

    01/19/2022 03:30

  • Arikka Smith

    Don't you dare do this 🥺🥺🥺 dont take them away from her she needs all three of them please let them be ok

    01/17/2022 02:38

  • Snow White

    Noooooo! This is finally happening (D&O) and something had to interrupt that! 😭 Great chapter! ☺️

    01/13/2022 13:04

  • Marissa Beals

    is there a book2? to ensure it with a noise outside and then nothing...is there another book?

    01/13/2022 01:33

  • Margaret Sliva

    😍😍😍 Love this update!! 😍😍😍

    01/13/2022 01:14

  • Katie Moss

    how often do you updated

    01/12/2022 17:19

  • Patricia DeMorrow

    FYI "Piss play" = golden showers

    01/06/2022 01:01

  • Reader-831928

    I am on the edge of my seat waiting for more chapters!! Awesome book!! Enjoyed your Mated to the Alpha series as well!

    01/02/2022 02:17

  • Emilia Lake

    omw that was hot as hell. nicely done Suzi

    12/27/2021 13:41

  • Shelia Davis

    I am so into this story that I can hardly put my phone down oh thanks to the author

    12/26/2021 16:48

  • Mare Horak

    😭😭😭 I need more!!!

    12/21/2021 12:00

  • Margaret Sliva

    patiently waiting for the next update/updates. needing Obsidian & Devrim fix!! 💜💜

    12/19/2021 18:19

  • Kate McConnell

    this book is so good. i can't qait for more updates

    12/16/2021 21:39

  • Tina Meadors

    ssooooo hot! had me twitching. I can’t wait for next chapter!

    12/15/2021 16:52

  • Snow White

    Wooooow, this was so HOT! 🔥🔥🔥 Can't wait the next chapter!

    12/15/2021 13:40

  • Zora Parker

    I desperately need an obsidian fix. hoping for an update soon.

    12/08/2021 23:43

  • Autumn Harvey

    why do I feel like I'm missing every other chapter... it's a great story, but when did Vanya ask the guys to protect Betsy? she just that Betsy was basically family

    12/07/2021 00:25

  • Zora Parker

    I can’t wait for the next update. I loved where Obsidian and Vanya ended up before the rewrite. I hope they can get there again because he’s my fav and yet I want to smack sense into him lol

    12/06/2021 20:43

  • Mare Horak

    It's Saturday here and I'm dying waiting for the next update !!!

    11/27/2021 23:10

  • Suzi de beer

    EXCITING NEWS! Promised to the Alphas Part two is coming! Updates will start this weekened. I'll be updating with multiple chapters EVERY Saturday up until part two is completed. It'll be a lot different than part one which means that it'll include more bonding between Vanya and her men (yes group scenes) More bonding between Obsidian and Devrim and a whole lot more... Are you ready?

    11/10/2021 08:10

  • Samantha Kellar

    whens book 2 gonna be out? I cant Wait...i love it

    11/08/2021 22:16

  • Daitona Halcomb

    can't wait for book two!!

    11/04/2021 18:32

  • Lisa Church

    I loved this book. Are any of your other books related to Promised to the Alpha's?

    11/03/2021 23:34

  • Snow White

    I supouse these rewrites are part of the author's plan for the book 2, but I must say that there are some parts of the original chapters that I loved, but there are no more. Like when Devrim is feeding Obsidian in the kitchen? That was so sweet! 🥰 Part 2 can't come soon enough!

    11/03/2021 14:39

  • Samantha Kellar

    this is book one then the bucket list right?

    11/03/2021 00:21

  • Mare Horak

    I need more! 😭😭😭

    10/30/2021 19:37

  • Jenitta Haris-d

    I am so disappointed with the ending of this story I do not like the rewrites you were doing better before you did rewrite do what is you do you might have to make a word correction here or there but stop listening to the readers right how you write write what you feel. What is the name of the next book to continue on with this saga

    10/30/2021 06:07

  • Jenitta Haris-d

    And my gut has understood intertwined and felt for all the characters in your story except for Reese that mother Hubbard can drown for all I care

    10/30/2021 06:04

  • Jenitta Haris-d

    I know I have a lot of comments but this rewrite is terrible it's terrible I know what you did the 1st time was better too much explaining too much supposed trying to make it simplified for a folks if they don't understand what the story is they need to move on to a different story you have done excellent job with this have kept me enthralled with the situation and everything that was going on don't change how you write because of what someone else says do what it is you believe and feel If you feel it then we feel it it becomes a part of us we understand it we see it in real life instead of saying oh this is just another story so far my

    10/30/2021 06:04

  • Jenitta Haris-d

    Wow just because Obsidian went through a lot of stuff doesn't mean they understand what Vanya felt

    10/30/2021 06:02

  • Jenitta Haris-d

    If I am honest I do not I repeat I do not like this rewrite be right I know you may have heard from other folks but no follow what you know what you believe how you feel when you write a story because the story is not ours it's yours to write and a it's right and for us to follow along and fill it

    10/30/2021 06:01

  • Jenitta Haris-d

    Vanya is stronger than this rewrite shows

    10/30/2021 05:59

  • Jenitta Haris-d

    If we go by what you said in the 1st part before you rewrote it he was already sick well before she woke up

    10/30/2021 05:57

  • Jenitta Haris-d

    I don't mean to give so much criticism but Vanya knows the brothers very well what they look like who they are their separate personalities there's no way that she wouldn't be able to handle that ordeal with the way they were looking and not know who they were

    10/30/2021 05:56

  • Jenitta Haris-d

    This new part doesn't follow through or read the same as the story before or I don't like it this as much so don't forget yourself and what it is that you're writing it sounds good before

    10/30/2021 05:55

  • Jenitta Haris-d

    With the way the rewriter's going I don't really like it so much the way you did the 1st time followed more along with the story and the way you wrote it here you went too deep in how it went I don't see Vanya as one trying to run away even if she wanted to she faced all her fears she would not run from Obsidian she would have faced him and dealt with the consequences later even if that meant leaving them all alone

    10/30/2021 05:54

  • Lynora Crawford

    The original ending seemed nearly perfect for the story... the re-write seems kind of cold, like things aren't settled between them all. Can I ask why you chose to redo the ending? Please don't misunderstand, I greatly respect the fact that this is your story, but it was so intriguing that I've re-read it several times. I was quite surprised tonight to see a completely different ending, from the one I've grown to love. Would you be willing to explain a little about why you chose to go this route, please?

    10/30/2021 05:47

  • CassieSymons

    Always waiting for the part 2 so.... I'm going to read the part 1 again ❤❤ I really loved the first one : don't rush 😊

    10/27/2021 16:22

  • Brandy Woods

    Do we have an idea when the next part is coming 👀 This story is good. I'd love to keep reading.

    10/21/2021 21:51

  • Gabby

    love this story so far

    10/18/2021 14:14

  • Margo Chambers

    Only Chapter 2,but really enjoying this story so far!

    10/16/2021 12:19

  • Chenenigans

    I really enjoyed this story and so glad to hear there'll eventually be more

    10/15/2021 02:16

  • Alison Eardley

    is there another book after this one? or a series? x

    10/13/2021 21:24

  • Suzi de beer

    WOULD YOU KILL ME IF ANOTHER MALE JOINS VANYA'S HAREM?

    10/09/2021 12:01

  • Suzi de beer

    UPDATE...... I found an editor! One of these days Promised to the Alphas will be published in paperback on Amazon! But I have a question to those of you who wants paperbacks. Will it be a problem if I publish both parts in one book instead of separately. I know it'll save money if I do it like that but then I've heard some complains about the trouble of reading thick books. I personally love them! Halloween bonus chapters? Tell me you deepest darkest fantasies. You can follow me on Instagram @Suzidebeer18, like my Facebook Page Author Suzi de Beer or join my group called Sinful Delights

    10/03/2021 05:51

  • Muneerat Rabiu

    Thank God there is a part 2...good job👍

    10/01/2021 18:39

  • Jennifer Miller McDougall

    what's the next book going to be called?

    09/27/2021 16:46

  • Mare Horak

    When will book 2 be coming out?

    09/23/2021 11:11

  • Michelle Doherty

    The ending isn’t what I was expecting. it leaves too much unanswered. I get it’s probably a way to get you to read book 2 but I feel the part about Joy should be enough to lead into book 2.

    09/21/2021 15:40

  • Lunara Holmes

    holy damn i cant wait for book 2, this series is hot, definitely want more dev & ob maybe with vanya?

    09/21/2021 10:33

  • Lunara Holmes

    holy damn i cant wait for book 2, this series is hot, definitely want more dev & ob maybe with vanya?

    09/21/2021 10:33

  • Lunara Holmes

    holy damn i cant wait for book 2, this series is hot, definitely want more dev & ob maybe with vanya?

    09/21/2021 10:33

  • Kimberly Winters

    I am so excited for the second book! I think this was my favorite of the ones you’ve done in this world! ❤️❤️

    09/20/2021 02:32

  • Kimberly Winters

    I am so excited for the second book! I think this was my favorite of the ones you’ve done in this world! ❤️❤️

    09/20/2021 02:32

  • Diabolik lovers

    does anyone else think it was hot how they smelled her panties

    09/19/2021 23:34

  • Diabolik lovers

    does anyone else think it's how he smelled her panties.

    09/19/2021 23:26

  • Diabolik lovers

    does anyone else think it's how he smelled her panties.

    09/19/2021 23:25

  • Diabolik lovers

    does anyone else think it's how he smelled her panties

    09/19/2021 23:25

  • Diabolik lovers

    does anyone else think it's how he smelled her panties

    09/19/2021 23:25

  • Diabolik lovers

    does anyone else think it's how he smelled her panties

    09/19/2021 23:25

  • Diabolik lovers

    does anyone else think it's how he smelled her panties

    09/19/2021 23:25

  • Diabolik lovers

    does anyone else think it's how he smelled her panties

    09/19/2021 23:25

  • Diabolik lovers

    does anyone else think it's how he smelled her panties

    09/19/2021 23:25

  • Mara Poehls

    uhhhh the ending really got me confused. don’t get me wrong. i loved the book. i’m just hoping there’s a second one coming at some point.

    09/05/2021 23:56
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