Keeping Mia Comments

  • Bella Jersey 2

    epilogue 2: I don’t remember who this guy is but if he finds peace that’s all that matters

    02/02/2021 05:53

  • Bella Jersey 2

    epilogue 1: I think you should try your hand at children’s stories too

    02/02/2021 05:44

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 50: sweet ending but very Anti-climatic

    02/02/2021 05:15

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 50: now the medic behavior makes even more sense

    02/02/2021 05:09

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 49: I was getting mad at that medic. but medical people can or have to behave that way

    02/02/2021 05:01

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 49: the final battle scene is getting ready to happens I want to know the meaning of the jewelry she’s wearing

    02/02/2021 04:59

  • Cheezy

    I am so sad this ended! I hope at some point you will do a sequel!

    02/02/2021 04:20

  • Spectral Beauty

    Ah!!! Thank you, author, for the second epilogue! I loved the brief snippet on Kenahi!

    02/02/2021 02:10

  • Paula Ketchum

    I want another chapter or 2 about this bunch

    02/01/2021 23:54

  • Lena Lindström

    Started it today and couldn't put it down until I had finished it all 😄 Love all of your books! 💕

    02/01/2021 21:48

  • Anu

    oh god...can’t wait for taming tiana...is kenahi the one to tame her?....

    02/01/2021 17:52

  • Anu

    loved it a lot....amazing story....thank you Lacey.....looking forward to more.....

    02/01/2021 16:09

  • Anu

    amazing story...loved it a lot... thank you Jenny...

    02/01/2021 16:07

  • THE WAZ FAM

    loved it!!! one question tho?! what did the necklace that she was wearing mean? at the dinner when Draven told them about the choices to leave or stay?

    02/01/2021 12:31

  • Emma Hewitt

    nooooooo it carnt end. I was hoping to find out what happened to everyone. And if the doctor ended up on his own. xx xx love this book i am addicted to all of your writing xx

    02/01/2021 09:38

  • Heather Michelle Hoover

    amazing amazing story!!!! loved it.

    02/01/2021 03:43

  • Jacinta Reynolds

    what a phenomenal story, I loved reading it and can't wait for the next one!

    02/01/2021 02:53

  • Francheska Dipuma-charres

    🤣😂🤧🤧🤧🤧 perfect just perfect thank you so much for a awsome story ..

    02/01/2021 02:35

  • superprettybutterfly

    😭😭😭 these are happy tears... I love this story so much, I wouldn’t have mind reading 100 more chapters!! I can’t wait for the next book! thank you author!

    02/01/2021 02:07

  • Spectral Beauty

    Welp, gotta reread this while I wait for more of your wonderful work, dear author! Thank you for the daily updates, you are amazing!! 😁

    02/01/2021 01:46

  • Rebecca Klitscher

    ahhh noooo it cant be over!!! i need more of this story/world. l love it so much

    02/01/2021 01:45

  • Raven Dark-fhang

    great story

    02/01/2021 01:40

  • terri4388

    loved the book. hope you write more stories

    02/01/2021 00:44

  • J Rose

    I need an actual physical copy of this book, it was so good! Definitely a new favorite 😍😍

    02/01/2021 00:22

  • Au'Star_lie

    Whaaaaaaaaaa😱😱😱😱😱😱

    01/31/2021 22:44

  • Spectral Beauty

    I loved this book so frickin’ much. So Mia had...3 kids? Corban, Kiri, and pregant with 3rd? So amazing 😊

    01/31/2021 22:15

  • Spectral Beauty

    GORTH SURVIVED!!! I’m so happy!!!! ...but poor Tor, the medic 😭

    01/31/2021 22:14

  • Unlikely Optimist 🖤

    the ending felt a little rushed. so much so that I was actually shocked when it said the end. but I was happy nonetheless that it all worked out I guess 🖤

    01/31/2021 21:23

  • Raven Dark-fhang

    Those were Kirich children. Draven brought the Kirich he found back with him.

    01/31/2021 16:44

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 48: did draven mark her last night?

    01/31/2021 02:55

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 48: I want to see how many ladies leave. something was sticking in my claw now they are in the city. they won’t let the woman have real emotions. how will it take for draven to realize she’s pregnant

    01/31/2021 02:54

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 48: I think that was a beautiful moment with them. he was gonna send her home she said no. he talked about knocking her out but didn’t they take that temple chip out? you know when she got sick

    01/31/2021 02:51

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 47: that the first we heard anything about the other children. I don’t like what the did to Becky. what are they supposed to put her into some kinda coma. that was her husband you should of allowed her to grieve. then allowed to be with her friends which she so desperately needs

    01/31/2021 02:17

  • Spectral Beauty

    I think that was the first time Draven cussed 😚

    01/30/2021 23:54

  • Spectral Beauty

    You think Phoebe would leave Huntak? And Ashley is probably going to/already did choose Yoa. I think most of the women will stay, if not all

    01/30/2021 23:52

  • Charlene Fetherolf

    moreeeee

    01/30/2021 23:10

  • Francheska Dipuma-charres

    thanks for a hot sexy scene wo! I love that mia wants to stay..

    01/30/2021 21:59

  • Au'Star_lie

    I really hope he finds a way to end the Ykil chp48 really got me I really thought he would've sent her back my goodness the suspense I would've been 💔

    01/30/2021 21:36

  • superprettybutterfly

    I feel like the end is near 😭😭😭

    01/30/2021 02:05

  • Au'Star_lie

    Damm was not expecting that at all

    01/30/2021 01:51

  • Spectral Beauty

    I do love Kenahi, almost as much as Draven. Such a badass. Watch him end up with Leane hehe

    01/29/2021 22:48

  • L. Lillian

    please put this into a paperback one day, I desperately want to reread this story forever! LOVE your stories

    01/29/2021 20:56

  • Spectral Beauty

    NOOO! Poor Becky, she needed some happiness and it should’ve been Gorth 😭😭😭

    01/29/2021 20:34

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 46: I caught y creature said. Mia is pregnant. it looks like J isn’t so crazy after all. it looks dravon gonna be pay a debt. I wonder how draven is at painting toe nails?

    01/29/2021 03:26

  • Francheska Dipuma-charres

    omg omg omg!!!! dont kill all the good characters fuck!!!

    01/28/2021 22:20

  • Spectral Beauty

    Gah! That chapter (46) had my heart pounding! Can Y’kil only mimic people they’ve killed? Is there a chance that the mimicked people are alive? I am very attached to our side-character Livarians, clearly 😢

    01/28/2021 20:09

  • Spectral Beauty

    NOOOO! Not Lim!!! Not Morkuth! 😭

    01/28/2021 20:06

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 45: either it is a bunch junkies going psycho. the other thought is there really is a monster under their beds

    01/28/2021 00:58

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 45: hold hold I’m dying give a chance to wipe away my tears and catch my breath. Phoebe is totally and completely about advertise muwi. their problem with finding woman to have their babies. tell the about muwi problem SOLVED

    01/28/2021 00:50

  • Spectral Beauty

    SNAP!!!! What a way to end a chapter 😳😳

    01/27/2021 20:42

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 44: that fang thing makes a woman ovulate. I have question he make her cum so hard and often right? how many babies does that create?

    01/27/2021 05:36

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 43: the only thing that ruins this for me is what has got to happen. you know Mia will have to betray him. she will have to betray them all in order to save them

    01/27/2021 05:19

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 43: death by orgasm does not sound like a bad way to go

    01/27/2021 05:16

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 42: the only thing I can halfway equal relationship in power is president of USA and First Lady. he’ll listen to Mia but he still has final say. I see why she care him. be his helpmate his friend but for relationship she doesn’t really know him. I know so relationship happened like that. I just you should be more careful. you’re on Alien planet in alien world there is not divorce here. you have protect yourself as well as your heart

    01/27/2021 04:57

  • Spectral Beauty

    Ok, the illogical part of me wonders if Mia is pregnant (logical part says it’s just nerves, duh) But...Is baby Maven on the way?? 😂

    01/27/2021 02:09

  • superprettybutterfly

    just went I thought I knew where the story was going, dear author you have surprise me 👏👏

    01/27/2021 01:16

  • Heather M

    I love that she had the ability to rationalize her situation and now that she with Draven her punishment didn’t go away. I like that side of her.

    01/26/2021 22:22

  • Spectral Beauty

    “mimicking the wildlife”...nope, mimicking Livarians, more like??? Something’s been bugging me since a few chapters ago. Gorth was supposed to show her how to clean the Oltec, but things happened and he didn’t...I’ll bet Mia would have figured out whatever is going on if she’d talked with Gorth and saw him acting strange. Maybe she’d even ask why he was an a-hole to Becky and he’d act surprised, like “when did I do that?” Gah!

    01/26/2021 21:59

  • Francheska Dipuma-charres

    I hope mia doesn't give a hard time be ... petty over sleeping with him. I hope she give him a real chance.

    01/26/2021 21:23

  • Francheska Dipuma-charres

    🥵🥵🥵🥵💥finally awsome

    01/26/2021 04:03

  • Charlene Fetherolf

    i love this story and want more..

    01/26/2021 03:13

  • superprettybutterfly

    who wants to search the universe for livrarians? 🙋🏽‍♀️🙋🏽‍♀️🙋🏽‍♀️

    01/26/2021 01:01

  • Heather M

    sleep well, wife! we will see how she feels about that in the morning 😂😂😂

    01/25/2021 22:57

  • Au'Star_lie

    Ok that was amazing so worth the wait🧡🧡👏👏👏👏

    01/25/2021 22:29

  • Spectral Beauty

    You think if someone tells Leanne about the muwi hormone, she’d be more amenable to the Livarians? Maybe she’s just sexually frustrated too...she has been there way longer than Mia 🤣

    01/25/2021 22:29

  • L. Lillian

    its ok Mia, Im a hopeless romantic too ;) i loved these !last couple chapters

    01/25/2021 21:41

  • Spectral Beauty

    Hehehe first night as his Topure and...well...that didn’t last long 😚 ‘Bout time though! Thank you, dear author, for TWO chapters. I would have been so antsy if I had had to wait for Ch 43!

    01/25/2021 21:26

  • Bella Jersey 2

    I think draven go against the promise of not forcing the woman in choosing a mate or whether to have sex. Will set back any progress they made with the other woman. the woman don’t know the laws. what to stop the men say you broke a law so your indebted to me. this will break trust. us as human needs the laws written down. to know where we stand plus these rules are setup for the men not the woman. woman of this world can’t accept laws when they had no say in it. they owe it to the woman you kidnapped them: they did not ask to come here. they can never forget that

    01/25/2021 01:42

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 41: bravo Mia bravo Mia well played. I think a very smart decision. how long until the debt is paid he did not give her a time line.

    01/25/2021 01:33

  • Au'Star_lie

    Dang go Mia I mean technically it's not a bad punishment I mean it could be worse but she was such a pro and her leadership skills are on point I like it👏👏👏

    01/24/2021 22:09

  • Heather M

    dang! I wish these chapters were way longer than they are. I read through them so quickly!!!!!

    01/24/2021 20:37

  • Francheska Dipuma-charres

    now it getting good damn!!!!

    01/24/2021 13:23

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 40:I thought part of the rules they weren’t allowed to force the woman. the ladies did make me think why did they choose the woman they chose. there are 3 billion woman on earth

    01/24/2021 01:05

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 39: the ladies are gonna have to discover how to make some mixed drinks

    01/24/2021 00:39

  • superprettybutterfly

    I need more chapters!! one is not cutting it for me.. wow I sound like an addict 😅

    01/23/2021 23:17

  • Au'Star_lie

    Oh Come on I think you are trying to kill us here 😲😲😲😲😳

    01/23/2021 22:40

  • Spectral Beauty

    Agh! You can’t end Ch 40 like this! Draven is so mad, wonder what he’ll make Mia do since she’s so stubborn 🤣

    01/23/2021 21:27

  • Spectral Beauty

    They are you, they are me....yup they’re shapeshifters or possessors for sure 😬

    01/22/2021 21:06

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 38: now draven might make himself Mia’s personal guard. but Mia is also show the woman are not believe the bulls.hit they are shoveling

    01/22/2021 15:11

  • Spectral Beauty

    Ahhhh! She made it in! Can’t wait for the next update to hear what Jhudur has to say...

    01/21/2021 21:18

  • superprettybutterfly

    I’m a little concerned about Draven’s and the other livrarians safety... I hope they are okay

    01/21/2021 01:13

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 37: now we have a whole bunch of friends. that we halfway want them to leave. now catmen thing she’s become content just sewing and stuff. HELLO that’s not Mia. for all the effort the went to get the woman. when didn’t they have their passion or hobbies ready?

    01/21/2021 01:04

  • Anu

    be careful girls.......huntak and draven will understand...

    01/20/2021 04:44

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 36: is what Mia doing is for good cause? but she might of cost her friend’s happiness. Mia will get a man all happy go luck mean while phoebe will be married to man that will never trust her again or ever.

    01/20/2021 00:49

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 35 I think: I don think jhudur is crazy. I think nobody wants to believe him

    01/20/2021 00:35

  • Au'Star_lie

    Oh damm things are getting too good, great chapter.

    01/19/2021 23:59

  • superprettybutterfly

    I wonder if the Y’kil are shapeshifter and Gorth was one of them when Mia, Becky and the others ladies saw him walking near the garden... 🤔🤔

    01/19/2021 22:22

  • Francheska Dipuma-charres

    i can't wait to see more relationships happening maybe a Side Story will be awesome with a little more detail will be nice. a story within

    01/19/2021 22:00

  • Francheska Dipuma-charres

    love the story so far I hope mia give in.

    01/19/2021 21:58

  • Spectral Beauty

    Question for the author: I’m a little confused about Phyn. Wasn’t he the guy who disappeared when Mia and the other women were being brought in from the portal? This chapter mentioned he never left the compound...but didn’t he? He was gone before they ever got to the compound (I gotta reread lol)

    01/19/2021 20:55

  • Spectral Beauty

    I hope this doesn’t blow back on Phoebe. She and Huntak are my favorite side-couple.

    01/19/2021 20:51

  • Heather M

    such a good chapter! so happy that some of the girls are choosing them.

    01/18/2021 22:02

  • Spectral Beauty

    Ah yay! Relationships are happening! I was hoping Phoebe and Huntak would get together soon. But what’s up with Gorth? Poor Becky... 😕

    01/18/2021 21:10

  • Bella Jersey 2

    yes we might get a girl for Brine. I do wonder if that story had a double meaning. maybe draven being to greedy himself

    01/18/2021 07:20

  • Spectral Beauty

    Thank you, dear author, for releasing an update a day. It is pretty nice 🙂🙂

    01/17/2021 22:22

  • Spectral Beauty

    I do love Brine. Hope he gets a nice lady (other than Mia, of course)

    01/17/2021 22:21

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 33: I don’t know if it will be that easy Draven. I think you just got our poor girl confused

    01/17/2021 03:27

  • Au'Star_lie

    Yes now we're getting somewhere, they've been so stubborn.👏😁

    01/17/2021 02:28

  • Spectral Beauty

    Question for Ch 32: does Jhudur have antlers??? I’ve reread the parts with him and I haven’t seen a description where he had any...Typo maybe??

    01/16/2021 16:26

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 32 ahhh draven I don’t know if Mia will be YOURS anymore. she saw your other face and you only hurt him for revenge

    01/16/2021 00:00
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