Dark Desires Comments
Mei Hellstormm
this book is finished. Not sure on #2, but you can find her on K****le, under the same name. Don't look for "dark desires" as a book as you'll get 4 or 5 different options/authors.
09/05/2023 05:27
Unlikely Optimist 🖤
hi guys! I decided not to make book 2 about this couple but they now have a completed story and 50k more words on am@z0n. print available as well 🖤 fated to fall is next up!
09/05/2023 03:10Heather Ashford
so I'm guessing book 2 never got done since it not posted shame
09/04/2023 18:10Z Alice
Finally got around to finishing this book! ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT! Like this version more than the original! I need book 2!🖤💙🖤
09/04/2023 15:33Katrina Mason
Hi, love the book when will the second book be coming out would love to finish the story
09/04/2023 14:55
Bri
Hi Unlikely Optimist, I read through some of the comments through here, and I think I read that you plan to release the part two of this book sometime early this year? just wondering if that timeframe was still valid or if it got pushed back? thank you for your writing, excited for more to come :)
09/04/2023 12:14Daughter of the Sun
I've never finished a book and immediately restarted reading it! This book is so good and I absolutely love each character (including Anubis, lol) 🤣 I'm so looking forward to the next book!
09/04/2023 10:51
Reader-286149
Best book ever!!!!!
09/04/2023 10:27Kristi Lyman
when is the next book expected to be out I just got done reading this one and I need more please
09/04/2023 10:20Karamea G
🤣🤣 “Halitosis is a valid reason for killing someone” 🤣🤣 HYSTERICAL!
09/04/2023 09:16Is this story part of an ongoing series? I’m only halfway through and need more of these gods in my life!
09/04/2023 09:14great story.. i hope aisha and imset end up together
09/04/2023 09:06ok I havent re read it but parts I have loved this book but this thing about being a virgin ? it actually takes part of the impact on their relationship etc I don’t like it 😢😢 there was a weight about him had other concubine ls etc … that made this time different … 😕
09/04/2023 08:24
Justmee
Question? Do I need to reread this entire book? I see a lot of edits have been made. I feel like I'm missing to much.
09/04/2023 08:24Z Alice
I came back to re-read the book and everythings different. Can I find the original chapters somewhere? not that the new edits are bad I just really liked the original not to mention I had like 5 or 6 chpaters left cause I didn't want to finish before book 2 was out because I didn't wnt cliffgamgers
09/04/2023 08:19Denisha Collins
I'm enjoying the book but I'm confused as to why Aisha begged Tai to help her and why Osiris liked it so. Im guessing that will be answered in book 2. Why did he take her and he didn't like Aisha in the 1st place?
09/04/2023 08:19Meshauna Charell
As a Black woman, I loved it!!! Brilliant, funny, sexy, dark, real! Beautiful 💫
09/04/2023 08:18Unlikely Optimist 🖤
Ok readers the first 36 chapter edits/ additions are up and complete. I still have several more chapters to post to get us back to the book one conclusion.
09/04/2023 08:17I can’t wait for the updates 😊
09/04/2023 08:16Unlikely Optimist 🖤
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09/04/2023 08:13Unlikely Optimist 🖤
Hey lovely readers! I see a lot of commenting about updates on my stories so I figured I should come chat for a second. I unfortunately have a chronic health condition that gives me trouble from time to time and right now I’m struggling with pretty bad fatigue so the chapters are a lot harder to get through. i haven’t even been able to keep up with replying to your comments 😩 I hope you’ll bear with me during this slow time as I really am trying hard to get chapters completed for you and start part 2! Hopefully you’ll all stick around until I’m feeling better! As always, much love and thanks so much for your support xoxoxoxo
09/04/2023 08:13so glad to hear the new one is coming soon .... I have been patiently waiting and my heart still breaks for Imset 😢 being left by her 😢
09/04/2023 08:12
sonia ceruti
loved this book! please finish it!!
09/04/2023 08:12Unlikely Optimist 🖤
all chapter rewrites are up ❤️ check the note at the last chapter to find out more about book 2
09/04/2023 08:10Kristi Lyman
how soon are you starting part two I am hanging I want to know what's going happen ughhh I can't wait please hurry 😉
09/04/2023 08:10
Au'Star_lie
😱😱😱😳😳😳😳🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯 What the heck just happened and she finally snapped... at the worst time possible...
09/04/2023 08:09
Charonda Patterson
when do you think book 2 will begin? I liked the changes you made.
09/04/2023 08:09Kristi Lyman
so when you update is it going to be called a different name or is it just going to start at the end of part 1
09/04/2023 08:07
Christinaa
amazing story cant wait for part 2 🤗🤗
09/04/2023 08:06April Borchers
I read the whole thing in one night what will be the title of the next part
09/04/2023 08:05Au'Star_lie
Yay 🙌 update.. Great double update btw 👌 👏 👍
09/04/2023 08:04Kristi Lyman
I really really luke how this book is going I wish there was another update soon I am getting very sad thinking that it ends here its crazy. please write more
09/04/2023 08:04Marquita Harper
Disappointed and annoyed with Aisha. Wth did she expect. She called on a death God. Tai & Thoth setting her up to fail & she leaves with Tsi bbn blaming Imset. Tired of silly minded girls then she blames Imset for her doing drugs etc. Wow . I do like your writing and how you weave a story.
09/04/2023 08:01Unlikely Optimist 🖤
hey lovely readers, just checking in to say part one of this story will be wrapped up either today or tomorrow and I’ll be posting all the last chapters at once. part 2 will start after I’ve lightened my story plate a little lol LOVE YOU ❤️❤️❤️🥰🥰
09/04/2023 07:59Unlikely Optimist 🖤
hey readers! PLEASE DONT READ RIGHT NOW! DD is finally getting its new edits, however it takes my editor some time to approve them all so the changes will show up little by little over the week. that means there are some chapters (w/ numbers in the title) that are edited and some that are original. the description will also be changing! TTYL 🖤
09/04/2023 07:58
yowassup
i need an update
09/04/2023 07:58Unlikely Optimist 🖤
hey y’all I’ll probably do one or two bonus chapters to fill in the gap between part 1 and where part 2 is going to start! I know it’s all a mess right now but it’ll all make sense soon ❤️❤️❤️
09/04/2023 07:56Kristi Lyman
omg I can't believe she left with that dude when the man she loves was kissing her and wanted her. she passed the final test I figured she would have been super happy wth. please please start part 2 I don't know if I can wait to long. 😘. your writting is so great that I am so sucked in to this book I don't want it to end.
09/04/2023 07:56Unlikely Optimist 🖤
update: all the updates up to chapter 27 are posted. so much has changed and been added 😱 so good lol almost done guys!
09/04/2023 07:53Unlikely Optimist 🖤
hey gang! after getting some great feedback on some of the changes I made to the story, I’m going to go back and rework it a bit! I’ll post when everything is finished ❤️ as always, the number chapters are new and the ones without numbers are old.
09/04/2023 07:52Krexroat619
That ending broke my heart! Who in the world is this Tai..? and Thoth seemed trustworthy, but completely tried to manipulate her. I hope Imset gets her back! I completely understand her wanting to escape, but to where!?! Oh the trepidation! That cliff-hanger just killed a part of my soul. 😩 I’ll be over here 👈 in the corner wallowing in my grief until you release part 2.
09/04/2023 07:51Dammmmm 🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵
09/04/2023 07:51Unlikely Optimist 🖤
Hey everyone! I added a new chapter between 1 & 2 and sometimes there’s a little lag in the system! so if any chapters are out of order for you, that’s probably why!
09/04/2023 07:50Justmee
That Zaddy had me 💀😂! Awesome book 🥳! How often do you update?
09/04/2023 07:48Reader-837796
I love this story, I don’t know how to feel about the ending...I totally understand it and why it had to end that way... but I do feel some kind of way...but that is the Mark of good writing, the details of the story stays with you well after you’ve read it. I’m looking forward to the next one!
09/04/2023 07:47
THE WAZ FAM
started this one today! and already wanting more 🤣
09/04/2023 07:45
Arya
Can't wait for Part 2!
09/04/2023 07:45
Scar
I’m so hooked I’ve reread your book twice! It’s anazing, def. one of my favorites!! ❤️❤️😩
09/04/2023 07:44Unlikely Optimist 🖤
I need a mental health day everyone ❤️ I won’t be posting today. try not to be too mad 🙏🏽
09/04/2023 07:44Unlikely Optimist 🖤
hey gang! I’m currently editing/rewriting part one before I start part two. I won’t be posting the new version until it’s all done and I’ll let you know when. main change: I’m making Aisha a grown up. I felt too bad making bad things happen to a teen. and she’ll be in college not high school. the main meat of their relationship will not change.
09/04/2023 07:44Au'Star_lie
Oh yassss girl great chapter 👏👏👏
09/04/2023 07:43Au'Star_lie
This is an awesome story 👏 can't wait for more.
09/04/2023 07:42Au'Star_lie
LMFAO ZADDY IMSET YASSSSSS🎆🎆
09/04/2023 07:42Au'Star_lie
Beautiful chapter🧡🧡
09/04/2023 07:42Hey Girl! I’m a patient reader but I was wondering if you going to update anytime soon? Because I know the book by heart now 😅😅😅
09/04/2023 07:41woow just stumbled upon this book and ... woow good work I can’t wait to see the update
09/04/2023 07:40yowassup
bruh this is literally the last chapter
09/04/2023 07:39👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾😍😍😍
09/04/2023 07:38Reader-837796
Great writing, great start!! i’ve always loved Egyptology! super excited to continue reading!
09/04/2023 07:37sorry it’s a little late guys but it’s coming in the next hour or so ❤️😩 it’s just so good!
09/04/2023 07:34🤗🤗🤗😱😱😱 Double chapter! Perfet gift for a birthday girl!! yassssssss
09/04/2023 07:33Reader-837796
Sis! I stay waiting for your updates excited for each new chapter! I completely enjoy your writing! it gives me life! keep producing awesome work!!
09/04/2023 07:33Jaz
haha only downside of the couple: lack of communication. but can’t wait to see what is next hehehe
09/04/2023 07:33Jaz
love the story.. I think it is my favorite book of yours
09/04/2023 07:33Marquita H
This was the first book I found by you and it was so intriguing that I searched any and everything you also wrote. Noe am reading three of your stories at once now. You are very talented. I can’t imagine the hard work of working on all of them at the same time.
09/04/2023 07:30yowassup
that killed me hahaha i felt the embarrassment
09/04/2023 07:30Morgan Alys
this is amazing got hooked right away!! I need more lol
09/04/2023 07:30Au'Star_lie
Omgoodness I can't wait for the next chapter. Finally he sees he f**k*d up🤣🤣.
09/04/2023 07:30Justmee
This is the update I've been waiting on 💃🏾! It was well worth the wait too 🤤! This book just does something to me.. 🥵🥴😂
09/04/2023 07:29Unlikely Optimist 🖤
So sorry guys taking a small hiatus to finish another book so I can better divide my time! 4 books is too many 😩😰😵 bear with me! ❤️
09/04/2023 07:28Igottanuff
love it
09/04/2023 07:28Maneka Mathews
I think she does need a backbone and I’m with him on everyone meddling in his business
09/04/2023 07:27
Organized Chaos
story good af!! I loves me a grumpy man 😂😂😂
09/04/2023 07:23
