Determined Comments

amber sweet

really come on you couldnt have done 2 ch

Sarah Kruger-Padgett

i am so terribly heart broken 😢

amber sweet

I like cool I like her a lot and I like her style

wait. where is the chapter about a second mate? I had surgery and on pain killers so I might have “drug read” some chapters. 🤣🤣🤣

Colleen MJ

I sometimes wonder when has enough been too much. Has the last button been pushed that leaves Colt at the last straw. Wishing her dead and sleeping with Nora's mother may be a point he can't redeem himself from. Just a thought.

Lynora Crawford

So...I notice it now says "To be continued" instead of "updating." I really hope this doesn't mean you're taking a break from the story? I am enjoying this so much, and that was a HUGE thing she just dropped! I don't know how long I can wait for an update! 😉 Seriously though, wonderfully written, as always! If you are taking a hiatus, I'll still keep checking back for updates! 😊

Veronica Medina

why is there a error when trying to read

Lynora Crawford

I suspected that about Nora. Poor Colt, though... that would be heart-shattering, no matter the reason for his words.

Sarah Kruger-Padgett

i am crying right now! i want them to work out

Karina Marthinsen

what and ass, i really do Hope she lets Jim go, and find someone who can love who she is, but i think shes about to shift, due to her emotion

great story 💜🥰

oooh! Colt might just beat him to a pulp!! it’s too soon Eli… how can he not know what Colt went through…dun dun dun

Paula Lewis

the wait is killing me too! dun….dun….dun. maybe colt will put him in his place

Kathy Conrady

I so want her done with Elijah and her and Zachary to get a 2nd chance together, who ditches Elijah's pack and he and Colt run her retreats together

I’m bitting my nails in anticipation of Book 2 — Desired

gem lover2

I love the idea that there are different animal shifters. It's a very interesting idea. I haven't seen other stories on here with this kind of world. I'm kinda interested how different it is.

Sarah Kruger-Padgett

I hope she doesn't have to choose between her two mates or animals. I want the 3 to be happy and accepting of each other. Hope that both mates are needed one for each animal! As hard as it is to be patient for updates I completely understand the lambing season I didn't have any luck with my ewes this year so no lambs.

gem lover2

Elijah is becoming such a sweet guy ahhh!!!😍😍😍

Amy Sabatino

when is the next update

Sonia Mcleod

thank you for the 2 chapters enjoyed it tell she said she is leaving poor Eli that was such a beautiful gesture giving her the house to help people like themselves again she seems lost will Eli get another mate 😘😘🇬🇧

Damn Colt dropping bombs.

I wonder what he’s going to think and say when he she’s what she did to his mark! 😳😳😳

Allison Underdonk Peterman

now that I am finally caught up. I am a new reader to this story. I love it. I am curious what he is keeping from her that he mentioned though in a previous chapter. Also why does he not listen and actually take in everything? I honestly have no idea how he is the strongest alpha and pack where he is so closed minded. it is cute how close he is to his mate but honestly he let a rabbit hit on him while chasing after his mate. that alone has him on my Sh*t list. I still haven't gotten over that. he doesn't seem loyal to me at all. I truly don't know if I want them to work out or not yet. She is strong and independent and he so far is controlling (alittle is cute), unloyal, hypocrite, temperamental. alittle caring but thats it. not many good qualities

Jenn McCoy

yes I love it I agree with you! can't wait to see where else you take us much love

amber sweet

are you going to do anything with Elijah and getting back together is there going to be another book

ooòh! my!!!! 2 mates!! Elijah is going to go ballistic!! can't wait!!!

Tabitha Nichols

I am hoping she doesn’t have 2 mates. the girl has had a hard life and should not have to be torn between 2 males. less stress more happy ending

Karina Marthinsen

i just love, that she is so cool, and can put hun back om track

Reader-352296 Sonia3

wow just as they make up two steps forward ten backwards he doesn't get a chance to explain

Amy Sabatino

are we gonna get a pov from elijah about everything and see her at the wedding

Amy Sabatino

when elijah destroyed Nora's play gym outside and took off. when he returned he tried giving colt lilacs which she is allergic to. colt slept alone woke up with Elijah in wolf form on the floor and covered him with a blanket. when colt woke up again the blanket was folded at the end of the bed with a single daisy lying on top

Jennifer Tuttle

LOVING this book!! I don't mind Long chapters! They help keep the suspense going.. making you want to keep reading until you cry because the chapter ended.... 😂😍

Lynora Crawford

With Colt being who she is, it doesn't surprise me that she refuses to remove the bond... despite all of the self-esteem and self-preservation training she did with Maeve.

Sonia McLeod

wait isn't she Allergic today as is if I remember correctly I think he still loves her this story is so sad and yet I always say I am not going to read it till it's finished but can't stay away 😘😘🇬🇧

amber sweet

?can't wait for new chapters hopefully Elijah has his ahha moment

ALINE ALBUQUERQUE

OMG what secret he's keeping from her?!

reader2121

This is a good story, but there needs to be some editing done. It’s distracting and sometimes downright confusing.

Blue Fish

Does Eli even know about Colt and what happened?? Is there any hope??😭

Nichole83pa

You have invested a lot of time into Elijahs back story and I may be the odd man out but I still have hope that he’s not actually the asshole that he seems to be. although it’s kinda hard to come back from abandoning your dying mate to have relations with someone else 10-20 feet away. Colt deserves an awesome ending I just wish it was with Elijah ☹️

Anna K. Querbach

congrats on the lambs!!! expecting anymore?

Sonia McLeod

omg no not his sister poor Elijah so glad she decided not to break her bond because now he is going to need her more than ever I hope she doesn't get so angry and shift why she is by herself thank you for the update although it was sad 🥲

Ahhh. Such a good update! Also, as someone who has had anemia issues for the last few years and is finally getting the proper care, take care of you!!! 😘 You mentioned a sequel… does that mean Determined is almost over? Please don’t leave us on an Elijah/Colt cliff hanger.

Lynora Crawford

Darn it! The storyline competely has me on pins and needles! I keep telling myself to let you update four or five times, THEN go read it, but I simply can't help myself! 😅 I love it! By the way, long chapters are phenomenal, thank you!

Sam D.

this last update was so good! I've been so curious about the backstory around Ross and why Colt held Elijah responsible. It sure seems like both Colt and Elijah are each doing some legit self reflection right now so I think they have a fighting chance if they can keep being brave enough to grow and change.

oh no...

Tabitha Nichols

thinking about it.., I’m glad you bond with Elijah will be broken. he tried to take so much away from her, including her life. she needs someone that will be her partner and not someone trying to dominate her.

Lynora Crawford

As much as I love Elijah, I'm hoping for some personal growth while Colt's there! The more I read, the more I enjoy. I can't wait for the next update! 😉

Amy Sabatino

the wait is killing me ahhh lol lol 😆

Niqua

i love the longer chapters

Gosia J

Thank you :) for the update...I love your work its :)

ummm. how about the feline male in Scotland/Ireland?

Lisa Essler

You have done a good job of bringing in the background through dialogue and flashback. Try to keep in first person or third point of view. You can switch characters in first person pov. .

I love the audacity of the alpha 😂😂😂 I love the independence and strength of colt.

Karina Marthinsen

wow thats was some dream, he is hit hard ♥️

Karina Marthinsen

i really like that they ser getting closer, event though i her the felling that they do have a Long way and more things to get settelt. vest girls nigth, is once a test, when er go to a male strip show, first er go one out girls dinning date, Them a few drinks, the strip show, afterwards er hit the casino and end op clubbing to late ord early morning, where one og out boyfriends puck us Up, after we drunk Call Them 😜

amber sweet

prefer them longer I could sit here for days and read I love your plot twists they're fresh and innovative

amber sweet

amazing job you

Amanda Jade

I like the longer chapters and enjoyed the update.

Amy Sabatino

what secret is elijah referring to that he kept hidden

Rose Asso

I love this story I prefer the chapters long ❤. Glad colts about to avenge her brother and mother. Especially since he's a rapist at that he got to go.

Lynora Crawford

ou know I love your story, but I have a question...I hope you don't mind! You wrote that Colt poured out everything...did she tell him about Ross? If so, how did he react? This new bit with Elijah having a secret has me intrigued, though!

Blue Fish

Ok but does he know she's in the hospital and almost died? Has anyone told him anything??? Or is he to broken to even care?

wow!!! I hope both of them can pull themselves together long enough to salvage their relationship and grow together as a power couple.

amber sweet

when's the next update

Poor Colt 😞 she deserves so much more. I think this was the nail in the coffin of her so-called relationship with Elijah. I hope Kalvin rips out Elijah’s cheating, black, little heart. 🤬

Sonia Mcleod

so happy she called him he is special they just need to get to know one another trust be open and honest😘😝🇬🇧

Thank you for answering the broken bond. Someone needs to knock some sense in her mate. What he did is wrong. But he is hurting and her gone for so long with no contact fueled his depression.

Reader-352296 Sonia3

well it's about time😁😁

Reader-352296 Sonia3

wow really sneaky I feel bad for him why does she play these games with him if they are mated

Lisa Essler

Author, you're doing a great job.

Lacey June Naggs

I need an update!

Lisa Essler

Colt is a great character

thank you for this chapter....there is home yet for Colt to have babies!!!! she would make an awesome Mom.

Nichole83pa

Definitely think Colt needs a change of scenery but I have some questions (that hopefully you can answer) 1. If Colt were to end up with her other mate would Elijah feel it like Colt feels Elijah cheating on her? 2. Why won’t Colt allow the bond to be broken since it kinda already is? 3. Will we get an Elijah point of view chapter or two so we can see where his head is? obviously he’s still cheating and I don’t get why Colt is allowing her health to deteriorate for a man she no longer wants?? I love your writing!! Definitely need more

I love this story. I’m hoping she gets her animals.

Reader-352296 Sonia3

he is a wolf and very fast he will catch her and I think she wants him to catch her

I think Zackary should go after Eli. To protect colt. Eli most to really gone. Because he should feel her pain . Plus she can't be pregnant she was gone for a long time.

amber sweet

condolences I understand I have six fur babies and it would be devastating take your time write well and you have our support

Allison Underdonk Peterman

These are great chapters! I hope she is leaving the country to figure out stuff with her dad.i will be shocked if Elijah doesn't go 😆 looking forward to upcoming chapters

Lynora Crawford

How heart-wrenching! With this development, I'm glad she chose not to break it... yes, I can sometimes be fickle in my sympathies for characters. As a side note, I'd just like to mention that it equally amuses and frustrates me that you give nothing away (about the developing story) in your responses, other than a "🤔" to everything. A lot of authors rush to reassure the readers, and while it's great to have that, you holding information until the chapters are released simply increases the intrigue and excitement for the next update. In short - thanks for being a great author!

Jenn McCoy

he deserves everything that's going to come his way. he is so selfish I've said that from the get go she deserves better! that wildcat that smelt her by the mountain hopefully would be better but what happened to him? Also I am truly appalled at Elijah he just keeps hurting her he clearly does not deserve her it would be nice if she could get wild cat and Zachary. he has always been so caring towards her trying to get Elijah to make the right choices but you can't make someone. cant wait to see where you take things. love the story much love

Lynora Crawford

Poor Colt...I am heartbroken for her.

I love this story!!! but I'm with Mave on this one!!!

Nichole83pa

Can you tell me how often you update this book? I started it last night and it’s so addicting!! Amazing and I need more 💜

Sophie Easton

I really hope Colt finds out Eli didn't really have much to do behind the "attack" on her mom. I like them as a couple, even though we haven't seen much of it. I also think Colt acts like an immature girl at times with her temper and ranting off.. disrespectful

I loved this last update. For there to be a real chance for Colt and Elijah, she needs to be 100% truthful and let him know what happened to Ross and in turn Elijah needs to let her talk and both need to take it one step at a time and allow each other the pace they need to go for the relationship to work and almost more importantly, last.

Nichole83pa

So who is the real Elijah? Is it the guy who so desperately tried to be a good mate to colt or this asshat that has zero regards for anyone’s feelings? How did he not sense her if Zachary did? Ahh so many questions!! This book has a way of grabbing your heart and squeezing. Excellent writing! I can’t wait for more! ❤️

caroline p

that was wow! I am so ready for the next chapter! thank u!

Lynora Crawford

Oh my...Elijah is NOT likely to be happy about having to share his mate. I did NOT see that coming, but I'm quite curious to see where you take this!

Karina Marthinsen

ohh, bomb drop by Colt 😳 i like that the chapter is a little longer

Bri

I actually like long chapters, personally. I’ve been really enjoying your chapters and character development in this book, can’t wait for the next chapter. :)

Sonia Mcleod

love long chapters please thank you 🙏 getting interesting did Eli intentionally hurt her family

Karina Marthinsen

soo sneaky, i love IT 😂😂

Lynora Crawford

This story has a great start! I'm looking forward to the rest! Can I ask how often you update, please?

2 mates😂😂, that’s going to go over well 🤣🤣

Allison Underdonk Peterman

I am glad she is opening up his eyes and seeing things. its sweet that he has looked for her. I am still curious what he is hiding from her that he mentioned before. I do hope she gets her animals maybe a mixture of them? so she keeps both instincts. or if she doesn't maybe the shaman is able to secure that her children will for sure get theirs? which seems to scare her more then anything.

Sonia Mcleod

omg I thought she was leaving him too that's why I asked if he is getting another mate boy he has a temper she has every right to be afraid of him he tried to attack her how are they to go on from this

PirateSwag

I started this yesterday and already can't wait for updates 🥰 I'm addicted to the storyline and am too emotionally invested 😅 this back and forth is killing me! GIRL 👏 LET 👏 BALTO 👏 LOVE 👏 YOU 👏 😂😂

Rebeca Castro

is it a southern thing to day bloody with something when there mad and there wearwolfs right why don't them mindlink when something important happen or they need something I love the story by the way read it in like 2 days

Lynora Crawford

Darn it! The storyline has me on pins and needles! I keep telling muddled I need to give it the or for updates, then go read it, but I can't help myself! 😅 I love it! By the way, long chapters are amazing, and greatly appreciated!