Alpha's Unhinged Mate (Sequel to Hybrid Aria) Comments

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Why can't Aria use her Alpha voice on Layla?

Tammay H

Good story. I love this author! Thank you for sharing your talent!!

Me Myself

z8b3 Jessica Hall is one of my favorite authors. I am looking forward to reading her book

Gemma Butler

z8b3 I just love all of Jessica Hall’s books. I’ve added this to my library to read after I finish book 1

Emily

z8b3 enjoyed the aria book a while ago and I’m happy to see this book here. was in my library but buried deep

Joele G

z8b3 I love this author books; great story and great writing; I’ll have to start with book 1 first in this series.

Marcia Sheard Whittaker

z8b3. I absolutely love this book. This was my favorite out of the entire series. I could reread this book over and over again. Excellent writing and storyline.

Caitlin Sullivan

z8b3...well that was one way to start. hopefully they can grow as a healthy couple

Athomas15

z8b3 I’ve read books by this author in other apps. I adore the story lines, but they’re honestly hard to read. the writing isn’t always fluid and there are a lot of errors. I wish they had someone editing them better and they’d be great! this story is grabbing my attention but it’s distracting having to do editing in my head fix mistakes.

Megan Phillips

z8b3 I love anything by jessica hall. Her stories just pull you right in and make you want to continue reading till you finish the book.

Roxy Galindo

z8b3 Read the first book. Great story and it looks like a solid start for this one too.

Jennifer Beyer

z8b3 I love her books! cannot stop reading them! I look forward to the next one!

Heather Minks

z8b3 I have not read any of this authors books yet but I have them saved in my library so that I can read them. I’m excited to get started on them.

Chika Brooke

z8b3 Jessical Hall is such a great story teller. these Aria Hybrid series are amazing and i enjoyed reading every one of the books.This particular book, Its got suspense,great plot,character growth etc.

Queen Z

multiple chapters are repeated

I only see werewolf side mentioned is she also a vampire or something else? it doesn’t specify and I’m only looking for hybrid vampire books or just vampires. Please can someone lmk I’d like to start the first book if yes. The first book doesn’t say what her other half is either.

Haumz Tarmz Tiare-ana Kemara

love this series so good

Mikelle Ebert

lmao!!!! Sure he ain't got horse in him... I Dayum near spit out drink!!

hira shah

can this be read as a stand-alone?

Racheal Lawson-Hikawai

Gosh Damein is a prick, really want to punch his head in

Tjgrneyes

Help cant unlock chapters, and bought subscription.😢

is there more to this story?

Yael Oman

I don't get something about Kade - in book 1 he was a hunter, which lived for 100 years or so due to his experiments with the hybrid blood. How come here he has a werewolf mate? And also, he could've released his mate and son from their pack way before he was captured at the end of book 1, because Damien was already 13 by then. Sorry but the whole Kade-related plot doesn't really add up.

An'G Bautista

chapter 23 is rewritten into chapter 24

Ashley Haley

I want to cry at the packs determination and willingness to help lily. They knew what he was doing was wrong and they stepped up. I hope she heals and Damien gets his ass handed to him.

Are you working on book 3? You made a note at the end of book 1 but I don't see one here.

You got me boowhooing. OMG

Wendy Virginia

you do know chapter 23-24 are the same right?

I absolutely love Layla!!!

Tsakane Claire Ngolele

I love it and can’t stop reading

J'Tionna Hobby

everyones pissing my off poor lilly!

chapter 4, where everyone is discussing Lily like some thing. so annoying. Like people making decisions about her future like she has no opinion. everyone romanticize the mate bond but I'm not a fan. But I do love your books because they get me involved one way or another. great writing!

Vickie Vess

love it

Donna DeNardo Grogan

loved both books. only Didnt Aria have twin boys also. When is the next book coming out.

Cheryl D'arcy

where rest of book

great book. loved it.

E N

why does he say where her mark should be? I thought lily marked him a couple chapters ago?

Claudia Grando

I'm love the story I just hope she can fine herself and love

Kaitlyn

Please do not let him die!

cdunlap629@yahoo.com

so disappointed in Damian and Aria for allowing this. Lily needs to reject his bossy ass . . . Dislike him more every chapter I read

THE WAZ FAM

Layla is going to wake up and so is her pack and murder Kade. it has to happen. I'm freaking out.

I think it’s great, also he wants her to stop the partying. it’s ok to let loose but not every night. Before anyone says anything yes I understand she is dealing with Layla but there are other ways to cope

Mayi Rosa

before I even start this book please tell me that there’s a lot of the males perspective! like. aria had wayyyy to many

omg 😳 l don’t know how much more l can take 😭😭😭 but this is so good

Trisha

Disappointed in Damian. I hope Natalia gets her out soon. 😥

Reid is amazing. You developed his character so well.

Kaitlyn

I did not see that coming. I she is okay and the pack too

Wow l think Layla took over because Lily father’s death was too much for her to deal with emotionally. Layla is pissed and will go after Kade I’m sure. Everyone better watch out now.

Kaitlyn

yay! ♥️

Legend of Gru

so much drama going on and I’m looking forward to seeing what else will happen

I’m a little confused so Damien and Lily are tethered together now? Layla is a bad ass loving this story. I think now Lily and Layla are going to become more unhinged 😬. can’t wait for more

cdunlap629@yahoo.com

are you kidding me? Lily just follows along like a puppy? Let her have a back no e in n this story

THE WAZ FAM

his mom killed the warriors and pinned it on her. she knows exactly who she is. damian should know better than to believe her. he is losing lily

Lynn Hojnacki Lajoie

update?!?

Rainz World

I love your books so much I just can't get enough of them but I'm not going to read second one to forbidden mates because I want to finish this one I want to know about Lily so bad 😍

I love this book, but you have to update it...will lose interest.

Legend of Gru

🎶bring a bucket and a mop, cause it’s wet and gushy🎶 .......well, somebody was wet 😂😂😂😂😂😂 I really had to do this when I saw those words

I’m so angry at him 😡. I’m sure Kade is taking care of his mother and Damien too blind to see it. Before Layla told him Lily it depressed he is making worse. I hope she gets out and leaves and makes him have to work hard to get her back. unbelievable. can’t wait for more

omg please don’t 😭😭😭 maybe Kade isn’t thinking Lily and Layla are closer now. this twist has me on edge

Urgh it’s hard but l want to say it is Amber. I wonder though since Damien and Lily are linked some how won’t he die if Lily is killed even if she comes back?

let’s see Layla made a list did she hurt Tabitha for causing trouble between Lilly and Damien to begin with or did she try to hurt herself. Can’t wait for more

Legend of Gru

I agree with Lily and loved that she stood for what she believed in regardless of the fact that she was going against an alpha, her mate. And Damien shouldn’t be a hypocrite considering Lily is a rogue right now. I just want to know why he treats rogues like that in this modern day and age. My inner perv is also excited to see the punishment that Damien has in store for Lily 😏. But I also believe his anger over this disobedience is greater than his desire to mark and mate because I have this feeling that it’s a personal issue that makes him treat rogues in that manner. Maybe something to do with his mom 🤷🏾‍♀️

poor Lily/Layla they have so much pain and this other woman is not helping the situation. However she has been pretty tamed so far I’m sure it won’t last lol

Dorothy Ottolini

I love it can't stop reading it.

Looks like they both have a lot of healing to do. I’m still mad at him though 🤣

Rainz World

I love it

Kaye Morris

Brent is the one

Kaye Morris

I love this book can't wait for no 2

Kaitlyn

I cannot wait for the third book!!!

rocknrollqueen91

You keep saying Bianca when I think you mean Tabitha 😂

Legend of Gru

For me, it’s between Amber and Callie. I was about to add Tabitha but then he would have threatened her with the child and I think Max is still with Damien so my mind is leaning more towards Amber

Dawn Croutch

I hope Lilly makes him work for it! love this story and started reading the other book too! Can't wait for more updates!

I’m glad Layla attacked him. He has his nerve to try to trap her when he has a girlfriend 😑

Taystrick

This is probably my fav story. I have finished multiple but it’s something about a flawed Lily that gets to me. so excited for the action to come and the fact that she just delivered the baby is amazing. I believe she will have a connection to the baby now.

Trisha Reynolds

Absolutely loving this book. I cannot wait for each chapter to come out.

wonder if the baby isn’t his 😬

Legend of Gru

I think Lily might go berserk when they tell her that she’ll be leaving with Damien and 1) Layla might forcefully block Lily out and push her to the back again. 2)Lily will try to run away with Brent if he somehow finds out. 3)She’ll wake up and find herself cuffed and forced to go with Damien 😂😂😂😂

love this book. I feel so bad for Lily l hope things get better for her. she has been through so much and no understands how she feels about herself.

Melissa McWhorter-Asberry

I understand Damien to a point. Layla was angry at Aria and tried to attack her to kill her. So he is scared. I hope she escapes and leaves but they work it out because deep down he really lives Lily but we do not know his pain or what all happened to him.

Damien seems crazy too maybe they will even eachother out. Lily have a little discipline and he not be so ridget. Enjoying the story

Reader-168203

when will the 3rd one come out?

Jenny Best Camacho

love it

Cindy Xiong

where’s the book for the twin girls or is there none? I want the story of Lana and her mate lol

Kaitlyn

Lily and Layla need to wake up along with the rest of the pack. I love this book. I can not wait for the next chapter

Jessica Hall

hey everyone I accidentally put up the wrong chapter so sorry waiting for it to be fixed so I can remove it and add the next One

Would like to know the names of the twin boys

😭😭😭😭

Jessica Hall

hey everyone I stuffed up and posted chapter 50 on chapter 49 waiting for it to be removed then I will fix it and post chapters 49-53 at once. Hopefully anystories fixes I for me tomorrow when they come off holidays.

Trisha

No! Who’s scent?? Need another update please! :) Love your books!

Casey Hughes

love it excellent like the first book

Lynn Hojnacki Lajoie

has the writer lost interest in this story? the updates are few and far in between

Loving this book

That’s not his baby. Poor Lily so much pain her whole life she needs a break only so much she can take

Poor Lily has been marked, delivered her mates baby, Layla not answering and now Kade is about to take her. poor thing l hope things start to get better for her and she can find some happiness and feel like she is worth it.

l also believe if Aria knew how Lily is suffering she will allow her back home and be pissed at Damien as well. Lily needs to call her and tell her.

love this story! looking forward to what’s next and how Lily will fall in love 😍

Legend of Gru

I wonder what time it is when you posted this in your country 🤔 right now it’s almost 0100 for me. ......... Anyway, I liked how David acknowledged that he let Lily get away with a lot because of the guilt that he carries and she emotionally manipulates him to get whatever she wants done. I’m not saying that he should forget the crimes that he has committed, but David should forgive himself and not let the guilt eat him up too much. I wonder what happened to Aria’s dad and her grandma? It’s been a while. The relationship which most people have with their wolves is something that is admirable as well.

Shante Johnson

is tabitha and Bianca the same person or something?

Lily is awesome they will change each other l love it

dr.penguin

man if she submits to her mate this is going to lame