Lethal Kind of Love Comments
Sammy
x2c4 There's a bit of spoilers in the comment section. Would like to know if proofreading has been completed please because I saw a reader mentioning repeated chapters and errors.
04/28/2023 23:01Hazel Honey
x2c4 Intro peaked my interest, storyline a bit different and if well written with good grammar, I predict to enjoy it a lot.
04/28/2023 14:32Edaein Samuels
x2c4 I can really relate to the not getting out of be because it's cold, nice little details in setting the scene Amelias life! I wonder whether an will get between her best friend
04/28/2023 10:47John Robinson
x2c4 Well this is different judging from the description and the first few chapters. So it appears to be a contact marriage although Derek was engaged to Ameia's best friend when they first met.
04/28/2023 09:50Leré Saunderson
x2c4 Ooh, I am gonna love this! He actually likes her and is using a contract to "catch" her. Definitely intrigued to read more.
04/28/2023 09:33
Reader-778832
x2c4. added. the intro got me. I love the smart female leads who say it like it is.
04/28/2023 09:27Ashley
x2c4 I like stories where strangers get together for the wrong reasons but then end up falling for each other. I will add this to my library.
04/28/2023 05:04icuovrthere
x2c4 interesting synopsis, seems a bit rushed or hurried which causes plot holes unfortunately
04/28/2023 01:22Vicki usher
x2c4# read the introduction and thought it was interesting, it's has a different storyline to others I have seen. I am interested in seeing were this goes
04/28/2023 00:07
jayd3b666
I loved the first few chapters of this book they were well written and made sense, but as I progressed through the chapters, the writing became confusing and have a few mistakes that made the rest of the read unenjoyable. I got to chapter 20 (after paying for several chapters thinking it was going to follow on from the first few) except I will not be finishing this book. But I do commend the writer for taking time to write us a story and accepting our criticism it’s a harsh world and I hope she has a wonderful time writing as she clearly enjoys doing it. ❤️
10/11/2021 11:27
rocknrollqueen91
I'm confused. Will anyone ever acknowledge the fact that he raped her?
08/25/2021 15:55Debbie Williams-Hurdle
what the F, Jessica? If I was not good with my English this book would of been trash. Regretting paying for full book outright.
08/25/2021 07:13Debbie Williams-Hurdle
Too many errors and repetitive chapters.
08/25/2021 06:29
Bella Jersey 2
I’m glad things got hashed out with Dad. mom there no hope for that bitch
06/02/2021 06:19Bella Jersey 2
damn straight hunny
05/28/2021 07:16Bella Jersey 2
Derek the asshole is back
05/28/2021 07:14Bella Jersey 2
damn right girlfriend it’s like a highschool reunion. you don’t want to go. but you go just to bury old ghost
05/27/2021 07:39Bella Jersey 2
the TEDDY BEAR is gonna be important later
05/19/2021 18:54Bella Jersey 2
to point out Derek well off. bring enough for a couple of days. if you miss any Derek will send out for it.
05/19/2021 18:53Bella Jersey 2
75% forgive him
05/19/2021 18:45Bella Jersey 2
Jill can kiss my ass with he waited for you while she was in a coma. the what he SHOULD do when his WIFE is in coma
05/16/2021 09:01Bella Jersey 2
I’m what hell I thought he changed. here’s asshole Derek back in full color. just with the sex part
05/15/2021 08:01Bella Jersey 2
it can’t be that easy
05/14/2021 06:29Bella Jersey 2
I was having hope but old things are coming back
05/12/2021 02:26Bella Jersey 2
trouble is coming
05/09/2021 04:42Bella Jersey 2
evil god author making me cry🥲
05/09/2021 04:34Bella Jersey 2
yesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyes cue music
05/09/2021 04:30Bella Jersey 2
I love how there’s a no vulture zone
05/09/2021 04:23Bella Jersey 2
was that the squeeze in ambulance?
05/09/2021 04:22Bella Jersey 2
Steve Harvey was right you CAN NOT change a man. but a man WILL change for the right woman
05/09/2021 04:17Bella Jersey 2
I was afraid if I said the baby will live she’ll die
05/09/2021 04:10Bella Jersey 2
chapter 54 and 55 are repeat
05/09/2021 03:55Bella Jersey 2
can not believe this NICE CURVE BALL
05/09/2021 03:49Bella Jersey 2
Derek still needs to learn the art of talking to her. she may not agree with him. BUT might accept his reasoning or not fight so hard
05/07/2021 23:46Bella Jersey 2
him and his mother conversation sounded so cold. is this another transaction to him?
05/05/2021 22:31Bella Jersey 2
my favorite line is you wouldn’t know your left from your right even if I but signs on them
05/05/2021 22:27Bella Jersey 2
maybe Derek can be a good dad
05/05/2021 22:16Bella Jersey 2
good don’t
05/05/2021 22:15Bella Jersey 2
I’m in shock with her. she can’t trust anybody
05/05/2021 22:07Bella Jersey 2
oh you are so evil 🥲😪
05/05/2021 22:02Bella Jersey 2
my god what did Brittany do?
05/05/2021 21:54Bella Jersey 2
he still said it. I’m glad she’s not running anymore
05/05/2021 21:27Bella Jersey 2
I know Derek and Brittany can’t be gone
05/05/2021 21:19Bella Jersey 2
they finally made love
05/05/2021 21:17Bella Jersey 2
not not showing up is making me think the worse.
05/05/2021 21:09Bella Jersey 2
is it her baby shower for Angel?
05/05/2021 21:08Bella Jersey 2
at least she talked to Ben about it
05/05/2021 21:03Bella Jersey 2
lol hey dad she doesn’t want talk to and disrespect you
05/05/2021 21:00Bella Jersey 2
you made cry he kiss the baby bump and whisper to it. then the baby responded. bravo!
05/05/2021 20:54Bella Jersey 2
I think he’s worth the risk take it Amelia
05/05/2021 05:59Bella Jersey 2
so happy to see Brittany not really
05/05/2021 05:32Bella Jersey 2
hate Amelia had to do this but I understand why
05/05/2021 05:10Bella Jersey 2
Derek pathetic
05/04/2021 02:21Bella Jersey 2
Derek you better go away you don’t want to forget about Infidelity clause
05/04/2021 02:02Bella Jersey 2
alright let’s go build a home
05/03/2021 00:04Bella Jersey 2
Derek just to clue you in Noah seemed OVERJOYED to be fired. how many people do you know react like that?
05/02/2021 23:53Bella Jersey 2
can believe her father’s turn around. it’s disgusting no wonder he got wife he did. you know what I hope her father and mother are happy with money. be careful don’t get sick again dad. mom will pull the cord even faster
05/02/2021 23:48Bella Jersey 2
damn remind me never to get in fight with Amelia
05/02/2021 23:21Bella Jersey 2
I don’t care he’s still an ass
04/27/2021 23:02Bella Jersey 2
but Amelia’s baby is heir to it all
04/26/2021 21:36Bella Jersey 2
at least he honored one promise. I’m so happy for Amelia
04/24/2021 10:54Bella Jersey 2
LOSER LOS ER
04/23/2021 09:29Bella Jersey 2
he had to get her a place to hide his mistress
04/22/2021 02:41Bella Jersey 2
a big bag of mixed singles here
04/20/2021 07:31Bella Jersey 2
right now he’s reading like the typical male wanting to have his cake and eat it too. let’s Amelia go and have a happy life. you played the game and lost. don’t pull off how worried he is about his child now. please he did it as a form of control. now it bit him in the ass. I see why Derek craves control because he has no control in his own life
04/20/2021 04:22Bella Jersey 2
what is his response gonna be? he called her an ungrateful bitch. why is he so surprised? he’s been very secretive. not coming home and her father hasn’t even been transferred. I know what he’s doing with the doctor’s appointment but why? he didn’t want a baby. reality check her the faster a woman gets under trained care the safer the pregnancy. unless he wants to be able to The breve widower.
04/19/2021 02:41Bella Jersey 2
and there it is
04/19/2021 02:31Bella Jersey 2
guess who’s meeting got canceled
04/17/2021 07:50Bella Jersey 2
Derek is stupid he really thinks he can make Amelia a trophy wife? I don’t think so
04/16/2021 12:32Bella Jersey 2
there’s no contract and not only did he sexually abuse her. now he’s contemplating physical abuse!
04/14/2021 00:01Bella Jersey 2
Derek unique ideas on how to wake a person up. I still noticed he wasn’t using protection nor did he buy any. I love Amelia’s Derek hates to fight so she did. she finished her meal said thank and went to bed
04/13/2021 10:59Bella Jersey 2
I was up I was down I know how she feels about the picture. CAN NOT believe what Derek did he won’t let’s take leftovers home. but he’ll go to house and get a blanket for her
04/13/2021 04:47Bella Jersey 2
Derek must of not used protection on purpose but why? then he acts so uncaring. he makes want to punch him in the nose. I’m sure has great insurance. he can get plastic surgery
04/13/2021 04:39Bella Jersey 2
chapter 19: interesting
04/12/2021 22:04Bella Jersey 2
chapter 17: I wouldn’t be so sure of yourself if I was you Derek
04/11/2021 23:44Bella Jersey 2
chapter 16: I don’t like Amelia this way. it like she’s a shell. I’m happy most of her new sex life is enjoyable. is that enough? how long will she live like this?
04/11/2021 13:37Bella Jersey 2
Derek shouldn’t marry a woman he should marry a dog if he wants obedience
04/08/2021 07:26Bella Jersey 2
chapter 15: this sound and absolutely horrible marriage. you know what when Amelia becomes a shell and he cheats on her. the only person to blame is himself
04/08/2021 05:20Bella Jersey 2
is Derek trying to get Amelia pregnant? I know it’s coming. being pregnant by your rap.ist is not desirable
04/07/2021 10:07Bella Jersey 2
chapter 14: nice her second time having sex contract or not and he ra.ped her. disgusting! all because she wanted to take a walk get real. I still like to see the rules.
04/07/2021 10:05Bella Jersey 2
chapter 13: was he trying to get her pregnant on purpose? not smart every woman want to be a mother. you can only force a woman so far to take good care of herself
04/06/2021 23:36Bella Jersey 2
chapter 13: I don’t know if I can blame this Derek or not. my heart did break for her. if Amelia is an overthinker. they are very sensitive to theirs and other peoples emotions
04/06/2021 23:34Bella Jersey 2
chapter 12: first the first time in his life Derek in nervous and unsure
04/06/2021 05:01Bella Jersey 2
chapter 11: he won’t compromise thani need to take a walk.
04/05/2021 11:18Bella Jersey 2
chapter 10: yep she messed Derek up when she did care about the material stuff. she just her Dad. I want to make sure the mom and the rest get nothing
04/05/2021 03:43Bella Jersey 2
chapter 9: I am am so scared for Amelia. I don’t think he’ll be good for her
04/04/2021 22:38Bella Jersey 2
chapter 8: say no get on bus and go. short book. I doubt that will happen
04/03/2021 04:30Bella Jersey 2
chapter 7: it’s a damned if if you do and damned if you don’t
04/02/2021 10:35
Sarah
I don’t know if I can keep read if Derek believe she did that I think I need to go back a little bit
04/01/2021 03:41Bella Jersey 2
chapter 6: there sounds like there a dominant in him. I’m just nervous he’s gonna ruin her and throw her away
03/14/2021 05:45Bella Jersey 2
chapter 5: what is the mom’s problem. I bring it up but Derek might make all her problems go away. the rule thing will be a sticking point
03/14/2021 05:32Bella Jersey 2
chapter 4: THE RULES can’t keep my mind out of gutter
03/13/2021 01:24Bella Jersey 2
chapter 4: that kiss sounded like it mess me up too
03/13/2021 01:24Bella Jersey 2
chapter 3: Amelia felt sparks when Derek touched her. is this a normal human or supernatural story?
03/11/2021 08:32Bella Jersey 2
chapter 2: I bet mom didn’t like that conversation
03/10/2021 08:20
Fatuma Abdi
what if that Teddy bear has cameras and records what she does
03/10/2021 02:03Bella Jersey 2
chapter 1: I’m glad that’s not me. I’m not a morning person
03/09/2021 18:10
Ammy
love your story so much! I started it today(well the 8th lol) and haven't stopped till I got to Ch66, it is so good and can't wait for more. You're doing a great job! also idk if you saw but Chapter 66 Is posted twice and it goes to 68 there isn't a chapter 67.
03/09/2021 10:50Karlee Marotz
Really enjoying this so far! excited for the next chapter to come out! only thing I will say is that it seems based on the writing and sentence structure that it seems a lot like it may have been translated from a different language or something. Kinda hard to follow at some points due to wording as such. The story is great though! Keep up the hard work!
03/09/2021 07:28Jill.m.probably
What happened to the editing? So many mistakes and no quotes anymore?
03/09/2021 03:03
