The Moon's Blessing Comments
Michelle White
loved it
04/17/2025 21:57
m8n2 I really enjoyed this book. The intro pulled me in and the book kept me throughout. Well done.
09/05/2023 00:23
Megan Phillips
m8n2- this book is exactly what I like to read, by just reading the little introduction it pulled me right in. can't wait to dig into this one!
09/05/2023 00:12Reader-350476
m8n2 I just read the introduction and rejection it’s painful but in the end there will be second chance or regret for the Mean Alpha,looking forward to read more chapters to this book
09/05/2023 00:05John Robinson
m8n2 I like the start and it's a nice short ish story will definitely be reading this very interesting start.
09/04/2023 23:43Gemma Butler
m8n2 The introduction to this book has me intrigued. I’ve added it to my library and can’t wait to continue reading
09/04/2023 23:32Gemma Rookes
m8n2 very good start. I like that it's short and sweet. will enjoy reading this book as it goes on x
09/04/2023 23:13Vicki usher
m8n2# Once I read the introduction I had to add the book to my library. I love a good rejection book, like to see the growth in the characters.
09/04/2023 22:54
Urmajesty
This story started off with a lot of mundane details in the beginning, then progressed to less details and then in a rush ending. Also, I'm actually rather disappointed that the the first alpha wasn't given a redemption moment to fulfill this so called bond with his her. Instead the timeline is pushed ahead to 3 years later and another alpha is added, with everything all happening all at once. Rather disappointing.
09/04/2023 21:41Vilma Carpin Buhawe
hers and her brother's birthday are one week and a half apart? is she adopted?
09/04/2023 21:37Reader-774586
enjoyed this book so much,didn’t put it down till it was finished.Will there be a sequel?Please write another ❤️
09/04/2023 18:02Kristina Mitchell
will you be making this into a series? I'd love to continue to follow alexiana and Jaxon's story. I'm about 2/3 through the book and LOVE it so far.
09/04/2023 13:23Kristina Mitchell
just finished reading and I really enjoyed this book! I'd still love to read a sequel and possibly explore their lives and the children given they are half royals, or even explore what Alexiana being a princess means for her and Jax in the future when her parents stwp down. Alexi being a Princess, I'm sure, makes her and her family a target to radicals or rogues etc. I just feel there is so much more that can be explored especially with the long lost biological ROYAL parents and stuff. could you please let me know your thoughts?
09/04/2023 13:20Novella Myers
a little to much detail starting off but funny and good read.
09/04/2023 13:07
Briana Schoenfeld
I love that something is location based in my back yard.
09/04/2023 12:28Claudia Almendra
for once an interesting book that was short and sweet. did not go on and on. more books should be like this.
09/04/2023 12:00could have been so much better with out all the double details had to stop reading and move to another story.
09/04/2023 08:50AZ Trouble
10-28-21: I found this to be an interesting story with an ending that wasn’t expected. I do agree with another commenter about double details in relation to POVs. Perhaps POVs could be written in conjunction to stay on track during the story telling.
09/04/2023 08:48Patricia Lewis
Funny that they come from Visalia, California since I live in that town 😁
09/04/2023 08:45
Alaire
I can't even get past the first few chapters. there is too much detail. for example in James Pattersons books: They walked into an office where the desk and chair were placed perfectly in the middle. that's that! he expects you to know what a desk and chair look like.. who cares what color they are.. there is just to much irrelevant details here.
09/04/2023 08:42melissa schoelkopf
too much minute detail. i.e. she took a shower, don't need to know that it was the perfect temp and she did other unimportant things before hand. you lose the reader with too much fluff
09/04/2023 08:39Jenny Best Camacho
excellent story, I read it all in one day. Short story but very detailed. Btw she didn’t dry towel her hair for ten times, just saying!!!
09/04/2023 08:34
Dania O
I like how she uses different languages for each type of culture and doesn't just use English as a latina myself.
09/04/2023 08:32Tyara Harris
Chap 4: I am confused on why she is so upset about her dad stepping down from being a Beta. She stated it in an earlier chapter that she knew he was going to.
09/04/2023 08:32
fantasydream
I'm wondering why the front of the book has a white girl with blonde hair on it, when the girl in the girl in the book in Latino with black hair 🤔 I'd suggest a change.
09/04/2023 08:31Rachel Harbor
OMG! I really am having a hard time reading this story. It has Potential, but too much unnecessary detail. I don’t care that she took a shower for the 100th time in a day and towel dried her hair and body with a green towel. also the math doesn’t add up. she has a brother who is a year older than herself and their birthday is a week apart, but both turning 18? that’s not a year apart. I want to continue but honestly the way the story is written reminds me of a high schooler tell their friend a story… honestly the author has potential I just think they need to revise the story. I understand writing takes a talent and I’d like to see the author succeed.
09/04/2023 08:29Elizabeth Schonauer
oh my gawd. I've never read a book with my town in it. Tulare, Ca. lawd have mercy.
09/04/2023 08:26Dania O
Cute
09/04/2023 08:23Joanne Patrick-Allan
At first I wasn't going to read but I like all the comments Bella Jersey 2 wrote. I'll give it a read and see what it's like.
09/04/2023 08:11
Bella Jersey 2
final goodbyes: congratulations to real man/alpha/mate Alpha Kyle
09/04/2023 08:08Bella Jersey 2
she’s gone: we need the second traitor. I have an pleasant we can make Eric demise slow and painfully. let’s start by skinning him alive. I’m like this idea
09/04/2023 08:08Tabitha Nichols
the story is very detailed, so detailed that I find myself skimming the writing to actually get to the story.
09/04/2023 08:03
Anna Morris
well i haven't even gotten past the first chapter yet ,but i absolutely love how you done the intro to this book. can't wait to see how it plays out and if it holds my attention.
09/04/2023 08:02Bella Jersey 2
truth be told: the rogues knew who Lexi was the whole time. they purposely poisoned her father. that hurts the worse.
09/04/2023 08:02Bella Jersey 2
the final goodbyes: Kyle was a stupid selfish a$$hole. he died a hero’s death. he also died a true mate’s death. he sacrificed his happiness so Lexi can be happy. see Lexi he lived to his faith in him. makes me cry
09/04/2023 08:00Bella Jersey 2
she’s gone: you jumped the a little by tell me. my real life and Lexi are similar with parents death Mom (2011) Dad (2013)
09/04/2023 08:00Bella Jersey 2
the ceremony part 1: I’m curious so what’s up Dad
09/04/2023 07:57Susan Grace Lester-Toney
nice love reading
09/04/2023 07:56Amber Perry
ok first chapter I see 2 major flaws....1 is that her and her brother are both turning 18 within 2 weeks of each other yet they are not twins.... obviously they MUST NOT BE related really!!!!! And 2 is that school is only a month or 2 long?????? the story says " In addition, today is Friday and the first day back to school (thank the Moon Goddess); I am finally a senior." then later it says " You see, Carson is next in line for the Beta position and our father is going to hand him the position after Alpha Greyson retires and Kyle steps in as Alpha. So basically, that'll happen in next month after we graduate." idk any school inn this country that has a school year of only 2 months!!!!!!
09/04/2023 07:52Bella Jersey 2
getting to know her: Jaxon sound perfect. now the little boy alpha can go play with his toys
09/04/2023 07:51Bella Jersey 2
the explanation: congratulations to our boy Kyle asshole of year!
09/04/2023 07:51ok, reading the second paragraph and I will be finishing this book wether I like it or not. I live in Visalia,Ca lol so random
09/04/2023 07:49Bella Jersey 2
completing the mating bond: I was nice but you might want to buff up somewhat. maybe you’re cool with talking about the passion. you know what they thought, felt, crave, and wanting to share that
09/04/2023 07:47
Kiarla
the amount of insignificant detail is overwhelming. first time I've stopped reading a book because it was too painful to read about how she towel dried her hair for the tenth time
09/04/2023 07:47Bella Jersey 2
the final war: I can see another sacrifice coming
09/04/2023 07:47Bella Jersey 2
I can’t decide: he was the second traitor the whole time
09/04/2023 07:47Bella Jersey 2
birthday ruined: I feel bad for Kyle’s wolf HE wants his mate. Kyle the boy can get reality check he rejected her. Lexi accepted now the little boy can go play with his games
09/04/2023 07:43Bella Jersey 2
chapter 2: I’m glad Carson found his mate. I wonder why Kyle was at the lake last night
09/04/2023 07:43Bella Jersey 2
chapter 1: interesting first day
09/04/2023 07:43Bella Jersey 2
truth be told 2: it’s scary how cold blooded he is. he had to poison her Mom or Carson
09/04/2023 07:41Bella Jersey 2
the truth: why did Mom not Dad tell her the truth about who she is?
09/04/2023 07:40Bella Jersey 2
I can’t decide: what Jaxon talk doing their marking right sounds delicious. the better have oxygen, water, Gatorade, and food standing by. they could add whip cream and chocolate syrup just saying
09/04/2023 07:35
Legend of Gru
I’m currently on the chapter Birthday and I was wondering if you could clear up this whole issue with Alex and Carson’s age difference is they are blood siblings. If they are then shouldn’t Carson be turning 19 instead of 18 because there is no way they could have had a 1.5 week difference between them, especially if Alex is turning 18 as well. otherwise it’s an interesting read
09/04/2023 07:33Floreadsalot O
it's her 18th but her brothers less than a month ago? math the math don't add up
09/04/2023 07:30Bella Jersey 2
time to meet them: I think we broke Bri over there
09/04/2023 07:30Bella Jersey 2
alpha Jaxon: is it bad that I want to watch him beat Kyle up?! no I don’t think so
09/04/2023 07:30Bella Jersey 2
beta’s death: i hope Kyle is not alpha. maybe his Dad can bypass him. I couldn’t imagine this would make a good pack environment
09/04/2023 07:30Bella Jersey 2
the ceremony part 2: why would someone want to poison her Dad. if it’s the flozzy from the cafeteria god help her
09/04/2023 07:30Bella Jersey 2
the ceremony part 2: reminds me of when my Dad told me he had cancer
09/04/2023 07:30Bella Jersey 2
the second traitor you threw me a curveball
09/04/2023 07:29
Katie Factor
I'm confused in the first chapter. At first she's saying it's their first day back to school and she's finally a senior, but then when she's talking about her brother taking over the beta position, she says it'll happen in a month after they graduate. Is their school year only a month long?
09/04/2023 07:29
Cindy A
I loved the book but I would like to know what happened with Carson and his mate plus her friends Briana and Brandon... glad that this book had a happy ending
09/04/2023 07:26
