The Moon's Descendant Comments

  • Reader-112268

    great start, enjoy a lot

    09/05/2023 05:16

  • Kay Pearson

    Keep reading to find out what happens next; Book 2, Mother of the Moon Book 3, Twin Moon

    09/05/2023 02:38

  • y3m9 while I appreciate the hard work the author must have put into this, I've gotten to the point that I'm just not into that level of violence against women. Quite the turn off/not my cup of tea.

    09/05/2023 00:19

  • Reader-408690

    y3m9 while so much abuse and heartache this is such a good story so far. can’t wait to see her grow with love and support and become a huge threat and defense.

    09/05/2023 00:11

  • Stacey Stratton

    y3m9 based off of the intro, it sounds like a very interesting story. I don’t love stories with this much abuse, so I think I’ll skip this one.

    09/04/2023 23:52

  • y3m9 This whole challenge makes me add more books to my reading list, look forward to reading it. Does anybody know it it's finished? And if it has a happy ending? I'm a sucker for happy endings.

    09/04/2023 22:50

  • Sunflowher 🌻

    I love this book. I love your writing style. the two different perspectives give a really clear picture of the story.

    09/04/2023 22:24

  • Claire Morrison

    loved this hard going reading double chapters but worth it

    09/04/2023 22:12

  • Vilma Carpin Buhawe

    Why is her wolf not protecting her against her father?

    09/04/2023 21:36

  • Vilma Carpin Buhawe

    I can't stand reading like this extreme cruelty especially from a parent anymore. I've read lot with the same plots.I know it's fiction but the cruelty is too much and unrealistic and her wolf is not even helping her.

    09/04/2023 21:27

  • Reader-411492

    loved the story would love to read part 2. where can I find it?

    09/04/2023 17:36

  • Christine Barrett

    I love the story but if the whole book is double chapters both perspective I will quit early I don’t want to re read every dam chapter. bring both together in the same chapter.

    09/04/2023 16:11

  • Marissa Hayden

    will they be released here?

    09/04/2023 15:35

  • Stacey Burrows

    the other book arent on anystories? i can't find them

    09/04/2023 15:21

  • Rhonda Jean

    interesting writing style. I like seeing both POV, I’m just used to being presented differently… like every other chapter, or to show more differences. I do however love the story!

    09/04/2023 14:58

  • Gabriella Nastasa

    i can't wait the next book, when it will be ready?

    09/04/2023 14:31

  • Lisa Costa

    when is the next book coming out?

    09/04/2023 14:19

  • Melissa Sturgill

    why so much repeat?

    09/04/2023 14:04

  • i will say I love the perspective switch but it throws me off with how far back each one’s goes. like I wouldn’t think it would go back that far and I have to redo everything again

    09/04/2023 12:07

  • Alexandra Nala S

    great book! can't wait for the second one

    09/04/2023 11:28

  • Lesly Martin

    so good. really gripped me from the start

    09/04/2023 11:26

  • Dianne Smallwood

    This is really a great book

    09/04/2023 11:18

  • Reader-161380

    👍

    09/04/2023 11:15

  • Candice

    when is the next book being released?

    09/04/2023 11:12

  • AraVido

    really good so far. Instead of switching POV way after time has passed, I’d suggest to do it next to each other on the same timeline. but it switches after a while and it’s like you have to start back at the beginning. Restructure it so the different POVs overlap each other

    09/04/2023 11:00

  • Dianne Smallwood

    Zee

    09/04/2023 10:55

  • chapter 67 read ex part 2. is this correct? where is part 1 of that then? unless I am missing something

    09/04/2023 10:25

  • Nichole Gray

    I am not a fan of how it switches back and forth telling much of the story twice that being said this book was amazing I was hooked read it in one night and I'm mad that I have to wait for more.

    09/04/2023 10:13

  • Kavita Thanky

    like the story so far...

    09/04/2023 10:09

  • TJ Gray

    when is soon for the new book to start?

    09/04/2023 09:58

  • Kavita Thanky

    ❤️

    09/04/2023 09:54

  • Olya Alexandrovna

    amazing book!! can someone tells me if it keeps on being redundant tho with the different POVs .. I really don't want to lose interest but so hard to read those chapters.

    09/04/2023 09:22

  • I was hoping part 2 would continue the story with Zeleanas and Tobias and the rest but I don’t think thst story has ended ☹️

    09/04/2023 09:01

  • I was hoping part 2 would continue the story with Zeleanas and Tobias and the rest but I don’t think thst story has ended ☹️

    09/04/2023 09:01

  • Vickie Lynn Puckett

    I loved this story. I can't wait for the second book.

    09/04/2023 09:00

  • AZ Trouble

    This is a wonderful story, except for one thing: Rehashing the same scene, but from the other persons POV. In my opinion, this redundant and unnecessary. It’s like taking one step forward in the story only to go two steps back to relay the whole scene again from the other person’s POV. No problem with POVs…just run it concurrently within the storyline’s timeline.

    09/04/2023 09:00

  • Tarah Krainski

    I love this story. I wish I could read th whole thing and no t have to stop

    09/04/2023 08:57

  • Marie Perron

    love it !

    09/04/2023 08:53

  • How will we know when the next one comes out?

    09/04/2023 08:51

  • Amy Middlemiss

    cant wait for the next one!

    09/04/2023 08:49

  • love this story so far! can't put it down! good job author on keeping us wanting more :)

    09/04/2023 08:46

  • Nikita Kamble

    i like cole at the first place and thought that may be he will ended up with her but then this gunner came... now I don't know where this story will take

    09/04/2023 08:41

  • Stephanie Jade

    I love this book so much put I find myself skipping the chapters that are in the other person's pov, amazing book but the extra pov isn't needed in my opinion 💗

    09/04/2023 08:29

  • April Borchers

    My thought says it Gunner is holding back Because he thought that she was raped by her father because when he found her she was just in a T-shirt with no panties on but he didn’t realize she had just gotten back from shifting and that’s all she could find so he’s holding off on them bonding because he doesn’t think she can handle it right now and she wasn’t even raped

    09/04/2023 08:21

  • Aesthelia

    ...I really want Cole to get his happy ending too.... ;-;

    09/04/2023 08:18

  • Margarita 🍹

    I love this story but I don't like how it switches perspectives. It would be better to show perspectives within each chapter instead of retelling chapters.

    09/04/2023 08:16

  • Redangel19

    I loved this book how do u find the second one mother of the moon I have to read it

    09/04/2023 08:15

  • Bella Jersey 2

    it was wonderful seeing it from his POV. he sounds like good guy

    09/04/2023 08:14

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 5: something not right with Zee

    09/04/2023 08:08

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 3: the mini heart attacks aren’t cool. Gunner felt her pain when they were close. now that she’s that bad will he feel anything?

    09/04/2023 08:05

  • holy crappppppppp 🤛🏼🥷🏻🐺☪️

    09/04/2023 08:02

  • so far I really like this story 😊

    09/04/2023 07:57

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 9: Gunner so sweet but when all you had faced and seen is evil. it’s really hard to believe in good

    09/04/2023 07:53

  • Kaylin Joye

    this book was really great!

    09/04/2023 07:51

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 6: Zee had no clue what she was or is

    09/04/2023 07:51

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 4: the guys were waiting for her. did they miss her trying to sneak outta of her house to go to SCHOOL. how many teenagers do you know that sneak outta of their house to go to school?

    09/04/2023 07:49

  • Jocelyn Soto

    nvm, I just didn't read it correctly. my bad

    09/04/2023 07:48

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 1: she’s so scared who can blame her

    09/04/2023 07:46

  • April Borchers

    I loved every minute of it thank you so much you are an excellent writer and I am going to read mother of the moon thank you

    09/04/2023 07:45

  • Minithe Libra

    more please

    09/04/2023 07:44

  • Rana

    thank you for writing it ☺️❤️

    09/04/2023 07:39

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 10: interesting

    09/04/2023 07:37

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 2: she is really stronger than anyone thinks

    09/04/2023 07:35

  • I can’t wait for book two!!!

    09/04/2023 07:35

  • yay!! so excited for book2!

    09/04/2023 07:34

  • Trisha Reynolds

    when is book 2 coming out

    09/04/2023 07:34

  • Katrina Klingensmith

    Very good!! Ended too quickly, but looking forward to the sequel.

    09/04/2023 07:31

  • J.S. Teal Ribbon

    Just a question but do you know how many chapters there will be? I want to read but hate to have stop and wait.

    09/04/2023 07:30

  • Rana

    Hello, I love this story like really I read it all in 30min I am wondering when the next Update is going to be ?

    09/04/2023 07:30

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 7: it looks like Gunner and the guys saved her. she also meet the moon goddess. not a long conversation

    09/04/2023 07:30

  • Go Zeeeee!!!!!

    09/04/2023 07:29

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 3: I did love when she tried to self bash herself Gunner didn’t like it

    09/04/2023 07:29

  • Jocelyn Soto

    so Zelena is a guy? this is good but kinda confused me

    09/04/2023 07:28

  • I really love this story 💜

    09/04/2023 07:28

  • For the author Kay Pearson - please write more! This is a really really good story and I’d love to see more from you !

    09/04/2023 07:28