The Moon's Descendant Comments
Reader-112268
great start, enjoy a lot
09/05/2023 05:16
Kay Pearson
Keep reading to find out what happens next; Book 2, Mother of the Moon Book 3, Twin Moon
09/05/2023 02:38y3m9 while I appreciate the hard work the author must have put into this, I've gotten to the point that I'm just not into that level of violence against women. Quite the turn off/not my cup of tea.
09/05/2023 00:19Reader-408690
y3m9 while so much abuse and heartache this is such a good story so far. can’t wait to see her grow with love and support and become a huge threat and defense.
09/05/2023 00:11Stacey Stratton
y3m9 based off of the intro, it sounds like a very interesting story. I don’t love stories with this much abuse, so I think I’ll skip this one.
09/04/2023 23:52y3m9 This whole challenge makes me add more books to my reading list, look forward to reading it. Does anybody know it it's finished? And if it has a happy ending? I'm a sucker for happy endings.
09/04/2023 22:50
Sunflowher 🌻
I love this book. I love your writing style. the two different perspectives give a really clear picture of the story.
09/04/2023 22:24Claire Morrison
loved this hard going reading double chapters but worth it
09/04/2023 22:12Vilma Carpin Buhawe
Why is her wolf not protecting her against her father?
09/04/2023 21:36Vilma Carpin Buhawe
I can't stand reading like this extreme cruelty especially from a parent anymore. I've read lot with the same plots.I know it's fiction but the cruelty is too much and unrealistic and her wolf is not even helping her.
09/04/2023 21:27Reader-411492
loved the story would love to read part 2. where can I find it?
09/04/2023 17:36Christine Barrett
I love the story but if the whole book is double chapters both perspective I will quit early I don’t want to re read every dam chapter. bring both together in the same chapter.
09/04/2023 16:11Marissa Hayden
will they be released here?
09/04/2023 15:35Stacey Burrows
the other book arent on anystories? i can't find them
09/04/2023 15:21Rhonda Jean
interesting writing style. I like seeing both POV, I’m just used to being presented differently… like every other chapter, or to show more differences. I do however love the story!
09/04/2023 14:58Gabriella Nastasa
i can't wait the next book, when it will be ready?
09/04/2023 14:31Lisa Costa
when is the next book coming out?
09/04/2023 14:19Melissa Sturgill
why so much repeat?
09/04/2023 14:04i will say I love the perspective switch but it throws me off with how far back each one’s goes. like I wouldn’t think it would go back that far and I have to redo everything again
09/04/2023 12:07Alexandra Nala S
great book! can't wait for the second one
09/04/2023 11:28Lesly Martin
so good. really gripped me from the start
09/04/2023 11:26Dianne Smallwood
This is really a great book
09/04/2023 11:18Reader-161380
👍
09/04/2023 11:15
Candice
when is the next book being released?
09/04/2023 11:12AraVido
really good so far. Instead of switching POV way after time has passed, I’d suggest to do it next to each other on the same timeline. but it switches after a while and it’s like you have to start back at the beginning. Restructure it so the different POVs overlap each other
09/04/2023 11:00Dianne Smallwood
Zee
09/04/2023 10:55chapter 67 read ex part 2. is this correct? where is part 1 of that then? unless I am missing something
09/04/2023 10:25Nichole Gray
I am not a fan of how it switches back and forth telling much of the story twice that being said this book was amazing I was hooked read it in one night and I'm mad that I have to wait for more.
09/04/2023 10:13Kavita Thanky
like the story so far...
09/04/2023 10:09
TJ Gray
when is soon for the new book to start?
09/04/2023 09:58Kavita Thanky
❤️
09/04/2023 09:54Olya Alexandrovna
amazing book!! can someone tells me if it keeps on being redundant tho with the different POVs .. I really don't want to lose interest but so hard to read those chapters.
09/04/2023 09:22I was hoping part 2 would continue the story with Zeleanas and Tobias and the rest but I don’t think thst story has ended ☹️
09/04/2023 09:01I was hoping part 2 would continue the story with Zeleanas and Tobias and the rest but I don’t think thst story has ended ☹️
09/04/2023 09:01Vickie Lynn Puckett
I loved this story. I can't wait for the second book.
09/04/2023 09:00AZ Trouble
This is a wonderful story, except for one thing: Rehashing the same scene, but from the other persons POV. In my opinion, this redundant and unnecessary. It’s like taking one step forward in the story only to go two steps back to relay the whole scene again from the other person’s POV. No problem with POVs…just run it concurrently within the storyline’s timeline.
09/04/2023 09:00Tarah Krainski
I love this story. I wish I could read th whole thing and no t have to stop
09/04/2023 08:57Marie Perron
love it !
09/04/2023 08:53How will we know when the next one comes out?
09/04/2023 08:51Amy Middlemiss
cant wait for the next one!
09/04/2023 08:49love this story so far! can't put it down! good job author on keeping us wanting more :)
09/04/2023 08:46Nikita Kamble
i like cole at the first place and thought that may be he will ended up with her but then this gunner came... now I don't know where this story will take
09/04/2023 08:41Stephanie Jade
I love this book so much put I find myself skipping the chapters that are in the other person's pov, amazing book but the extra pov isn't needed in my opinion 💗
09/04/2023 08:29April Borchers
My thought says it Gunner is holding back Because he thought that she was raped by her father because when he found her she was just in a T-shirt with no panties on but he didn’t realize she had just gotten back from shifting and that’s all she could find so he’s holding off on them bonding because he doesn’t think she can handle it right now and she wasn’t even raped
09/04/2023 08:21
Aesthelia
...I really want Cole to get his happy ending too.... ;-;
09/04/2023 08:18
Margarita 🍹
I love this story but I don't like how it switches perspectives. It would be better to show perspectives within each chapter instead of retelling chapters.
09/04/2023 08:16Redangel19
I loved this book how do u find the second one mother of the moon I have to read it
09/04/2023 08:15
Bella Jersey 2
it was wonderful seeing it from his POV. he sounds like good guy
09/04/2023 08:14Bella Jersey 2
chapter 5: something not right with Zee
09/04/2023 08:08Bella Jersey 2
chapter 3: the mini heart attacks aren’t cool. Gunner felt her pain when they were close. now that she’s that bad will he feel anything?
09/04/2023 08:05holy crappppppppp 🤛🏼🥷🏻🐺☪️
09/04/2023 08:02so far I really like this story 😊
09/04/2023 07:57Bella Jersey 2
chapter 9: Gunner so sweet but when all you had faced and seen is evil. it’s really hard to believe in good
09/04/2023 07:53Kaylin Joye
this book was really great!
09/04/2023 07:51Bella Jersey 2
chapter 6: Zee had no clue what she was or is
09/04/2023 07:51Bella Jersey 2
chapter 4: the guys were waiting for her. did they miss her trying to sneak outta of her house to go to SCHOOL. how many teenagers do you know that sneak outta of their house to go to school?
09/04/2023 07:49Jocelyn Soto
nvm, I just didn't read it correctly. my bad
09/04/2023 07:48Bella Jersey 2
chapter 1: she’s so scared who can blame her
09/04/2023 07:46April Borchers
I loved every minute of it thank you so much you are an excellent writer and I am going to read mother of the moon thank you
09/04/2023 07:45Minithe Libra
more please
09/04/2023 07:44
Rana
thank you for writing it ☺️❤️
09/04/2023 07:39Bella Jersey 2
chapter 10: interesting
09/04/2023 07:37Bella Jersey 2
chapter 2: she is really stronger than anyone thinks
09/04/2023 07:35I can’t wait for book two!!!
09/04/2023 07:35yay!! so excited for book2!
09/04/2023 07:34
Trisha Reynolds
when is book 2 coming out
09/04/2023 07:34Katrina Klingensmith
Very good!! Ended too quickly, but looking forward to the sequel.
09/04/2023 07:31
J.S. Teal Ribbon
Just a question but do you know how many chapters there will be? I want to read but hate to have stop and wait.
09/04/2023 07:30Rana
Hello, I love this story like really I read it all in 30min I am wondering when the next Update is going to be ?
09/04/2023 07:30Bella Jersey 2
chapter 7: it looks like Gunner and the guys saved her. she also meet the moon goddess. not a long conversation
09/04/2023 07:30Go Zeeeee!!!!!
09/04/2023 07:29Bella Jersey 2
chapter 3: I did love when she tried to self bash herself Gunner didn’t like it
09/04/2023 07:29Jocelyn Soto
so Zelena is a guy? this is good but kinda confused me
09/04/2023 07:28I really love this story 💜
09/04/2023 07:28For the author Kay Pearson - please write more! This is a really really good story and I’d love to see more from you !
09/04/2023 07:28
