The Alpha's Game Comments
Kellie Wilson
loved both books thank you for the break for reality!
03/21/2025 01:53
Michibeba
#u3i8# just from the introduction, I can’t understand it very well, it seems I would have a har time reading it, hopefully it gets some editing done and I would consider coming back to it
09/05/2023 00:25
Megan Phillips
u3i8 Just by reading the first chapter of this book you instantly feel bad for the young woman who's father who's upset with her being weak.
09/05/2023 00:19Sumriti Singh
u3i8 i loved the introduction and started reading bt cudnt make much sense so at the end left it on between may be if it gets edited i wud read it
09/05/2023 00:12Gemma Butler
u3i8 I’ve just read the first few chapters of this book and it sounds very interesting so far. can’t wait to keep reading
09/04/2023 23:56Irma Beck
u3i8 I really do not like Carter. He is a sleaze ball. I am hoping he isn't her mate. such a cruel man. definitely going to keep this on my to read further list of books
09/04/2023 23:56
Reader-529162
#u2i8# Ooh this looks really interesting! Looking forward to reading the rest of the book later on!
09/04/2023 23:52Bianca Bratu
u3i8 this book keeps you wanting more and it entices you even from the very first chapter. i will definetely read it and from what I read so far i could even recommend it to someone else
09/04/2023 23:52Rafael
#u3i8# I like either introduction. it seems a interesting story with many twists. I added it in my library and I think is going to be a fun read
09/04/2023 23:50u3i8 #u3i8 the introduction is captivating from the get go. I'm intrigued at how the story develops as the plot looks interesting
09/04/2023 23:47Maria Cecilia Reyes-Meliton
u3i8 This story really needs serious editing. It feels like it was poorly translated from another language.
09/04/2023 23:33Julie Mejia Zertuche
u3i8 just started this story and already can't put it down. I do like this one isn't like all the other werewolf stories
09/04/2023 23:32Me Myself
u3i8 Interesting book so far. I hope the story is complete so we can enjoy it to the end.
09/04/2023 23:15
Joele G
u3i8 the intro of this story ropes you in to reading it; the twist of the story who is her true mate is what caught my attention.
09/04/2023 23:08Me Myself
u3i8 Interesting book so far I hope this story is complete so I can enjoy it to the end
09/04/2023 22:47Linda Strandquist
u3i8 why is she and her mom so weak. this an interesting direction usually they are stron. hope this story keeps building
09/04/2023 22:44Cadence Phillips
Cant wait to see The Alpha's Secret on this site!
09/04/2023 22:06Rita M Reynolds
i really enjoyed both novels!! I can’t wait until read more novels from you. please keep on writing.
09/04/2023 20:56Vilma Carpin Buhawe
This is a strange character for an Alpha's daughter. With alpha's blood she should have that power by birth then why she is acting like an omega and clueless even about the mate bond. And considering that her father's pack is the second strongest among all packs. This just loss my interest to continue reading this story.
09/04/2023 19:41Karen Unger
dose this girl ever get some strength?
09/04/2023 13:57Rita Polk
enjoyed reading
09/04/2023 12:28Bethanie Jewel
very hard to read
09/04/2023 11:54I bet it’s willow there doing it for because there’s always a sister/cousin/best friend that takes everything that is supposed to be hers just so she can be Luna of her pack & enjoy torturing her
09/04/2023 10:04people are mentoring a second book what is the title of the second book?
09/04/2023 09:42Rachel
loved these books can't wait for more
09/04/2023 09:33Absolutely beautiful story. I love it.💗🌹🐉
09/04/2023 09:32Heather Kreisher
too many grammatical errors. the story sounds good but I can’t get past all the errors.
09/04/2023 09:31I hope she finds her mate. Her dress sounds beautiful.
09/04/2023 08:58
Bella Jersey 2
I hope he’s safe
09/04/2023 08:54Bella Jersey 2
I hope they are happy 26
09/04/2023 08:54Bella Jersey 2
I’ll hold him for you Kane 23
09/04/2023 08:50Bella Jersey 2
this just goes to show how messed up this world is. this might be why Lee’s dad behaved the way he did. look what the king allowed to happen to his realm. 23
09/04/2023 08:50Bella Jersey 2
yah they are all safe
09/04/2023 08:49Molly McMullin-Yohe
I 100% thought Adam was gay.
09/04/2023 08:49Bella Jersey 2
she’s a better person than I am he abandoned her when she needed him the most. where was the rest of his people not slapping him in the head your Luna NEEDS you. 25
09/04/2023 08:43Bella Jersey 2
knock em dead Clair 23
09/04/2023 08:40Bella Jersey 2
oh boy they are both in trouble 20
09/04/2023 08:32Bella Jersey 2
I hope she starts trusting herself. but being what she’s been through that might be easier said than done 17
09/04/2023 08:32Bella Jersey 2
if Mason is hurting our girl I’m getting a new rug
09/04/2023 08:30Bella Jersey 2
will they go all the way?
09/04/2023 08:30Bella Jersey 2
we have to give Leoni some way that she feels in control of her life
09/04/2023 08:28Bella Jersey 2
that’s saddest part a lot of these werewolves world it’s doggy dog world
09/04/2023 08:28Bella Jersey 2
I forgot how did she get the scar? was it daddy dearest?
09/04/2023 08:28Bella Jersey 2
he doesn’t deserve her either
09/04/2023 08:28Bella Jersey 2
oh dear lord what now
09/04/2023 08:27Bella Jersey 2
so sad about mom she deserved better
09/04/2023 08:26Bella Jersey 2
my is delusional or been brainwashed
09/04/2023 08:26Bella Jersey 2
I’m kicking Kane selfish pathetic ass
09/04/2023 08:26Reader-924037
What a good book AND…without chapters and chapters of smut😃😃😃!! Loved it and looking forward to to reading the sequel 🥰🥰🥰🥰
09/04/2023 08:25Bella Jersey 2
yes Kane your entire kingdom does not only consist of alpha, beta, and gamma. there’s a whole alpha in between
09/04/2023 08:24Bella Jersey 2
that was sweet he showed her his checking accounts
09/04/2023 08:24Bella Jersey 2
mom is basically a victim of abuse herself. so sad and sick that she can allow her daughter to be abused
09/04/2023 08:23Bella Jersey 2
I’d make dad suffer for his rudeness. Maleficent for sleeping beauty didn’t like when she did receive invitations
09/04/2023 08:23Anna Kurowski
the dates for everything don't make sense. there are 7 days in a week. 2 weeks from the time she first fainted before the wedding. which is 14 days. she slept for 2 days so that leaves 12 days. then she is locked in her room for 5 days which leaves 7 days before the wedding. but then you said 12 days and that just contradicts all the stuff. time line is very important to a story.
09/04/2023 08:23Bella Jersey 2
there’s no way he’s admitting to this
09/04/2023 08:23
Bonib2
She's a bit pathetic? Carter is clearly not her mate yet she go along with the pretense? How dumb can she be?🤔🙄
09/04/2023 08:23Bella Jersey 2
is her wolf broken or this just a happy quincidence that lead pack warrrior is her mate?
09/04/2023 08:23
DeAnna Phillips
She is quite stupid.
09/04/2023 08:23Bella Jersey 2
please let mom be okay
09/04/2023 08:21this book seems good at this point but needs so much editing!!!
09/04/2023 08:20Tracy Black
Is the second book continued from the first or is it about a different couple? I've started reading the book and am enjoying it so far, but am just wondering about the second one 💙
09/04/2023 08:19Bella Jersey 2
wrong mind frame there Leoni didn’t allow the runt label beat her. at that point in time right there right now she had to survive. that what she chose to survive
09/04/2023 08:19Bella Jersey 2
anybody like asshole for dessert? 23
09/04/2023 08:19Bella Jersey 2
this part shows how he was a horrible king
09/04/2023 08:19CharlieV96
Wow I just can't believe the stupidity of how she can't even tell anyone he's not her mate?
09/04/2023 08:19Jenny Best Camacho
just excellent, love the drama, looking forward for more. Good Luck !!!
09/04/2023 08:18I feel like her having such a strong mate should make her stronger. I hope so because right now it’s really bad.
09/04/2023 08:18Bella Jersey 2
is she running away?
09/04/2023 08:18
kitty5127
if she’s been in confinement for five days how can the wedding be in twelve??
09/04/2023 08:18DeAnna Phillips
The king is stupid. He has no idea what has happened to her and has not tried to find out but just wants his way no matter what.
09/04/2023 08:18Jenny Best Camacho
excellent book, read it in one seating
09/04/2023 08:18Bella Jersey 2
LOL right this was Mr. Blood
09/04/2023 08:17Amanda Caruana
I absolutely LOVED both these books!! I couldn't put them down
09/04/2023 08:16Bella Jersey 2
Kane is becoming human thank god but threats are cruel. he forgets where she comes from and what rumors she heard. real good move threatening her puppy
09/04/2023 08:15Bella Jersey 2
it’s so sad is that Leoni is that sick and abused. was there an abused scene I missed?
09/04/2023 08:15Bella Jersey 2
I think the puppy needs a chew toy. I think Carter will fill that roll nicely
09/04/2023 08:15
Rebeca Castro
the second story makes me soooo sad
09/04/2023 08:10I liked it 😍 But the two day pregnancy kinda confused me a bit 🤪 I know... royal blood and everything, but still kinda confusing... But very nice story 😍
09/04/2023 08:10Selen Rose
omg where's the spicy part of it😫😫😫😫 how could you just leave it like that AAAHHHH😫😫😫 (Great writing tho love it just want some more spice lol)
09/04/2023 08:09I read both books today!! keep up the good work!!
09/04/2023 08:08Bella Jersey 2
dad is just pathetic
09/04/2023 08:07Bella Jersey 2
did someone poison her?
09/04/2023 08:07Joanne Baker
Decent story. Leoni is a bit dense though, seriously no way I'm letting crazy mom near my kid
09/04/2023 08:05
melsipher
the puppy is in a bad mood! i keep laughing at that line
09/04/2023 08:03
Donna Moncus
I loved both of the books. can't wait for more of your work
09/04/2023 08:03Bella Jersey 2
I’m smacking dad or wannabe for Leoni. they aren’t he is
09/04/2023 08:00Ashleigh Lee
I love this book
09/04/2023 07:58
lolliedear
This is so good so far! can’t wait to read more!
09/04/2023 07:57Bella Jersey 2
we have to check on mom
09/04/2023 07:53Bella Jersey 2
I’m sorry Mason I thought bad thoughts about you. and yes we are making mom a widow
09/04/2023 07:53Bella Jersey 2
Adam is big meanie scaring a little dog but little bad wolf
09/04/2023 07:53Bella Jersey 2
YES cockblocker Bear
09/04/2023 07:53CharlieV96
.... Why can she not feel that Carter isn't her mate? Or is he?
09/04/2023 07:53Bella Jersey 2
new friend and Carter got a mate YES
09/04/2023 07:51Susan Anderson
I think Alphas Game is good but could be great. I feel the story line was rushed a bit so a lot of things happened that was a little unrealistic. I think the idea of the book is great but I would have liked to know more from Alpha Kane's history and what made him be so ruthless and unmerciful. I think you did a good job though.
09/04/2023 07:47Bella Jersey 2
LOL HOLD UP HOLD UP huge black wolf in office what does cousin say in his head oh no puppy in a bad mood
09/04/2023 07:47Bella Jersey 2
not surprised she turn to eating disorder. she is right Carter would make fun of her for being fat
09/04/2023 07:47Bella Jersey 2
why does alpha king gets weakest mate ever?
09/04/2023 07:47Bella Jersey 2
I hope Adam not in that room.
09/04/2023 07:47Bella Jersey 2
this is a nightmare
09/04/2023 07:47
