The Alpha's Game Comments
Linda Strandquist
u3i8 why is she and her mom so weak. this an interesting direction usually they are stron. hope this story keeps building
04/06/2023 05:21Me Myself
u3i8 Interesting book so far. I hope the story is complete so we can enjoy it to the end.
04/06/2023 01:02
Jan T
u3i8 #u3i8 the introduction is captivating from the get go. I'm intrigued at how the story develops as the plot looks interesting
04/05/2023 23:52
Joele G
u3i8 the intro of this story ropes you in to reading it; the twist of the story who is her true mate is what caught my attention.
04/05/2023 19:37Rafael
#u3i8# I like either introduction. it seems a interesting story with many twists. I added it in my library and I think is going to be a fun read
04/05/2023 19:16Sumriti Singh
u3i8 i loved the introduction and started reading bt cudnt make much sense so at the end left it on between may be if it gets edited i wud read it
04/05/2023 19:06
Michibeba
#u3i8# just from the introduction, I can’t understand it very well, it seems I would have a har time reading it, hopefully it gets some editing done and I would consider coming back to it
04/05/2023 15:51Maria Cecilia Reyes-Meliton
u3i8 This story really needs serious editing. It feels like it was poorly translated from another language.
04/05/2023 14:22Bianca Bratu
u3i8 this book keeps you wanting more and it entices you even from the very first chapter. i will definetely read it and from what I read so far i could even recommend it to someone else
04/05/2023 12:19
Megan Phillips
u3i8 Just by reading the first chapter of this book you instantly feel bad for the young woman who's father who's upset with her being weak.
04/05/2023 11:01Gemma Butler
u3i8 I’ve just read the first few chapters of this book and it sounds very interesting so far. can’t wait to keep reading
04/05/2023 10:38Irma Beck
u3i8 I really do not like Carter. He is a sleaze ball. I am hoping he isn't her mate. such a cruel man. definitely going to keep this on my to read further list of books
04/05/2023 07:59
Reader-529162
#u2i8# Ooh this looks really interesting! Looking forward to reading the rest of the book later on!
04/05/2023 07:29Me Myself
u3i8 Interesting book so far I hope this story is complete so I can enjoy it to the end
04/05/2023 03:57Julie Mejia Zertuche
u3i8 just started this story and already can't put it down. I do like this one isn't like all the other werewolf stories
04/05/2023 03:53Cadence Phillips
Cant wait to see The Alpha's Secret on this site!
02/25/2023 01:22Rita M Reynolds
i really enjoyed both novels!! I can’t wait until read more novels from you. please keep on writing.
02/17/2023 06:00Vilma Carpin Buhawe
This is a strange character for an Alpha's daughter. With alpha's blood she should have that power by birth then why she is acting like an omega and clueless even about the mate bond. And considering that her father's pack is the second strongest among all packs. This just loss my interest to continue reading this story.
12/20/2022 05:25Kathy Kinsley
I hope the grammar improves as it goes on. It is hard to follow what the writer intends to say with a sentence that doesn't fit with the rest of the paragraph.
09/26/2022 14:26Karen Unger
dose this girl ever get some strength?
04/11/2022 22:52Rita Polk
enjoyed reading
03/17/2022 02:35
B_9991
I read the original novel when it was on another reading site and the authors grammar/English was amazing there! I think sometimes when stories are signed on here - the AnyStories team can edit and make changes. I’m assuming that this must be the case here since I’ve seen the same thing happen with a few other authors too! Her new novel on here though is a great read so far so maybe check that out?
03/10/2022 11:34Bethanie Jewel
very hard to read
02/22/2022 20:59
Vanessa
people are mentoring a second book what is the title of the second book?
12/11/2021 16:13
Tia Luna
I bet it’s willow there doing it for because there’s always a sister/cousin/best friend that takes everything that is supposed to be hers just so she can be Luna of her pack & enjoy torturing her
12/11/2021 09:15Heather Kreisher
too many grammatical errors. the story sounds good but I can’t get past all the errors.
11/27/2021 03:42CJ Pirscher
Absolutely beautiful story. I love it.💗🌹🐉
10/30/2021 08:45Rachel
loved these books can't wait for more
10/28/2021 15:09
Geneva McWhorter
I hope she finds her mate. Her dress sounds beautiful.
10/04/2021 08:56
Bella Jersey 2
I hope he’s safe
09/21/2021 07:25Bella Jersey 2
yah they are all safe
09/21/2021 07:19Bella Jersey 2
I hope they are happy 26
09/15/2021 16:42Bella Jersey 2
she’s a better person than I am he abandoned her when she needed him the most. where was the rest of his people not slapping him in the head your Luna NEEDS you. 25
09/15/2021 16:32Bella Jersey 2
anybody like asshole for dessert? 23
09/14/2021 04:26Bella Jersey 2
knock em dead Clair 23
09/14/2021 04:10Bella Jersey 2
I’ll hold him for you Kane 23
09/14/2021 03:53Bella Jersey 2
this just goes to show how messed up this world is. this might be why Lee’s dad behaved the way he did. look what the king allowed to happen to his realm. 23
09/14/2021 03:48Bella Jersey 2
oh boy they are both in trouble 20
09/14/2021 02:53Bella Jersey 2
I hope she starts trusting herself. but being what she’s been through that might be easier said than done 17
09/14/2021 02:22
QueenKae
I feel like her having such a strong mate should make her stronger. I hope so because right now it’s really bad.
09/01/2021 01:14Molly McMullin-Yohe
I 100% thought Adam was gay.
08/27/2021 01:07Anna Kurowski
the dates for everything don't make sense. there are 7 days in a week. 2 weeks from the time she first fainted before the wedding. which is 14 days. she slept for 2 days so that leaves 12 days. then she is locked in her room for 5 days which leaves 7 days before the wedding. but then you said 12 days and that just contradicts all the stuff. time line is very important to a story.
08/26/2021 04:23Reader-924037
What a good book AND…without chapters and chapters of smut😃😃😃!! Loved it and looking forward to to reading the sequel 🥰🥰🥰🥰
06/18/2021 05:06Reader-270304
this book seems good at this point but needs so much editing!!!
06/16/2021 23:56Jenny Best Camacho
just excellent, love the drama, looking forward for more. Good Luck !!!
06/16/2021 20:12Jenny Best Camacho
excellent book, read it in one seating
06/15/2021 04:52
Bonib2
She's a bit pathetic? Carter is clearly not her mate yet she go along with the pretense? How dumb can she be?🤔🙄
06/12/2021 19:13Bella Jersey 2
so sad about mom she deserved better
06/10/2021 12:43Bella Jersey 2
my is delusional or been brainwashed
06/10/2021 12:36Bella Jersey 2
please let mom be okay
06/10/2021 12:28Bella Jersey 2
we have to check on mom
06/10/2021 12:16Bella Jersey 2
I’m sorry Mason I thought bad thoughts about you. and yes we are making mom a widow
06/10/2021 11:54Bella Jersey 2
Adam is big meanie scaring a little dog but little bad wolf
06/10/2021 11:40Bella Jersey 2
if Mason is hurting our girl I’m getting a new rug
06/10/2021 11:39Bella Jersey 2
YES cockblocker Bear
06/10/2021 11:29Bella Jersey 2
will they go all the way?
06/10/2021 11:26Bella Jersey 2
LOL right this was Mr. Blood
06/10/2021 11:16Bella Jersey 2
I’m kicking Kane selfish pathetic ass
06/10/2021 11:09Bella Jersey 2
wrong mind frame there Leoni didn’t allow the runt label beat her. at that point in time right there right now she had to survive. that what she chose to survive
06/09/2021 12:11Bella Jersey 2
yes Kane your entire kingdom does not only consist of alpha, beta, and gamma. there’s a whole alpha in between
06/09/2021 11:33Bella Jersey 2
damn I hope it’s really not Willow really knew what was going on behind the scene with her folks
06/09/2021 11:21Bella Jersey 2
this part shows how he was a horrible king
06/09/2021 11:08Bella Jersey 2
new friend and Carter got a mate YES
06/09/2021 11:01Bella Jersey 2
we have to give Leoni some way that she feels in control of her life
06/09/2021 10:51Bella Jersey 2
Kane is becoming human thank god but threats are cruel. he forgets where she comes from and what rumors she heard. real good move threatening her puppy
06/09/2021 10:42Bella Jersey 2
it’s so sad is that Leoni is that sick and abused. was there an abused scene I missed?
06/09/2021 10:29Bella Jersey 2
that was sweet he showed her his checking accounts
06/09/2021 10:26Bella Jersey 2
that’s saddest part a lot of these werewolves world it’s doggy dog world
06/09/2021 10:17Bella Jersey 2
I forgot how did she get the scar? was it daddy dearest?
06/09/2021 09:56Bella Jersey 2
he doesn’t deserve her either
06/09/2021 09:47Bella Jersey 2
I think the puppy needs a chew toy. I think Carter will fill that roll nicely
06/09/2021 09:09Bella Jersey 2
mom is basically a victim of abuse herself. so sad and sick that she can allow her daughter to be abused
06/09/2021 09:04Bella Jersey 2
I’d make dad suffer for his rudeness. Maleficent for sleeping beauty didn’t like when she did receive invitations
06/09/2021 09:00Bella Jersey 2
LOL HOLD UP HOLD UP huge black wolf in office what does cousin say in his head oh no puppy in a bad mood
06/09/2021 08:54Bella Jersey 2
dad is just pathetic
06/09/2021 08:48Bella Jersey 2
not surprised she turn to eating disorder. she is right Carter would make fun of her for being fat
06/09/2021 08:40Bella Jersey 2
did someone poison her?
06/09/2021 08:35Bella Jersey 2
is she running away?
06/09/2021 08:29Bella Jersey 2
there’s no way he’s admitting to this
06/09/2021 08:20Bella Jersey 2
oh dear lord what now
06/09/2021 07:17Bella Jersey 2
why does alpha king gets weakest mate ever?
06/09/2021 07:13Bella Jersey 2
I hope Adam not in that room.
06/09/2021 07:12Bella Jersey 2
this is a nightmare
06/09/2021 07:07Bella Jersey 2
is her wolf broken or this just a happy quincidence that lead pack warrrior is her mate?
06/09/2021 06:42
kitty5127
if she’s been in confinement for five days how can the wedding be in twelve??
06/08/2021 03:02
DeAnna Phillips
The king is stupid. He has no idea what has happened to her and has not tried to find out but just wants his way no matter what.
06/08/2021 02:57DeAnna Phillips
She is stupid to cover it up. I would show everyone. I think the king is going to turn out to be her mate.
06/08/2021 01:56DeAnna Phillips
She is quite stupid.
06/08/2021 01:11Amanda Caruana
I absolutely LOVED both these books!! I couldn't put them down
06/07/2021 15:13Bella Jersey 2
I’m smacking dad or wannabe for Leoni. they aren’t he is
05/29/2021 01:33Joanne Baker
Decent story. Leoni is a bit dense though, seriously no way I'm letting crazy mom near my kid
05/27/2021 03:03Ashly Barragan
ummm interesting
05/26/2021 03:47
melsipher
the puppy is in a bad mood! i keep laughing at that line
05/22/2021 16:22Amy Nicholas
I read both books today!! keep up the good work!!
04/30/2021 04:42
Rebeca Castro
the second story makes me soooo sad
04/29/2021 19:53CharlieV96
.... Why can she not feel that Carter isn't her mate? Or is he?
04/29/2021 18:55CharlieV96
Wow I just can't believe the stupidity of how she can't even tell anyone he's not her mate?
04/29/2021 18:54Tracy Black
Is the second book continued from the first or is it about a different couple? I've started reading the book and am enjoying it so far, but am just wondering about the second one 💙
04/29/2021 00:46
Donna Moncus
I loved both of the books. can't wait for more of your work
04/17/2021 20:43Susan Anderson
I think Alphas Game is good but could be great. I feel the story line was rushed a bit so a lot of things happened that was a little unrealistic. I think the idea of the book is great but I would have liked to know more from Alpha Kane's history and what made him be so ruthless and unmerciful. I think you did a good job though.
03/06/2021 23:50
