The Unwanted Alpha Series (Complete Collection) Comments
Emily Peters
umm.... why has Eros not noticed the cheating markes/scars on Eves stomach. I mean she is naked in front of him. you would think he could see them and at least ask what they are or how they got there. 🤔
08/20/2021 09:59nadia bellingy
it sad that only 3 chapters were free.truly love this story
08/16/2021 08:09Carol Lanier
Iam loving what I am reading so far. So plz keep it coming.
08/14/2021 02:56Millie Edwards
just started already wanting to read all of it.
08/12/2021 12:29
Kate@AS
Thank you all for loving K.K.Winter. The book is being edited and proofread. We will upload edited version soon!
07/31/2021 10:01
Tania K
Good storyline, but this book needs some serious proofreading. The grammatical errors are annoying. Other than that I like the plot so far.
07/25/2021 01:04
Wendy Thompson
has anyone finished this? I’m not sure if I want to continue….I’m not getting the flow with Wrath, Demios, & the underworld prince. Not to mention the other characters in the story. I’m just not sure it’s worth it.
07/21/2021 01:59Millie Edwards
just started seems good
07/15/2021 02:17Darlene Forney
so am I at the end? I thought it was supposed to be a complete story, it ended with her losing the baby and the wraith not wanting to go into the room.... is that really the end?
07/14/2021 04:25Detra Colbert
Deimos character is so confusing to me. I'm not going to give spoilers; but I have questions
07/14/2021 04:19sara moore
love love love the whole book. I can’t find the 3rd book by searching. any advice?
07/11/2021 03:04Detra Colbert
Why Ally has to be just as clueless as Eve. Constantly making dumb & naive decisions. But, Wrath being her mate is horrible.
07/09/2021 12:48
Susan Munoz
this book is a copy of another author with a few changes and I've only read 3 chapters
07/09/2021 10:10Detra Colbert
I hate Eve's decision making skills. She always, sneaking, lying and running trying to stay safe. All she have to do is listen to Eros
07/01/2021 16:17
kitty5127
chapter 64. what happened to his cousin Afia??? is she not a girl Eve could talk with??
06/24/2021 17:53kitty5127
okay in chapter 49 she has bruises on her stomach from the cheating but in chapter 59 when they have set she has none?? some details are not following through the story.
06/24/2021 15:53Ainere Acanda
honestly loved the story.. and i belive this author has some good skills... i had me at the edge of anywhere i was seating while reading.... highly recommended
06/21/2021 04:55
Bonib2
Oh Jesus, can't she sounds more pathetic?
06/19/2021 09:39Samantha Kay Lyons
where can we find the cursed princess book? I don’t see it.
06/18/2021 03:46
Bonnie Burchette
I hate books that I can't read all the wat through.
06/09/2021 20:16
Red
the title says series... are all books combined into this one or are there others?
06/05/2021 21:55Victoria Murray
ok. I liked the book a lot. But what happened to Claudia? What about the watchers? Anto and Baka?
06/04/2021 09:58Emi Moore
this is so stupid. couldn’t make it past the first chapter
06/03/2021 13:42
JMRasp
It's a great book so far! Based off the comments I read, you must not be a native English speaker? The English is a little off here and there, but English is a difficult language and I give you so much credit for just sharing your creativity with us! I wouldn't have the guts to even begin writing in a second language. I wish there was a way we could help you out with the editting. It'd be nice to just highlight things as we read for feedback. Just to help you out more than just giving generalized criticism of the book as a whole. Either way, thanks for being brave and continuing to share your work! Love it and can't wait for more! 😊
05/18/2021 21:48Amanda Ferguson
lmao enjoed the prelude too the stories good work
05/18/2021 14:32Belinda Davies
love love loved it hooked. can't wait to read the next one in the series
05/14/2021 04:13
Sophie Raines
the pupil of the eye is always black... the iris carries the color. just an FYI 😊
05/12/2021 02:17
Dd3
kk winter... so far -I'm really enjoying your story... I'm having difficulties navigating on this site -but I look forward to reading more the moment that I figure this all out. ~Dd3
05/11/2021 04:36Gabriela Marcano
Is funny that she called her mother "loving" when that woman seems to be anything but
05/10/2021 18:03
GawviQ
I absolutely love this story (😱 all the kinky things... my, my, my!) Thank you 🥰can't wait to read what's next 🤓
05/04/2021 15:50
Lisa Houser
drunkie is not the right statement it's a drunk. your grammar is killing me dude 😅
05/04/2021 08:00
Megsh826
I really recommend a grammar check and spell check in whatever writing app you’re using. It would help immensely. For example, it isn’t “proudness” it’s “pride”.
05/01/2021 03:30Sylvia wendland
what happened after she lost the baby? any more chapters? so sad.
04/29/2021 06:55Carla McGuire
Enjoying it so far.
04/21/2021 03:13Sylvia wendland
Is this book one?
04/21/2021 02:35amber sweet
you did an outstanding job on the series
03/24/2021 13:33Jennifer Larimer
love the books. I wish it didn't end!! I would love a story of bea and sloth
03/06/2021 23:15Ayie AieSyah
wtf.. he's the man who saved her!! she's so ungrateful
02/26/2021 03:45Ayie AieSyah
wow... wtf with her mother...
02/26/2021 01:22
