The Unwanted Alpha Series (Complete Collection) Comments
Brandi Christine
if his sense are so good. why didn’t he smell his mother on his mate after she threw her to the other territory? or smell her in the woods like the mother smelled him coming?
09/04/2023 11:03Joy Gilbreath
enjoying it so far
09/04/2023 10:54
Moça
Awesome write
09/04/2023 10:45نرجس حسن
تنؤتبنينتيتميارتميمايهفعيلورهينكسىةرزمسننؤذمدذءنلقخكي
09/04/2023 10:43نرجس حسن
علي
09/04/2023 10:36Suzan Kuchenberg Woodard
OMG this story has tweaked my interest.
09/04/2023 10:31نرجس حسن
بهق
09/04/2023 10:30نرجس حسن
غفتي
09/04/2023 10:30Barbra Starr
I like the book so far
09/04/2023 10:28Julie Chamberlain-Woods
great!!!
09/04/2023 10:26Hannah Rogos
mom reminds me of my mom. only they succeeded and she blamed me and kicked me out the house. hope Eves mom comes around. even in a storybook my heart goes out to Eve.
09/04/2023 10:25Emily Chamberlain
does Eros ever learn more about his biological parents?
09/04/2023 10:24Criselyn Levin
is this the whole collection in one book or its one of the series? please tell me before I read it thanks
09/04/2023 10:23Emily Chamberlain
do we ever find out what happens to Arex....I liked him..... to the author I love this series and you did a great job telling the story of Eve/Eros and Ally/Darius will we get a book about Eve and Eros son???
09/04/2023 10:23Cj Creel
It seems like a good storyline. Pity I'll only get to read the first few chapters.
09/04/2023 10:22Ely Almosara-Patricio
Exciting even at the beginning of the story!
09/04/2023 10:21Emily Chamberlain
I am also confused as to Deimos' story....first he was the son of an Alpha who got into a fight and hit his head....then the next we know he is an Incubus from the underworld.... did the hit to his head remind him of who he was or something? I mean several people did say that his scent was either non-existent or weird....
09/04/2023 10:18Sheron James
loving 🥰 it so far
09/04/2023 10:15Desiree da Silva
loving mother my ass she didn't ask her what happened she just assumed eve's did something to herself poor eve's going through
09/04/2023 10:15Rebecca Brown
love it
09/04/2023 10:11Emily Chamberlain
do we ever find out who took Eve's picture from the bedroom??
09/04/2023 10:00Alta Van den Bergh
Great
09/04/2023 09:51Renuka Coelho
what happened to luna in the end. the last bit was when she snuck out of the office to see where eve got to. I’m so confused.
09/04/2023 09:50
I’m confused he flipped cause she lied?? ended with you took my virginity then it goes to him with the girl in the kitchen n then her leaving. then the marks on her stomach? I’m lost
09/04/2023 09:14fricken snake
09/04/2023 09:12AVA OKC
Eros… Ares… how many versions are there…keep the name consistent. needs better editing
09/04/2023 08:46stephanie tarwater
love the story
09/04/2023 08:45eve annoys me like if you don’t let that man f**^k the s**it out of you already child
09/04/2023 08:44Philicia Campo
hmmm
09/04/2023 08:43Iam loving what I am reading so far. So plz keep it coming.
09/04/2023 08:41sara moore
love love love the whole book. I can’t find the 3rd book by searching. any advice?
09/04/2023 08:39Monique Smith
wayyy to many inconsistencies. How is he a Lycanthrope if one of his parents aren't human, how you explained it numerous times, it could only happen if one of his parents came from the royal bloodline and the other was human so the lycanthrope can overpower the human half. This was confirmed by numerous characters. Also, how did Eve get those bruises if he wasn't cheating? Never explained. Just completely lost interest with all the jumping around and never circling back to explain...just soo many open ended storyline to finish book on.
09/04/2023 08:38Darlene Forney
so am I at the end? I thought it was supposed to be a complete story, it ended with her losing the baby and the wraith not wanting to go into the room.... is that really the end?
09/04/2023 08:37
Kate@AS
Thank you all for loving K.K.Winter. The book is being edited and proofread. We will upload edited version soon!
09/04/2023 08:35just started already wanting to read all of it.
09/04/2023 08:35Detra Colbert
Why Ally has to be just as clueless as Eve. Constantly making dumb & naive decisions. But, Wrath being her mate is horrible.
09/04/2023 08:30has anyone finished this? I’m not sure if I want to continue….I’m not getting the flow with Wrath, Demios, & the underworld prince. Not to mention the other characters in the story. I’m just not sure it’s worth it.
09/04/2023 08:28honestly loved the story.. and i belive this author has some good skills... i had me at the edge of anywhere i was seating while reading.... highly recommended
09/04/2023 08:28very good read until the end ,not good to leave it hanging with no ending very disappointed ☹️
09/04/2023 08:27
Bonnie Burchette
I hate books that I can't read all the wat through.
09/04/2023 08:26just started seems good
09/04/2023 08:25Detra Colbert
Deimos character is so confusing to me. I'm not going to give spoilers; but I have questions
09/04/2023 08:24Detra Colbert
I hate Eve's decision making skills. She always, sneaking, lying and running trying to stay safe. All she have to do is listen to Eros
09/04/2023 08:22Sylvia wendland
what happened after she lost the baby? any more chapters? so sad.
09/04/2023 08:21Katherine Young
idk if this gets explained but there are a lot of parts of the plot that don’t make sense throughout the book
09/04/2023 08:18where can we find the cursed princess book? I don’t see it.
09/04/2023 08:16Dd3
kk winter... so far -I'm really enjoying your story... I'm having difficulties navigating on this site -but I look forward to reading more the moment that I figure this all out. ~Dd3
09/04/2023 08:16
kitty5127
chapter 64. what happened to his cousin Afia??? is she not a girl Eve could talk with??
09/04/2023 08:15umm.... why has Eros not noticed the cheating markes/scars on Eves stomach. I mean she is naked in front of him. you would think he could see them and at least ask what they are or how they got there. 🤔
09/04/2023 08:15
GawviQ
I absolutely love this story (😱 all the kinky things... my, my, my!) Thank you 🥰can't wait to read what's next 🤓
09/04/2023 08:14Carla McGuire
Enjoying it so far.
09/04/2023 08:14the title says series... are all books combined into this one or are there others?
09/04/2023 08:14Lela LeeMasters
Allie Rose is my daughter's name 😍🥰❤
09/04/2023 08:14
Bonib2
Oh Jesus, can't she sounds more pathetic?
09/04/2023 08:11Sylvia wendland
Is this book one?
09/04/2023 08:10amber sweet
you did an outstanding job on the series
09/04/2023 07:57Gabriela Marcano
Is funny that she called her mother "loving" when that woman seems to be anything but
09/04/2023 07:55
Sophie Raines
the pupil of the eye is always black... the iris carries the color. just an FYI 😊
09/04/2023 07:55
JMRasp
It's a great book so far! Based off the comments I read, you must not be a native English speaker? The English is a little off here and there, but English is a difficult language and I give you so much credit for just sharing your creativity with us! I wouldn't have the guts to even begin writing in a second language. I wish there was a way we could help you out with the editting. It'd be nice to just highlight things as we read for feedback. Just to help you out more than just giving generalized criticism of the book as a whole. Either way, thanks for being brave and continuing to share your work! Love it and can't wait for more! 😊
09/04/2023 07:55Victoria Murray
ok. I liked the book a lot. But what happened to Claudia? What about the watchers? Anto and Baka?
09/04/2023 07:45Amanda Ferguson
lmao enjoed the prelude too the stories good work
09/04/2023 07:44Belinda Davies
love love loved it hooked. can't wait to read the next one in the series
09/04/2023 07:43love the books. I wish it didn't end!! I would love a story of bea and sloth
09/04/2023 07:30
