His Tempting Captive (Assassins Can Love Book 1) Comments

  • Reader-998117

    wow wow wowed wow wow wow wow!! it was the cover that really first got me wow wow wow wow wow wow wow!!!!

    04/17/2023 04:20
  • Rosetta Canham

    8p9o wow the intro is too hot... Hope the story lives up to it

    04/11/2023 08:39
  • Hayley louise

    8p9o I can't wait to finish this story. and there's even a book 2. What an introduction. I usually only read supernatural stories. But this one had me from the start.

    03/30/2023 16:01
  • Christina

    #8p9o# I’m already hooked and I’m just starting. Can’t wait to see how Avril and Thomas relationship unfolds! Also what the connection with her parents, something shady there!

    03/30/2023 14:56
  • Rafael

    8p9o I love the introduction. it seems a very interesting story and with interesting characters. I am going to reading soon. is the first book that is not supernatural that I sm going to read.

    03/30/2023 14:36
  • Michibeba

    #8p9o# I love a strong female lead, specially when it is next to a dominante male lead and he meets his match, can’t wait to see how this develops.

    03/30/2023 14:33
  • Chika Brooke

    8p9o you can never go wrong with Queen of Sarcasm's book. Just the first chapter captivates the readers and glued to this book..Thomas is so cold,merciless and controlling. I love the fact that Avril's character,though innocent developed into a smart young woman.Her strength grew through her struggles.

    03/30/2023 14:21
  • Akenji Shelly

    8p9o Well written story. I'm all about strong female leads and I wish there would be more stories with stronger women! Well done author.

    03/30/2023 14:10
  • Stacey Stratton

    8p9o I haven’t read this yet, but just the intro sounds steamy! It is definitely getting added to my library!

    03/30/2023 14:08
  • John Robinson

    8p9o Fantastic story, love Avril's character she showed her strength at the end. I was heartbroken until I read the epilogue. Absolutely love this story I thought it was really well written.

    03/30/2023 14:08
  • nasnas

    8p9o I definitely loved this story. it was a great slow burn and I wil re read it many times over.

    03/30/2023 14:06
  • Jan T

    8p9o #8p9o I love LOVE this book! it captured my attention from the get-go! great character creation and development.

    03/30/2023 14:05
  • Gemma Butler

    8p9o Wow what a book introduction. This book sounds like it’s gonna be very spicy 🥵, which is right up my street. Added to my library

    03/30/2023 14:05
  • Deborah B

    i do find it disappointing to read about such a controlled character. her parents might be one thing but she is just as easily being controlled by a starnger. hope it changes but it is frustrating

    09/15/2022 16:55
  • rarewally

    absolutely loved this story, was completely invested and finished the book in only a few days as I couldn’t put it down!! Author, you are fantastic at captivating your audience ;)

    08/04/2022 19:10
  • Sakina van bokhoven

    I really loved the story... but I don't get the title ...

    06/01/2022 20:18
  • Rachelle Jenkins

    Lmao 🤣 Trish with the sneaky set up. Nicely done ma'am. I am taking notes. lol

    05/22/2022 07:51
  • Tiara Hime

    oh…finally the two get back together,I’m glad Thomas changed and the two still love each other after 2 years of separating.thank you so much for the wonderful story, 💕 ❤️

    05/22/2022 01:22
  • Janet Maun Ferrell

    I think it's cute how Thomas is jealous...lol

    05/20/2022 16:42
  • Lisa Simeone

    I love this story, I want to keep reading it. I love it that much. Thank you for writing it.

    04/30/2022 03:21
  • Suzanne Monaco Jeskie

    any chance for another epilogue on their wedding and kids maybe?

    04/26/2022 06:47
  • Eirangi Marsters Insimo

    great

    04/19/2022 16:10
  • Flavia Correa

    I LOVED THIS BOOK SO MUCH. I read it all in one night... Went to bed at 4am... I hope you are happy for depriving me of sleep.... I JUST COULDN'T PUT IT DOWN.

    04/02/2022 00:50
  • Nadeen Leilani

    lol

    03/30/2022 03:30
  • Emily Diaz-Melendez

    sooooo, I may or may not have finished this in one go 😆 Loved it!

    03/17/2022 11:02
  • Shaneika Richards

    I started reading this book and I abandoned it the first two chapters but then I said to myself give it a try and man how it was worth it!! I love love love it!! the storyline is great! continue the great work

    03/09/2022 13:46
  • J*Brown

    OMG Nate is such a douche AH. To think it was ok to discuss/make decisions about her life without her is beyond AH Entitled territory. i guess it means one of her friends is clearly, not her friend.

    03/02/2022 22:52
  • Analiza

    i like this story...

    12/26/2021 06:20
  • BookDragon

    Oh oh a jealous ex????

    12/17/2021 04:22
  • Joyce Klok

    here is a hint about how old Thomas would be; ‘not only was she having a relationship with a guy who was about five years older than she was,……’ at the time she is there 18 years old. chapter 28!

    11/05/2021 19:40
  • Yaliza Frank

    Did it ever mention how old Thomas is? all this talk about her being so young I’m curious to know…

    10/13/2021 02:27
  • Funny Bunny

    slowest burn of my life I swear😭

    10/03/2021 07:39
  • kitchenQween

    she is a baby compared to his experience

    10/01/2021 00:31
  • Rosanna Nair

    Why are parents sometimes so daft??

    09/30/2021 17:31
  • Aanchal Sinha

    awesome

    09/30/2021 14:53
  • Aanchal Sinha

    very nice story

    09/30/2021 14:32
  • Roseam

    If Lilith did that why wasn't she eliminated?

    09/27/2021 11:51
  • Funny Bunny

    the wine thing tho😂 she was drinking wine in ch 2 lolllll

    09/27/2021 05:33
  • Asia Cwill

    I like Trish, hope his dad can come and help give them a push as well

    09/22/2021 05:11
  • A M Archibald

    Oh my God, I'm I'm so sorry for the repeated comments. It kept saying that my comment couldn't send.

    09/19/2021 20:55
  • A M Archibald

    This story is nice, I like the fact it's a slow burn. There's a few grammatical errors that can be sorted out through proof reading and I hope the author re-uploads it after editing it. Some tense is mixed up throughout and there are a few missing words. But apart from that a good read so far. I'm on chapter 11

    09/19/2021 02:02
  • A M Archibald

    This story is nice, I like the fact it's a slow burn. There's a few grammatical errors that can be sorted out through proof reading and I hope the author re-uploads it after editing it. Some tense is mixed up throughout and there are a few missing words. But apart from that a good read so far. I'm on chapter 11

    09/19/2021 02:02
  • A M Archibald

    This story is nice, I like the fact its not straight away sex. There's a few grammatical errors that can be sorted out through proof reading and I hope the author re-uploads it after editing it. Some tense is mixed up throughout and there are a few missing words. But apart from that a good read so far. I'm on chapter 11

    09/19/2021 02:01
  • A M Archibald

    This story is nice, I like the fact its not straight away sex. There's a few grammatical errors that can be sorted out through proof reading and I hope the author re-uploads it after editing it. Some tense is mixed up throughout and there are a few missing words. But apart from that a good read so far. I'm on chapter 11

    09/19/2021 01:51
  • A M Archibald

    This story is nice, I like the fact its not straight away sex. There's a few grammatical errors that can be sorted out through proof reading and I hope the author re-uploads it after editing it. Some tense is mixed up throughout and there are a few missing words. But apart from that a good read so far. I'm on chapter 11

    09/19/2021 01:51
  • A M Archibald

    This story is nice, I like the fact its not straight away sex. There's a few grammatical errors that can be sorted out through proof reading and I hope the author re-uploads it after editing it. Some tense is mixed up throughout and there are a few missing words. But apart from that a good read so far. I'm on chapter 11

    09/19/2021 01:51
  • A M Archibald

    This story is nice, I like the fact its not straight away sex. There's a few grammatical errors that can be sorted out through proof reading and I hope the author re-uploads it after editing it. Some tense is mixed up throughout and there are a few missing words. But apart from that a good read so far. I'm on chapter 11

    09/19/2021 01:51
  • A M Archibald

    This story is nice, I like the fact its not straight away sex. There's a few grammatical errors that can be sorted out through proof reading and I hope the author re-uploads it after editing it. Some tense is mixed up throughout and there are a few missing words. But apart from that a good read so far. I'm on chapter 11

    09/19/2021 01:44
  • A M Archibald

    This story is nice, I like the fact its not straight away sex. There's a few grammatical errors that can be sorted out through proof reading and I hope the author re-uploads it after editing it. Some tense is mixed up throughout and there are a few missing words. But apart from that a good read so far. I'm on chapter 11

    09/19/2021 01:44
  • A M Archibald

    This story is nice, I like the fact its not straight away sex. There's a few grammatical errors that can be sorted out through proof reading and I hope the author re-uploads it after editing it. Some tense is mixed up throughout and there are a few missing words. But apart from that a good read so far. I'm on chapter 11

    09/19/2021 01:43
  • A M Archibald

    This story is nice, I like the fact its not straight away sex. There's a few grammatical errors that can be sorted out through proof reading and I hope the author re-uploads it after editing it. Some tense is mixed up throughout and there are a few missing words. But apart from that a good read so far. I'm on chapter 11

    09/19/2021 01:43
  • Wcha

    he could have been a bit nicer what a horrible first meet

    09/16/2021 19:01
  • Ali Martinez

    I know this is a series but they are all stand alone books right? like the next book goes more into Austin not Thomas ans Avril.

    09/12/2021 14:07
  • Liv

    this was a very intriguing read. the plot was different and not what I expected. the title does not do this book justice. the storyline stayed consistent as well. the ending was not to my liking even if all ended well, but this is not against the writer so much as my personal preference because that was rough and she was being childish. I also found it funny that the characters found a 5 year age gap to be so large 😄 Great writing, good read.

    09/06/2021 15:51
  • thandeka magwa

    OMG I'm so inspired by the way you write. Always trigger my curiosity, want to know what next🤗. Thank you for your interesting book. I'm looking forward for more of this kind

    09/04/2021 17:02
  • Laurie Weidner Alford

    Really good read. Won't be disappointed. Keep up good work author.

    09/01/2021 12:26
  • Lu RM

    oh my gosh! you also wrote Keeping It Strictly Business .. I loved that story!! it’s one of my faves! 🥰

    08/26/2021 01:47
  • Lu RM

    who did Austin kiss!!??

    08/25/2021 23:48
  • Helen Kapetis

    sounds pretty rapey to me

    08/25/2021 06:40
  • Janice Clark

    I enjoyed the book vey much . Can’t wait for the second and third books. Looking forward to reading them in the future.

    08/24/2021 13:59
  • Tiffany E

    Good Book but the name of it doesn't quite make sense after reading it. Literally needs to be named something different. lol I liked it though.

    08/19/2021 03:54
  • Jasmin Smith

    I'm at the end of chapter 20 and Trish has me busting up, she's like the meddling aunt 😂 I think her and Thomas' dad are in cahoots with each other to set these 2 up 😂😂

    08/18/2021 15:09
  • Laurie Weidner Alford

    Very good book really enjoyed it. worth the read!!

    08/17/2021 20:12
  • Alexis M.

    loved this book couldn’t put it down

    08/16/2021 06:26
  • Ashley Greene

    will there be a Seagal sequel or at least more like it? I was so hurt when it ended cause I really wanted more. please tell me there are at least more like it by you if not imma die of sadness😭😭😭😭😭

    07/31/2021 23:48
  • Ashleigh Woodbury

    omg I needed more I loved this book read in not even 1 day

    07/30/2021 13:38
  • Jane Glick

    great read so far keep up the great work.

    07/28/2021 18:43
  • Tamara Hicks

    Her dad feel like a narsaccist!

    07/28/2021 11:50
  • Kerry Paterson

    loved this story can't wait to read Austin's story now now I just need to finish trying to paint the broom b4 hubby gets home and make it look like I've been decorating all day lol keep up the great work xx

    07/25/2021 18:44
  • Claudina Kulkarni

    Enjoying the books

    07/24/2021 12:01
  • Amanda Caruana

    I'm in LOVE with ALL your books!! you are such a talent. Such a HOT book 😉

    07/18/2021 07:35
  • Remy Bergez

    oh my damn! "Think of all the men I'd have to kill for looking at you." that was Hot🔥👏 Cant wait to read more! I'm hooked!

    07/14/2021 20:48
  • Jasmin Prunkl

    What a lovely story!!! I was a little scared and disappointed at the end that they wouldn't be coming back together after epilogue 1 but you saved my feelings and made me happy again, believing in love and happy endings. Thx!!! Loved this story!!!

    07/13/2021 12:51
  • Reader-410010

    I couldn’t sleep, I need more of this

    07/11/2021 13:35
  • C Carter

    i loved it. your choice of wording, the way the character’s converse, the story line. It gave something different! I couldnt put it down!

    06/25/2021 03:29
  • Reader-699506

    Excellent read! Ending seems a bit rushed. And who was with Austin at the end?

    06/24/2021 17:37
  • Lidiane Barros

    cute story but definitely not erotic as its described on front AD

    06/22/2021 15:34
  • admmgz

    can we download this story somehow after we’ve purchased it? I’m hooked

    06/16/2021 07:46
  • Angela Reeves

    Nice story! Well written too!

    06/10/2021 00:51
  • Bella Jersey 2

    dad is playing matchmaker! maybes this is why at the parents are so STRICT. they know that dangers out here

    06/05/2021 11:02
  • Bella Jersey 2

    okay liking Tom a whole lot more

    06/05/2021 10:58
  • Nyoman Rahmawati

    I'm so hooked with the story... so fresh n easy to digest ❤ thanks to the writer

    06/04/2021 01:05
  • Alicia Flores

    Really good story... I was hoping for a more detail ending but happy they are together ... good job autor 😉

    06/03/2021 18:37
  • Jennifer Andrus

    Awesome story kept me reading. Impressed.

    06/03/2021 12:38
  • shanny westly

    omg I read the entire book in one day it was that freaking good love every moment of it!!!!

    05/31/2021 20:11
  • Bella Jersey 2

    let’s hope the girls are really returned safely. not bad gentleman you saved 40 girls

    05/31/2021 02:18
  • flaxen

    great book!!!!!! I couldn’t put it down. thank you for your hard work.

    05/30/2021 07:05
  • reader2121

    great story! I can’t wait for others!

    05/29/2021 07:11
  • Tania

    Started last night, and finished just now (I had to stop to sleep...stupid human tendency, lol) I enjoyed the book a lot. I liked the way the author threw in Trish's story as well - very clever. As great as this book was I can't help longing for Austin's story, I connected to his character a lot and can't help, but want to see him wrapped up in someone special. What do you say author...any news on an Austin book?

    05/28/2021 14:34
  • cutestbbyhaii

    how can he be ridding the earth of scum but can't say sorry or maybe not sexually harrass her? he just scared her and now he's pulling towels off her naked body without apologizing? whether she liked it or not, that's not okay.

    05/28/2021 12:04
  • Bella Jersey 2

    he did his job now it’s time play

    05/28/2021 05:32
  • Keina Gowins

    love, love, loved this story!

    05/21/2021 11:59
  • Rosa Mendez

    I loved the story! I’m sad to see it end, but I’m happy with how it all worked out. Awesome work!

    04/14/2021 17:23
  • Jaidels

    I absolutely adored this book! I would check every morning and every evening for updates, with baited breath then squeal in delight when there was one! I was hooked from pretty much the first chapter and thoroughly enjoyed the storyline and the style of writing. So excited to see that there will be more with Austin's story 🤩

    04/14/2021 15:57
  • ladiesman217

    This was a really good read...quite enticing! I’m glad I stumbled upon it! Looking forward to Austin’s story now ;)

    04/14/2021 05:51
  • Franki Griffith

    fraternal means not identical it could be fraternal two boys or two 2vgirls .

    04/13/2021 00:55
  • Rosa Mendez

    I’m really enjoying this story. Once Thomas shared that Lilith worked in the same line of work, I knew she was going to end up being the other agent. I’m excited to see how everything works out.

    04/09/2021 08:51
  • Merje Kravtšuk

    It's a good one! Waiting for more! ❤️

    03/13/2021 20:03