Never Mess With Witches (18+) Comments

  • City Boys?!? And they are going to follow Kai's stupid self. Smh! They are going to embarrass themselves and I cannot wait to read about it! πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜…

    09/04/2023 08:11
  • Ronda Prescott

    That was beautiful!

    09/04/2023 08:11
  • beth sullins

    Thank you so much i missed them. i did read beastly and now am like ok another group to want to know about. you are an amazing writter

    09/04/2023 08:11
  • 🀧🀧🀧🀧 that’s it! that’s my comment

    09/04/2023 08:11
  • Wheww someone came and mess with THEE Kai’s Angels 😎😎😎

    09/04/2023 08:10
  • reader2121

    oh my gosh I need a Kai in my life! 😍 minus the douchebaginess πŸ˜†

    09/04/2023 08:10
  • Justmee

    NOT THEE $40 πŸ€‘!!!! IM HOLLERING πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚! She played that so well 😏! He treated her like a groupie and she treated him like a trick πŸ’₯πŸ€·πŸ½β€β™€οΈ! You say imma dog but it takes one to know one {In my Kevin Gates voice} πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    09/04/2023 08:10
  • my excitement πŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯Ί I thought there was another update 😭😭πŸ₯Ί πŸ˜žπŸ˜žπŸ›Œ Im going to bed and comeback tomorrow

    09/04/2023 08:10
  • I tell you what - Di better get her stuff together! Got Geo out here rejecting her & she still acting confused. I’m glad Geo let her go & told her his truth. I’ll admit that I didn’t see the rejection coming but Di needed a wake up call for sure. Maybe now she’ll have some sense! Can’t wait for the next update ❀️

    09/04/2023 08:09
  • Organized Chaos

    new chapters released this week!

    09/04/2023 08:09
  • beth sullins

    any update soon i know you are probably busy. just so invested in these characters

    09/04/2023 08:09
  • Karen Bailey

    I'm all for girl power, but I refuse to believe that those men are THAT whipped. That being said, I really enjoyed seeing how you turned the table on the ladies.

    09/04/2023 08:09
  • 😭😭😭😭😭😭 Beautiful, Just Beautiful 😭😭😭😭😭

    09/04/2023 08:09
  • Selma Cole

    OMG I’m sobbing right now. can’t wait to see how their relationships develop after that heartbreaking revelation

    09/04/2023 08:09
  • Andrea Tobias

    OMG!!! Demetri and Non sorcerer Scott have. me CRYING!πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    09/04/2023 08:09
  • Karen Bailey

    First of all, which one of your friends is Rachel and is she in counseling. Although with the name Organized Chaos, it could be you. Secondly, I would have loved to know the conversation Elijah was having with his wolf. Thirdly, get you a good rest. Put your feet up and let your hair down. Put on a little H-town if needed. I will be patiently waiting for you to return. Happy Hiatus!!😘😘

    09/04/2023 08:09
  • Jennifer Tuttle

    OMG I'm ROLLING!!! 🀣🀣😍 I LOVE THIS BOOK!!

    09/04/2023 08:09
  • Taystrick

    and another one! girl I just can’t with the humor. seriously love this series ❀️

    09/04/2023 08:08
  • I’m excited to read more about how Momma Di will be kicking ass & keeping these rambunctious children in line πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ Momma Di don’t play!!!

    09/04/2023 08:08
  • I hope that courting will be something like back in old day’s.😍😍😍 I’m may be young but my soul’s an oldie 😌😌😌 🀧🀧🀧 Im ready... finish us...

    09/04/2023 08:08
  • Organized Chaos

    thank you everyone! The final chapter has an edit request submitted (so reread it tomorrow after it’s processed lol) but other than that, this story is complete ☺️

    09/04/2023 08:08
  • reader2121

    oh Kai πŸ™„

    09/04/2023 08:08
  • Dahlia Mynd

    ughhh I got something in my eyes again. GOT DAMN ALLERGIES πŸ₯²πŸ₯²πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ€§

    09/04/2023 08:07
  • Organized Chaos

    Hey everyone! there will be a special announcement posted on my I.g tomorrow that is REALLY important. make sure to follow for this update and more. Organizedchaos_stories2

    09/04/2023 08:07
  • Selma Cole

    BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!

    09/04/2023 08:06
  • Keisha Mccormick

    Miss organized chaos girl I was so hurt when I read the last of never mess with vampires cuz I thought that was all but then I kept scrolling and I type in your name and I found your other books and this one girl feel like I'm in Haven I'd be reading all day. I love your story lines and the comedy girl I wish all your books to be turned into movies cuz that'll be something Caribou fuk Twilight full Fifty Shades girl your books need to be on the market and Movie Market stay blessed sweetie and I'm praying for you that you make it to the movie theater girl cuz that's going to be dope

    09/04/2023 08:06
  • ** inhale: IALMOSTTHREWMYPHONEBCUZOFYOUWHYWHYWHYYYYITWASSOGOODIMBECOMINGLIKETHEM(rippingmy hair)* **exhale: Im cool Im cool Im fine sorry wheww πŸ™ƒπŸ™ƒ

    09/04/2023 08:05
  • Karen Bailey

    🀣🀣🀣OMG! I LOVE YOU STERLING!!!🀣🀣🀣Whew. Let me catch my breath. πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„She had the man speaking in sonnets!!!πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ Then he made up his own language!!! Damn Sterling! You spilling all the tea. OAN: I need to learn the Pierce Sisters' special.

    09/04/2023 08:05
  • Organized Chaos

    double-possible triple update today!

    09/04/2023 08:04
  • Karen Bailey

    That was short??? Anyway, thanks for the update. Why Diane???!!!???? Why????? Kai, you deserved EVER bit of that venom. I know one thing, y'all better get it together. Forget Turmeloose, I'll bring my own can of whoop ass.

    09/04/2023 08:04
  • Organized Chaos

    hey! so for the sake of transparency I wanted to let you all know that I’m taking an hiatus FROM new content. I’m in the process of doing a MASSIVE edit of my books which will take some time and focus. my goal is to be finished by the beginning of May. IM COMING BACK! but this is important to me as there is a lot of formatting and other things I want to fix. love you all and see you soon.

    09/04/2023 08:03
  • Rebeca Castro

    what did the dad have did he have terminal cancer or something he said it was terminal but what type or kind of terminal disease did he have

    09/04/2023 08:03
  • I know I have said IT before but ABSOLUFUCKINGLY CRAZYASF love Demetri ans Sterling’s relationship and indeed he who was serveddddd the wolfff πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    09/04/2023 08:03
  • Trista Jauregui

    you are an amazing writer! you make me laugh and cry all in the same chapter! I love reading your stories!! you are so very talented!! I love this series and I hope you continue it!!❀️

    09/04/2023 08:03
  • reader2121

    you are on a roll tonight!

    09/04/2023 08:03
  • Sierra Russell

    THIS WAS LIFE!!!!!! I SOOOO NEEDED THIS. 1/5th of a whole stupid 🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣 I love it and Bine Bines get back for Tenne πŸ€―πŸ€―πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘. I am beyond extatique to see what all happens next in this books and your other when they come backπŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ™‚

    09/04/2023 08:02
  • Greyskies223

    Damnit Kai!!! *inserts Tyra Banks GIF* πŸ€¦πŸΎβ€β™€οΈπŸ€¦πŸΎβ€β™€οΈ Why can’t he just act right??

    09/04/2023 08:02
  • Organized Chaos

    hey everyone! because we’re on the last book I wanted to show you all muses lol. I’ll update to ppl you can google to see who I imagine as I write so you can get a sense of ppl. for example: Jordan and Sterling are based off of mariano di vaio and BAPTISTE GIABICONI not twins but carry the style that would encompass them. George and klaus muse is andreas von tempelhoff let me know if this is something you’re interested in and I’ll continue to let you know! πŸ–€

    09/04/2023 08:02
  • Justmee

    Scott & Demetri are my favorite πŸ₯°! Hopefully Kai can figure everything out before it's to late πŸ₯΄πŸ€§

    09/04/2023 08:01
  • reader2121

    oh this chapter broke my heart. I feel so much for Sabine. No one should be left feeling unwanted. 😭

    09/04/2023 08:01
  • Andrea Tobias

    Hazelnut of Horror??πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    09/04/2023 08:01
  • Ronda Prescott

    LMEBO this was hilarious. I knew she was gonna mollywhap Stephanie for all that mouth she has.

    09/04/2023 08:00
  • Erika Ladye Canty

    Organized Chaos you have done my head in again. I kept laughing through this whole chapter and my husband keep asking me what's so funny. She done got me!!!! I love it!!!!

    09/04/2023 08:00
  • Karen Bailey

    Dammit!! I'm already behind.

    09/04/2023 08:00
  • reader2121

    🀣🀣🀣 so good! love Sabine and love Kai. I love all of them!

    09/04/2023 07:59
  • 🀣🀣🀣 I’m so in love with all of these characters πŸ’œπŸ’œ

    09/04/2023 07:58
  • Karen Bailey

    🀣🀣Oh wow! Kai......and it was in front of the fellas!!!! Tsk, tsk, tsk.

    09/04/2023 07:58
  • My withdrawal is on full course 😭😭😭 i don’t want it tho why you doing me like thisssss Finally a chapter 😩😩😩 Made me feel like i was waiting for a month ... I’m going to be satisfied with this πŸ₯²πŸ₯²

    09/04/2023 07:57
  • Greyskies223

    It’s bomb already. And you were right. He is fine! πŸ‘€πŸ‘€πŸ‘€

    09/04/2023 07:56
  • Organized Chaos

    FYI I’m sure you already know this lol but it should say that Kai has been blocking Sabine for MONTHS not a month. sorry about that, that edit and others will be approved by Tuesday hopefully πŸ–€

    09/04/2023 07:56
  • « And then.... the faith was restoredΒ Β» deep voice 😊😊😊 i swear I was expecting something awkward 🀣🀣🀣

    09/04/2023 07:56
  • Tenesha

    Sterling is my favorite character. I feel he keep Demetri, Jordan, and Elijah all on there toes.

    09/04/2023 07:55
  • Organized Chaos

    hey everyone! I had to split chaper 19 into two so 20 is just the continuation of the original 19

    09/04/2023 07:55
  • are we going to get an update soon?

    09/04/2023 07:54
  • Selma Cole

    Hahaha these two are going to fit right in with the rest of the family

    09/04/2023 07:54
  • Crystal Infernos. Blazing Mist. Purple Haze…... names for the coven. Nadima (Nah-Dee-Mah) or Ibiza for the name and a female. Xander (Zander) or Xelan (Jeh-Lan) for a male. Also loving your name for a coven as well Organised chaos. maybe even Straight Mess.

    09/04/2023 07:54
  • Tauicita Jones

    please tell me we gonna get a George and Diane story once they are married!?

    09/04/2023 07:53
  • Karen Bailey

    OC, I have no words right now except poor Alexus.

    09/04/2023 07:53
  • Taystrick

    ❀️❀️❀️ George and Diane are adorable.

    09/04/2023 07:53
  • Andrea Tobias

    you have done it again! I'm loving this already!

    09/04/2023 07:53
  • Justmee

    I missed my family πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°! I have a lot of chapters to catch up on πŸ˜…πŸ€£! I hope all is well with everyone though.

    09/04/2023 07:52
  • LMBO 🀣🀣😭😭😭😭

    09/04/2023 07:52
  • Selma Cole

    love it so far, can’t wait for the rest

    09/04/2023 07:52
  • Justmee

    I just finished the first chapter and tell me why I had a lump in my throat 😭🀧!? I really felt like crying πŸ˜”! It took everything in me to hold myself together. Lawd πŸ₯Ί

    09/04/2023 07:48
  • Ronda Prescott

    Yes......I laughed so hard! You helped me decompress from a stressful day. You are brilliant ma'am.

    09/04/2023 07:47
  • beth sullins

    ty for double chapter today. i love the book.

    09/04/2023 07:47
  • reader2121

    $40!!! πŸ’€πŸ’€πŸ’€

    09/04/2023 07:47
  • Loved the Dragon Ball reference πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™

    09/04/2023 07:47
  • OMG!!πŸ˜‚πŸ€£ Girl you had me over here laughing so hard I couldn’t breathe... I almost blacked out, had pull out my daughters emergency inhaler cause I knew I was going to the β€œUppa Room” πŸ‘»πŸ˜‚πŸ˜˜ Thank you love bug as always you made my day!

    09/04/2023 07:47
  • Poor Geo!! πŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯Ί and I found he’s song to Damn life!

    09/04/2023 07:47
  • reader2121

    πŸ‘πŸ½πŸ‘πŸ½πŸ‘πŸ½ beat their dusty asses! πŸ˜‚

    09/04/2023 07:46
  • Karen Bailey

    OC, you are too funny.

    09/04/2023 07:46
  • Dahlia Mynd

    I think Terrance and Sterling theme song should be Ruff Ryder's Anthem by DMXπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜±πŸ˜±

    09/04/2023 07:46
  • I’m mean Kai can accept the fact his family are supernatural funky weird 🀩🀩🀩🀩 but can’t not accept the existence of demons 🀣 really bro 🀣🀣

    09/04/2023 07:46
  • Dahlia Mynd

    mannnnn cronos was a nice touch... is it wrong that I enjoyed that a llliiittttllleee to much. like cackling like a witch enjoyment

    09/04/2023 07:45
  • Karen Bailey

    I forgot Hotel Succubus.

    09/04/2023 07:45
  • These two chapters were intense!!! It was great to read why Kai is Geo’s box of rocks, very powerful πŸ–€ Awesome Job Sis!!!

    09/04/2023 07:45
  • Ronda Prescott

    Aww, that made me tear up. They need each other and I'm happy to see them heal together. I love how everyone is supporting him and loving on him. Great chapter.

    09/04/2023 07:44
  • reader2121

    not the holograms! πŸ’€πŸ’€πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    09/04/2023 07:43
  • Dahlia Mynd

    mannnnn no matter what age you are there will always be lessons to learn. I hope Diane step her game up and claim George!

    09/04/2023 07:43
  • Loving it πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ but Kai needs his public ass whoopin

    09/04/2023 07:41
  • 😳😳😳😳😳 πŸ™ŒπŸΎπŸ™ŒπŸΎπŸ™ŒπŸΎπŸ™ŒπŸΎπŸ™ŒπŸΎ

    09/04/2023 07:41
  • Justmee

    Kai's backstory was deep πŸ˜ͺ! Makes me feel good that he finally got brave enough to face his sisters. The laughs though were just what I needed πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    09/04/2023 07:40
  • Jennifer Tuttle

    OMG!!! I've been waiting for this......!!!!

    09/04/2023 07:40
  • Lini Vaiangina

    i cant wait for more!!

    09/04/2023 07:40
  • Ronda Prescott

    Aww, that was super sweet. I have been waiting for Geo to get it together.

    09/04/2023 07:39
  • Rebeca Castro

    my favorite character in this whole series hands down is Demetri his caring nature and his out burst

    09/04/2023 07:37
  • Christinaa

    ahah yass city boys πŸ˜‚

    09/04/2023 07:37
  • Morgan had fun with the wretched in Baltimore!!! *Claire Huxtable voice* That part had me rolling 🀣

    09/04/2023 07:37
  • Ariesbaby89

    Okay Elijah aka Zaddy 😜

    09/04/2023 07:37
  • Before even you writing it I’m already cringing it 😷😷 It’s about to get super embarrass and no one can’t stop them... πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ...

    09/04/2023 07:36
  • Ariesbaby89

    Yass get it city boys!!!

    09/04/2023 07:36
  • WELCOME BACK πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€— i want a Sterling in life 😩😩😩 That man is everything 🀣🀣🀣 such a kid in a grown man body Everything was so good witty and funny πŸ™ŒπŸΎπŸ™ŒπŸΎπŸ™ŒπŸΎπŸ™ŒπŸΎ

    09/04/2023 07:35
  • Justmee

    UPDATEEEEEEE πŸ’ž! I've been looking everyday. Just wishing and hoping. FINALLY πŸ˜™ *sigh* 😀 I'll be back finna go read it NEOW πŸ’ƒπŸΎ! PS if you need rest... take it! You know I just love your books 😊

    09/04/2023 07:35
  • Organized Chaos

    hey everyone! I’m back! FYI anystories is doing some type of work on comments. so I I don’t respond right away like usual. IM NOT IGNORING YOU lol I just don’t get the notification. but def keep the comments coming they fuel me ability to continue writing ☺️

    09/04/2023 07:32
  • reader2121

    I love Beemo!

    09/04/2023 07:32
  • Organized Chaos

    hey everyone! I’m currently working on four books including a new one (because ppl fuss at me when I don’t let them know lol) hotel succubus, this one, zom-Bae and the new one Beastly. I’ll be taking my time to update as I can but I have four completed and four I’m working on soooo 😬 be patient with the kid.

    09/04/2023 07:32
  • Sterling πŸ₯΄πŸ₯΄ karma’s a B

    09/04/2023 07:31
  • Ariesbaby89

    Sterling Angela Basset Wolf πŸ˜‚ lmao

    09/04/2023 07:31
  • Marquita Harper

    WTH are they wanting Mary Jane's for? LMAO that was hilarious. Tomny (Dimiteri) you ain't got no job. lol

    09/04/2023 07:31