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City Boys?!? And they are going to follow Kai's stupid self. Smh! They are going to embarrass themselves and I cannot wait to read about it! 😆😆😅
09/04/2023 08:11
Ronda Prescott
That was beautiful!
09/04/2023 08:11
beth sullins
Thank you so much i missed them. i did read beastly and now am like ok another group to want to know about. you are an amazing writter
09/04/2023 08:11
🤧🤧🤧🤧 that’s it! that’s my comment
09/04/2023 08:11
Wheww someone came and mess with THEE Kai’s Angels 😎😎😎
09/04/2023 08:10
reader2121
oh my gosh I need a Kai in my life! 😍 minus the douchebaginess 😆
09/04/2023 08:10
Justmee
NOT THEE $40 🤑!!!! IM HOLLERING 😂😂😂! She played that so well 😏! He treated her like a groupie and she treated him like a trick 💥🤷🏽‍♀️! You say imma dog but it takes one to know one {In my Kevin Gates voice} 😂😂😂😂😂
09/04/2023 08:10
my excitement 🥺🥺🥺🥺 I thought there was another update 😭😭🥺 😞😞🛌 Im going to bed and comeback tomorrow
09/04/2023 08:10
I tell you what - Di better get her stuff together! Got Geo out here rejecting her & she still acting confused. I’m glad Geo let her go & told her his truth. I’ll admit that I didn’t see the rejection coming but Di needed a wake up call for sure. Maybe now she’ll have some sense! Can’t wait for the next update ❤️
09/04/2023 08:09
Organized Chaos
new chapters released this week!
09/04/2023 08:09
beth sullins
any update soon i know you are probably busy. just so invested in these characters
09/04/2023 08:09
Karen Bailey
I'm all for girl power, but I refuse to believe that those men are THAT whipped. That being said, I really enjoyed seeing how you turned the table on the ladies.
09/04/2023 08:09
😭😭😭😭😭😭 Beautiful, Just Beautiful 😭😭😭😭😭
09/04/2023 08:09
Selma Cole
OMG I’m sobbing right now. can’t wait to see how their relationships develop after that heartbreaking revelation
09/04/2023 08:09
Andrea Tobias
OMG!!! Demetri and Non sorcerer Scott have. me CRYING!😂😂😂
09/04/2023 08:09
Karen Bailey
First of all, which one of your friends is Rachel and is she in counseling. Although with the name Organized Chaos, it could be you. Secondly, I would have loved to know the conversation Elijah was having with his wolf. Thirdly, get you a good rest. Put your feet up and let your hair down. Put on a little H-town if needed. I will be patiently waiting for you to return. Happy Hiatus!!😘😘
09/04/2023 08:09
Jennifer Tuttle
OMG I'm ROLLING!!! 🤣🤣😍 I LOVE THIS BOOK!!
09/04/2023 08:09
Taystrick
and another one! girl I just can’t with the humor. seriously love this series ❤️
09/04/2023 08:08
I’m excited to read more about how Momma Di will be kicking ass & keeping these rambunctious children in line 😂😂🤣🤣😂😂 Momma Di don’t play!!!
09/04/2023 08:08
I hope that courting will be something like back in old day’s.😍😍😍 I’m may be young but my soul’s an oldie 😌😌😌 🤧🤧🤧 Im ready... finish us...
09/04/2023 08:08
Organized Chaos
thank you everyone! The final chapter has an edit request submitted (so reread it tomorrow after it’s processed lol) but other than that, this story is complete ☺️
09/04/2023 08:08
reader2121
oh Kai 🙄
09/04/2023 08:08
Dahlia Mynd
ughhh I got something in my eyes again. GOT DAMN ALLERGIES 🥲🥲😭😭🤧
09/04/2023 08:07
Organized Chaos
Hey everyone! there will be a special announcement posted on my I.g tomorrow that is REALLY important. make sure to follow for this update and more. Organizedchaos_stories2
09/04/2023 08:07
Selma Cole
BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!
09/04/2023 08:06
Keisha Mccormick
Miss organized chaos girl I was so hurt when I read the last of never mess with vampires cuz I thought that was all but then I kept scrolling and I type in your name and I found your other books and this one girl feel like I'm in Haven I'd be reading all day. I love your story lines and the comedy girl I wish all your books to be turned into movies cuz that'll be something Caribou fuk Twilight full Fifty Shades girl your books need to be on the market and Movie Market stay blessed sweetie and I'm praying for you that you make it to the movie theater girl cuz that's going to be dope
09/04/2023 08:06
** inhale: IALMOSTTHREWMYPHONEBCUZOFYOUWHYWHYWHYYYYITWASSOGOODIMBECOMINGLIKETHEM(rippingmy hair)* **exhale: Im cool Im cool Im fine sorry wheww 🙃🙃
09/04/2023 08:05
Karen Bailey
🤣🤣🤣OMG! I LOVE YOU STERLING!!!🤣🤣🤣Whew. Let me catch my breath. 😄😄😄She had the man speaking in sonnets!!!😂😂😂 Then he made up his own language!!! Damn Sterling! You spilling all the tea. OAN: I need to learn the Pierce Sisters' special.
09/04/2023 08:05
Organized Chaos
double-possible triple update today!
09/04/2023 08:04
Karen Bailey
That was short??? Anyway, thanks for the update. Why Diane???!!!???? Why????? Kai, you deserved EVER bit of that venom. I know one thing, y'all better get it together. Forget Turmeloose, I'll bring my own can of whoop ass.
09/04/2023 08:04
Organized Chaos
hey! so for the sake of transparency I wanted to let you all know that I’m taking an hiatus FROM new content. I’m in the process of doing a MASSIVE edit of my books which will take some time and focus. my goal is to be finished by the beginning of May. IM COMING BACK! but this is important to me as there is a lot of formatting and other things I want to fix. love you all and see you soon.
09/04/2023 08:03
Rebeca Castro
what did the dad have did he have terminal cancer or something he said it was terminal but what type or kind of terminal disease did he have
09/04/2023 08:03
I know I have said IT before but ABSOLUFUCKINGLY CRAZYASF love Demetri ans Sterling’s relationship and indeed he who was serveddddd the wolfff 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
09/04/2023 08:03
Trista Jauregui
you are an amazing writer! you make me laugh and cry all in the same chapter! I love reading your stories!! you are so very talented!! I love this series and I hope you continue it!!❤️
09/04/2023 08:03
reader2121
you are on a roll tonight!
09/04/2023 08:03
Sierra Russell
THIS WAS LIFE!!!!!! I SOOOO NEEDED THIS. 1/5th of a whole stupid 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 I love it and Bine Bines get back for Tenne 🤯🤯👏👏👏👏. I am beyond extatique to see what all happens next in this books and your other when they come back🙂🙂🙂
09/04/2023 08:02
Greyskies223
Damnit Kai!!! *inserts Tyra Banks GIF* 🤦🏾‍♀️🤦🏾‍♀️ Why can’t he just act right??
09/04/2023 08:02
Organized Chaos
hey everyone! because we’re on the last book I wanted to show you all muses lol. I’ll update to ppl you can google to see who I imagine as I write so you can get a sense of ppl. for example: Jordan and Sterling are based off of mariano di vaio and BAPTISTE GIABICONI not twins but carry the style that would encompass them. George and klaus muse is andreas von tempelhoff let me know if this is something you’re interested in and I’ll continue to let you know! 🖤
09/04/2023 08:02
Justmee
Scott & Demetri are my favorite 🥰! Hopefully Kai can figure everything out before it's to late 🥴🤧
09/04/2023 08:01
reader2121
oh this chapter broke my heart. I feel so much for Sabine. No one should be left feeling unwanted. 😭
09/04/2023 08:01
Andrea Tobias
Hazelnut of Horror??😂😂😂
09/04/2023 08:01
Ronda Prescott
LMEBO this was hilarious. I knew she was gonna mollywhap Stephanie for all that mouth she has.
09/04/2023 08:00
Erika Ladye Canty
Organized Chaos you have done my head in again. I kept laughing through this whole chapter and my husband keep asking me what's so funny. She done got me!!!! I love it!!!!
09/04/2023 08:00
Karen Bailey
Dammit!! I'm already behind.
09/04/2023 08:00
reader2121
🤣🤣🤣 so good! love Sabine and love Kai. I love all of them!
09/04/2023 07:59
🤣🤣🤣 I’m so in love with all of these characters 💜💜
09/04/2023 07:58
Karen Bailey
🤣🤣Oh wow! Kai......and it was in front of the fellas!!!! Tsk, tsk, tsk.
09/04/2023 07:58
My withdrawal is on full course 😭😭😭 i don’t want it tho why you doing me like thisssss Finally a chapter 😩😩😩 Made me feel like i was waiting for a month ... I’m going to be satisfied with this 🥲🥲
09/04/2023 07:57
Greyskies223
It’s bomb already. And you were right. He is fine! 👀👀👀
09/04/2023 07:56
Organized Chaos
FYI I’m sure you already know this lol but it should say that Kai has been blocking Sabine for MONTHS not a month. sorry about that, that edit and others will be approved by Tuesday hopefully 🖤
09/04/2023 07:56
« And then.... the faith was restored » deep voice 😊😊😊 i swear I was expecting something awkward 🤣🤣🤣
09/04/2023 07:56
Tenesha
Sterling is my favorite character. I feel he keep Demetri, Jordan, and Elijah all on there toes.
09/04/2023 07:55
Organized Chaos
hey everyone! I had to split chaper 19 into two so 20 is just the continuation of the original 19
09/04/2023 07:55
are we going to get an update soon?
09/04/2023 07:54
Selma Cole
Hahaha these two are going to fit right in with the rest of the family
09/04/2023 07:54
Crystal Infernos. Blazing Mist. Purple Haze…... names for the coven. Nadima (Nah-Dee-Mah) or Ibiza for the name and a female. Xander (Zander) or Xelan (Jeh-Lan) for a male. Also loving your name for a coven as well Organised chaos. maybe even Straight Mess.
09/04/2023 07:54
Tauicita Jones
please tell me we gonna get a George and Diane story once they are married!?
09/04/2023 07:53
Karen Bailey
OC, I have no words right now except poor Alexus.
09/04/2023 07:53
Taystrick
❤️❤️❤️ George and Diane are adorable.
09/04/2023 07:53
Andrea Tobias
you have done it again! I'm loving this already!
09/04/2023 07:53
Justmee
I missed my family 🥰🥰🥰! I have a lot of chapters to catch up on 😅🤣! I hope all is well with everyone though.
09/04/2023 07:52
LMBO 🤣🤣😭😭😭😭
09/04/2023 07:52
Selma Cole
love it so far, can’t wait for the rest
09/04/2023 07:52
Justmee
I just finished the first chapter and tell me why I had a lump in my throat 😭🤧!? I really felt like crying 😔! It took everything in me to hold myself together. Lawd 🥺
09/04/2023 07:48
Ronda Prescott
Yes......I laughed so hard! You helped me decompress from a stressful day. You are brilliant ma'am.
09/04/2023 07:47
beth sullins
ty for double chapter today. i love the book.
09/04/2023 07:47
reader2121
$40!!! 💀💀💀
09/04/2023 07:47
Loved the Dragon Ball reference 💙💙💙💙
09/04/2023 07:47
OMG!!😂🤣 Girl you had me over here laughing so hard I couldn’t breathe... I almost blacked out, had pull out my daughters emergency inhaler cause I knew I was going to the “Uppa Room” 👻😂😘 Thank you love bug as always you made my day!
09/04/2023 07:47
Poor Geo!! 🥺🥺🥺 and I found he’s song to Damn life!
09/04/2023 07:47
reader2121
👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽 beat their dusty asses! 😂
09/04/2023 07:46
Karen Bailey
OC, you are too funny.
09/04/2023 07:46
Dahlia Mynd
I think Terrance and Sterling theme song should be Ruff Ryder's Anthem by DMX😂😂😂😂😱😱
09/04/2023 07:46
I’m mean Kai can accept the fact his family are supernatural funky weird 🤩🤩🤩🤩 but can’t not accept the existence of demons 🤣 really bro 🤣🤣
09/04/2023 07:46
Dahlia Mynd
mannnnn cronos was a nice touch... is it wrong that I enjoyed that a llliiittttllleee to much. like cackling like a witch enjoyment
09/04/2023 07:45
Karen Bailey
I forgot Hotel Succubus.
09/04/2023 07:45
These two chapters were intense!!! It was great to read why Kai is Geo’s box of rocks, very powerful 🖤 Awesome Job Sis!!!
09/04/2023 07:45
Ronda Prescott
Aww, that made me tear up. They need each other and I'm happy to see them heal together. I love how everyone is supporting him and loving on him. Great chapter.
09/04/2023 07:44
reader2121
not the holograms! 💀💀😂😂
09/04/2023 07:43
Dahlia Mynd
mannnnn no matter what age you are there will always be lessons to learn. I hope Diane step her game up and claim George!
09/04/2023 07:43
Loving it 💜💜💜💜 but Kai needs his public ass whoopin
09/04/2023 07:41
😳😳😳😳😳 🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾
09/04/2023 07:41
Justmee
Kai's backstory was deep 😪! Makes me feel good that he finally got brave enough to face his sisters. The laughs though were just what I needed 😂😂😂😂
09/04/2023 07:40
Jennifer Tuttle
OMG!!! I've been waiting for this......!!!!
09/04/2023 07:40
Lini Vaiangina
i cant wait for more!!
09/04/2023 07:40
Ronda Prescott
Aww, that was super sweet. I have been waiting for Geo to get it together.
09/04/2023 07:39
Rebeca Castro
my favorite character in this whole series hands down is Demetri his caring nature and his out burst
09/04/2023 07:37
Christinaa
ahah yass city boys 😂
09/04/2023 07:37
Morgan had fun with the wretched in Baltimore!!! *Claire Huxtable voice* That part had me rolling 🤣
09/04/2023 07:37
Ariesbaby89
Okay Elijah aka Zaddy 😜
09/04/2023 07:37
Before even you writing it I’m already cringing it 😷😷 It’s about to get super embarrass and no one can’t stop them... 🙈🙈🙈...
09/04/2023 07:36
Ariesbaby89
Yass get it city boys!!!
09/04/2023 07:36
WELCOME BACK 🤗🤗🤗 i want a Sterling in life 😩😩😩 That man is everything 🤣🤣🤣 such a kid in a grown man body Everything was so good witty and funny 🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾
09/04/2023 07:35
Justmee
UPDATEEEEEEE 💞! I've been looking everyday. Just wishing and hoping. FINALLY 😙 *sigh* 😤 I'll be back finna go read it NEOW 💃🏾! PS if you need rest... take it! You know I just love your books 😊
09/04/2023 07:35
Organized Chaos
hey everyone! I’m back! FYI anystories is doing some type of work on comments. so I I don’t respond right away like usual. IM NOT IGNORING YOU lol I just don’t get the notification. but def keep the comments coming they fuel me ability to continue writing ☺️
09/04/2023 07:32
reader2121
I love Beemo!
09/04/2023 07:32
Organized Chaos
hey everyone! I’m currently working on four books including a new one (because ppl fuss at me when I don’t let them know lol) hotel succubus, this one, zom-Bae and the new one Beastly. I’ll be taking my time to update as I can but I have four completed and four I’m working on soooo 😬 be patient with the kid.
09/04/2023 07:32
Sterling 🥴🥴 karma’s a B
09/04/2023 07:31
Ariesbaby89
Sterling Angela Basset Wolf 😂 lmao
09/04/2023 07:31
Marquita Harper
WTH are they wanting Mary Jane's for? LMAO that was hilarious. Tomny (Dimiteri) you ain't got no job. lol
09/04/2023 07:31