Mr. Huntington's Secret Comments
Sharrell Roberts
please edit!!! The story has potential but is frustrating to read due the mistakes with grammar, incomplete sentences and rushed descriptions.
09/04/2023 08:15Queenie Bell
The wording in this text is awful inappropriate use of vocabulary, and it appears to not have been proofread. The story has potential but the mistakes 😔 distract you.
09/04/2023 08:09
Seashells
Love it! I love the slow pacing storyline. Although I want to get them to the point of breaking off the ice, but I want to how they will start developing their relationship. Prologue is a surprise for me! I wonder what will happen next 😍
09/04/2023 07:47