Our Vows Were Meant to be Broken Comments

  • Ksea18

    hi I’m new to this but do I have to read the first one to read this one?

    06/23/2023 07:50

  • Oni Blah

    t5y8 i can’t wait for her to leave him and hook up with Harvey. she deserves so much batter

    04/14/2023 22:53

  • Sammy

    t5y8 I completed the first book and loved it. Ready to tackle this one with a overnight binge reading. The author does not disappoint.

    04/14/2023 21:34

  • Marilyn Livingston

    t5y8. I won't be reading the rest of this. I can't do the cheating thing. She's already caught him once and now he's done it again. I need happily ever after in my reading and I just can't believe in theirs, even if they do reconcile

    04/14/2023 09:42

  • Janaki Kollepalli

    t5y8... this book has a very good start and I have not been able to keep the book down

    04/14/2023 09:11

  • T Malloy

    t5y8 not my taste of tea but I won't knock it it is good but just didn't keep me going

    04/14/2023 04:27

  • Chenenigans

    I have read every completed book and not a single one has let me down. I can honestly say I will read ANYTHING you write because you have yet to disappoint. Bravo!!

    04/15/2022 04:12

  • TrishaReads

    thank you Queen for another journey of life and love...we all know it isn't always stars and rainbows and cotton candies because life is full of both good and bad...I'm excited to read more of your stories...Cheers!🥂

    03/15/2022 09:24

  • Belle Simpson

    I really enjoyed and appreciated this story as well as Our Vows Don't Mean A Thing. Thank you so much author most esp for calling the readers attention to the Crime Against Women.🥰🧡💐💚 I will be checking all your creations, very interested in Drevon's story.

    02/24/2022 17:36

  • john smith

    I know this is Harvey and Mia story, but I love Nathan’s strength and support. A decent guy. We need more of them in this world.

    02/21/2022 04:40

  • john smith

    I am in love with Harvey. Loved him as a kid in Book 1 and in this book I was head over heels crazy about him. A family man. A man with actual brains and he uses them wisely. I love Mia and she definitely 100% deserves a man like Harvey in her life.

    02/21/2022 04:24

  • Jill Robinson

    Loved Austin and Draven being brought into this story. Good read so far.

    02/20/2022 07:48

  • Rebecca Farmer

    both of these stories were so good loved it!!!!!

    11/21/2021 10:34

  • Tomekia Robinson

    Another great book you never disappoint thank you author!!!!

    11/11/2021 06:56

  • Mushell Krox

    I was just thinking "we need a book about Draven", then read your final A/N. Excited for that.

    08/26/2021 04:21

  • FireeFlii53684

    i laughed really hard at "sneaky links" .I love all of your stories. Please never stop writing!

    07/27/2021 00:26

  • Anita Rotar

    I'm at chapter 24 and I don't think I will ever be able to see anx man named Gabriel the same way. His character is the most disgusting thing and it pains me knowing that there are real people like that living in our world.

    07/13/2021 00:18

  • Ofa Leka

    Response I really enjoyed this 2nd installation of this series. The rape was a hard read, but if it is your story and you put in what you feel is right. I think that the idea of the female in a story always getting saved in the nick of time is absurd. It did give you the push to totally write off Gabriel and Miranda. I would love a story that follows Draven, you know, if your taking suggestions. Keep keeping on. ❤️

    07/06/2021 21:56

  • Rebecca Crutcher

    thank you for this second book i so love it too and i cant wait to read some more of your books please keep up with the fantastic and fabulous writing

    06/24/2021 11:03

  • Ifeoluwa Adeniyi

    I would read any book you write. This book was lovely just as good as the first. I love this

    06/22/2021 23:19

  • miasiacheyenne

    I would love an epilogue!

    06/21/2021 18:58

  • miasiacheyenne

    I loved it! I gotta re-read it

    06/21/2021 18:57

  • XxPandaGamingXx 560

    I have loved reading this book, I am so happy that Harvey and Mia ended up together; it was hard to read the chapters where Gabriel was raping Mia but I understand this part had to be written. I would like to know what prison sentence Gabriel and his mother received and the name of the new baby.

    06/21/2021 17:34

  • Sonia McLeod

    hoping for another epilogue that tells us the name of their daughter and what happened to Gabriel and his mother also I want to say thank you for your kind words ❤️ And thank you for a wonderful story I want my own Harvey 😘 looking forward to reading more of your books be well 😘😘🇬🇧

    06/21/2021 11:27

  • Emma Vallance

    Great story loved it

    06/21/2021 08:34

  • Avril Colville

    Brilliant story

    06/21/2021 04:52

  • Blanca Ortiz

    im sorry to hear what you went through. but its amazing you chose to tell your story. i hope your mom and yourself ate able to get through that terrible moment in your lives. thisnis the second book im reading from you cant wait to read more from you

    06/21/2021 02:04

  • CuntasaurusRex..

    these books are very good! might I just suggest reading through before posting so you don't call her "him or his" as that tends to make it less appealing. also, the term is "disbarment" not debarment. please keep writing!! other than the few grammatical errors, it's extremely hard to put down!

    06/20/2021 02:16

  • XxPandaGamingXx 560

    I applaud the writer for writing the last few chapters telling Mia's story after what almost happened to her. Nobody knows how they will react to if someone rapes or assault someone you love.

    06/19/2021 03:30

  • Regina Battle

    God bless you for being able to write these recent chapters even after what you just went through. I am enjoying this book and look forward to what you write and when. It is impressive and I will pray for your continued peace in your personal life. 🥲😇

    06/18/2021 23:23

  • Reader-062567

    massive shout to being so brave in writing the book and having the confidence to share your story. Everbody has there comments and opinions and unfortunately life isn’t rainbows and sunshine. Let this be a lesson to people it’s ok to share and have the confidence to speak up and please do not suffer in silence. ❤️❤️❤️

    06/18/2021 22:30

  • Caa-si Justice

    This book has been nothing short of amazing. The only thing I’m upset about is how only one chapter a day comes out. Just when I think I have the story figured out you throw a plot twist in. Believe it or not - once the story is finished I plan to reread it in it’s entirety all the way through. You have a gift and are a very talented writer. I truly enjoy how well written this is. I have been working on my stories for years and was estatic to find reading websites that work can be published on. However, it’s also been my downfall as I read way more than I write these days 😆. Keep up the excellent work!!! - from one satisfied fan.

    06/18/2021 22:29

  • miasiacheyenne

    you’re killing me with how you just leave me hanging on these chapters

    06/18/2021 22:07

  • Mawusi Ford

    omg 😆 that’s right Mia cut off the penus 🤣 guess he won’t be using it anymore

    06/18/2021 20:26

  • Sonia McLeod

    Iam so shocked at some of these comments about Mia being weak weak has nothing to do with it although it's just a story you will never understand unless you have been their a couple of years ago I was on a dating site and was talking to this guy who I thought at the time was great needless to say I decided to meet with him big mistake going to his house after the site always warns you to meet in a public place but because he was so nice we decided to meet at his apartment then go to dinner and movies from there from the minute I walked into his apartment he attacked me and sexually assaulted me I am sharing this one in the hopes that people will stop judging Mia two so people can be aware it can happen to anyone three it is something that happens every day by a boyfriend husband or just someone you know rape is something horrible and the shame you feel never goes away yes it was partly my fault because I did go to his house and the worse it I never fought him back I took everything he did to me but at least I walked away with my life their is not one day that passes I don't think about what happened to me I live with the shame but I never pass judgment on something I have no control over it's just a story but at the same time I am sure it's happened to a lot of people and it's something we all need to think about I am happy you brought awareness to this subject I am glad Mia has her family her daughter and Harvey Gabriel and his mother will go to jail you are a great author thank you 😘😘🇬🇧

    06/18/2021 20:21

  • Mawusi Ford

    wow just wow karma pls rain down on mother and don

    06/18/2021 18:00

  • Serena Baugh

    guys stop Mia is not weak she is trying to protect her daughter. plus if you ever been in abusive relationship you will understand where she is coming from also she is trying to get out that’s where Harvey comes in that’s her get out ticket. As far as the rape I had to read it little at at time but after you been rape you’re disconnected from your body and you get to the point of feeling nothing plus she is chain up so she literally can’t fight. All she is thinking about is her daughter and getting back to her, keeping her safe and the only way to do that is do as she is told. I don’t like the fact that she has to rely on Harvey but he is higher up so he can pull strings to get her safe.

    06/18/2021 15:42

  • Reader-015968

    I’m officially not reading anymore until this book is finished. If I wanted to read a book about a woman being severely abused then I would have chosen one. These small abusive tidbits fill me with fury and animosity. I need peace in my mind.

    06/18/2021 12:34

  • XxPandaGamingXx 560

    I can't believe the grandmother just walked out the door after seeing Mia was raped,

    06/18/2021 12:21

  • Emma Vallance

    I need more xx great author x

    06/18/2021 11:43

  • Roxanne Sue

    I have got to agree with you guys, she’s being weak from the beginning and it’s only gotten worse. Like how do you not fight and how come her sister hasn’t missed her to come and look for her. usually when she doesn’t return by a certain time her sister would check in, 71 chapters in and it’s becoming ridiculous

    06/18/2021 07:14

  • miasiacheyenne

    I get people are afraid of their attacker, but how weak she is annoying. like she literally has no fight

    06/18/2021 03:51

  • Denise Chong Su Yen

    Mia is soooo weak

    06/18/2021 03:20

  • Regina Battle

    😱😱😱😱😱😭😭😭😭

    06/18/2021 01:00

  • Alyssa

    She needs to take plan B and report this as a rape. I think she should probably even go to the hospital so it’s on record. This is just terrible.That devil Gabriel omg. I need him to get what’s coming to him. This was too much 😢. He believes he has entitlement over her because they are married. Wrong!! It’s her body and she said NO 😢😢😢😢😢😢

    06/17/2021 15:24

  • Reader-015968

    I seriously think I’m going to vomit…

    06/17/2021 14:06

  • Blanca Ortiz

    why????? dude i am in shock how could you do this!!!!! 😠😠😠😠😭😭😭😭 no one deserves to be raped but somehow i knew this was going to happen as soon as Marina left the house. How could a woman let that happen and just walk away like nothing!!! houre so evil 👿 i need the next update already 😂

    06/17/2021 12:08

  • Sonia McLeod

    wow omg he has Shattered her don't know what shocked me more the rape or the fact that his mother knows what happened and as a woman knowing turned her back and walked away I hope they get what they justicely deserve and I hate them both I only hope she survives and comes through this strong for herself child and Harvey 😘😘🇬🇧

    06/17/2021 10:48

  • Patricia Machado-Richard

    skocked is an understatement. mia needs help and needs to get out of there with her daughter somehow. i really hope harvey comes looking for her at her sisters and when he sees shes not there he goes to marinas house and bashes gabriel and saves mia. omg my stomach is all twisted up at what just happened to her. inguess r apeing her will help her get custody of her daughter now

    06/17/2021 07:17

  • Madeeha naaz

    I am sooo shocked 😲

    06/17/2021 03:54

  • Alyssa

    Harvey needs to kick his ass again!!! How dare you Gabriel!!!! She didn’t even want that 🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬

    06/17/2021 03:41

  • Alyssa

    oh no!!!!

    06/17/2021 03:40

  • Ifeoluwa Adeniyi

    Whoa! I hope Marina’s cell or Grace is next to Gabriel’s so she can wear tech him suffer. Wait isn’t she Evans Ex-wife? I can see where they all get it from

    06/17/2021 02:50

  • Sarah McArthur

    If Marina isn’t on her way to get someone to help, I swear I will jump through this screen!!

    06/17/2021 02:48

  • Mawusi Ford

    Marina is a POS

    06/17/2021 02:30

  • Mawusi Ford

    omg 😡😡😡 well l hope you kill Gabriel now l want expecting that

    06/17/2021 02:27

  • miasiacheyenne

    woooow that took a dark turn

    06/17/2021 02:17

  • Mawusi Ford

    omg l scared for her l hope Harvey followed her anyway

    06/16/2021 21:58

  • Mawusi Ford

    can’t wait for Harvey and Mia to be happy. Let’s get rid of Gabriel he is the worst

    06/16/2021 13:13

  • Alyssa

    The baby is with Gabriel’s mom?? My heart!!! OMG my nerves are shot!!! Please Mis get your baby and let that snake Gabriel get what’s coming to him

    06/16/2021 02:49

  • Mawusi Ford

    oh well as if Gabriel can be upset. Karma is something else

    06/15/2021 02:09

  • Blanca Ortiz

    yessss.......Gabriel its about to go down for you and your Mom 😃

    06/14/2021 21:13

  • Geraldine Ferraren

    I see why Marina would put her loyalty to her son however at the same time Mia should not be trusting of her. I hope Mia packed hers and Amiyah’s belongings so Gabriel can go back to them gone. even if he tried to change in the end for them, he was unapologetic and his actions said otherwise.

    06/14/2021 20:25

  • Ifeoluwa Adeniyi

    Finally things are getting good. Also am I the only one who hates Marina? like how the hell do you do that to someone? and make her trust you blindly so you can fvck her over. You can really only trust yourself

    06/13/2021 20:00

  • Madeeha naaz

    woo-hoo! finally ... everyone gonna get what they deserve now

    06/12/2021 23:34

  • Sonia McLeod

    action about time I want to see Gabriel hit rock bottom he is such a dog he would sleep with anyone and then toss them aside Mia deserves so much better so happy Harvey confronted the lawyer now Mia needs to start fighting and I can't believe his mother sent her to that lawyer so she can't be trusted either 😘😘🇬🇧

    06/12/2021 22:20

  • miasiacheyenne

    got damn I need more

    06/12/2021 19:21

  • Mawusi Ford

    yessss love Harvey

    06/12/2021 19:10

  • miasiacheyenne

    yaaassss I need this to pick up so Harvey can bury him

    06/11/2021 02:18

  • Patricia Machado-Richard

    yes Harvey took his furst shot at gabriel. now to reveal nylas truth to mia and let the help to get her out begin pleaseeeee

    06/10/2021 04:18

  • Sonia McLeod

    How is your dog feeling? Thank you for the update Gabriel deserves that and more he is a cheating dog and I don't know why stays with him she deserves better she deserves Harvey he is not perfect but at least he loves her and would not cheat 😘😘🇬🇧

    06/09/2021 20:17

  • Blanca Ortiz

    I am so sorry to hear about your dog. I hope she is not in too much pain.

    06/04/2021 15:56

  • Sonia McLeod

    I am so sorry about your dog this must be so hard on you and family ❤️

    06/03/2021 11:24

  • miasiacheyenne

    come on Gabriel’s karma 🤣

    06/03/2021 02:25

  • Roxanne Sue

    I love this book but beginning to loose interest at the rate the chapters are being released. By the time the book is completed you’ll have to start reading all over again to remember the beginning

    06/02/2021 14:36

  • Reader-062567

    I loved reading the 1st book and the 2nd has been a great read they are so different and i can’t wait for Gabriel to get his ass kicked by karma.😂😂

    05/30/2021 22:19

  • sunshine

    can’t wait for the next update. just binge both these books, both really good reads . how often do you update ?

    05/28/2021 12:26

  • Reader-015968

    The suspense for this wedding party is killin me!!!

    05/28/2021 05:44

  • Alyssa

    It’s about to go down at that wedding!!!

    05/28/2021 00:08

  • DalNic74

    Gabriel is such a scumbag loser with his awful self. Taylor is stupidly idiotic for believing his tomfoolery and Harvey …. I’m waiting on him to swoop in like captain save a chic. i mean seriously the drama is ridiculous to have the hoe in the house !!!!! I’d burn it to the ground

    05/27/2021 07:32

  • DalNic74

    that dirty beeeeeech

    05/27/2021 06:47

  • miasiacheyenne

    hot damn Harvey! why didn’t you snitch 😭 She needs to know

    05/25/2021 22:48

  • Rebeka Falo

    Taylor is such a pathetic slut! What an idiot to believe Gabriel lies..Oh well, that's what homwrecker like her gets!😂

    05/25/2021 06:02

  • Madeeha naaz

    OMG...3 chapters in 1 day ....thank u soooooo much !!!!

    05/25/2021 05:54

  • Madeeha naaz

    Can we plz get a double update .... I am unable to handle the suspense.

    05/24/2021 08:10

  • Blanca Ortiz

    omg i freaking live this book. its so much better than the first. i check everyday foebthe update and wishing it could just be complete so I can know how it ends 😄

    05/21/2021 03:06

  • Alyssa

    I’m yelling Go To HELL Gabriel!!!! He’s such a sleezeball!!! Mia was damn near a Virgin with his selfish ass!!! Harvey was her first orgasm!! That’s a shame

    05/20/2021 02:48

  • miasiacheyenne

    well...saw that ending coming 🤣🤣💀

    05/19/2021 02:31

  • miasiacheyenne

    got damn it 😩 the way these chapters and drive me nuts 😭I need more

    05/18/2021 02:27

  • Keina Gowins

    love this story

    05/17/2021 12:43

  • Patricia Machado-Richard

    ok ok at the hotel. tell him everything please Mia. ami hope he jumps at the chance to Save her

    05/16/2021 23:50

  • Alyssa

    Hotel is a bad idea. They will be seen there and it’s scandalous. Also it was very sloppy of her to get picked up by Harvey at the school. I’m sure one of those nosy busy bodies already told Gabriel about her affair. Sigh. Our girl is also VERY naiiive to trust Gabriel’s mom. Like really??? Of course she will be aligned with her son. I see that it’s about to hit the fan.

    05/16/2021 21:02

  • Sunitha Nambiar

    really interesting to read, there should be some way for Mia to fight her husband

    05/15/2021 06:15

  • Sarah McArthur

    I feel like he’s only pretending to be nice so he can get in her pants. I have trust issues... loving the book so far!

    05/14/2021 05:57

  • miasiacheyenne

    I seriously need more than one update a day this is killing me 😩🤣

    05/12/2021 23:34

  • Patricia Machado-Richard

    omg i hope ethan has details for harvey and how miserable mia teally is with gabriel

    05/12/2021 11:36

  • Avril Colville

    I liked the 1st book and love reading this book but why so expensive Please make it more affordable

    05/10/2021 19:53

  • miasiacheyenne

    welp she had the chance to explain and she blew it 🤦🏽‍♀️

    05/10/2021 03:00

  • Alyssa

    Mia has to tell Harvey before he finds out!

    05/06/2021 01:28

  • Patricia Machado-Richard

    i am loving this sequel. i want the good stuff to start with harvey and mia. by that i mean when is she going to open up to him and let him help her out of this trapped marriage and start their life together.

    05/05/2021 05:44
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