Beastly (18+) Comments
Allison Underdonk Peterman
the pack would love them i think. I truly hope Ani will now carry the baby full term! poor Cayden and her so glad he has stayed loyal to her. love the misunderstanding with whistling. I cannot wait to see how kano and her talk goes!
09/04/2023 08:14Tenesha
She about to give Emon ass a 2 pics and a biscuit.
09/04/2023 08:14Karen Bailey
Okay, I finally made it to the season finale. Tsk, tsk, tsk! Somebody's got some explaining to do.π²π²π²
09/04/2023 08:14beth sullins
Im so with Brenda being fun sized. love it
09/04/2023 08:14Ahhh!!! OC, you got me hooked on another one of your stories. Got me all π₯Ί, then π, π¨ and π. Got me checking for updates like a fiend!!!
09/04/2023 08:14Brenda about to get the dust knocked off of her πππ₯°π₯° I canβt wait to read about it ππ₯°
09/04/2023 08:14Okay!! I have decided not to read the last two chapters for now... πππ Why you did this to me ππ Iβm to invest ohh my heart
09/04/2023 08:14Karen Bailey
They make the oddest but best couple ever.ππ It's like a first date every time they get together.
09/04/2023 08:14Allison Underdonk Peterman
I LOVE this story. I finally got caught up but please tell me this story is updated regularly? I'm glad Kano found out Greg is gay so that issue is out the window. now that the pack knows him as alpha and part of the pack they will understand when he hurts emon. I hope she gives Kano hell. I cannot believe he was so rude even after she left I thought him being the lovable one would of atleast hugged her first then claimed she was his and only his. I cannot wait to see the next update
09/04/2023 08:14Jasmine Hazelbaker
what did Kano β maybe change his mindβ about? that lost me
09/04/2023 08:13I wish comments were per chapter so we could comment without spoilers, I have predictions and comments but donβt want to mess it up for people not as far as meπ©
09/04/2023 08:13Karen Bailey
Out of all the words you could have used, Scooby-Doo?????πππ So, is Magic Kingdom your favorite park?
09/04/2023 08:13You hit me right in the feels again OC! ππ
09/04/2023 08:13FiestyOne
absolutely loved this book! definitely had me giggling to myself quite a few times π₯°π
09/04/2023 08:13beth sullins
omg i wanna cry though extremely happy. now they need to fix their relationships.
09/04/2023 08:13Organized Chaos
Hey everyone! thanks for being here! Iβm currently working on four stories and will update as I feel the inspiration. Happy reading!
09/04/2023 08:12Joanne Baker
Loving this story!! Can't wait for updates. β€
09/04/2023 08:12Organized Chaos
no double update today, Iβm not feeling too great
09/04/2023 08:12Kano, baby it's time to claim your birthright!
09/04/2023 08:12The Triple H chapter is hilarious πππ€£π€£π€£ Iβm loving me some Cayden now! Thanks for the great update Sis β€οΈ
09/04/2023 08:12Taystrick
seriously you kill me every time. every story has me rolling. πππ
09/04/2023 08:11Verdict: And ππΎsheππΎstrikeππΎAGAIN! PSA: New people if you stubble on any books of Miss OC you wonβt regret. I promise. She talented and creatively out of this world Please support her others works as they are A-MAN-ZIN πππ πππ
09/04/2023 08:11Kano is so cuuutteee! ma take care of yourself! Your health is more important π€π€π€
09/04/2023 08:10okay by far my favourite chapter! Damn the girl couldnβt even resist the meal ππ
09/04/2023 08:10Jasmin Smith
I'm at the "porn" chapter and Omg I'm crying ππ
09/04/2023 08:10Sierra Russell
OMG.. ππ. I dont know gow to redpond to this.. i mean my whole book world just got shook2π₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯π₯πππ±π±π±π«π«π«
09/04/2023 08:10My boy Wolfman finally got some T-R-I-M!!! I love this book girl β€οΈ
09/04/2023 08:10Justmee
Tsk tsk you're eleven chapters in already huh... I'm happy for you and mad at the same time πππ! You know I like to be at the opening for all your books ma'am π€¦π½ββοΈπ€·π½ββοΈ!! I'm here now though π₯³
09/04/2023 08:10LOVE ITTTTT! and the refences π€π€π€π€π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯° me like me like
09/04/2023 08:09Hey Ma! Question: is the story taking place in London? I mean thereβs a lot of references words/ slangs so maybe it is ...
09/04/2023 08:08Jasmine Hazelbaker
in a house with a mouseππππππ«π§’ thatβs the funniestπππ
09/04/2023 08:08Tenesha
Child someone would think I'm waiting on my stimulus check to be deposit. That's how I'm checking for updates on my phone for this book and 2 of your other books. But I'm loving the romance, drama, and suspense. Keep up the good work and keep q writing.
09/04/2023 08:08thank you for bringing ms into this story. for the simple fact that I do have ms. most days I get through my pain by reading. or even the really rough days I can't walk. I'm glad essence can use steroids. I ended up becoming allergic to it after 3 years. so I stay in a state of not being able to fix my ms. it means everything to me that you are creating awareness about it. thank you from my whole heart. I have also read all of your books and love them btw.
09/04/2023 08:08Jasmine Hazelbaker
I canβt get enough of this! although I want essence n Kano to have another babyβ¦ that way they can experience it together.. and we get a good scene from themβ¦ππβΊοΈβΊοΈ
09/04/2023 08:08Organized Chaos
this story has been officially signed by anystories π€
09/04/2023 08:073:45am: a feeling told me you update the book and then boom ππ! Mama E! Wheeww I knew it too π³π³π³π€π€π€π€€π€€π€€π€£π€£ π€£π€£π€«π€«π€«π€«
09/04/2023 08:07reader2121
theyβre all getting mated up. oh poor Brenda, theyβre going to be a handful...literally π
09/04/2023 08:07Organized Chaos
hey everyone! just an FYI anystories tech team is running a new comment systm. any inappropriate comments which are related to harressments, hate speech, bullying, leak of privacy or contain inappropriate words will be removed by the system immediately. The tech has bugs that they are still currently working through π€·π½ββοΈ. But I AM NOT DELETING COMMENTS-I donβt have the ability. So if you write a comment and it doesnβt appear this is why.
09/04/2023 08:07Organized Chaos
sorry guys!! Iβm sure you know but that should say BLOOD MOON and not Dark Moonβ¦working two stories at once π₯΄ edits are sent it thanks!
09/04/2023 08:06Itβs about to be a wild ride ππ I love Essence & canβt wait to see what becomes of her & Kano β€οΈβ€οΈ
09/04/2023 08:04Jasmine Hazelbaker
love this book!! loved the beginning of this season... Kano been fd up... ππ I half expected essence to drop him πππ
09/04/2023 08:04Hey Sis! Iβm loving this book already π₯° You had me shedding tears right out of the gate & then laughter in the next chapter β€οΈ I canβt wait to read more!!!
09/04/2023 08:03Ariesbaby89
You did it again and now Iβm hooked! get it girl!!!
09/04/2023 08:03reader2121
wow!! π₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ί my heart!!
09/04/2023 08:03reader2121
I love the WWE reference...my sibs and I grew up on that π€£π€£
09/04/2023 08:02HELLO you fav is here! make place Im about to read ANOTHER ONE (DJ Khaled voice)
09/04/2023 08:01Karen Bailey
I'm trying to pace myself to help me get through my 9.5hr shift, but you don't make easy for me to do so. Even if I am working from home. Essence is a No Limit soldier huhππ!
09/04/2023 08:00Brenda, Stephan, and Fontaine are HELLA FUNNY. She put that magical coochie on them. I'm through. π€£π€£
09/04/2023 07:59Charonda Patterson
Awesome read! I couldn't put it down!
09/04/2023 07:58Left a comment on your comment but... are you going to update a chapter at least before you left π₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ί
09/04/2023 07:58Organized Chaos
season II of beastly- June π€
09/04/2023 07:56reader2121
Gurllllllll....this is gonna be so good!!
09/04/2023 07:55Stacey Burrows
i loved this book was amazing
09/04/2023 07:55Organized Chaos
this story has been completed π₯°
09/04/2023 07:54Dahlia Mynd
mannnnnn you have a way with words!!! have me over here in my feelings. All emotional and ugly snorting ππππ
09/04/2023 07:54Rebeca Castro
I think there mates will accept them even if they are witches
09/04/2023 07:54Noww we talking i love me some romance but nothing beat a beating cant wait... πππ
09/04/2023 07:53Allison Underdonk Peterman
oh my! I actually teared up! you can't do these sweet things with us! I read this and now my kids are wondering whats wrong with me! this was amazing
09/04/2023 07:53I just love all your books! I would buy them in a heartbeat if they were in print β€
09/04/2023 07:52essence jennings
I just figured out how to leave comments! π² I love how real each person is even if they fake. I see some of myself in each one!
09/04/2023 07:52Karen Bailey
π€£π€£Naturo run. That's hilarious!!!π All with her eyes closed. I have to tell you, I've never come across a story where there are 2 mates unless they are twins or alphas. I may have missed that earlier if that's the case. Either way, looks like H-town will be making an appearance in this story with Brenda.
09/04/2023 07:52Tania
πListen... I refuse to read any of these comments cause I'm still reading and don't want any spoilers. I just have to tell the author that she is a GENIUS! This book has had me laughing out loud on so many occasions. I love this Beauty and the Beast adaptation, you have made the book way better! If you were a chef I'd tell you all the seasoning and spices you added to this dish has truly made this meal delicious π. I can't wait to finish, please tell me the names of your other books so that I can satiate my hunger some more. Fantastic job author!
09/04/2023 07:52Just the comments alone makes mw want to read it! Here I go tissue box at hand!
09/04/2023 07:52Leli White
All of them gettin' worked like a full-time job. Poor Brendaa! π€£ Her num-nums probably SORE af!
09/04/2023 07:47Donna Moncus
I love this story. more updates please
09/04/2023 07:47Tania
So...I'm a huge history buff and learning about the gods of different eras, time and origins have always been one of my fave things to learn and read about, with that being said I did catch the subtle way you through out Brenda and Erika's true names. O.C. These books that you create does something to your readers were all on this emotional rollercoaster never knowing which emotion we're going to feel next,and I'm here for it!! As a writer you wield the mightest weapon in being able to make all your characters have happy endings or not, which is why I'm anticipating the sadness that's in store for these 5 characters π I do hope I'm wrong though...please prove me wrong O.C. I'm too invested in their happily ever after.π
09/04/2023 07:47Rebeca Castro
what is ms
09/04/2023 07:47reader2121
Oh lord not the coochie cobwebs. Iβm dead π€£π€£π€£
09/04/2023 07:47Karen Bailey
No Essence! Come back! If you take your love away from him, he'll go crazy. Don't leave him girl. Please stay.
09/04/2023 07:47Taystrick
Triple H chapter is hilarious! Iβm dying π€£π€£π€£π€£
09/04/2023 07:46Allison Underdonk Peterman
oh no who sent her that? Cayden didn't send that did he? I hope Kano sees the letter. I dont want her to be sick! please make sure it curable! I am freaking out!
09/04/2023 07:46Truly one of the best books I have ever been lucky enough to read!! Maybe it's because my family looks like the cast of It's A Small World After All but I really enjoyed the mixture of races and sexual orientation!! It modernizes the story so much! Plus Essence is a laugh out loud character who you can't help but adore!!
09/04/2023 07:46This is a good read. Kudos to the writer.ππ½
09/04/2023 07:46Bella Jersey 2
I donβt know what other demons thr mom was dealing with. but that was cold. she scared her children for life 1
09/04/2023 07:45Organized Chaos
hey! so for the sake of transparency I wanted to let you all know that Iβm taking an hiatus FROM new content. Iβm in the process of doing a MASSIVE edit of my books which will take some time and focus. my goal is to be finished by the beginning of May. IM COMING BACK! but this is important to me as there is a lot of formatting and other things I want to fix. love you all and see you soon.
09/04/2023 07:45Bella Jersey 2
how long may beastly be up here?
09/04/2023 07:45Rebeca Castro
is there going to be a second book to this
09/04/2023 07:45π the whole βwhy are you immune to maceβ scene had me dying! only you...π€£π€£π€£ Thank you
09/04/2023 07:44π€ Hummm! All I can say: Iβm pretty sure K and A are gonna be ice cold with E. But I read it and read it I canβt predict the rest I lost my jujutsu π©π©π©π₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ί
09/04/2023 07:43imma curse someone in private... buttttt Essence personality is my spirit animal π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯° talk about having someone back π€£π€£π€£π€£π€£π€£
09/04/2023 07:41reader2121
Mark your girl Kano!
09/04/2023 07:38Not sorry at all buuuuttt: Iβm about to leave a load of comments for this book. That last chapters was π±π±π±π± itβs love at first read πππππππππππ
09/04/2023 07:37π₯ Oh Essence, baby you are more precious than you know! β€
09/04/2023 07:36... Wow.... ππΎππΎππΎππΎππΎ
09/04/2023 07:36