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  • Linda Strandquist

    y6u9 wow interesting start. had me wondering what next for the young girl. imagine having to messenger the information she will.

    04/16/2023 02:03

  • Megan Phillips

    y6u9 the introduction for this book seemed promising but unfortunately I couldn't really get into this story.

    04/15/2023 23:25

  • Roxy Galindo

    y6u9 saving this one for later. different from what I’ve been reading and it sounds interesting

    04/15/2023 22:48

  • Gemma Butler

    y6u9 This book sounds like it could be interesting. I’ve added it to my library to read later.

    04/15/2023 22:30

  • Reader-731248

    y6u9 Just from the introduction I am hooked. I just added this book to my library and I am very excited to read more.

    04/15/2023 18:52

  • Heather Minks

    y6u9 that sounds interesting. Based on what I’ve read so far, I’m excited to see where this turns out. I love when people create books to incorporate different ideas.

    04/15/2023 18:02

  • Emily

    y6u9 seems like a very different kind of story line and that is awesome. I’m always happy to see books stray from the normal stuff

    04/15/2023 17:48

  • Athena Jones

    Y6u9 it could be an interesting book but I can't follow it it's hard to understand what's going on

    04/15/2023 14:17

  • Nadia Ogle

    Y6u9 interesting, can't wait to see if she will choose to go the right direction instead of giving in to the darkness which the dead want.

    04/15/2023 14:12

  • Jan T

    y6u9 #y6u9 this is my first time hearing the term Crier. I'm intrigued with the story now. interesting introduction and the comments are good

    04/15/2023 13:51

  • Maria Cecilia Reyes-Meliton

    y6u9 I cannot get my head around this story. It holds absolutely no appeal to me at all.

    04/15/2023 12:35

  • Me Myself

    y6u9 so far this looks like an interesting book. I hope it is complete so we don't have to wait for updates.

    04/15/2023 12:05

  • Jill Robinson

    y6u9 The description of this story is interesting. I love all the descriptions in the first few chapters I've read so far, it seems to be very well written and different.

    04/15/2023 11:22

  • Amal Samir

    Y6u9, the book seems interesting. It is new for the crier type. Definitely different from the werewolves, vampires and witches.

    04/15/2023 09:42

  • Selli Dang

    y6u9 the summary sounded interesting soni gave this book a go and it was definitely worth while, it was interesting, well written and good character

    04/15/2023 08:47

  • Vicki usher

    y6u9# wow what a interesting storyline, so different to all the other books I have seen. Very intriguing never heard of a crier definitely got to read this

    04/15/2023 06:55

  • zira

    y6u9 i love this. im smily while reading the intro. i found it sweet and so much "kilig" and "gusto"..

    04/15/2023 05:10

  • Janaki Kollepalli

    y6u9...hmmm... interesting with a very different storyline ... never heard of a crier

    04/15/2023 05:03

  • Monique Swanepoel

    y6u9 adding this book to my list to read. sounds like a good read. next on the list

    04/15/2023 04:47

  • Debra Sykes

    y6u9 never heard of a crier so adding book to my library as the intro was good

    04/15/2023 04:42

  • Ashley

    y6u9 I'm interested in reading this story. I've never heard of a crier before. Definitely different from most shifter stories.

    04/15/2023 03:52

  • Reader-350476

    y6u9 It’s really a good book and it’s amazing that they have a happy family and that’s all matter.

    04/15/2023 01:10

  • Joele G

    y6u9 a twist of turn in this shifter book; a Crier that’s a first for me to read; I’m intrigue in this book adding it now

    04/15/2023 00:27

  • Jennah_63074

    thank you, will you be making a book 2? it’s great material, love reading this book

    12/25/2021 14:00

  • Zayda Watts

    I enjoyed this. I'm glad they worked things out and now have a happy family and many years of memories to make. thanks for sharing your amazing story with us!

    12/13/2021 17:57

  • Reader-458723

    please. he’d have to be crazy to think shana was strong enough to do that.

    08/31/2021 18:40

  • Jennifer rand

    that lying b@#@h. she needs to be beat again

    08/30/2021 00:51

  • Racheal Bale

    Hi readers. I'm sorry I took forever to update. The situation was beyond my control and I sincerely apologize. But I'm happy to tell you all the updates will start rolling in! Thank you.

    08/28/2021 05:41

  • Zayda Watts

    amazing read. I am so glad I found this book. looking forward to seeing what happens next

    08/27/2021 08:37

  • Reader-143849

    3 chapters in the last 2 months…I hope the author is okay.

    08/09/2021 12:14

  • Terri

    when will our next updates be?

    08/03/2021 11:19

  • Faai-iezah Baradien Adams

    hi author when is the next update....

    08/01/2021 08:11

  • Kimberly Carragher

    Hi Author. 👋 Can't we ait to see where this story ends up. keep up the great work

    07/18/2021 13:02

  • Emma Vallance

    hi author when Is the next update x

    07/14/2021 09:01

  • Jennifer rand

    is this the end? is there a sequel?

    07/08/2021 21:23

  • Kat Lassiter

    I’m loving this story! can’t wait to see what Asher and Cole do to that bastard!!!

    07/07/2021 04:38

  • Terri

    I've completed all 74 chapters I there a new book or other chapters??

    06/29/2021 02:18

  • Reader-458723

    Elise?!???

    06/26/2021 00:56

  • Sunrise

    oh nooo please don't make rose die :-(

    06/23/2021 12:21

  • Emma Vallance

    no not rose I hope asher doesn't think Shana did it

    06/23/2021 08:49

  • Jennifer rand

    OMG. not Rose! can't wait for tomorrow's update

    06/23/2021 01:46

  • Terri

    story is great, need to proof check

    06/22/2021 01:09

  • Reader-357899

    this is a nice little read! just wondering what the update schedule is?

    06/20/2021 23:16

  • Jennifer rand

    omg. please don't leave me in suspense. I love this story. waiting for next update

    06/12/2021 00:37

  • Fireheart.

    I'm loving this book! Its amazing!

    06/10/2021 10:05

  • Reader-458723

    i love this book

    06/05/2021 23:38

  • Bella Jersey 2

    Eva was vengeful if her?

    06/05/2021 09:29

  • Bella Jersey 2

    very interesting 1st chapter

    06/03/2021 09:38

  • Bella Jersey 2

    periods are bad enough she add crier stuff to it. sweetie you are my hero

    06/03/2021 09:23

  • Racheal Bale

    Dear readers, I'll like to apologize about the name changes and some other errors. I've done a major editing starting from the first chapter. Thank you for reading.

    06/01/2021 04:02

  • Dainty swot

    absolutely worth the time

    05/31/2021 17:05

  • Sunrise

    loving this story :) can't wait for the update.

    05/31/2021 13:40

  • CuntasaurusRex..

    can I suggest reading through your chapters before posting? you've called Shana by Adeles name multiple times, called her "he" at least 3 dozen times.. I'm not even far in the book yet. with some spell check and a word here or there changed out to make less repetition, this could be a really good story.

    05/31/2021 06:54

  • Bella Jersey 2

    right away bamb she’s going through something bad

    05/30/2021 07:49

  • reader2121

    I tried giving this book a chance but the errors and the names being changed were just too much. some of the dialogue especially towards the middle felt out of character or unrealistic (and not to mention too many grammatical errors). I wish someone had told me this before I started reading. I was invested at first, but it’s too slow. The plot development needs a little more work.

    05/30/2021 07:40

  • Wcha

    damn she didn't even bother to say anything

    05/29/2021 00:05

  • Oluwasegun Omoniyi

    Wow! Definitely a must-read!

    04/19/2021 11:32

  • Fireheart.

    Just started this book! So excited! it's great!

    04/19/2021 11:30