   Aria Woods is a human girl who lives with her parents in the "Werewolf Kingdom". Her life is pretty plain she works at the farm with her parents during the day, and at night she secretly trains with her best friend Blair.
 
   One night she met two vampires Ethan and Mason from the neighborhood kingdom. It changes her life as she fell in love with Mason. The hybrid inside her was emerging due to Mason's presence.

    On the night of Aria's 18th birthday, they all met up at their usual spot and sensed many people closing in on them. Before they could figure out the situation they were under attack.

     Will Aria transform into a hybrid to protect her loved ones? Will it change her life forever?

His Human Hybrid 

Great update, I hop that they do find the missing Queen and King

Mokshada Swan

Johanna Martinez

I can't wait to see what happens great update

it was a good update I'm hoping that everything goes right on the full moon. looking forward to the next update

I hope your exams went well. thank you for the update it was good.

zhx for sharing this Story. I like it ❤❤

Katja Knip

I like the book, I look forward to your next chapter.  I have read many many books that where not well done to the point of not being able to keep my sanity trying to read grammatical errors, I am glad to say yours is no where near that.  Once you  are truly done you can always go back and revise it. 

No, I didn't. I was just busy due to exams.

Awesome I am glad to hear that, can't wait. 

Not really good story telling. You could see they were trying to put good words in there instead of focusing on the details. Also they didn't put "speech Mark's" when people were talking. Also it was moving way to fast not getting enough across first before moving on. I feel the writer has good potential though they just have to work on it more.

Thank you for your point of view. I will try to improve my writing accordingly.

sorry the first sentence came out wrong I mean it's just a little sloppy but the story line is good.

Jaelynn Heath

I don’t like the way the book is written. there are no “ speech marks “ when people are talking to each other and you don’t say who is saying what. 
it is poorly written and very confusing. 

I will fix the things you have pointed out soon. As well I will take note of my grammatical errors.

Darlene

It would also help if you learned the proper use of commas and periods as well as where and when to use them. You're running 2 or 3 sentences together without separating them with periods. You're also not using commas within sentences in places where they're needed. I find that very confusing and hard to read. It would also be a help if you were to go back and fix your mistakes in addition to doing better in the future. It would make reading your book so much easier and much more enjoyable. I think your story does have the potential to be good though. 

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