Four or Dead Comments
Ellen McManus
I am also confused by some of the comments and would like to read the book from cover to cover.
09/04/2023 18:24Tanja
Loved this book so much I read it in a few days. I'm really hoping there will be another with the way this ended!
09/04/2023 18:21Loved the book. Would really love to see a sequel.
09/04/2023 17:37Mis X Clusive
I love this story I'm glad she found someone to look out for her and they all love her
09/04/2023 17:29Lades Ngawhika
not bad at all. I like how strong she's getting to be and the people she's surrounding herself with. being watched for the last 3 years would freak me out.
09/04/2023 16:41Mis X Clusive
I love this the storyline is awesome it keeps me on edge I can't get enough
09/04/2023 16:34Sharks And Wrecks
I'm enjoying the story but I notice you keep using the word "catalyst" but I think you misunderstand the word. A "catalyst" is something that ... creates or prompts a reaction. Both in Chemistry and Society. Here, the word is always being used as if it means to stabilize. But that's not the case at all. An alternative that sounds similar might be "ballast" which is what would keep a ship upright. Zane keeping his men in check or Emma calming down the boys would both be more like a "ballast" that allows them to function, rather than a "catalyst" which would be like something that spurs on instability. EG. loosing track of Emma was the catalyst that lead to Jayden pummeling those men to death...
09/04/2023 16:29Rebecca Farmer
awesome story but needs a sequel!!!!
09/04/2023 16:11Tanya B
so well put together ❤️ 👏
09/04/2023 15:47Samantha Crisman
I love this book so far.
09/04/2023 15:36Setiva Shahzad
I loved this story...will there be a part 2?
09/04/2023 15:12Jen Peace
need more to finish or a second book
09/04/2023 15:00Gina van Amberg
too violent of a start..lost my intest...deleting
09/04/2023 14:58Reader-043909
to dark. and adding Wyatt in made me sick. felt like a betrayal.
09/04/2023 14:57Natasha
I’m in love with this novel but it’s coming to an end & I wish for more. Such a great read though, I’m devastated it’s ending already. 😭🖤🖤 But so amazing!!!
09/04/2023 14:52Emily McLarty
Great story. I was thoroughly disappointed by the lack of sex in the book though. When an author lists that the story involves a reverse harem, I expect juicy scenes and this story lacks it. only 2 sweet sex scenes that are barely mentioned in a PG-13 manner amd that's it.
09/04/2023 14:34Lee Brown
really good reading
09/04/2023 14:10Esther Gyang
this book is on good novel, but with a different theme.
09/04/2023 13:55Lee Brown
loving this book
09/04/2023 13:51reading star
I hope they find out about the tracker in her hip and find her. or she calls then to go home
09/04/2023 13:50Excellent story!!! Characters grab you from the start and the twists and turns keep you glued to the page, the only drawback for me was when I read the last page and the ride was over! I would read this story again!
09/04/2023 13:49Jenny Warren
love this book
09/04/2023 13:47Great book!! Is there going to be another book? Would love to read about what happens next!!
09/04/2023 13:37Virginia Cunningham
great read. great writer.
09/04/2023 13:35Wendy Mansfield
I frigging love this book
09/04/2023 13:16Adreal Parker- Clark
I loved this story a lot though I definitely wish there was more steamy/smutty scenes and either a better ending or a second book because I think it could go either way
09/04/2023 12:46great book . just be yourself Emma
09/04/2023 12:43Deena Bidiman
is there a better finish or another book???
09/04/2023 12:33Barbara Green
this is captivating keep up the excellent work
09/04/2023 12:31Tammie Smith
Also another thing that was never mentioned again was about the tracker that was surgically implanted in Emma when she was with Zane. We also missed their graduation. And what happened with the other bi***es from school who thought they were all high and mighty? I loved the book but still ther were a few things missing.
09/04/2023 12:31Katie Gunter
I can't help but laugh at the phrase "lovesick puppies"!
09/04/2023 12:31wy z
😁
09/04/2023 12:17Hanna Isaac
is there a paper back for this book i’d love to bye it?
09/04/2023 12:12Angie Chavez Swofford
Wow, easy there dad!!!
09/04/2023 12:02Tammie Smith
Awesome book!! However there were a couple of things I would have liked to read more about. One of them is the conversation that took place with Devaro, Emma and Asher after everyone else left the room when he was dying. And the other things I would like to have read about was the personal time with her other men Leo, Logan and Wyatt. We only got to read about her with Asher and Jayden. But all in all it was an outstanding book and I’m glad I had the opportunity to read it.
09/04/2023 11:59Reader-591577
I’ll be glad when she tells them about the tracker
09/04/2023 11:56Tammy Lewis
could someone give me a better overall description of the story. trying to determine if i want to read it.
09/04/2023 11:51Nicole Foster
this needs a second book 😍😍
09/04/2023 11:46Lusbella Dehoyos
totally hooked! kinda annoyed with the guys thou they still don't get it
09/04/2023 11:45Renee Gilliland
I really liked the book so I really liked the book a lot except for a really wish there was a word of it maybe a second book that would be kind of cool but it had a good ending but I don't want to know what the surprise was
09/04/2023 11:44Jennifer Sparks
This was a great read. I couldn't put it down.
09/04/2023 11:42Tueisha Ikner
This was an amazing book! Worth reading...
09/04/2023 11:40Reader-591577
omg. this book was amazing!
09/04/2023 11:37Alisandra
there so has to be a Sequel to this book, it was so good I couldn’t put it down! I Need more of Emma and her Badassery!
09/04/2023 11:36Angie Chavez Swofford
love this book.
09/04/2023 11:32Heidi Dalcin Day
I 💕 this book.
09/04/2023 11:13Ninia Tairi
catching story
09/04/2023 11:12Debbie Kilpatrick
good read
09/04/2023 10:59Michelle Smart
I love this story. Well written. Thank you. 😊
09/04/2023 10:50Nita Avant
IM IN LOVE WITH THIS BOOK!!!
09/04/2023 10:45Nelly Hlophe
omg im loving the story although im a bit worried for her what if they all fall for her .will she have to choose or omg
09/04/2023 10:44Kelly Stewart
I'm really enjoying this book. Makes you have all the feelings.
09/04/2023 10:41Carmen January
beautiful story
09/04/2023 10:39Kelly Stewart
a really good book, hard to put down. always leaves a smile on my face
09/04/2023 10:38Jennifer Kaelber
Yay for Emma
09/04/2023 10:37Migdalia Garcia
I hope they find new girlfriends and leave her.They bare their souls and feelings to her and she leaves with Asher's father. Will she fall for him too? ll she fall for him too?
09/04/2023 10:36Annette Finch
it's getting better and better!!! can't wait to see how it pans out
09/04/2023 10:32Beverley Jane Kooiker
omg loving the story so far
09/04/2023 10:26Hanna Isaac
what i wanna know is the authors name to fined more of there books!!
09/04/2023 10:16kristin smith
more please I loved this book
09/04/2023 10:07amy.
I absolutely loved reading this story! was hoping for a little more towards the end but when are you ever ready for your favorite book to end?! wish we got some more rated R chapters but the ones we got were amazing!
09/04/2023 10:05Terry Gill
On the one hand, I'm happy she finally has someone in her corner. But I seriously hate the "guys hurt girls that they like" mentality. I hope she doesn't just fall over for them after everything
09/04/2023 10:04+
09/04/2023 10:02Tonye Briggs
I love the book it's a great read
09/04/2023 10:01Haylyx
screams of a setup
09/04/2023 09:56Ioana Pop
Nicely written!
09/04/2023 09:54KahLee
omg! i love reading this story...
09/04/2023 09:54OreoBurglar417
love this story! ❤
09/04/2023 09:54sara romano
always makes me laugh when I see my maiden name used in books or on TV for a gang or mob boss 😂 half way through an I can't put my phone down lol Great book!
09/04/2023 09:49Reader-789748
what days and time is the story updated?
09/04/2023 09:46Reader-948991
there is not many stories here that grip me but it just couldn’t stop reading this. read it in one day 😱😱
09/04/2023 09:46omg!! I absolutely recommend this book!! it has everything on one. For a couple months I kept seeing it pop up, until I finally read it, wishing I read it long ago. wish there was a part 2
09/04/2023 09:40Rebecca Weaver
great book. would love to see how many kids they have and then follow with the kids taking over
09/04/2023 09:35Mackenzie Barsano
WHHAAAAT a fifth angel
09/04/2023 09:34Amanda Neville
will there be a sequel I loved the book but idk if it's just me but I just don't feel like their story is over
09/04/2023 09:33Cassie Padilla
OMG!!! This story is sooooooooo good. I binge read all 78 chapters in like 2 days. Please tell me you update this regularly... I'm so on edge. I want to finish the entire story.
09/04/2023 09:32Kayla Swick
I can't wait to see who's it is.... I'm still thinking Zane was a sick bastard while she was out. you know he probably did more than put a chip in her.
09/04/2023 09:32Rose
can someone hell me with something. cuz i cant figure where i read it.. but did t Zane take her virginity ages ago in her room. thats why she hated him so much? cuz then later it said she lost her virginity to the boys… did i missread?
09/04/2023 09:32Mackenzie Barsano
so we all agree that she pregnant
09/04/2023 09:30Frantara Brown
Im glad she her own boss but she can be it with the guys an Wyatt. look like to me probably be pregnant the guys was last people she had sex with. Zane was fit to rape her but the wyatt boy got there in time woo wee it's getting juicy😁😁😁😘😘.
09/04/2023 09:30Jen Adams
Don't get me wrong, I like Wyatt, but the guys...they need each other. Of course, they never did tell her they have dreams other than what they are doing now.
09/04/2023 09:27I’m sorry n chapter 43 and absolutely loving the story. I can’t wait to see where it goes. Emma is definitely a strong girl especially after everything she’s been through. I really hope things work with her and the boys.
09/04/2023 09:25Teresa Palmer
I can't wait for an update!
09/04/2023 09:18Adreal Parker- Clark
So far I've read three of your stories and this is my favorite!!! I love everything about this book and can't wait to finish it!! You're a great author
09/04/2023 09:17I just started this book, and so far I'm hooked. I've cried,and smiled. I'm on chapter 10 there. I can't wait for the rest
09/04/2023 09:15let’s hope this guard is genuine.
09/04/2023 09:14Beckles89
can you tell me when you usually update? was so into the story just to figure out it’s not finished yet lol but I love what you’ve done so far with it!
09/04/2023 09:11Female Alpha Skye
she says she was a virgin when she slept with the guys but didn’t Zane rape her the summer before?
09/04/2023 09:09Yolismarie Delvalle
can’t wait to find out what other things are going to happen with the four boy and her
09/04/2023 09:07Kayla Swick
well the updating theory didn't work. this is the only story giving me trouble. it's quite annoying at this point.
09/04/2023 09:06Salica Rae Tom
hello
09/04/2023 09:03please hope she's playing Zane
09/04/2023 09:03Jen Adams
Chapter 62 finally loaded and I love it!! Can't wait for the update and I hope the boys haven't given up on her!!
09/04/2023 09:02ok just wondering it will not load the story
09/04/2023 09:02really? ughhh !
09/04/2023 09:02really? ughhh !
09/04/2023 09:02really? ughhh !
09/04/2023 09:02Amanda Neville
when is the next update I'm so hooked and I hate the to be continued when you're so into a book
09/04/2023 09:02help
09/04/2023 09:02Salica Rae Tom
ugh
09/04/2023 09:01