The Unexpected Luna Comments
Tammay H
Great Book. Lots to keep you on your toes!
01/21/2025 04:40
Reader-153701
commence not comiserate
10/18/2023 00:52Reader-153701
Librarian not oracle
10/17/2023 22:35Reader-153701
Lazarus not Lorenzo
10/17/2023 20:24Reader-153701
aura no Aurora
10/17/2023 19:47Reader-153701
Alpha Damien - Elder Derek
10/17/2023 19:44Reader-153701
imperative not impertinent
10/17/2023 19:27Reader-153701
tied not tide
10/17/2023 18:11Reader-153701
Is her dad Robert or Gregory? Also, he wasn’t killed.
10/17/2023 14:06
Mirela
p2o9 - it's a good story, with many challenges. I like how their wolves took control and marked each other against their humans wish.🤭 Love her wolf thou.
09/05/2023 00:12
Kitty-694016
p2o9. having a strong female lead is one of the more enjoyable reads. I can add this one and the sequel to my ever growing list
09/04/2023 23:56middi
2h3g - he already starts with the wrong foot, let's see if his behaviour gets better
09/04/2023 23:55Marina Anic
2h3g I added this in my library to read,I am only at beginning,so far it's interesting.
09/04/2023 23:54Barb Austin
2h3g reading first two chapters it sure does looks pretty Interesting so will keep it with the many others that I want to read
09/04/2023 23:50Kitty-694016
2h3g. I read this book once before and enjoyed the twists and turns. A sequel would be another enjoyable read
09/04/2023 23:32zira
2h3g i havent find this book till now...oh my god..its exciting story ..i eager to finish it
09/04/2023 23:16Madelein Schoeman
2h3g - ah one of my favourite books really enjoyed how the 2 main characters tried resisting each other in the beginning loved the plot twist enter vampire king. Again another strong female lead just loving these badass ladies. Busy with book 2 hopefully it gets updated soon!
09/04/2023 22:47Emily
2h3g interesting story line will definitely add to my reading list! hope it’ll be exciting! fingers crossed
09/04/2023 22:47Jade Freeman
2h3g - the intro to the book sounds exciting so have added to my library to read in time,
09/04/2023 22:46Sarah Idowu
mmń
09/04/2023 19:07Mellony Sylvester
You started off Lazarus Son of the Devil, and then you changed his name to Lorenzo. Why is that? If you are undecided Lazarus is a better fit.
09/04/2023 16:06Author’s note- The revised version of the Unexpected Luna will now be under His unexpected Luna, the majority of the story will remain the same, although the ending has been changed. If you want to read the full ending but don’t want to have to reread the entirety of the novel please skip ahead to chapter 51.
09/04/2023 15:33Carol Diaz
here goes day 4 still can't read. I go to the to buy book. will not recommend
09/04/2023 15:25Notes have been added throughout the book to advise of revised version (HIS UNEXPECTED LUNA) and that BOOK 2 is incomplete. Please follow my FB AND IG pages for updates.
09/04/2023 14:59Carol Diaz
read chapters thumps down even when one waits still no access. will not recommend to other's
09/04/2023 14:57Fowler Connie
why can't I get the next chapter on this book?
09/04/2023 14:39Edit’s for this book have been completed. I am waiting for my editor to let me know if there’s an easier way to update it that the way the website is allowing me ( currently I can only delete one paragraph at a time and it’s taking quiet some time to fix each chapter.
09/04/2023 14:08Marjorie Wall
He's a colossal jerk, of epic proportions.
09/04/2023 13:46what is book 1?
09/04/2023 13:32Angelica Nicole Johnson
ten years since he's seen her? I thought it said 2 years earlier?
09/04/2023 13:26
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ok, dropping this book. I hate reading novels and shifting all the way to all characters pov and just repeating the scene.
09/04/2023 12:36Alicia Hotelling
just so you know you keep switching between Elizabeth and Jessica in both books it can be confusing just wanted to give a heads up
09/04/2023 12:33Jazmine Pratt
when will the next update be?
09/04/2023 12:24Myra’s wolf is named Elizabeth, corrections have been submitted. and I’m planning on a chapter dump this weekend for An unexpected Duo
09/04/2023 12:13not me over here thinking that’s they’d all 3 be mates just by that weird interaction they had when Damian left Gwen with Vlad.
09/04/2023 12:01Melinda Smith
YES.YES..YES... SHE SAID IT FIRST... I KNEW HE REALLY DID NOT WANT TO REJE T HER.. IT IS NOT JUST THE MATE BOND FOR HIM IT WAS LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT HE ALREADY LOVE HER THATS WHY HE AGREED TO WHAT SHE SHE WANTS(TO LEAVE)..
09/04/2023 11:57Kimberly0908
is there going to be an update soon? I am so excited to continue
09/04/2023 11:35Angelica Nicole Johnson
Jessica or Elizabeth? I'm confused
09/04/2023 11:30just a heads up for those reading BOOK 2- Last week I was super busy with a big exam and I didn’t have any time to write. I will be putting out 4 chapters this week to make up for it. The Chapters will be posted by Sunday at the latest.
09/04/2023 11:16Angelica Nicole Johnson
Why didn't her mother come along? I don't remember reading her mother died.
09/04/2023 11:15
Lisa Marie
Whats the next book called?
09/04/2023 10:34Reader-752416
I do wanna say this sounds a LOT like another story I read already but it is already just as good so I’m super excited to see how this story progresses!
09/04/2023 10:24Up to chapter 7 has been edited and the chapters are under review. I am going to try and edit up to 3 chapters a night. I can’t guarantee that’ll always happen just because I am a full time employee, student, and mother, and I’m currently in the midsts of writing four new novels. Thank you all once again for your continued support! I am grateful for each and every one of you!
09/04/2023 10:14Lou Lou Kelly
amazing so far
09/04/2023 10:07
Bella Jersey 2
so far alpha Sam is weak, pathetic, and selfish creature
09/04/2023 10:05Kuini Peehikuru
somebody kill that b#@$& Stephanie
09/04/2023 10:04Leonisa Padilla
Ahm just started.. So.. Let's see😊😊😊
09/04/2023 10:01
Lady Scorcher
I haven’t finished this chapter yet but jumbling of the Greek and Roman gods r getting a but irksome. I ignored the Mars n Jupiter thing (Jupiter is Mars’ father) and Mars is the God of war not Jupiter. Now Hades??? I hope she won’t butcher my favorite myths anymore.
09/04/2023 09:58Neenu Varghese
good one
09/04/2023 09:57Bella Jersey 2
I bet we didn’t expect that
09/04/2023 09:52Reader-788523
this is such a great story! I love it all. when is the next few chapters coming out for the second book?
09/04/2023 09:42I just wanted to give you all a heads up, that I will be starting Vladimir’s story the beginning of December. That is also when I plan on republishing the edited version of the Escort. As always thank you for your support!
09/04/2023 09:41
Analiza
i like this story....
09/04/2023 09:38Hey lovelies, I just wanted to keep you all updated on what’s going on. •I am currently editing the Unexpected Luna, I’m a stronger writer now that I was when I first started and I want this story to be absolutely perfect. • I am currently in the Process of writing two new novels, the Escort, and the Vampire Kings New Slave Mate. • I still plan on writing Vladimir’s story starting the beginning of December. If you have any recommendations or thoughts to make these stories better let me know!
09/04/2023 09:12thank you all for your continued patience as I finalize this story. TUL will be coming to an end soon, I’m think maybe 5 chapters left of the story, possibly a few more. for those that missed my update about The Escort. I decided to take a break from writing two stories at once. I was taking my attention from The Unexpected Luna and that wasn’t fair to my readers, since I started this novel first. once the Unexpected Luna is finished I will republish the Escort and continue with that story! Much love. Thanks again for your continued patience.
09/04/2023 09:08Thank you all once again for reading my first novel ever! Damien and Guinevere’s story has come to an end, would anyone like to read Vladimir’s story? I’ve also started a new book, make sure to check out The Vampire Kings Slave Mate. I am also working on editing the Escort and I will be republishing that soon. I truly appreciate each and everyone of you 😘
09/04/2023 09:06Pennylane Bartner
update?
09/04/2023 09:00Reader-229487
I forgot what I was reading about really
09/04/2023 08:59glad there was finally a update…loving the story💜
09/04/2023 08:49
Jenn McCoy
so I like Damien and vald I see the different type of mate situation that you are writing but I guess part of me feels hurt for vald because he deserves more from her idk I get some people don't like the multiple mate thing but here it makes sense to me 2 different parts of her not just that no one said it had to be an orgy. also I feel if she mates with vald it could unlock more power
09/04/2023 08:46Niibeba Keteiama Williander
please dnt let Vladimir die or damien 😑😑😑😑
09/04/2023 08:46love the story, I can’t put it down, just alittle sad that Gwen and Damien have to hide, I hope Gwen finds the answers.. I hope your family is good and well
09/04/2023 08:41Am I a little confused please forgive me but, is Alex the beta or delta? 🤔 I'm sorry 😞
09/04/2023 08:39Jessica Cleveland
is it Lorenzo or Lazarus?
09/04/2023 08:39Jasmine Hazelbaker
what!!! Damien needs to hurry up n come get her n kill psycho dude….
09/04/2023 08:36please update soon.. I’m highly impressed with it I can’t wait to see what else you have
09/04/2023 08:35Jessica Cleveland
how did the baby die if Sabrina said she was protecting it right before this happened
09/04/2023 08:34Stephanie Cone
read through all that is available today lol. when’s the next update? anxiously awaiting the updates! thank you. love your writing!
09/04/2023 08:33
Cathy Garrett
I’m a little behind (just got started good). Is Lazarus and Lorenzo supposed to be the same person?
09/04/2023 08:32Jasmine Hazelbaker
I wish it updated more! I wanna binge read this!
09/04/2023 08:31Jessica Cleveland
also it's been 2 weeks... isn't Jupiter coming and shouldn't she have been training with the moon goddess?
09/04/2023 08:31
Mrs.Hyde
So is this story involving multiple mates for one she wolf?
09/04/2023 08:29Jasmine Hazelbaker
love this! hope damiens dad isn’t gonna be an asshat
09/04/2023 08:29I love this story, excited for updates! On a side note, why isn't your second book available any more? Do you have plans to revamp it?
09/04/2023 08:282 new chapters added today! let me know what you think 🤔 💭
09/04/2023 08:27Great couple of chapters can't wait for the next
09/04/2023 08:26Lora Plummer
lol I forgot what I was reading 🤣 ok back to the beginning
09/04/2023 08:26Reader-229487
I forgot what I was reading about really
09/04/2023 08:25
Ashleigh Morton
Patiently following along! can’t wait to see the way the story progresses.
09/04/2023 08:25YAY! I’m so glad Damien is in love with Gwynn!
09/04/2023 08:24Kids are out camping with their grandparents and I finally had sometime to myself. I hope you enjoy the two chapter update today.
09/04/2023 08:24I love it great update can't wait to read the next chapter you are doing a great job
09/04/2023 08:23Interesting story, good start! Can't wait to see if they give into the bound! What's your update schedule?
09/04/2023 08:21Keri Nathan
ohh luv it🥰🥰🥰
09/04/2023 08:20love it! I’m anxiously wait for updates. ❤️❤️❤️
09/04/2023 08:19
rocknrollqueen91
It doesn't add up that Vladimir talks to her in Spanish when his name is Russian... although I don't know what your original written language is, so I'm not sure if I'm reading a translation or not?
09/04/2023 08:19nfau4714
Yup I'm invested in these characters and there story and it's only been 11 chapters lol.... excitedly waiting for the rest☺☺
09/04/2023 08:18I certainly think Damien will struggle if they seperate! hopefully they’ll mark each other in 2nd heat hot hot hot! 😊
09/04/2023 08:17nfau4714
The wait was worth it miss Marriah Catherine Perry- the backstory of Luna and Jupiter was very nicely added in. It all made sense and I am still wanting more. I gotta know how Gwynn and Damien come out of this🙈🙉🙊
09/04/2023 08:17I’ve been trying to find a new book for about a week and stumbled across this one, enjoyed it so much I didn’t realize I had read 11 chapters. loving it all. I can’t wait for more!!
09/04/2023 08:16Well his Dad will have a heart attack when he finds out she’s pregnant! 😂😂 loved his statement to his father about being unforgiving
09/04/2023 08:16YES! now for Gwynn to hear how he really feels and get on board
09/04/2023 08:15I’m here…. i think my issue is how these possessive, hyper sexual alphas seems to just willingly and without issue hand over their women to another “mate” it doesn’t fit, and takes away from the built up image of the original couple, taints it and makes it less hot and sexy. if that makes sense. Again I’m here and I’ll see where this goes…. thanks though for also seeing that the multiple sex partners was a no for me
09/04/2023 08:15not a multiple mate situation…..
09/04/2023 08:15I’m absolutely loving the story so far. I’m on the edge of my seat waiting for each chapter. ❤️❤️👍
09/04/2023 08:15Alexis Gonzales
awesome chapters!!! thanks for sharing 🙂 can't wait to read more.
09/04/2023 08:13love the story so far can’t wait for next update
09/04/2023 08:13hi so happy for the update. but I did want to bring to your attention that maybe the word you were looking to use is commemorate since commiserate means to express sympathy or pity
09/04/2023 08:12
Wcha
great chapter can't wait for next one happy memorial day!
09/04/2023 08:12I love that Damien is working on fixing his fathers mistakes and that Gwens dad is open to it
09/04/2023 08:10
