The Unexpected Luna Comments

  • Mirela

    p2o9 - it's a good story, with many challenges. I like how their wolves took control and marked each other against their humans wish.🤭 Love her wolf thou.

    04/13/2023 18:36

  • Kitty-694016

    p2o9. having a strong female lead is one of the more enjoyable reads. I can add this one and the sequel to my ever growing list

    04/13/2023 11:17

  • Barb Austin

    2h3g reading first two chapters it sure does looks pretty Interesting so will keep it with the many others that I want to read

    04/01/2023 04:19

  • middi

    2h3g - he already starts with the wrong foot, let's see if his behaviour gets better

    03/30/2023 08:59

  • Madelein Schoeman

    2h3g - ah one of my favourite books really enjoyed how the 2 main characters tried resisting each other in the beginning loved the plot twist enter vampire king. Again another strong female lead just loving these badass ladies. Busy with book 2 hopefully it gets updated soon!

    03/30/2023 08:57

  • Emily

    2h3g interesting story line will definitely add to my reading list! hope it’ll be exciting! fingers crossed

    03/30/2023 08:46

  • zira

    2h3g i havent find this book till now...oh my god..its exciting story ..i eager to finish it

    03/30/2023 08:34

  • Kitty-694016

    2h3g. I read this book once before and enjoyed the twists and turns. A sequel would be another enjoyable read

    03/30/2023 08:34

  • Marina Anic

    2h3g I added this in my library to read,I am only at beginning,so far it's interesting.

    03/30/2023 08:14

  • Martial Flor

    I only just started reading this, but let's just say that if (as it usually happens) the desire to punch one of the main characters in the throat is symptom of a good story, this one is good to be great! well written as usual, and as usual some characters make me sooo mad. 2h3g

    03/30/2023 08:11

  • Jade Freeman

    2h3g - the intro to the book sounds exciting so have added to my library to read in time,

    03/30/2023 08:05

  • Sarah Idowu

    mmń

    10/23/2022 21:47

  • MC Perry

    His Unexpected Temptation (Previously known as An Unexpected Duo) is now available to read under His Unexpected Luna. The story is currently ongoing and only 5 chapters have been posted. I tried to create a seperate book on the AS platform but after 2 weeks of waiting the book still hasn’t posted yet. The start of His Unexpected temptation is listed as BOOK TWO HIS UNEXPECTED TEMPTATION SYNOPSIS.

    07/22/2022 05:22

  • Mellony Sylvester

    You started off Lazarus Son of the Devil, and then you changed his name to Lorenzo. Why is that? If you are undecided Lazarus is a better fit.

    07/12/2022 01:55

  • Carol Diaz

    here goes day 4 still can't read. I go to the to buy book. will not recommend

    06/22/2022 10:54

  • MC Perry

    Notes have been added throughout the book to advise of revised version (HIS UNEXPECTED LUNA) and that BOOK 2 is incomplete. Please follow my FB AND IG pages for updates.

    06/21/2022 04:12

  • MC Perry

    Author’s note- The revised version of the Unexpected Luna will now be under His unexpected Luna, the majority of the story will remain the same, although the ending has been changed. If you want to read the full ending but don’t want to have to reread the entirety of the novel please skip ahead to chapter 51.

    06/21/2022 04:04

  • Carol Diaz

    read chapters thumps down even when one waits still no access. will not recommend to other's

    06/10/2022 11:08

  • JACKIE ROMAIN

    I hate wasting money on a book that’s not getting finished

    05/18/2022 21:20

  • Keri Farr

    what is book 1?

    05/11/2022 15:06

  • Fowler Connie

    why can't I get the next chapter on this book?

    05/10/2022 20:21

  • Marjorie Wall

    He's a colossal jerk, of epic proportions.

    05/09/2022 23:27

  • MC Perry

    Edit’s for this book have been completed. I am waiting for my editor to let me know if there’s an easier way to update it that the way the website is allowing me ( currently I can only delete one paragraph at a time and it’s taking quiet some time to fix each chapter.

    05/04/2022 19:54

  • Angelica Nicole Johnson

    ten years since he's seen her? I thought it said 2 years earlier?

    04/18/2022 13:13

  • MC Perry

    sorry for the abruptness, but An Unexpected Duo will be completed on a different platform. I will no longer be updating on AnyStories due to contract issues with this platform.

    04/14/2022 17:06

  • Jazmine Pratt

    when will the next update be?

    03/21/2022 16:40

  • MC Perry

    Myra’s wolf is named Elizabeth, corrections have been submitted. and I’m planning on a chapter dump this weekend for An unexpected Duo

    03/15/2022 17:35

  • Alicia Hotelling

    just so you know you keep switching between Elizabeth and Jessica in both books it can be confusing just wanted to give a heads up

    03/14/2022 18:06

  • ๛๕๏ํrpธ๋e๘๋r๏ํเ๋X๛

    ok, dropping this book. I hate reading novels and shifting all the way to all characters pov and just repeating the scene.

    03/07/2022 06:27

  • Kimberly0908

    is there going to be an update soon? I am so excited to continue

    02/24/2022 01:05

  • Angelica Nicole Johnson

    Jessica or Elizabeth? I'm confused

    02/23/2022 21:52

  • Mala

    not me over here thinking that’s they’d all 3 be mates just by that weird interaction they had when Damian left Gwen with Vlad.

    02/22/2022 22:53

  • Angelica Nicole Johnson

    Why didn't her mother come along? I don't remember reading her mother died.

    02/22/2022 15:12

  • Melinda Smith

    YES.YES..YES... SHE SAID IT FIRST... I KNEW HE REALLY DID NOT WANT TO REJE T HER.. IT IS NOT JUST THE MATE BOND FOR HIM IT WAS LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT HE ALREADY LOVE HER THATS WHY HE AGREED TO WHAT SHE SHE WANTS(TO LEAVE)..

    02/19/2022 14:01

  • MC Perry

    just a heads up for those reading BOOK 2- Last week I was super busy with a big exam and I didn’t have any time to write. I will be putting out 4 chapters this week to make up for it. The Chapters will be posted by Sunday at the latest.

    02/01/2022 03:51

  • Lisa Marie

    Whats the next book called?

    01/13/2022 19:44

  • Kuini Peehikuru

    somebody kill that b#@$& Stephanie

    01/09/2022 19:23

  • Reader-752416

    I do wanna say this sounds a LOT like another story I read already but it is already just as good so I’m super excited to see how this story progresses!

    01/06/2022 20:01

  • MC Perry

    Up to chapter 7 has been edited and the chapters are under review. I am going to try and edit up to 3 chapters a night. I can’t guarantee that’ll always happen just because I am a full time employee, student, and mother, and I’m currently in the midsts of writing four new novels. Thank you all once again for your continued support! I am grateful for each and every one of you!

    01/06/2022 08:16

  • Lou Lou Kelly

    amazing so far

    12/21/2021 09:37

  • Leonisa Padilla

    Ahm just started.. So.. Let's see😊😊😊

    12/20/2021 09:16

  • Bella Jersey 2

    I bet we didn’t expect that

    12/16/2021 23:08

  • Bella Jersey 2

    so far alpha Sam is weak, pathetic, and selfish creature

    12/16/2021 23:05

  • Lady Scorcher

    I find it very hard to enjoy this story anymore. There the butchering of Roman and Greek mythology, the jumbling of names, and now the bs time line. If the Moon Goddess told Gwen almost 3 weeks ago that Jupiter would be there in a “fortnight” (2 weeks), why the hell are they still preparing and not already at war?

    12/15/2021 22:49

  • Neenu Varghese

    good one

    12/15/2021 18:10

  • Lady Scorcher

    I haven’t finished this chapter yet but jumbling of the Greek and Roman gods r getting a but irksome. I ignored the Mars n Jupiter thing (Jupiter is Mars’ father) and Mars is the God of war not Jupiter. Now Hades??? I hope she won’t butcher my favorite myths anymore.

    12/15/2021 13:45

  • Lady Scorcher

    I just wanna complain really quick because this blasted book hasn’t let me sleep all night and I have to be up in 1 hour to start my day. damn it all.

    12/15/2021 12:08

  • Reader-788523

    this is such a great story! I love it all. when is the next few chapters coming out for the second book?

    11/27/2021 09:41

  • MC Perry

    Hey lovelies, I just wanted to keep you all updated on what’s going on. •I am currently editing the Unexpected Luna, I’m a stronger writer now that I was when I first started and I want this story to be absolutely perfect. • I am currently in the Process of writing two new novels, the Escort, and the Vampire Kings New Slave Mate. • I still plan on writing Vladimir’s story starting the beginning of December. If you have any recommendations or thoughts to make these stories better let me know!

    11/18/2021 22:40

  • MC Perry

    I just wanted to give you all a heads up, that I will be starting Vladimir’s story the beginning of December. That is also when I plan on republishing the edited version of the Escort. As always thank you for your support!

    11/13/2021 18:16

  • Analiza

    i like this story....

    11/12/2021 15:02

  • MC Perry

    Thank you all once again for reading my first novel ever! Damien and Guinevere’s story has come to an end, would anyone like to read Vladimir’s story? I’ve also started a new book, make sure to check out The Vampire Kings Slave Mate. I am also working on editing the Escort and I will be republishing that soon. I truly appreciate each and everyone of you 😘

    11/11/2021 18:59

  • Niibeba Keteiama Williander

    please dnt let Vladimir die or damien 😑😑😑😑

    10/19/2021 23:41

  • MC Perry

    thank you all for your continued patience as I finalize this story. TUL will be coming to an end soon, I’m think maybe 5 chapters left of the story, possibly a few more. for those that missed my update about The Escort. I decided to take a break from writing two stories at once. I was taking my attention from The Unexpected Luna and that wasn’t fair to my readers, since I started this novel first. once the Unexpected Luna is finished I will republish the Escort and continue with that story! Much love. Thanks again for your continued patience.

    10/08/2021 23:18

  • Lora Plummer

    lol I forgot what I was reading 🤣 ok back to the beginning

    09/26/2021 16:45

  • Reader-229487

    I forgot what I was reading about really

    09/20/2021 21:49

  • Reader-229487

    I forgot what I was reading about really

    09/20/2021 21:48

  • Pennylane Bartner

    update?

    09/16/2021 05:54

  • Bailey Jasper

    I also came here to ask about the escort, because I just saw that it was updated.

    09/15/2021 04:34

  • Kim

    I love this story, excited for updates! On a side note, why isn't your second book available any more? Do you have plans to revamp it?

    09/02/2021 17:17

  • JoAnn Sepulveda

    please update soon.. I’m highly impressed with it I can’t wait to see what else you have

    08/27/2021 05:35

  • Jessica Cleveland

    also it's been 2 weeks... isn't Jupiter coming and shouldn't she have been training with the moon goddess?

    08/20/2021 23:58

  • Jessica Cleveland

    how did the baby die if Sabrina said she was protecting it right before this happened

    08/20/2021 23:21

  • Jessica Cleveland

    is it Lorenzo or Lazarus?

    08/20/2021 21:48

  • Reader-148264

    glad there was finally a update…loving the story💜

    08/20/2021 20:54

  • Samantha Cokuslu

    love the story so far can’t wait for next update

    08/19/2021 04:44

  • rocknrollqueen91

    It doesn't add up that Vladimir talks to her in Spanish when his name is Russian... although I don't know what your original written language is, so I'm not sure if I'm reading a translation or not?

    08/12/2021 04:42

  • Vicki Trewella

    Great story! looking forward to the next update 🥰

    08/10/2021 05:32

  • julia nicole

    hi so happy for the update. but I did want to bring to your attention that maybe the word you were looking to use is commemorate since commiserate means to express sympathy or pity

    08/09/2021 23:34

  • JoAnn Sepulveda

    love the story, I can’t put it down, just alittle sad that Gwen and Damien have to hide, I hope Gwen finds the answers.. I hope your family is good and well

    08/07/2021 04:57

  • Cathy Garrett

    I’m a little behind (just got started good). Is Lazarus and Lorenzo supposed to be the same person?

    08/05/2021 17:09

  • Nikki-1701

    I love that Damien is working on fixing his fathers mistakes and that Gwens dad is open to it

    08/05/2021 05:52

  • Jenn McCoy

    so I like Damien and vald I see the different type of mate situation that you are writing but I guess part of me feels hurt for vald because he deserves more from her idk I get some people don't like the multiple mate thing but here it makes sense to me 2 different parts of her not just that no one said it had to be an orgy. also I feel if she mates with vald it could unlock more power

    08/04/2021 21:44

  • Zombierella DEATH

    Am I a little confused please forgive me but, is Alex the beta or delta? 🤔 I'm sorry 😞

    08/02/2021 19:54

  • Mrs.Hyde

    So is this story involving multiple mates for one she wolf?

    08/02/2021 04:37

  • Stephanie Cone

    read through all that is available today lol. when’s the next update? anxiously awaiting the updates! thank you. love your writing!

    08/02/2021 03:40

  • Nikki-1701

    I’m here…. i think my issue is how these possessive, hyper sexual alphas seems to just willingly and without issue hand over their women to another “mate” it doesn’t fit, and takes away from the built up image of the original couple, taints it and makes it less hot and sexy. if that makes sense. Again I’m here and I’ll see where this goes…. thanks though for also seeing that the multiple sex partners was a no for me

    07/24/2021 17:46

  • MC Perry

    Kids are out camping with their grandparents and I finally had sometime to myself. I hope you enjoy the two chapter update today.

    07/23/2021 21:02

  • Nikki-1701

    not a multiple mate situation…..

    07/22/2021 03:42

  • Nikki-1701

    how do we rate the book?

    07/16/2021 14:14

  • Nikki-1701

    The suspense has got me! please find her before Lazarus does anything to her and before her realizes she’s pregnant.

    07/12/2021 22:43

  • Jasmine Hazelbaker

    what!!! Damien needs to hurry up n come get her n kill psycho dude….

    07/12/2021 01:03

  • Rebecca Vickers

    Absolutely fantastic keep up the good work am hear waiting ❤️

    07/02/2021 14:28

  • Jasmine Hazelbaker

    I wish it updated more! I wanna binge read this!

    07/01/2021 14:19

  • Jasmine Hazelbaker

    love this! hope damiens dad isn’t gonna be an asshat

    06/26/2021 15:52

  • Nita

    Well his Dad will have a heart attack when he finds out she’s pregnant! 😂😂 loved his statement to his father about being unforgiving

    06/25/2021 21:39

  • Nikki-1701

    GIRL!!! this whole update gave me life. Sabrina said bow down Bi*** and that letter, I can’t wait till Damien shows his dad. that plan was genius even if it didn’t completely work

    06/19/2021 14:01

  • Natasha Marie Gulenchyn

    ugh I wish they would just tell each other how they feel already! Enough with this thinking the other doesn’t want them

    06/15/2021 21:53

  • Jasmine Hazelbaker

    just binge read this!,, so good! I like that the story is from both pov… can’t wait for updates and anything else marriah Catherine Perry writes!!!!

    06/15/2021 14:16

  • nfau4714

    The wait was worth it miss Marriah Catherine Perry- the backstory of Luna and Jupiter was very nicely added in. It all made sense and I am still wanting more. I gotta know how Gwynn and Damien come out of this🙈🙉🙊

    06/11/2021 02:27

  • MC Perry

    2 new chapters added today! let me know what you think 🤔 💭

    06/10/2021 18:48

  • Nikki-1701

    YES! now for Gwynn to hear how he really feels and get on board

    06/08/2021 06:45

  • Nita

    YAY! I’m so glad Damien is in love with Gwynn!

    06/08/2021 06:34

  • Nita

    I certainly think Damien will struggle if they seperate! hopefully they’ll mark each other in 2nd heat hot hot hot! 😊

    06/07/2021 22:44

  • nfau4714

    Wowzas wowzas wowzas... whatever's happening with the Moon Goddess and Jupiter I neeeeeeeeeeedddd to know! And it doesn't seem like Gwynn and Damien are gonna be able to hold back much longer😏😏

    06/06/2021 20:27

  • Allison B

    love it! I’m anxiously wait for updates. ❤️❤️❤️

    06/04/2021 02:43

  • Wcha

    who's Stephanie again

    06/03/2021 04:53

  • Johanna Martinez

    great chapter can't wait for the next

    06/01/2021 20:59

  • Wcha

    great chapter can't wait for next one happy memorial day!

    05/31/2021 18:05

  • Johanna Martinez

    I love it great update can't wait to read the next chapter you are doing a great job

    05/31/2021 14:45
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