Alpha's White Lie Comments

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This book is SO good!!! How often do you update?

Joanne Patrick-Allan

So am loving this book and decided I wanted to see what else the author had written but it only shows this book on her page even though it says there are 2 stories, am just curious about what happened to the other story.

Hey Everyone, after a few weeks of thinking and a chat with my editor, I have decided not to end Alpha’s White Lie with the cliffhanger I currently have. a lot of you pointed out how you didn’t like the ending and I have taken every comment into consideration. I would like to say thank you to you all for the feedback and taking the time to encourage or discourage me. sometime this week I will continue the book so hang tight! ❤️

Nichole83pa

I don’t normally do reviews because I’m not a writer as in at all but this book was amazing! All the characters are relatable and you can’t help but cheer for Rosy and Blake! I read this story in 2 days and yes the cliffhanger was a bit of a shock but a lot of stories on here end in cliffhangers with a continuation in book 2. This book is a perfect combination of suspense, love with some detailed love scenes that fit perfectly in the story. I was really shocked at all the nasty comments that so many wrote because as the author stated she’s planning on continuing this story so why the hate? Anyway loved your story and will continue to support any future stories.

Hey Eveeyone! I would like to hear some suggestions! what did you think of the ending? As always, I love to hear what you have to say so please go ahead and tell me what you’d like to see in Book Two?

Nichole83pa

Holy moly that was a good chapter!! I can’t believe that Max would deliberately hurt Rosy! There has to be something I’m missing because although I don’t like him as much as Blake I really don’t see him hurting her. Cant wait for more!!

“please read comments at discretion, if May contain spoilers!” Hey everyone! how’s it going?! just wanted to jump on here and thank everyone for their continued love and support! comment below and let me know what you think Rosy’s life will bring next?

Hernandez Giuliana

Okei so what a twist didnt like what you are doing with this book but you are the author

Tania

I may be one of the few that actually wants to see Rosy with both Blake and Max. Being the proverbial "black sheep of the family"isn't easy and yes Max has done some real f*cked up things to Blake but does he not deserve a chance and forgiveness?

Mikki Hale

Is there going to be any updates soon, I may just stop reading this author if this keeps happening.

Tania

I also believe that Rosy is a hybrid mix of Wolf/Witch and the reason why she doesn't feel the mate bond as powerful with Max is because she hasn't yet tapped into the witch portion of herself. Author please keep Max around I really want to see the attraction grow between the two as well as with Blake. To be fair all Rosy knows about Max is what Blake told her (not saying he was lying) but she needs to figure out and make her own conclusions. Author please turn them into a powerful loving throuple combined of wolf/warlock. Please please please it would be beyond awesome. 😃

I kinda feel bad that Blake’s ex is my name Lol

Remy Bergez

Who the hell are Taylor's parents to dictate and control other people's lives and make decisions for other people. Kicking Rosy out?! Telling Rocky he cant see Rosy if he wants to continue to see Taylor ?! aren't they like 28 years old. Parents lost that "right" at 18 wow is all I can say!

I love this book…but geez how much drama is there going to be before she gets peace? this seems excessive

Hey everyone! just a quick update, I am doing last minute changes to the story and so there may be a day or two delay on updates. MY SINCERE APOLOGIES! However, I do have a little Q&A for you all. Do you think Blake knew about Rosy’s curse? Was that the big secret he was hiding?

saima malik

it’s been a long time since new chapters have been added! waiting……

I don’t think it should become a thrupple. Max should not be rewarded for being a terrible person and a terrible brother. he finds out his brother possibly found his mate he shows up and tries to cause problems and then when he THINKS she can be his mate he’s a good man? No, that’s rewarding bad behavior and a bad guy. he should remain friend zoned. I would be very disappointed in this book if they become a thrupple; that’s too easy

Hernandez Giuliana

So you will start the sequel just after finishing this one ? Also please update . Thanks

LenkaH

Oh boy her dad wasn't lying when he said to Rose they will kill her 😳so war of alpha's start inside pack

oh I hope her love of Max grows! Blake and Max thrupple power couple!

I think it would be great if Rosy and max built a relationship that helped him find some peace. not a romantic one though. I wouldn't want to see Blake get heart broken!

Patricia Machado-Richard

hi Shazza, any idea when new chapters will be coming along? i just finished her devious mate and really enjoy reading your stories. thanks

Patricia Machado-Richard

love love love this story. i get that things might get messier beforebthey get better. i just hope that max is NOT her mate. im all for 2 mates and some of my fav books have had 2 mates. but i want blake to have her to herself. rosy has been through so much. she deserves to have just 1 man to worship her. she deserves blake all to herself!

hey everyone! my apologies. I’ve had a death in the family and have been a little busy. I’ll update as soon as I can. thank you ❤️

Catrina Ryan

wow nice story, you got me hooked... when is the next update please...

saima malik

more chapters please!!!

Brandi

So if Rosey turns warewolf because of mating Blake, wouldn’t Max turn into a warewolf if Rosey then mates with him? The one thing that drove the twins apart.

Heather Kelley

Am I thinking what is happening is happening with Max? Are you following the same principle others have wrote regarding twins in werewolf books?

Myra Martinez

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Before reading comments please be aware that certain comments contain spoilers. ❤️

Emilie Downing

Whhhaaaaaattttt?!?!

Hello all my amazing readers! Firstly let me apologies. I’m really sorry for having you wait for updates. For those that follow me, you already know I’ve had some personal issues and even though I still am recovering, I’m in a better place and have got a few things planned. Secondly, with the book reaching over 50 chapters, I have decided to make this story into a series. So what does this mean going forward? Like any good sequel book, you will find in the upcoming chapters an ending to Alpha’s White Lie which will then move into Book 2- “Luna’s White Lie”… if you would like more information, please follow me on FB and I will post up on there what’s happening next ❤️ I hope this gives you all some excitement and THANK YOU FOR BEING SO AWESOME AND SUPPORTIVE! Love you all❤️

Hey everyone! I need your help! I’ve got a little bit of writers block. 😩 How would you like to see the story proceed? Please do share some ideas to help me get over my writers block! thank you!!!

Cheryl Beaudry

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Really loving this book. Keep it up, I'm always checking for your updates. Rosy deserves some happiness.

KaterinaAdriah

I absolutely love this so far. The pacing is great and the character development is sensible for the setting. I look forward to every update.

Hello wonderful readers, just letting you know, updates are daily at 1am GMT+12. (New Zealand time) please do comment and let me know your thoughts on the story!

LenkaH

To the awesome author I cannot wait for the sequel and new story unrolling plus the updates 😍 I am glad to hear you getting better and overcoming your grievance,time is the healer❤️

Nicole Grace

Question: who is novo? Is that a new person or someone we should remember? sorry!

Hey everyone! I know a lot of you seem to be confused about the story and it’s title after you’ve read the first few chapters. Please please continue reading as it will definitely start making sense. I promise it’s definitely worth it!

Sophie Raines

I love the storyline but the grammatical errors keep pulling me out of the story. if you clean it up it will be amazing!

love the story. Vince has mentioned Blake’s secret. does it mean he is a ware wolf too?

Hernandez Giuliana

Please will you update ? You are doing a really good story here don’t let it slip white no updates .

Queen Smith

oooohhhh I think I figured it out max is drawn to rosy not as a mate but an innocent he will need to help save she is meant to be with Blake but max is her protector or white lighter shall I say lol I watch too much charmed lol

Queen Smith

great job!!! I’m on the edge of my seat lol we need more chapters when u update oh and see my prev comment under our last conversation just some more feedback and options for u lol I bet Vince had something to do with the accident 🤔🤔🤗🤭😂😅😹💃🏻🤗👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽💪🏽

So good to read a new chapter! I hope you are doing OK Shazza, I know this must be hard for you right now. excellent writing as always 🥰

saima malik

pls upload chapters quickly!!! I can’t wait!! it’s sooooo good

Allison Kerpash

plumbing has valves, not switches.

I'm hooked, love it

Myra Martinez

I’m back in forth on both your books lol absolutely so good

Unicorn Reader

wonderful story! can’t wait to read more 😍

Wow. applause to a very creative story with awesome plot twist. better than soap operas. can’t wait to read more

April Borchers

god this girl just can’t catch a break, on the other hand she’s been alive for 29 years now so where’s the logic in his nonsense can’t wait for a update

Kayla Irwin

another reason why Richard was the way he was. I think in his mind if he thought running away or then not knowing about Rosy would keep her safe in some way.

Myra Martinez

omg what !! that’s so crazy lol I love it!!

I'm so happy he has decided to tell her his secret pretty early on. just hope her reaction doesn't hurt him!

saima malik

now they need to mate!!!!!

kasey senechal

when is the next update coming

I love this book!! proper hooked. You are such a good writer 😁