Alpha's White Lie Comments
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This book is SO good!!! How often do you update?
09/04/2023 09:54Joanne Patrick-Allan
So am loving this book and decided I wanted to see what else the author had written but it only shows this book on her page even though it says there are 2 stories, am just curious about what happened to the other story.
09/04/2023 09:46Hey Everyone, after a few weeks of thinking and a chat with my editor, I have decided not to end Alpha’s White Lie with the cliffhanger I currently have. a lot of you pointed out how you didn’t like the ending and I have taken every comment into consideration. I would like to say thank you to you all for the feedback and taking the time to encourage or discourage me. sometime this week I will continue the book so hang tight! ❤️
09/04/2023 09:34Nichole83pa
I don’t normally do reviews because I’m not a writer as in at all but this book was amazing! All the characters are relatable and you can’t help but cheer for Rosy and Blake! I read this story in 2 days and yes the cliffhanger was a bit of a shock but a lot of stories on here end in cliffhangers with a continuation in book 2. This book is a perfect combination of suspense, love with some detailed love scenes that fit perfectly in the story. I was really shocked at all the nasty comments that so many wrote because as the author stated she’s planning on continuing this story so why the hate? Anyway loved your story and will continue to support any future stories.
09/04/2023 09:32Hey Eveeyone! I would like to hear some suggestions! what did you think of the ending? As always, I love to hear what you have to say so please go ahead and tell me what you’d like to see in Book Two?
09/04/2023 09:26Nichole83pa
Holy moly that was a good chapter!! I can’t believe that Max would deliberately hurt Rosy! There has to be something I’m missing because although I don’t like him as much as Blake I really don’t see him hurting her. Cant wait for more!!
09/04/2023 09:20“please read comments at discretion, if May contain spoilers!” Hey everyone! how’s it going?! just wanted to jump on here and thank everyone for their continued love and support! comment below and let me know what you think Rosy’s life will bring next?
09/04/2023 09:18Hernandez Giuliana
Okei so what a twist didnt like what you are doing with this book but you are the author
09/04/2023 09:06Tania
I may be one of the few that actually wants to see Rosy with both Blake and Max. Being the proverbial "black sheep of the family"isn't easy and yes Max has done some real f*cked up things to Blake but does he not deserve a chance and forgiveness?
09/04/2023 08:56Mikki Hale
Is there going to be any updates soon, I may just stop reading this author if this keeps happening.
09/04/2023 08:51Tania
I also believe that Rosy is a hybrid mix of Wolf/Witch and the reason why she doesn't feel the mate bond as powerful with Max is because she hasn't yet tapped into the witch portion of herself. Author please keep Max around I really want to see the attraction grow between the two as well as with Blake. To be fair all Rosy knows about Max is what Blake told her (not saying he was lying) but she needs to figure out and make her own conclusions. Author please turn them into a powerful loving throuple combined of wolf/warlock. Please please please it would be beyond awesome. 😃
09/04/2023 08:45I kinda feel bad that Blake’s ex is my name Lol
09/04/2023 08:44Remy Bergez
Who the hell are Taylor's parents to dictate and control other people's lives and make decisions for other people. Kicking Rosy out?! Telling Rocky he cant see Rosy if he wants to continue to see Taylor ?! aren't they like 28 years old. Parents lost that "right" at 18 wow is all I can say!
09/04/2023 08:43I love this book…but geez how much drama is there going to be before she gets peace? this seems excessive
09/04/2023 08:43Hey everyone! just a quick update, I am doing last minute changes to the story and so there may be a day or two delay on updates. MY SINCERE APOLOGIES! However, I do have a little Q&A for you all. Do you think Blake knew about Rosy’s curse? Was that the big secret he was hiding?
09/04/2023 08:42saima malik
it’s been a long time since new chapters have been added! waiting……
09/04/2023 08:42I don’t think it should become a thrupple. Max should not be rewarded for being a terrible person and a terrible brother. he finds out his brother possibly found his mate he shows up and tries to cause problems and then when he THINKS she can be his mate he’s a good man? No, that’s rewarding bad behavior and a bad guy. he should remain friend zoned. I would be very disappointed in this book if they become a thrupple; that’s too easy
09/04/2023 08:42Hernandez Giuliana
So you will start the sequel just after finishing this one ? Also please update . Thanks
09/04/2023 08:40LenkaH
Oh boy her dad wasn't lying when he said to Rose they will kill her 😳so war of alpha's start inside pack
09/04/2023 08:39oh I hope her love of Max grows! Blake and Max thrupple power couple!
09/04/2023 08:38I think it would be great if Rosy and max built a relationship that helped him find some peace. not a romantic one though. I wouldn't want to see Blake get heart broken!
09/04/2023 08:34Patricia Machado-Richard
hi Shazza, any idea when new chapters will be coming along? i just finished her devious mate and really enjoy reading your stories. thanks
09/04/2023 08:33Patricia Machado-Richard
love love love this story. i get that things might get messier beforebthey get better. i just hope that max is NOT her mate. im all for 2 mates and some of my fav books have had 2 mates. but i want blake to have her to herself. rosy has been through so much. she deserves to have just 1 man to worship her. she deserves blake all to herself!
09/04/2023 08:32hey everyone! my apologies. I’ve had a death in the family and have been a little busy. I’ll update as soon as I can. thank you ❤️
09/04/2023 08:32Catrina Ryan
wow nice story, you got me hooked... when is the next update please...
09/04/2023 08:30saima malik
more chapters please!!!
09/04/2023 08:30Brandi
So if Rosey turns warewolf because of mating Blake, wouldn’t Max turn into a warewolf if Rosey then mates with him? The one thing that drove the twins apart.
09/04/2023 08:29Heather Kelley
Am I thinking what is happening is happening with Max? Are you following the same principle others have wrote regarding twins in werewolf books?
09/04/2023 08:29Myra Martinez
😱😱😱😱😱😱😱
09/04/2023 08:28Before reading comments please be aware that certain comments contain spoilers. ❤️
09/04/2023 08:28Emilie Downing
Whhhaaaaaattttt?!?!
09/04/2023 08:28Hello all my amazing readers! Firstly let me apologies. I’m really sorry for having you wait for updates. For those that follow me, you already know I’ve had some personal issues and even though I still am recovering, I’m in a better place and have got a few things planned. Secondly, with the book reaching over 50 chapters, I have decided to make this story into a series. So what does this mean going forward? Like any good sequel book, you will find in the upcoming chapters an ending to Alpha’s White Lie which will then move into Book 2- “Luna’s White Lie”… if you would like more information, please follow me on FB and I will post up on there what’s happening next ❤️ I hope this gives you all some excitement and THANK YOU FOR BEING SO AWESOME AND SUPPORTIVE! Love you all❤️
09/04/2023 08:26Hey everyone! I need your help! I’ve got a little bit of writers block. 😩 How would you like to see the story proceed? Please do share some ideas to help me get over my writers block! thank you!!!
09/04/2023 08:26Cheryl Beaudry
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09/04/2023 08:25Really loving this book. Keep it up, I'm always checking for your updates. Rosy deserves some happiness.
09/04/2023 08:24KaterinaAdriah
I absolutely love this so far. The pacing is great and the character development is sensible for the setting. I look forward to every update.
09/04/2023 08:24Hello wonderful readers, just letting you know, updates are daily at 1am GMT+12. (New Zealand time) please do comment and let me know your thoughts on the story!
09/04/2023 08:24LenkaH
To the awesome author I cannot wait for the sequel and new story unrolling plus the updates 😍 I am glad to hear you getting better and overcoming your grievance,time is the healer❤️
09/04/2023 08:23Nicole Grace
Question: who is novo? Is that a new person or someone we should remember? sorry!
09/04/2023 08:21Hey everyone! I know a lot of you seem to be confused about the story and it’s title after you’ve read the first few chapters. Please please continue reading as it will definitely start making sense. I promise it’s definitely worth it!
09/04/2023 08:19Sophie Raines
I love the storyline but the grammatical errors keep pulling me out of the story. if you clean it up it will be amazing!
09/04/2023 08:18love the story. Vince has mentioned Blake’s secret. does it mean he is a ware wolf too?
09/04/2023 08:18Hernandez Giuliana
Please will you update ? You are doing a really good story here don’t let it slip white no updates .
09/04/2023 08:18Queen Smith
oooohhhh I think I figured it out max is drawn to rosy not as a mate but an innocent he will need to help save she is meant to be with Blake but max is her protector or white lighter shall I say lol I watch too much charmed lol
09/04/2023 08:18Queen Smith
great job!!! I’m on the edge of my seat lol we need more chapters when u update oh and see my prev comment under our last conversation just some more feedback and options for u lol I bet Vince had something to do with the accident 🤔🤔🤗🤭😂😅😹💃🏻🤗👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽💪🏽
09/04/2023 08:18So good to read a new chapter! I hope you are doing OK Shazza, I know this must be hard for you right now. excellent writing as always 🥰
09/04/2023 08:17saima malik
pls upload chapters quickly!!! I can’t wait!! it’s sooooo good
09/04/2023 08:17Allison Kerpash
plumbing has valves, not switches.
09/04/2023 08:17I'm hooked, love it
09/04/2023 08:16Myra Martinez
I’m back in forth on both your books lol absolutely so good
09/04/2023 08:12Unicorn Reader
wonderful story! can’t wait to read more 😍
09/04/2023 08:11Wow. applause to a very creative story with awesome plot twist. better than soap operas. can’t wait to read more
09/04/2023 08:10April Borchers
god this girl just can’t catch a break, on the other hand she’s been alive for 29 years now so where’s the logic in his nonsense can’t wait for a update
09/04/2023 08:10Kayla Irwin
another reason why Richard was the way he was. I think in his mind if he thought running away or then not knowing about Rosy would keep her safe in some way.
09/04/2023 08:09Myra Martinez
omg what !! that’s so crazy lol I love it!!
09/04/2023 08:09I'm so happy he has decided to tell her his secret pretty early on. just hope her reaction doesn't hurt him!
09/04/2023 07:55saima malik
now they need to mate!!!!!
09/04/2023 07:54kasey senechal
when is the next update coming
09/04/2023 07:53I love this book!! proper hooked. You are such a good writer 😁
09/04/2023 07:47