Alpha's White Lie Comments

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I'm really enjoying the story so far , interesting to see the characters grow.

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it's interesting

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😍

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The storyline is slightly different from all the advertisements but worth reading.

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This story has captivated me so far, I can't wait to see what's next

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Waiting for updates so far so good.

Visitante

acabo de empezar este libro y por ahora me gusta mucho. Historia interesante

Nadine Klimek

Waiting for an update :-(

Karina Marthinsen

byen waiting months for an update now

Merle Langevoord

x1c5 enjoyed reading the first few chapters. really looking forward to how the story will continue

Jenna Mc Augustine

x1c5 very good introduction. what the hell is twin bond. will read thia

Maria Cecilia Reyes-Meliton

x1c5 This is a very interesting story. I hope it gets completed soon as I am not into unfinished stories.

Tricia Freligh

x1c5 I love that there is a twin that is thrown in the mix. I can’t wait to read more just started it.

x1c5 #x1c5 interesting introduction got my hooked onto the story I'll wait until the book is completed then I'll binge read this story.

KayCee Kai Malanos

x1c5 oohh.. twin bond. nice introduction.. i hope its a good read..

x1c5 I've had this book in my library for a while. it's cute. I stopped reading it months ago because it's not completed. I wanted to wait until it's done.

Kerry Graham

X1c5 I am enjoying it so far and I cannot wait to see what happens next in the story

Vicki usher

x1c5# Just reading the introduction and I have added the book to my ever growing library. I like the fact that the writer cares about her readers and asks for their input not many do this how thoughtful

Hey my wonderful readers. SPOILER ALERT! I’m looking for advice. how would you like the book to end? would you like to see Rosy reconcile with her family. would you like to see a wedding take place? just trying to gauge on what you would like to see before I draw the curtains!

I think this book was abandoned

BOOK HAS NOT BEEN ABANDONED. Please be patient with me as I battle a writers block😔

robcas@live.com

omg it must be Christmas is it Christmas thank you so much sweetheart 💞 for the amazing update ❤️

Chris Steeprock

what is live? am I missing the up dates?

Melissa Ann Hatfield

any word on updates

Naomi Baleikasavu

oh no hope he isn’t her mate too

Ladies and Gentleman, we are now live! 🥰more updates to follow!

Melinda Cline Hazel

I have enjoyed this book & am intrigued. I know writers block sucks but it will pass. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Melissa Ann Hatfield

any word on an update

Hey wonderful readers, My family and I have tested positive for Côvid and I have been very unwell. I was suffering from massive writers block and now côvid symptoms have made things worse. I sincerely apologise for the delays. please be patient with me ❤️ love, Shazza.

Gloria Acosta

is this story about two men having the same woman? if it is, I'll pass

Hey wonder readers! I need your help!😞 I’m currently encountering major writers block and need some motivation. Comment below to tell me what you think you should happen next or which direction you would like to see the story go into? I really appreciate your help and thank you for being so patient! ❤️❤️❤️

Evelyn Buckle

just this blurb got me hooked , as well as a good buddy saying that I'm going to be chuckling my self to hell n back got me interested & un edited I can work around I'm used to.doing that used to be a job to read the UN edited books for an author before they were sent to the editor they had it was fun marking in red ink lol

Chris Steeprock

nothing In 19 days?! have you given up on this story? 😞

Robyn Valdez

I was really enjoying this story, then the updates are so far between, I have lost interest, unfortunately. This book began June 2021 and is not finished yet - only at chapter 76...Sorry Shazza Writes, but it is just taking wag too long.

Hi Everyone! just letting you know, I’m here and I will be updating. I’ve had some personal issues plus a writers block so it’s been a struggle. please bare with me! 🥰

Angelica Nicole Johnson

Bet ya Blake is "Brownie"

Sakina van bokhoven

This book is the same as an other book I'm reading here, only the names are slightly different. Love the book though and I won't judge... Just wanted to let you know... Don't know who wrote it first 🤗

Hello my wonderful readers, Updates have resumed! Please keep in mind that this book IS NOT EDITED! There are many errors and mistakes through out the story. If you are someone that can not deal with mistakes and errors, please turn back now. Once this book is completed, I will go back and edit everything. In the meantime, please enjoy the updates and make sure you add chapter number to your comments so I know what chapter you are referring to. Enjoy!

PLEASE READ:- Hey my wonder readers, A lot of you may not be aware of this but when you make comments on a story, authors don’t see which chapter or paragraph you’ve commented on. all we can see is that there was a comment made. sometimes we can figure out where the comment is made but most times it’s difficult and we have to scroll through all the chapters to find the comment so we can reply back. I love to reply back to all comments my readers make and I find it’s the best way to communicate with you all. so all I ask is if you could kindly add the chapter number at the end of your comment to make my life a little easier. I love seeing your comments as it’s my motivation to write more! I hope you all understand! thank you ❤️

Nadine Klimek

Can't wait to read the last Chapters.... so excited 😁

Bella Jersey 2

is Blake brownie? AWL

Guapo

ok, I’m truly invested in this book, oh the twists and turns got me hanging on every word. so exited for the updates.

Hey Hey everyone! so sorry for taking so long to update. my sincere apologies! but here you are! enjoy the update ❤️

Tressa Anne

sounds interesting except I'm not going to start reading an unfinished book bc by the time it's finished I've lost interest.

Kristina Mitchell

hi, I'm really interested in this book! it looks really interesting and captivating! I was wondering though if this was a multiple partners type of book,like a harem or reverse harem? I'm not a fan of that and don't like stories with multiple mates for 1 person. I don't want to get into it and find it's like that. no disrespect or anything of the kind, it's just not my type of thing is all. thank you and you seem like a very talented writer!!

Bella Jersey 2

I’m loving the relationship she has with people in her life. like Rocky he’s a big flirt and huge pick up for her

I just read chapter 73 and I want to continue reading the second book. what is the name of it??

any updates coming soon??

Essie Morgan

great story

Hey my wonderful readers! A lot of you have been asking about updates. I’m really sorry my kids and I haven’t been well so it’s been difficult to write. going into the Christmas holidays now I’m short of time to write but I promise updates very soon. Please bare with me ❤️

Brandi

I wonder what Max is up to? I bet he has some kind of end game planned.

Reader-752264

This book is SO good!!! How often do you update?

Joanne Patrick-Allan

So am loving this book and decided I wanted to see what else the author had written but it only shows this book on her page even though it says there are 2 stories, am just curious about what happened to the other story.

Hey Everyone, after a few weeks of thinking and a chat with my editor, I have decided not to end Alpha’s White Lie with the cliffhanger I currently have. a lot of you pointed out how you didn’t like the ending and I have taken every comment into consideration. I would like to say thank you to you all for the feedback and taking the time to encourage or discourage me. sometime this week I will continue the book so hang tight! ❤️

Nichole83pa

I don’t normally do reviews because I’m not a writer as in at all but this book was amazing! All the characters are relatable and you can’t help but cheer for Rosy and Blake! I read this story in 2 days and yes the cliffhanger was a bit of a shock but a lot of stories on here end in cliffhangers with a continuation in book 2. This book is a perfect combination of suspense, love with some detailed love scenes that fit perfectly in the story. I was really shocked at all the nasty comments that so many wrote because as the author stated she’s planning on continuing this story so why the hate? Anyway loved your story and will continue to support any future stories.

Hey Eveeyone! I would like to hear some suggestions! what did you think of the ending? As always, I love to hear what you have to say so please go ahead and tell me what you’d like to see in Book Two?

Nichole83pa

Holy moly that was a good chapter!! I can’t believe that Max would deliberately hurt Rosy! There has to be something I’m missing because although I don’t like him as much as Blake I really don’t see him hurting her. Cant wait for more!!

“please read comments at discretion, if May contain spoilers!” Hey everyone! how’s it going?! just wanted to jump on here and thank everyone for their continued love and support! comment below and let me know what you think Rosy’s life will bring next?

Hernandez Giuliana

Okei so what a twist didnt like what you are doing with this book but you are the author

Tania

I may be one of the few that actually wants to see Rosy with both Blake and Max. Being the proverbial "black sheep of the family"isn't easy and yes Max has done some real f*cked up things to Blake but does he not deserve a chance and forgiveness?

Mikki Hale

Is there going to be any updates soon, I may just stop reading this author if this keeps happening.

Tania

I also believe that Rosy is a hybrid mix of Wolf/Witch and the reason why she doesn't feel the mate bond as powerful with Max is because she hasn't yet tapped into the witch portion of herself. Author please keep Max around I really want to see the attraction grow between the two as well as with Blake. To be fair all Rosy knows about Max is what Blake told her (not saying he was lying) but she needs to figure out and make her own conclusions. Author please turn them into a powerful loving throuple combined of wolf/warlock. Please please please it would be beyond awesome. 😃

I kinda feel bad that Blake’s ex is my name Lol

Remy Bergez

Who the hell are Taylor's parents to dictate and control other people's lives and make decisions for other people. Kicking Rosy out?! Telling Rocky he cant see Rosy if he wants to continue to see Taylor ?! aren't they like 28 years old. Parents lost that "right" at 18 wow is all I can say!

I love this book…but geez how much drama is there going to be before she gets peace? this seems excessive

Hey everyone! just a quick update, I am doing last minute changes to the story and so there may be a day or two delay on updates. MY SINCERE APOLOGIES! However, I do have a little Q&A for you all. Do you think Blake knew about Rosy’s curse? Was that the big secret he was hiding?

saima malik

it’s been a long time since new chapters have been added! waiting……

I don’t think it should become a thrupple. Max should not be rewarded for being a terrible person and a terrible brother. he finds out his brother possibly found his mate he shows up and tries to cause problems and then when he THINKS she can be his mate he’s a good man? No, that’s rewarding bad behavior and a bad guy. he should remain friend zoned. I would be very disappointed in this book if they become a thrupple; that’s too easy

Hernandez Giuliana

So you will start the sequel just after finishing this one ? Also please update . Thanks

LenkaH

Oh boy her dad wasn't lying when he said to Rose they will kill her 😳so war of alpha's start inside pack

oh I hope her love of Max grows! Blake and Max thrupple power couple!

I think it would be great if Rosy and max built a relationship that helped him find some peace. not a romantic one though. I wouldn't want to see Blake get heart broken!

Patricia Machado-Richard

hi Shazza, any idea when new chapters will be coming along? i just finished her devious mate and really enjoy reading your stories. thanks

Patricia Machado-Richard

love love love this story. i get that things might get messier beforebthey get better. i just hope that max is NOT her mate. im all for 2 mates and some of my fav books have had 2 mates. but i want blake to have her to herself. rosy has been through so much. she deserves to have just 1 man to worship her. she deserves blake all to herself!

hey everyone! my apologies. I’ve had a death in the family and have been a little busy. I’ll update as soon as I can. thank you ❤️

Catrina Ryan

wow nice story, you got me hooked... when is the next update please...

saima malik

more chapters please!!!

Brandi

So if Rosey turns warewolf because of mating Blake, wouldn’t Max turn into a warewolf if Rosey then mates with him? The one thing that drove the twins apart.

Heather Kelley

Am I thinking what is happening is happening with Max? Are you following the same principle others have wrote regarding twins in werewolf books?

Myra Martinez

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Before reading comments please be aware that certain comments contain spoilers. ❤️

Emilie Downing

Whhhaaaaaattttt?!?!

Hello all my amazing readers! Firstly let me apologies. I’m really sorry for having you wait for updates. For those that follow me, you already know I’ve had some personal issues and even though I still am recovering, I’m in a better place and have got a few things planned. Secondly, with the book reaching over 50 chapters, I have decided to make this story into a series. So what does this mean going forward? Like any good sequel book, you will find in the upcoming chapters an ending to Alpha’s White Lie which will then move into Book 2- “Luna’s White Lie”… if you would like more information, please follow me on FB and I will post up on there what’s happening next ❤️ I hope this gives you all some excitement and THANK YOU FOR BEING SO AWESOME AND SUPPORTIVE! Love you all❤️

Hey everyone! I need your help! I’ve got a little bit of writers block. 😩 How would you like to see the story proceed? Please do share some ideas to help me get over my writers block! thank you!!!

Cheryl Beaudry

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Really loving this book. Keep it up, I'm always checking for your updates. Rosy deserves some happiness.

KaterinaAdriah

I absolutely love this so far. The pacing is great and the character development is sensible for the setting. I look forward to every update.

Hello wonderful readers, just letting you know, updates are daily at 1am GMT+12. (New Zealand time) please do comment and let me know your thoughts on the story!

LenkaH

To the awesome author I cannot wait for the sequel and new story unrolling plus the updates 😍 I am glad to hear you getting better and overcoming your grievance,time is the healer❤️

Nicole Grace

Question: who is novo? Is that a new person or someone we should remember? sorry!

Hey everyone! I know a lot of you seem to be confused about the story and it’s title after you’ve read the first few chapters. Please please continue reading as it will definitely start making sense. I promise it’s definitely worth it!

Sophie Raines

I love the storyline but the grammatical errors keep pulling me out of the story. if you clean it up it will be amazing!

love the story. Vince has mentioned Blake’s secret. does it mean he is a ware wolf too?

Hernandez Giuliana

Please will you update ? You are doing a really good story here don’t let it slip white no updates .

Queen Smith

oooohhhh I think I figured it out max is drawn to rosy not as a mate but an innocent he will need to help save she is meant to be with Blake but max is her protector or white lighter shall I say lol I watch too much charmed lol

Queen Smith

great job!!! I’m on the edge of my seat lol we need more chapters when u update oh and see my prev comment under our last conversation just some more feedback and options for u lol I bet Vince had something to do with the accident 🤔🤔🤗🤭😂😅😹💃🏻🤗👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽💪🏽

So good to read a new chapter! I hope you are doing OK Shazza, I know this must be hard for you right now. excellent writing as always 🥰

saima malik

pls upload chapters quickly!!! I can’t wait!! it’s sooooo good

Allison Kerpash

plumbing has valves, not switches.

I'm hooked, love it