The Rejected Hybrid Comments

  • Steph Vigil

    are there any more chapters!?! I need more!!

    03/07/2022 09:14
  • Tammy Rea

    stop complaining about the grammar and just read the story please

    12/06/2021 21:47
  • dr.penguin

    the grammar is throwing me off

    08/24/2021 06:48
  • Krthicka Sri B

    I suggest you learn grammar first...I can't understand half of what your trying to say...but plot is good, so I keep reading

    08/20/2021 17:46
  • Reader-795772

    The grammar is killing me… they also keep writing park instead of pack … that’s annoying.

    08/15/2021 17:16
  • Koko

    as much as an intrigue about the storyline the violent it's not sitting well with me the writer should please cut down on it.... not too cool

    08/15/2021 09:53
  • Alex

    why always subject her to torture? this is chapter 17 and all scenarios for her are the same…loosing interest in this story 😒

    08/13/2021 22:45
  • kaname671

    ugh his father is awful, hopefully he grows a pair soon.

    08/11/2021 16:57
  • kaname671

    ooh she’s strong...enjoying this story and thanks for sharing.

    08/11/2021 16:49
  • Courey Jayn Goodban-Payne

    Finding it so hard to read with the amount of broken English. I assume the writer does not have English as their first language. This is awful.

    08/11/2021 00:29
  • Shantia

    8/8 OK that 👌

    08/08/2021 04:07
  • Porsche Sinclair

    waiting on updates

    08/03/2021 04:50
  • WebbWrites

    any updates?

    08/02/2021 15:17
  • elisha Garcia

    update please❤❤❤

    08/02/2021 02:38
  • Jess Lote

    how often is this updated?

    07/31/2021 19:23
  • Shantia

    7/30

    07/30/2021 17:20
  • NONSO HENRY

    I love this story

    07/27/2021 23:15
  • Alex

    interesting so far 😊

    07/22/2021 21:45
  • Evelyn Opokua Adjei

    wow.....

    07/19/2021 20:05
  • Itz Humble Smith

    Oh, wow, I love every bit of it.. More episode please😊

    07/18/2021 20:27
  • Alex

    Good story 👍

    07/18/2021 19:42