Alpha King's Unmated Sister-in-law Comments

  • Bianca Yetzke

    v1z6 this book has a very good introduction. it has been added to my library. can’t wait to start it.

    04/07/2023 04:20
  • Megan Phillips

    v1z6 the introduction for this book was really written well, but I'm struggling to stay hooked in this book so far anways.

    04/06/2023 22:41
  • Chantel Jauch

    #v1z6# I love that Beth got to change her life and find love again. Daniel was amazing for Beth! I would love to know what happens to Matthew and her sister this time round though, so a bonus chapter would be nice.

    04/06/2023 22:37
  • Gemma Butler

    v1z6 Well this will be a first, I’ve never read anything like this storyline before, and I’ve lost count of the number of books I’ve read. Added straight in my library

    04/06/2023 20:56
  • Michibeba

    #v1z6# I have not read a widow and a brother in law romance with a supernatural twist to it, this might be interesting

    04/06/2023 20:34
  • Bianca Bratu

    v1z6 I like this story because it contains supernatural content with twists and turns that make you want to know immediatly what happens next.

    04/06/2023 20:05
  • Terrin Garis

    #v1z6# this is a good read, even though the storyline sounds familiar. the story has the supernatural twist and enough differences to keep things interesting

    04/06/2023 19:13
  • Rafael

    #v1z6# well I like supernatural. check ✔️ I like to find stories that are not to similar to what I read until now. check ✔️ I like interesting stories with twists. check ✔️ I think I am going to love this story. I am adding it in my library and is going to be the next book that I will start.

    04/06/2023 19:00
  • Reader-731248

    v1z6 interesting storyline. There is a lot at stake already from the plot - sickness, doubt, loss and attraction.

    04/06/2023 18:54
  • Debra Sykes

    v1z6 the intro is good but might just save it for another day when I need a book to read

    04/06/2023 16:02
  • Vicki usher

    v1z6# so far this is a good book, good storyline. Can't wait to see where it goes with the characters

    04/06/2023 09:49
  • Joele G

    v1z6 intro seems to be off to a good start; Beth getting a second chance mate; love to see where the storyline takes you.

    04/06/2023 09:35
  • Camille VE

    v1z6 the story looks good but, in the first few chapters, i find the male lead a bit to "cliché" for me. Hope it goes Better with the evolution of the story

    04/06/2023 09:08
  • Lily Marks

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    02/13/2023 13:40
  • Stephanie Shoemaker

    like it but kinda boring in a way too.

    12/30/2022 05:12
  • winterphoenix

    is the story finished?

    07/11/2022 04:30
  • Miki Lei

    so they were both brought back to life again?👀

    06/06/2022 13:19
  • Olivia McCormick

    I’m kinda getting lost, is it just me or are chapters mixing up between the past and the present…chapter 8 their in snow, next chapter it’s Matt’s pov…at the pack house after the fight before Beth left to get Daniel?

    05/28/2022 11:39
  • Kimberly Gugat

    I think this story is going to be the best one yet.

    02/27/2022 04:32
  • AmyWhe

    Excellent Story…look forward to reading more from this brilliant Author!!!

    02/11/2022 02:59
  • Parwan Kaur

    will there be new book...please write another one

    02/03/2022 21:44
  • SB Mahmood

    Thank you Torie…. your book is ome of the best I’ve read so far. Looking fwd to read more of your writings 🤗

    01/31/2022 09:04
  • Summer

    Hi there, I hope you are doing well. This story has finally coming to an end. I hope you enjoy it, and I also wanna thank you all for your love and support to this book, it means so much to me 😇. Have a good one.

    01/24/2022 07:07
  • Stella Moon

    is this the end of the book or are your writing more

    01/22/2022 01:23
  • Parwan Kaur

    love it love it love it....thank you author

    01/21/2022 23:13
  • Minnie Mouse

    the suspense 😩

    01/17/2022 04:10
  • Parwan Kaur

    one more please for today..

    01/14/2022 20:47
  • Parwan Kaur

    very nice chapter...please get her back to Daniel...let Daniel find out he is going to be father...

    01/13/2022 16:02
  • Oanh Le

    this was a beautiful chapter

    01/11/2022 22:17
  • Parwan Kaur

    please author don't separate them...thank you fir the update and happy new year ...

    01/01/2022 02:42
  • Parwan Kaur

    please author don't separate them...give them happy ending...please please please

    12/30/2021 15:29
  • EMC

    please don’t separate them. I want them together and happy ending for both

    12/30/2021 04:02
  • Parwan Kaur

    please update everyday dear author...can't get enough of Daniel and beth...

    12/28/2021 20:33
  • Parwan Kaur

    thank u for the updates

    12/17/2021 12:21
  • Parwan Kaur

    please update more often.still can't get enough of Beth and Daniel

    12/15/2021 18:48
  • Parwan Kaur

    is it possible for Beth to bring pregnant..I mean they haven't used any contraception

    12/14/2021 21:25
  • Parwan Kaur

    please update more often...still can't get enough of Daniel and beth..

    12/04/2021 07:57
  • Jennah_63074

    😱 I need more to read, please update soon! thank you! this story is so good. I love Beth and Daniel ❤️

    12/02/2021 04:34
  • G.L.A.M Girls

    p.s I can read this story over n over job well done

    11/22/2021 21:00
  • G.L.A.M Girls

    I love this story but I hate waiting for the update the suspense be killing me but it is so worth the wait.

    11/22/2021 20:59
  • Raiyanne SaDiablo

    This is so beautiful! I appreciate the pace it was written with their Love-Story! And all the changes of perspectives. It's absolutely great! Even the thrill of everything that Beth had up her sleeve, if it's going where she want it to be... I'm so excited... 👍 Great thanks to the author!

    11/22/2021 12:06
  • AmyWhe

    Such a wonderful story. Writing is superb. Love this Author. Can’t wait for the daily updates.❤️❤️

    11/18/2021 10:44
  • Nikki

    I think Wyatt was talking about Margaretta too.

    11/09/2021 20:28
  • Nikki

    ⬇️ ⬇️ ⬇️ ⬇️ Matt is delusional. It may have been decades for him since Beth died in his arms, but to her it's been less than a year. How can she tell he's changed when he's still lying and scheming to get what he wants? Why should she give him another chance after EVERYTHING he did to her? Why should she forgive him when he's done nothing to redeem himself? He's the one who betrayed their mate bond and threw away what they had, not Beth. Does he not even realized that in this life, she is not his fated mate?

    11/09/2021 20:15
  • Summer

    Hi there, thank you for stopping by, I hope you like this story so far. I try to update daily on weekdays, and I'd love to know your opinions about this story. Leave comments if you feel like to share. Stay safe and have a good one.

    11/09/2021 10:17
  • Kels.01

    when do you update? or plan to finish book?

    11/02/2021 03:33
  • Parwan Kaur

    please update

    11/01/2021 17:56
  • Parwan Kaur

    please update author

    10/31/2021 19:21
  • Nikki

    Teo needs to get his paranoia in check and mind his own business

    10/31/2021 19:06
  • Bella Jersey 2

    let’s go have some fun and shake things up

    10/30/2021 22:46
  • Parwan Kaur

    I have a feeling luna margarte is involve with alpha wyatt somehow...she probably knows he is alpha of gold nation but not telling anybody ....could she be the mole...

    10/29/2021 01:34
  • Katie Harrison

    how often do we get updates?

    10/28/2021 05:29
  • Karamea G

    So glad they finally got it together!! Hopefully Beth can get out of her own head and realise that it will be being with her that saves Daniel from becoming a monster 🤞🏽

    10/27/2021 13:16
  • Parwan Kaur

    finally they kisses....please update more often author..

    10/25/2021 14:38
  • YanyRose

    love the way the storyline is being played out! 👍🏻 I’m sooooo happy they finally kissed!!! Matt needs to get outta the picture already 🙄

    10/25/2021 03:43
  • Bella Jersey 2

    this has to be so hard seeing the future but constantly having to second guess yourself

    10/23/2021 23:49
  • Nikki

    Chapter 53, I don't trust Matt at all.

    10/19/2021 19:35
  • Reader-254912

    yes can’t wait for for Daniel to finally let her know how he feels and get the girl 🙌🏼🙌🏼

    10/15/2021 19:24
  • Nikki

    Chapter 40 made me so happy. 😁

    10/15/2021 19:17
  • Karamea G

    Yes, yes, yessss!!! Come on! just kiss already!! Soooooo close 😬

    10/15/2021 11:03
  • Lidiane Barros

    another chapter and not even a kiss ☹️

    10/15/2021 08:47
  • Parwan Kaur

    can we get more of Beth and Daniel's please...

    10/14/2021 20:13
  • Karamea G

    I’m loving this book!! It hasn’t followed the same path that a lot of other werewolf stories do but is very well written. I can’t wait for things to heat up between Daniel and Beth though!!

    10/13/2021 11:58
  • Lidiane Barros

    its taking a bit too long for something more to happen between them … come this is what the book is about and its been 60chapters pretty much already

    10/13/2021 06:00
  • JOANNE LITTIG

    ok 60 chapters in and still Beth and Daniel not hooking up...not typical for the werewolf stories. This attraction is playing out forever

    10/12/2021 17:59
  • Nikki

    Chapter 36 - Daniel certainly put Noah in his place. I hope Best does the same with Anna.

    10/11/2021 18:28
  • Barbara Hunter

    so far a really good and interesting book 👍

    10/09/2021 08:52
  • Bella Jersey 2

    not trusting Matt it’s a big game to him. this isn’t a game

    10/01/2021 02:44
  • Bella Jersey 2

    he’s mad at because she was not happy being forced into an arrange marriage. all of the brides were not happy to marry any of these men. it’s sad because it seem all these men want is a mate to share their love with

    10/01/2021 02:42
  • Bella Jersey 2

    a new player and layer

    09/30/2021 05:14
  • Bella Jersey 2

    see his test as being something else. what I’m seeing is he is failing

    09/30/2021 05:04
  • Bella Jersey 2

    did not see that coming

    09/30/2021 04:49
  • Bella Jersey 2

    I need to know PLEASE TELL ME

    09/30/2021 04:41
  • Bella Jersey 2

    Amelia I hate her thinking herself weak. we grieve in all our own ways. her mate would want her happy not living with a ghost

    09/30/2021 04:24
  • Bella Jersey 2

    I could feel their emotions it reach my very core

    09/30/2021 01:22
  • Bella Jersey 2

    Mom gonna tell a story

    09/30/2021 01:11
  • Bella Jersey 2

    oh and Daniel you don’t fool nobody the way you’re reacting.

    09/29/2021 03:24
  • Bella Jersey 2

    I love it! she maybe older than but she is seriously underestimating him

    09/29/2021 03:23
  • Bella Jersey 2

    okay it’s only been 9 chapters and I ready to run Matt over with a silver ice cream truck

    09/29/2021 03:12
  • Bella Jersey 2

    then we have fake poor baby sister in background. what she up to?

    09/29/2021 02:53
  • Bella Jersey 2

    Beth has herself setup for all 3 now who will win her?

    09/29/2021 02:52
  • Bella Jersey 2

    oh yes Beth just became a bad ass bitch. time to put some males in their place

    09/28/2021 23:30
  • Bella Jersey 2

    the blame game is coming

    09/28/2021 23:08
  • Bella Jersey 2

    I’m real curious to get to know Warren

    09/28/2021 22:54
  • Bella Jersey 2

    hello my name is Matt an arrogant as hell

    09/28/2021 19:36
  • Bella Jersey 2

    this book is gonna be cool as hell

    09/28/2021 19:31
  • Bella Jersey 2

    I am nervous for this conversation

    09/28/2021 19:26
  • Bella Jersey 2

    to be able to go back with all the knowledge. I don’t know if that’s a gift or punishment

    09/28/2021 19:16
  • Bella Jersey 2

    this book just by its description looks cool. I’m ready to take the ride

    09/28/2021 19:12
  • CuriousTt

    I'm on Chapter 4 and my guess is that everyone (Beth, the sister, Matt, Daniel) has had a time reset and they are all aware of what happened. They just don't know that EVERYONE has had that time reset. Interesting plot I'm loving it so far❤

    09/28/2021 16:19
  • CuriousT

    Is this book complete???

    09/28/2021 09:24
  • Lidiane Barros

    im loving this book but wish there were more updates and also becoming slightly inpatient for something to happen between Daniel and her ❤️

    09/25/2021 14:24
  • Sharee Johnston

    Loving this! Absolutely engaging storyline & well developed characters. Very intrigued to find out where this goes.

    09/23/2021 00:07
  • Karamea G

    I am LOVING this story!! Fantastic writing and such an engaging storyline’s I haven’t been able to put it down and now I’m impatiently waiting for the next update!

    09/22/2021 23:37
  • Malissa Anderson

    how much longer until Beth and Daniel become a couple, I'm dying over here lol

    09/22/2021 14:25
  • Farrah

    Yes! Finally Beth told her off!

    09/22/2021 10:54
  • Kim

    Daniel burned Noah so good! hahahaha Oh how I despise Anna🤦🏼‍♀️💥 Well done!!!

    09/18/2021 16:17
  • Farrah

    BAM! someone please punch Anna in the face.

    09/18/2021 15:41
  • Umm E Laraib Yousaf

    I hate Anna so much. She is pathetic excuse for a sister arghhhh please update soon. I hope Daniel tell them he plans to make Beth his luna as well 😍😍

    09/18/2021 12:55
  • Lidiane Barros

    oh I know we just had updates but I need more haha they fell short or am I too addicted? 😂 I am dying for some more straight forward flirt between the 2 of them ❤️

    09/18/2021 09:03

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