Messed up flight tickets . CHECKED
Creepy stares. CHECKED
Not what he wanted for an ordinary day
And a woman , absolutely not!
Danielle, that's what the tag on her uniform showed. She was beautiful, and had the complete men's stare on her . And the first thing she demanded was to switch off his phone, no one has ever told him off like that but he couldn't say anything back other than complying. He was captivated by her attitude.

Luca Knight the all time playboy who doesn't have the word 'love' in his dictionary and erase down that settling down too. The CEO of Knight Enterprises wasn't planning on falling in love . And when he finally did , he might have fell face first.

MINE

Bella Jersey 2

Guneet Virdi

can someone tell me what the story is about

Allison Underdonk Peterman

Kevin Cruse

Not bad so far, I will admit there is some errors but it happens a lot whenever you're writing a book. I'll be commenting again once I've gone further into this book but all in all, it's not a bad story so far.

Misty Landon

really amazing authorr keep updating it 💖😍😍

Kanwal Gerwal

not worth reading unless you want to read something that has horrible Grammer ect. 

Just the preview shows the grammatical errors but the use of “urgh” is a tad bit excessive. I have nystagmus and a neuromuscular disorder so stories that make me reread sentences typically make my eyes move left to right so quickly until I get sick. Reading the excerpt above made me have to keep going back so I had to just read as is, no mental corrections. I believe, editing and proofreading could fix this. if that happens, I’d love to read it! Writing a story isn’t easy, having others read and judge it isn’t fun either BUT if you take the comments, good or bad, and use them to improve each one you write, it’ll make you an unstoppable author! If this is ever edited, please message me the books name and I’ll read it then. Good Luck!

Cheryl Browning

I can spell grammar just fine... that doesn't change how the story was written. Just being honest. I wasn't being mean or malicious. There isn't anything wrong with my opinion. bc it's mine and mine alone. I actually read this whole story btw. and If I was moaning about it I would've been not so nice about it... I am sorry for the way I phrased it if it had hurt ur feelings. let me ask you this tho.... am I wrong in saying that the writing does have errors? I didn't say there was anything wrong with the story it self. 

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If you're going to moan about someone else's writing, make sure you can spell GRAMMAR properly.